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Home»Fan Fiction»i will always love u….( part 14) udaan
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i will always love u….( part 14) udaan

komaljanuBy komaljanuNovember 9, 201646 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys thanks for ur love and support. Let me tell u this thing today’s episode will be not that interesting…… But yup enjoy reading it?

Ragini hears this.
Ragini: Did i hear something wrong.. Is really my brother fallen in love???
Suraj: Yup vivan r u serious abut it.
Vivan: Yes Suraj I really love imli…
Ragini: Bhaiya.. I m so happy today.
She hugs him. He too hugs her back..
Suraj: Great yaar….
Suraj In a low voice: Thank god he loves imli not chatterbox.
Vivan:did u said something Suraj..
Suraj: No..
Ragini: Did u told Bhabhi about this..
Vivan: Bhabhi???//???

Ragini: Yup u r my elder brother so she will be my Bhabhi only na?
Suraj: Great one ha…imli Bhabhi ha?
Vivan: Just shut up ul both.?
Ragini: It means u didn’t tell her about ur feelings..
Vivan: Princess I don’t know whether she loves me or not…
Suraj: Ofcourse she loves u…
Vivan: Who told u this.?
Suraj: It can be seen..
Vivan: No yaar.. Forget it goodnight…
Ragini: Yup Suraj Bhaiya let him sleep and see Bhabhi in his dreams…
Suraj: Yup princess u r right.. Goodnight vivan see imli Bhabhi I ur dreams..?
Vivan: Just shut up ul both..
He goes to sleep.
Ragini: Bhaiya vivan Bhaiya already found a girl for him..what about u.
Suraj: Right now I just wanna go to sleep.. And yup I first wanna meet that girl who saved u..
Ragini: Yup u know even she is young… And she will be best for u…
Suraj: Ragini…..? goodnight…
He kissed her cheek and goes to sleep…
Other side…..
Chakor: U told vivan about this..

Imli: No di I m not sure that even he loves me…
Chakor teases her by saying vivan I now her jeeju and she will Call him by that name only…
Imli: Di goodnight..
Chakor: Yup see vivan In ur dreams…
Imli: Di…
She goes to sleep..
Next morning they reach college… Suraj teases vivan and chakor teases imli…
Vimli goes in the class…
Suraj: Hi chatterbox…..
Chakor ignores him….and goes in the class.
Suraj: Oh so u r ignoring me… Great but I will irritate u…
He goes and sits beside Chakor… In the next row just beside chakor Arjun was sitting.. Chakor saw him and gave a cute smile?. Even he smiled back..
Suraj: Wow ? smile to that fool.. And nothing to me?. Chakor now too ignores him… She is busy chatting with Arjun.. Suraj sees this and gets very angry?.. Miss was explaining…Suraj got up…everyone was shocked with his sudden action..
Miss: What happened suraj…
Suraj: Miss I cant sit this side.. Chakor will u get up from there and sit on my side plz.
Chakor: But why?????
Suraj: Because….
He thinks for a reason as even he was not knowing why he told so.
Suraj: Yup sunlight is coming on my face..
Chakor: U always sit there it always comes on ur face but u r never bothered about it. So why today..
Suraj: Listen…
Miss: Students don’t waste others time.. Chakor u sit this side and let suraj sit the other side.
Suraj gives a smile ?. He sits on the other side and gives a devil smile to Arjun as if he won something.. But poor suraj doing so much of nuisance also didn’t helped him. Chakor and Arjun were still looking at each other and was chatting isharo isharo Mai types. Suraj was getting jealous. So he was purposely coming in front of them.. They weren’t able to talk…
Bell rang..
Chakor: What’s ur problem…

Suraj: Why what happened…
Chakor: U very well know what u were doing..
Suraj: What I was doing.. I was copying the notes..
Chakor: Oh plz I know how much u were copying notes… Thank god imli loves vivan not u..
Suraj: What even imli loves vivan…
Chakor: What do u mean by even… Do vivan also loves imli.
Suraj: Yup but he think that imli doesn’t love him..
Chakor: Even imli feels the same thing…
Suraj: We have to do something for them.
Chakor: Excuse me i not we.. Cause I’ll be doing it alone.
She was about to leave when Suraj holds her and pulls her. She comes very close to Suraj and they both have an cute eye lock..
Suraj comes more closer to her and in a very soft voice says…
Suraj: I love u……
Chakor: What????
Chakor was unable to belief what Suraj told her..
Suraj: Hey listen don’t get happy i m not saying this to u…. I was saying that we should tell them to say i love u to each other..
Chakor: Ok… ( in very disappointing tone)
Suraj: Listen chakor i know we always fight. But its something related to our brothers and sisters happiness so lets do it together….
Chakor: Ok fine but only for vivan and imli..
Suraj: Yup..
And they shake hands.

