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Home»Fan Fiction»i will always love u….. (part 6) Udaan
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i will always love u….. (part 6) Udaan

komaljanuBy komaljanuOctober 31, 201636 Comments3 Mins Read
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Thanks for ur support guys I m glad that ul like my ff.. Megha if u r reading this ff plz do comment some thing because I really feel guilty that I disappointed u. So plz do tell that r u liking the current part or not….And all others ul too plz do tell me whether my ff is interesting or not….

Suraj goes from canteen and see Chakor sitting alone.Suraj was thinking to go and irritate her when he saw Arjun going and sitting near by Chakor.
Arjun:hi
Chakor:hi.
Arjun:why r u looking upset..
Suraj comes there.
Suraj:its none of ur business dude.
Arjun:listen I m not talking to u so plzzzzz..
Chakor:Arjun plz ul both don’t fight again. U go Arjun I’ll meet u later…
Arjun show a rude attitude towards Suraj and goes.
Chakor: What’s ur problem
Suraj: I already told na that my problem is u
Chakor:u know what……..
Suraj:I know I know go to hell that only na.
Thanks
Chakor goes from there. Suraj smiles.
Suraj:don’t know why but I love irritating u.. My chatter box

On the other side.
Imli: I think we should make di and Suraj friends..
Vivan: Yup we’ll think about it later..lets talk about our jungle camp.
Imli: Yup I m super excited
Vivan: Me too yaar….
Like this their day goes and they go home..
Chakor:imli now toh tell..
Imli:what????
Chakor:that person’s name whom u like.
Imli: My sweet di told u na when right time come I’ll tell u…
Kasturi: UL need something for tomorrow..
Imli: No maai
Kasturi: Fine go to sleep now..
She goes and Chakor and imli sleep

On the other side.
Vivan: Suraj plz don’t irritate Chakor tomorrow..
Suraj: I love to do that…btw why the hell u care for her so much… Do u…
Vivan: Suraj there’s nothing like that she’s my friend and any ways I like someone else.
Suraj:really whose that person.
Vivan realizes what he told he gets shocked.
Suraj: Tell na whose that..
Vivan: Ragini.. Ofcourse our sister.
Suraj: What the hell yaar don’t play pranks with me goodnight…

Next morning they meet in the college and all gets ready for the camp they go and sit in the bus… Vivan and imli sit together and Suraj was just standing. He sees chakor sitting in front of vivan and imli meanwhile Arjun come there.
Arjun: Can I sit here.
Chakor: Sure u may…
He was about to sit when Suraj comes and sits there.
Suraj:sorry bro this seat is house full…
Arjun goes from there.

Chakor: Why r u jealous from him…
Suraj: Me and jealous wake up from ur dreams.
Chakor: So why didn’t u allowed him to sit here.
Suraj: If he would have sat here I couldn’t irritate u . And I just love to irritate u…. Chatter box.
Chakor: Just shut up u sadu. Why the hell I m talking to u.
Suraj: Yup don’t talk.
Bus starts and all start talking about the jungle camp. Suraj looks at Chakor and think of irritating her.
Suraj: U know I have heard that a girl was killed by a lion in the jungle..
Chakor gets afraid.
Chakor: Really there r even lion in the jungle.
Suraj: Ofcourse chatterbox…
Chakor gets more frightened and holds suraj’s hand…

Precap: Chakor gets lost in the jungle and vivan imli Suraj gets tensed for her….

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    36 Comments

    1. komaljanu on October 31, 2016 5:33 pm

      Hey Megha so sorryyyyy dear wrote this ff long back when u didn’t commented on my previous ff and u comments now so I m really very sorry I thought u r disappointed ?

    2. varshu on October 31, 2016 5:47 pm

      Another nice ff.keep posting like this yaar.I love reading them

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 8:33 pm

        Thanks alot dear…

    3. shabdi on October 31, 2016 6:13 pm

      actually u r a mavalous writer in this age……..2day’s epi was fantastic……..

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 8:33 pm

        Thank you so much ?

    4. Sofy on October 31, 2016 7:03 pm

      Amazing story of love nd fight

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 8:34 pm

        Thanks sofy

    5. Liya on October 31, 2016 7:06 pm

      I find this ff really cute!! Sukor’s njokh jokh are really nice. Don’t feel guilty dear your doing great job?….We can learn & improve from our flaws..Take care?

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 8:35 pm

        Thanks alot dear for ur complement and ur advice too I’ll always keep this in mind

    6. Megha on October 31, 2016 7:19 pm

      Komal i m very very sorry bcoz i know my last comment was bitter but when i read the 5th part i felt it was great and about the 6th part i want to say that i didn’t like it…I luvd it dear,keep writting,go on,all the very best and once again sorry for my last rude comment

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 8:36 pm

        No need of saying sorry dear I should say u thanks just because of u I was able to write two beautiful ff… Thanks alot ?

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 8:37 pm

        Glad that u luvd it

    7. CrazygirlS.P on October 31, 2016 7:49 pm

      Fabulous dear❤️❤️❤️

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 8:37 pm

        Thank alot?

      • CrazygirlS.P on October 31, 2016 8:39 pm

        Welcome dear?

    8. Gungun on October 31, 2016 8:09 pm

      It’s awesome

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 8:38 pm

        Thanks gungun?

    9. Gungun on October 31, 2016 8:34 pm

      Please update the next episode as soon as possible plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 9:07 pm

        Sure gungun…. Till morning it will be updated

    10. viviii on October 31, 2016 8:58 pm

      woowww………I have never read an interesting story like this…….AWESOME JANU…

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 9:11 pm

        THANKS VIVIII…..

    11. Sia on October 31, 2016 9:56 pm

      Komal it was fab…n I always luved these kind of hatred luv story….keep it up n I’m waiting for the 7th part…

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 10:27 pm

        Thanks…and the 7 th part will be published today

    12. vinlora on October 31, 2016 10:30 pm

      Hmm….very well written. …?mazaa aa raha hai. ..just love sukor yaar ?thank u?

      • komaljanu on October 31, 2016 11:06 pm

        Thanks alot vinlora….

    13. Nisi on October 31, 2016 11:14 pm

      Wow……as usual it’s very nice…
      I really loved it….waiting for next update…

      • komaljanu on November 1, 2016 10:52 am

        Thanks?

    14. sukorkifan on November 1, 2016 4:20 am

      Sooooooooooo in love with your ff……love SUKORR…..n love your writing too
      Keep updatingg fasttt…willl waitt

      • komaljanu on November 1, 2016 10:53 am

        Thank alot for liking my ff

    15. Fatimi on November 1, 2016 6:50 am

      Can u write longer the story plz.. N can u upload today episode now.. Pls

      • komaljanu on November 1, 2016 10:54 am

        Yup I’ll try to write longer dear?

    16. nisha on November 1, 2016 8:54 am

      U done good job.i like your story so much.each and every conversation was nice.i starting imagination while i reading this.thanx for giving wonderfull story.

      • komaljanu on November 1, 2016 10:55 am

        Thanks alot Nisha…?

    17. Gungun on November 1, 2016 2:20 pm

      Komal where is the next update

      • komaljanu on November 1, 2016 2:41 pm

        I have written it but its not yet published dear?

      • Gungun on November 1, 2016 2:56 pm

        Oh no problem… Don’t know when it will

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