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WILL U MAKE ME UR SHOT 4

HaripriyaBy HaripriyaDecember 8, 201722 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hii frinds…..hari is back with the nxt part…

Nxt mehandi function…

He came and sat near her…
L:how come u are always beautiful…
Ragini blushed…
She showed her hand to find his name….
He found it….
He was about ask her something….
Ap:laksh its getting late…we should leave now..

At nite..

She was lying on the bed…and thought to call laksh..but he called…her..
R:hello..
L:r u thinking about me..
R:no…
L:don’t lie…
R:kk I accept..
L:by the way…u were so beautiful today..
Ragini blushed…
To hide it…
R:did u eat…

L:yeh…but u cant hide ur blush ragini..
R:laaakshh…
L:tomorrow is haldi na..
R:yes…so…
L:so… I will apply haldi to u…
R:its not possible…
L:what is the bet..
R:mm…I will give u what ever u ask..
L:u should stand in ur words…

R:ragini…will never step back..bet…
L:then wait for me…
R:mm kk…gud nite..
L:soo soon…u r unromantic yar..
R:hello..its 1..
L:soo..
R:i want look good.. Tomorrow… So bye…

L:not fare…
R:eeeeeee….gud nite…sweet dreams…
L:swt drms…nooo no..my dreams…love u..
Ragini blushed..
R:love u too…
He cut the call…
Both slept…remembering their movements…

Nxt haldi….

Ragini was in yellow lehanga…
Function got over…
At nite…
And sitting her hair…that time she got a call….saw the caller id and smilled…
L:hello ragini…
R:hmm..did u forgot ur challenge…
L:it never happens..come to the balcony…
She went and saw him…
He turned and saw her….and moved forward…she moved back…they were inch apart…
Laksh smiled at her…

And rubbed his check on her both sides…she close her eyes…
Then went near her ears..
L:I won…
She opened her eyes..
L:I need my gift..
R:but..
He moved more close..
L:u promised..he said huskily… his lips touched her ears…

Her nervous started to shiver..
He cupped her face…
Her heart beat increased…he slide his hands on her hands..she closed her eyes..
He passionately kissed her….both kissed for some time….but got disturbed..
S:ragini..didn’t u sleep…
She immediately push him…
R:going to ma..

S:mm soon..
R:kk ma..
L:why is that ur mom is always disturbing my romance..
R:laksh…
L:kk..

R:now u go…tomorrow is our mrg..
L:yes…no one can disturb us tomorrow…u will be mine…
He went…

To be continued..

Plz vote and comment guysss….

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    22 Comments

    1. Sherin on December 8, 2017 5:17 pm

      Superb dear

    2. Aamy on December 8, 2017 5:43 pm

      Awesome

    3. Malu on December 8, 2017 7:24 pm

      Amazing part

    4. Ashly on December 8, 2017 8:22 pm

      Superb amazing

    5. Vennila on December 8, 2017 9:33 pm

      Awesome episode

    6. teitokUn1718 on December 9, 2017 1:16 am

      Superb…

    7. Anju on December 9, 2017 9:32 am

      Nice episode

    8. Elizabethlovely on December 9, 2017 12:00 pm

      Awesome

    9. Rehna on December 9, 2017 12:42 pm

      Awesome dear

    10. Raglak_fan on December 9, 2017 7:45 pm

      Fantastic dear

    11. Arjuna on December 9, 2017 9:15 pm

      AWESOME

    12. Soumya on December 9, 2017 9:50 pm

      Superb di

    13. Jiyani on December 10, 2017 12:00 pm

      Lovely episode

    14. Monisha on December 10, 2017 1:02 pm

      Superbbbb

    15. Thahseem on December 10, 2017 3:15 pm

      Nice

    16. Vini on December 10, 2017 3:45 pm

      Superb one

    17. Elizebathlovely on December 10, 2017 4:04 pm

      Awesome

    18. Pearly on December 10, 2017 4:19 pm

      Nice part

    19. Laashya on December 10, 2017 4:40 pm

      Wonderful part di and lovely raglak

    20. Monu on December 10, 2017 7:20 pm

      Superb dear

    21. Ammu on December 10, 2017 9:50 pm

      Outstanding episode and Raglak scenes are awesome. Love you dear and take care

    22. Tani on December 15, 2017 9:18 am

      Awesome

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