Suraj: We promise that we will unite vivan and imli…
Chakor: Yup.. But what shall we do…
Suraj: I have a plan…
He explains her the plan…
Chakor: Great yaar… Wasn’t knowing that my sadu have brain too.
Suraj was dam happy as chakor said my sadu.. But Chakor didn’t realized it..
Chakor: What happen why r u smiling so much..
Suraj:as chatterbox complimented me…
Chakor: Oh plz Suraj.. Not again..
She gets up and hits something. Was about to fall but Suraj holds her and they again have an eye lock….

Precap: Chakor and Suraj decorates a room and have their cute nok jhoks in between

Hey guys that was it.. Know was little boring but didn’t had anything much to write. Sorry but hope UL enjoy it… Thanks for reading?. Do let me know how it was…..

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    46 Comments

    1. Fatimi on November 9, 2016 10:43 am

      Superb

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 12:15 pm

        thanks

    2. Nisi on November 9, 2016 10:52 am

      Superb ya…….

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 12:15 pm

        thanks nisi

    3. Nikki on November 9, 2016 11:13 am

      Noway I really like yr ff n am waiting for more

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 12:16 pm

        thanks nikki glad u r liking it

    4. CrazygirlS.P on November 9, 2016 12:29 pm

      My dear it’s outstanding ❤️❤️❤️

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 1:02 pm

        thanks alot sam……….

      • CrazygirlS.P on November 9, 2016 1:20 pm

        Welcome dear❤️❤️❤️❤️

    5. Mitha on November 9, 2016 1:02 pm

      Enjoyed reading it!

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 2:01 pm

        thanks mitha……….

    6. Gungun on November 9, 2016 2:14 pm

      I loved it not was that much boring … Waiting for the next episode????????????

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 5:11 pm

        thanks gungun……..

    7. Niriha on November 9, 2016 2:15 pm

      Awesome

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 5:12 pm

        thanks

    8. Pia on November 9, 2016 2:16 pm

      Always loving to read our ff….good dear

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 5:12 pm

        thanks alot pia

    9. Pia on November 9, 2016 2:18 pm

      *ur

    10. vinlora on November 9, 2016 2:51 pm

      Beautifully written dear….loved it…?

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 5:14 pm

        thanks alot vinlora

    11. Vivi on November 9, 2016 3:16 pm

      Ohh it seems that u r enjoying slapping urself ???

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 5:15 pm

        yup really my sis i enjoy slapping myself

    12. Vivi on November 9, 2016 3:17 pm

      Really awesome di ?❤❤

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 5:17 pm

        thanks……

    13. Megha on November 9, 2016 3:18 pm

      R u out of mind?who said it was boring,it was amazing i luvd it plzzzz….. Update more

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 5:18 pm

        thanks megha glad u loved it

    14. Zainu on November 9, 2016 4:17 pm

      Really nice disi..???

      • Zainu on November 9, 2016 4:17 pm

        Didi*

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 5:19 pm

        glad that my small sis liked it……

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 5:18 pm

        thanks zainab…

    15. Aribah on November 9, 2016 6:09 pm

      Awsomeeeeeeeeeee episode???????? my sweet di and who told you that it was boring ??? it was not at all boring di just loved it?????????…………and again sorrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyy as I didn’t commented on the last some episodes as you know di I wais busy with my school so plzzzzzzzz forgive me di……….and fabulous ff ?? just keep it up like this di????????……..

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 7:05 pm

        aribah u dont need to say sorry cause small sisters never say sorry to their di…. and thanks

    16. Shriya on November 9, 2016 6:40 pm

      This was really very awesome….!!!!!?

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 7:05 pm

        thanks shriya…

    17. Shriya on November 9, 2016 6:41 pm

      This was really very awesome….!!!!!?pls write more…

    18. komaljanu on November 9, 2016 7:06 pm

      sure shriya… ul just keep supporting me like this and i will write more and more….

    19. Shweta on November 9, 2016 7:44 pm

      I just love sukor moments…keep writing….waiting for next part

      • komaljanu on November 9, 2016 7:57 pm

        thanks..

    20. SONAM on November 9, 2016 10:00 pm

      hi
      ……first I m angry. with you………….who idiot told you…..ki part boring hai…….aap hame bataiye abhi uski class lete……h……….it’s so good…….I really like it……nd di….you are amezing. …writer…..so keep writing. …….nd I m eagerly waiting for new part…….nd remember sare part bahut mst ok………..nd a tight huggg……thanks bolne k style. ……♡♡♡♡♡♡

      • komaljanu on November 10, 2016 1:07 pm

        thanks alot sonam

    21. Soniya on November 9, 2016 10:19 pm

      We loved it….It was really very interesting

      • komaljanu on November 10, 2016 12:02 am

        Thanks soniya… Glad u loved it….

    22. Aribah on November 10, 2016 12:45 am

      Awwwwwwww that’s so sweet of you di????……

      • komaljanu on November 10, 2016 1:06 pm

        just like u my small sis

    23. Gungun on November 10, 2016 3:48 pm

      Where is the next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzszsszzsssssssszzzzzzzzzz

    24. SONAM on November 10, 2016 8:23 pm

      hi pia…..I sonam…..I Want ask you something? ?..
      you like vimli or imvaan???

      because I like so much….they are my fev…..

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