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Home»Fan Fiction»Will she love me?? (Devakshi ff)By Akshada (Part-16)
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Will she love me?? (Devakshi ff)By Akshada (Part-16)

V.V.harshitaBy V.V.harshitaMay 31, 201710 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey guys bak wid the nxt.. So…lets start
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Dev’s pov ends
Sona: arrey jao…..ser…nahi wai….nahi server….nahi waiter….arrey kuch bhi…..mujhe ghrama ghram jamun leke aao…..
Dev: nahi….. Khana hai toh yeh khao….(no…if u want eat this)
Sona: nahi….mujhe chahiye warna….(no…i want or otherwise)
Dev: warna kya? Tum kuch nahi karsakti (u cant do anything)
Sona got up frm the bed and started beating Dev softly…..

Sona: mujhe chahiye….chahiye….(i want i want)
Dev: aacha teekhe teekhe…aata hu….par tum kahi mat jana (hmm kk kk…… But dont go anywhere)
Sona: teekhe!!
Dev went to the kitchen….he cam bak wid a hot jamun
Sona: yay!! Hot hot jamun….jaldi de…
She snatched it frm him….
And started eating….. She ate 2 and stopped eating…
Dev: kya hua!!
Sona: wi!!! Guitar….. Wow!!

She kept the bowl aside and took the guitar….she did nt play the guitar….but she was looking at….
Sona: wow!! Kitni cute
Dev: cute!??
Sona: haan…
She kept the guitar where it was….
Dev was totally confused wid wht is she doing….
Dev: pata nahi kisne isse drinks diya (dont knw who gave hr drinks)
Sona: hana ne!!

Dev: Hana??
Sona: uss ne toh ek diet drink diya….it was so…yucky!! Pata nahi kya kya dal diya hai ussne ( she only told its a diet drink….it was yucky!! Dk wht all she added)
And Sona started hiding
Dev: arrey kya karahiho?? (wht r u doing)
Sona: arrey yaar….hide and seek…cm on find me

Dev: wht the hell!!
Sona: abh tum nahi khelogi toh tumare baat nahi sunugi! (if u r not gona play i vil mt listen to u)
Dev: kk kk
Sona: jao count karoo (go….count)
Dev: hmm
He started counting
Dev: 1,2,3,4,8 he tries to count fst
Sona: hey….tumko numbers bhi nahi pata….4 ke baad 6 aata hai ( hey dk even numbers…. Aftr 4 6 cms…)
Dev: kya 4 ke baad 6??
Sona: kk kk abh time waste mat kar…jao count karoo…
Dev: kk kk

Dev: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10 main aarahahu!!
Sona: teekhe aao
Dev was a gud listener so…he went near his room…. And found hr…
Sona: arrey tum itni jaldi mujhe pakad gayi
Dev: hmm….aacha abh aao mere saath…
Sona: kaha leke jarahiho mujhe…(where r u taking me)
Dev: chup chap.. Aao mere saath..

Sona: teekhe…
He took hr to the guest room…
Sona: arrey fir se ussi room main agaye hai hum( we cam bak to the same room)
Dev: abh chup chap so…jao..
Sona: nahi soungi…. (i vil nt sleep)
Dev: kaha so jao…
Sona: no….
Dev: arrey plzs main thak gaya hu plzs…

Sona: tumne kya kiya ki itni jaldi thak gayi…
Dev: hmm..
Thr convo go…like this…. And then suddenly when dev did mt get any ans frm hr….he understood she slept….he made hr sleep properly…..
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Srry fr a short update….and ik i finished this…so…fst…i am really srry fr tht…but vil pakka post tmrw…..

Precap: dev’s pov, Hana getting scoldings frmd Dev and Asha,bejoy and Shakti tensed abt Sona

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V.V.harshita

    A PURE DEVAKSHIAN AND A ISHQBAAZIAN TOO!!! LOVE TO READ......ONLY FAN FICTIONS

    10 Comments

    1. MANSINAIK on May 31, 2017 9:15 am

      Awesome
      Post soon

      • V.V.harshita on May 31, 2017 5:40 pm

        Thnxs vil post soon

    2. Princess. on May 31, 2017 9:35 am

      Amazing Episode

      • V.V.harshita on May 31, 2017 5:41 pm

        Thnxs vil post soon

    3. DramaQueen1004 on May 31, 2017 11:28 am

      Amazing epi…. Dev ki haalat pr mujhe bahut hasi aayi
      Really nice update
      Pls post soon
      Love u loads

      • V.V.harshita on May 31, 2017 5:42 pm

        Ya ik so…sad of Dev….???vil post soon

    4. Ekani on May 31, 2017 12:47 pm

      see what she do to dev…poor dev….can’t handle her…nice episode…post asap

      • V.V.harshita on May 31, 2017 5:42 pm

        Thnxs vil post soon ? ? ? ?

    5. Ritya on May 31, 2017 1:46 pm

      Good one next time post a big one ??

      • V.V.harshita on May 31, 2017 5:44 pm

        Thnxs vil post soon ? ? ? ?

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