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Home»Fan Fiction»i will always love u….( part 19) udaan
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i will always love u….( part 19) udaan

komaljanuBy komaljanuNovember 16, 201630 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hey guys thanks a lot for ur love and suppot……….its all because of ur support that I write ff that r liked by ul…..please keep supporting me….hope u enjoy todays part too……enjoy reading…….

Chakor and suraj both wakes up in the morning….
Suraj: lets try now….i think someone will help us…
Chakor:yup…
They shout for help….and actually a person comes to their rescue….he opens the door.
Suraj: thanks a lot….
That person: who locked ul here…
Suraj: it’s a long story….if we meet ever again I will explain u everything…..
Chakor: suraj lets go…….imli will be worried….
Suraj had before only told her that imli went in his house…
Suraj: fine…..
Chakor: wait u call vivan and tell him to come with imli here only…
Suraj: listen ms chatterbox……my house isn’t a hell that u cant come there….
Chakor: listen sadu u helped me and thanks for that but I don’t need any more favors…
Suraj: chatterbox I didn’t did any favor on u got that……..i did all this for my bhabhi….and come on yaar that’s ur sisters future house don’t u wanna know about her family..
Chakor: but ur parents don’t stay with ul right………that’s what u told na…
Suraj: yup u can meet our sister..
Chakor: but sadu…
Suraj: listen chatterbox…it wont take me a sec to hold u and make u sit in my car….so its ur wish……ul come by urself and sit in the car or I have to carry u and make u sit….
Chakor: sadu but………
Suraj: fine I will only carry u..
Suraj was about to do that….
Chakor: no………I will come by myself…
Suraj: that’s like my chatterbox.
They go and sit..

On the other side…
Imli vivan and ragini r on dining table..
Ragini: where is suraj bhaiya….its morning..
Vivan explains everything..
Ragini: ok…….i just hope they r fine..
Vivan: I really hope they r fine yaar..
Imli: true vivan try calling suraj..
Ragini: yup bhaiya…
Vivan: my phone is in the room…..i will call him..

On the other side
Chakor and suraj reach suraj’s house…
Chakor: sadu call imli outside…we will go from here only….
Suraj: chatterbox I think I should carry u….
Chakor: no I will come….
Suraj: then come..

Ragini: bhaiya I have to go for college so I m leaving….
Vivan: yup bye princess
He kisses her on her cheek and ragini leaves as she comes towards door… she gets shocked…………..
Ragini: bhaiya……….where were u…..
Suraj: arey……it’s a big story.
He explains the entire story….
Imli: suraj where is di..
Flash back
Chakor and suraj were coming while chakor gets a call from her family.
Chakor: sadu u go in and I will come…
Suraj: yup but u will come right……..or else I will come to carry u…
Chakor:sadu…..
Flashback ends…
Ragini: bhaiya….hope that girl is fine….how amazing na one girl saved ur sister and u saved bhabhi’s sister…forget it I m getting late..
She goes but dashes with someone..
Ragini: oh I m so sorry
Chakor: u….
Ragini sees chakor and gets shocked…
Ragini: u………
Suarj: what u..u…do ul know each other…..
Ragini: bhaiya she is the same girl who saved me..
Chakor: bhaiya???????
Ragini: yup he is my brother whom I was telling u about…..
Suraj imli vivan all gets shocked………but suraj gets more shocked as he always wanted to meet that girl and that girl was always in front of him only….
Suraj: it means chatterbox………I mean chakor saved u…
Ragini: yup bhaiya chakor saved me…….
Ragini hugs her….
Ragini: I always wanted to meet u even suraj bhaiya wanted to meet u and we all were unaware that u were always with them only…….anyways I m getting late have to leave…we will meet next time as now I know that u r with my brother only……………
She was about to go………
Ragini: sorry forgot to say something…………..thanks again if u would not have been there I would not be here…
And she goes……
Suraj in mind: I thought it would be chatterbox and that thought was true princess is right if chatterbox would not be there then definitely princess would not be here with us…….
Vivan:chakor thanks a lot…u know ragini is our life..and just because of u she is here with us…..wish I could have known it before…..i really cant thank u also….u did that much.
Chakor: vivan its ok….
Imli: but that’s great ha………..chakor saved ragini and suraj saved chakor so its equal…
Suraj: no its not….
Suraj: chatterbox………..sorry I mean chakor……..really thanks a lot yaar vivan is right….we cant even say u thanks…..u r just the best yaar…..i wish I could have known this before I would never have irritated u…and ya I promise I will always be grateful to u…….
He hugs her…….chakor was shocked but she too hugs him…
Chakor while hugging: its ok sadu………I love when u irritate me as u love irritating me……and even I got a habit of it…
Vivan and imli looks at each other…..
After few sec…..
Vivan: guys today our college is late and I know many things happened but it does not mean that we don’t have to go to college..
Sukor breaks their hug…..
Imli: yup di we have to go home and get ready….
Suraj: I will drop ul..
Chakor: no its ok…
They go home get ready and comes in college…
Suraj was continuously thinking about his chatterbox..
Vivan: u r thinking about chakor …
Suraj: yup….
Vivan: she did lot for us yaar…
Suraj: yup..
Vivan: she is a very nice girl na……
Suraj: yup yaar……….but what r u trying to say..
vivan: don’t u think she is perfect for u….
suraj: say it clearly vivan..
vivan: suraj understand na yaar.like me and imli and u and chakor….
Suraj: vivan r u crazy..ya I know she is a good girl but yaar she hates me…
Vivan: what about u…
Suraj: I used to but now…..
Vivan: but now what??? u started loving her right……
Suraj smiles remembering all the moments that they spent together…..
Their cute fights..their jokes…their dance and everything..
Vivan: bro…
Suraj comes in reality and leaves without saying anything…….
Vivan sees him and smiles….
Vivan: maybe u didn’t told anything but I got ur answer dude….and I promise I will unite u and chakor….

