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Home»Fan Fiction»WHO WILL WIN?? MIND VS HEART-PART 2
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WHO WILL WIN?? MIND VS HEART-PART 2

administratorBy administratorJuly 18, 2016Updated:July 18, 20169 Comments2 Mins Read
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Thank u for all those who commented and for all silent readers. ………….. …… ……….. ………………… Both Sanky and Lucky felt something special….something that they never felt till now… All were keenly watching to get the door open…. A cool breeze surrrounded them… the front door opened… A heavenly beauty in black jeans and white kurti with black stone works,open hair..a smile playing in her lips…came out…. Sanky felt a sudden jolt in his heart…. He is looking at her without blinking his eyes… Lucky:Oh..hmmm… Seems we should drop our plan…. Hey na bhai?
Sans(Without listening)Ha..Ha.. Looks like she is not that…….(all the gang looks at him in “WHAT DID U SAY” LOOK)..
Lucky: Aaaha… mere bhai, it was u who started to plan against that unknown… now u are saying not to do..
Sans(don’t know what to say)aaa…Voo…….mey bas aisi hi bolatha… aur kuch nahi…
Lucky: hmmm vaisebhi.. I’m not going to take my step back.. Hey na guys….
All nod yes..
Sans:par guys….
they again turn to the carside hearing the door opening sound….Somebody again felt a special effect in his heart…but this time it was lucky….
A girl in White anarkali with simple black bead works steps out with a warm smile,her long silky hair keep dancing in the wind…. both the ladies walks towards our gang.
Girl 1(to sanky and lucky who r in thereown world):Excuse me…. can u pls show the way to the principals room…
No reply….The 2 girls look eachother and repeats the ques…But now too no reply…
(Kavi,kav,karthik,Arjun,Karan were looking at lucky and sans with a weird look) Karan suddenly says:Oh..ya… just go sraight, take 2nd left, 3rd room is principals..
Girl2: thank you…(She looks at the two dreaming boys and leave with the otherone) .. Arjun:to S&L:What happened to two?.kaha kho gaye?????…
Sans and Lucky:I think we should drop our plan guys….
Lucky:I cannot harm her……
All look at lucky with open mouth and shouts:WHAT!!!!!!!!!
S&L:…..what….. aaaaa……. hmmm……. nothing…..(both leave in opp directions to avoid further ques)……………………………………
both S&L thinks:I guess..I’ve seen her somewhere……Such a familier face and sound….
Sans & lucky:………..is it my shona and ragu…???????…….But why did they dissappear suddenly and now………………
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……………………. …………………………………………. ….Done with another part! Guys pls do comment………And pls forgive for the mistakes if any espescially in hindi phrases…I’m a Malayali.. that’s why I do no use so much Hindi in this…………

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9 Comments

  1. lovely on July 18, 2016 9:03 am

    So it’s raglak, nice

  2. Ammu on July 18, 2016 9:44 am

    loved it dear and plz make it long. njanum malayaliyanu from thrissur

  3. lisa on July 18, 2016 10:14 am

    love rags

  4. Ragz_teju on July 18, 2016 11:33 am

    Nice

  5. Fairy on July 18, 2016 12:02 pm

    Nyc…..??

  6. megha123 on July 18, 2016 12:24 pm

    Loved it very much ❤❤❤

  7. AnuAnn on July 18, 2016 2:44 pm

    Nice dear.. Happy to know that u are a malayali.. Me too..

  8. dharani on July 18, 2016 4:32 pm

    nice

  9. Ameera on July 19, 2016 1:56 am

    Loved it

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