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Home»Fan Fiction»WILL U MAKE ME UR SHOT 5
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WILL U MAKE ME UR SHOT 5

HaripriyaBy HaripriyaDecember 8, 201721 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi frnds …as u all know….i m back with my last part…hope u all enjoy this…

Nxtday mrg…

Both were brought to mandap..and made them set…
Ragini was thinking that now she is going to be laksh’s forever… And smiling…
Laksh saw this and understood her.. A idea came in mind.. To bring her back…
Ochhhh..
Ap:ragini beta tum teke tho hey na..
R:ji ma..
Then she glared at laksh…
L:why r u glaring at me…
R:u don’t know..
L:mmm..no say…
R:u..
Fb..

Laksh moved near to ragini…
He slide his tumb finger of his leg..on her foot…
A current passed through her nevers…
Fb ends..
Laksh smirk at her..
This all were between then….no one heared…
Ap:if u both complete.. We can start..
Raglak blushed…
Then rituals started..
Ragini’s parents did her gadbandan…

they took the peraphs..
laksh tied the mangalsutra..
then filled her maang…
they got married…
then all send off ragini..
ragini was crying…while sitting in the car…
he went near..and side hugged her…
l;plz…I cant see u like this…plz…
r:cant I see them after this…

l:u can…when ever u whish…
r:really..
l:but not alone…
she looked confused…
l:even I will come..because..i cant be even a sec without seeing u..
r:love u laksh..
she hugged him..
he consoled her…

both reached their home..laksh was sleeping..
r: we rached ur home..
laksh opened his eyes and cupped her face..
l:its our home..
she smiled…
he lift her and moved to the door…

ap:I think there is more time…u have to do some more rituals..
all teased them..
he left her down…both were blushing…
ap said her to do the rituals…

ragini kept her hand in turmeric water..and kept it on the front wall…
she saw him and smiled..
then she kicked the rice bowl..and kept her steps in ….holding his hand…

Then they played the post mrg rituals..
In finding the ring…

First ragini won…then laksh..
Ap:now it is last…will see who we win..
Laksh wrinked at her…
Both took it together…
Ap:bless u both…always be together…
Then…

All other rituals over…

First nite..

Ragini was sitting in middle of the king size bed…
Then came in…and booted the door..
Her heart started beating fast..
He came near and sat and removed her veli…
And holded her hand..

He saw her in the moon light…he was mersmerized…
And lift her face by her chin…
Both shared a cute eye lock….
L:I love u more than me ragini…
She hugged him…
R:love u too…
L:FINALLY U R MINE……

Then cupped her face…and kissed her forehead…
And then kissed passionately…for few minutes..
Parted and took deep breath..then he slowly removed all her jewelry..
She was bending her head…
When he touched her waist..she pushed him and ran…and stood near the window…

And started breathing heavily…
Suddenly all lights were off…she turned back and saw laksh as offed the light….
She turned her face..when started coming near her…
She closed her..when laksh hugged her from back…
L:u r breath taking in this candle light…near her ears..in husky voice…
He started kissing her crook..a shever passed all over her….he slide his hand on hers and slowly traced her kambath…

She closed her eyes… He removed it…then slowly he turned her facing her..holding her waist…and lifted her chin..to make her face him…
L;:open ur eyes…i want to see ur love…when i love u…

She opened her eyes…
He moved forward… Rubbed her lips with his thumb…both shared a intense eye lock…he moved closer and kissed her passionately… She responded him with the same intense…he lifted her and made her lie on bed with out breaking thier kiss…they parted.. When they realized.. They have breadth….to love each other…..

He came top on her…but she turned….he smriked…and moved her hair from back…and removed the knot…by his teeth… By rubbing her waist….she wide open her eye nd turned towards him….now he totally came on top of her..and kissed her neck…
R:lakshh…
L:ragini once more….i love when u call me by my name…

And kissed her….lakshhhh..
Then…he slide his hands on her…she hugged him…

Lights off…their love was identified by the moon….

….END…..

Hope u all liked this…if not plz inform me…
Need ur suggestions..to write more……I know I m not good in this …sry for my mistakes…
And really really sry for not replying… But i see all ur comments…. It was boost for me to write more…love u all my friends and sissy…….
Love u all….
If u like plz….vote and comment…

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    21 Comments

    1. Sherin on December 8, 2017 5:05 pm

      Awesome dear

    2. Aamy on December 8, 2017 5:36 pm

      Awesome

    3. Malu on December 8, 2017 7:08 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next raglak story

    4. Ashly on December 8, 2017 8:30 pm

      Fantastic awesome superb

    5. Vennila on December 8, 2017 9:26 pm

      Awesome episode

    6. teitokUn1718 on December 9, 2017 1:22 am

      Superb…
      Write another FF/OS on Raglak…

    7. Anju on December 9, 2017 9:27 am

      Awesome update

    8. Elizabethlovely on December 9, 2017 11:45 am

      Awesome

    9. Raglak_fan on December 9, 2017 7:36 pm

      Fabulous dear

    10. Arjuna on December 9, 2017 9:10 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    11. Soumya on December 9, 2017 9:59 pm

      Simply awesome di

    12. Rehna on December 9, 2017 10:57 pm

      Superb dear

    13. Jiyani on December 10, 2017 12:15 pm

      Fantastic dear….loved it

    14. Monisha on December 10, 2017 1:12 pm

      Excellent dear

    15. Thahseem on December 10, 2017 3:22 pm

      Very nice

    16. Vini on December 10, 2017 3:50 pm

      Good one, keep writing

    17. Pearly on December 10, 2017 4:18 pm

      Superb part

    18. Laashya on December 10, 2017 4:47 pm

      Lovely end di and lovely raglak
      Come back with another raglak

    19. Monu on December 10, 2017 7:06 pm

      Interesting dear

    20. Ammu on December 11, 2017 4:18 pm

      I’m really sorry for the late comment. Outstanding ending dear and Loved it a lot. Raglak scenes are really beautiful. Please write more more Raglak stories dear. Love u dear and take care

    21. Tani on December 16, 2017 1:03 pm

      Nice

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