Precap: suraj sees chakor with arjun and goes from there in an anger……….ragini and vivan talk with suraj…….suraj stands on the edge of the terrace and shouts…………..

So that was it guys……..hope ul like it….i wrote it long as I didn’t wrote yesterday………hope ul didn’t felt it boring…….i m sorry if it was not good………..but I really tried my level best……..please do tell me how it was………and last but not the least………thanks for reading……….hope that ul enjoyed it…..please do keep supporting me……

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    30 Comments

    1. sadia on November 16, 2016 10:04 am

      nice

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 1:31 pm

        thanks sadia……..

    2. Devisree kathiresan on November 16, 2016 11:00 am

      Really osm..

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 1:31 pm

        thanks alot dear.

    3. Nisi on November 16, 2016 11:06 am

      Wonderful story ya… I loved it…

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 1:32 pm

        thanks nisi…..

    4. rooktima tirpathi on November 16, 2016 11:43 am

      really nice i am silent reader of your ff but your ff forced me to comment ????

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 1:35 pm

        thanks al;ot dear………..i m very glad that my ff made u comment…..plz keep commenting…..and thanks again..

    5. CrazygirlS.P on November 16, 2016 11:58 am

      Superb

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 1:33 pm

        thanks sam….

    6. Saral on November 16, 2016 12:27 pm

      Great dear I loved it…

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 1:32 pm

        thanks alot diii…..glad u loved it..

    7. Gungun on November 16, 2016 3:19 pm

      eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereerrereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeedddd it yourstory is awesome you yourself is awesome dear……..?????????????????
      AMAZING work?????
      AWESOME story ????
      FANTASTIC job ??
      EXTRAORDINARY episode ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 8:01 pm

        thanks alot gungun……….

    8. Mitha on November 16, 2016 3:42 pm

      Good going!
      Waiting for the next update!

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 8:00 pm

        thanks mitha……..

    9. Megha on November 16, 2016 3:49 pm

      Yaar…it was amazing,i luvd it…Well why u didn’t post yesterday?

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 8:00 pm

        thanks megha….

    10. Niriha on November 16, 2016 4:09 pm

      Wow it’s just outstanding .I loved it

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 7:59 pm

        thanks alot

    11. Lucky on November 16, 2016 4:14 pm

      Nice

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 7:59 pm

        thanks………

    12. priya on November 16, 2016 4:49 pm

      I read all your ffs till now and all are awesome.I want to say u something its a request…..can u bring a pair to Ragini like chaganwa or anyone else hmm?
      It’s ur wish.waiting for ur reply

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 7:59 pm

        yup sure priya…it is the twist in the episode.thanks for now…

    13. Nikki on November 16, 2016 6:34 pm

      Awesome work

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 7:58 pm

        thanks nikki

    14. Shriya on November 16, 2016 10:10 pm

      Awesomeeeeeee just love it yaar.. u r superb..really good????????????

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 10:30 pm

        THANKS SHRIYA………

    15. Shweta on November 16, 2016 10:49 pm

      Superbbbbbbbbb waiting for next part????????☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

      • komaljanu on November 16, 2016 10:58 pm

        Thanks alot dear…

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