Hey guys this is my first and ever ff so hope UL like it plz do comment that should I continue writing or not… Enjoy……?
This story is totally different from the serial udaan
The story starts from a beautiful house in which two girls are sleeping on their bed.
A beautiful lady comes in and it is kasturi.
Kasturi: Chakor,imli get up ul both ul r getting late for the college its ur first day after all…
a girl gets up and she is none other than our dear Chakor..
Kasturi:good u got up now make ur sister too wake.
Chakor:ok maai
Kasturi goes
Chakor: Imli my little princess plz wake up its our first day to college.
Imli:di I m feeling sleepy plz do let me sleep
Chakor:ok fine sleep( she comes near her and pulls her bed sheet)
Imli:di I swear I won’t leave u
Chakor:first catch me.
They both run chakor in front and imli behind her finally they get tired and they lie down on the bed.
Kasturi from outside:girls get ready I have prepared ur breakfast.
Chakor:ok fine lets get ready..
Imli: Right di or else mom will kill us..
The scene shifts towards a royal bungalow in which two boys r sleeping.
Alarm rings and one boy gets up that is vivan .. He switches of the alarm.
The other one is Suraj.
Vivan:what the hell dude this alarm yaar
Suraj: What’s the time?
Vivan: Its just 8:00
Suraj:ok fine sleep
Vivaan sleeps again within two second both vivan and Suraj gets up in a shock.
Both together:oh no 8:00
Vivan:today is the first day of our college
Suraj:and we will get late hurry up lets get ready.
They both gets ready and comes down on the dining table..
They both stay there alone only with their beautiful sister Ragini
Ragini: Good morning my sweet brothers finally ul got ready
They both kisses her cheeks
Suraj and vivan: Good morning our dear little princess.
Ragini:quickly eat ur breakfast and run to ur college or else ul will get late.
They hurriedly eat their breakfast and runs from there.
Both of them: Bye princess take care meet u in the evening.
On the other side Chakor and imli too runs for their college after having their breakfast.
Precap : Suraj vivan and imli chakor meet the first time
This was it guys I know I didn’t write enough but I only wanted to give a formal introduction so I gave I hope ul like it plz do tell me about my mistakes and ya one more thing I don’t want to reveal that is it sukor vimli or vikor imraj so it can be anything till the Last keep guessing and do let me know how’s it……… Thanks for reading
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13 Comments
Omg that was superb..You wrote it very well..I hope the jodis are SuKor and Imvaan …. I would love to see some tashan btw sukor…( And everyone else also )
Keep writing…good luck
thank u janu,very nice plz continue.waiting for nxt update,and plz make it as vimli and sukor because am very big fan of sukor,and its jst a request
The ff was 2 short but i request in the 2nd part make it sukor and vimli.Thanks for the ff.
Very well start dear…interesting. ..
? and a request pl plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make it sukor sukor and sukor only. …?
Superb
Its totally different and really so nice.im eagerly waiting for what’s up next and plz make a sukor.bcz they’re perfect pair.
It’s superb…Amazing.. Continue soon
Plz the pair should b sukor and Imvaan
Its good dear.. Actually i am a great fan of sukor too…
Awesome dear please continue and make sukor and vimli
That was really very nice…keep writing..
That was really very nice…keep writing..just make chakor and suraja as couple and imli and vivaan from beginning..?
Oh just awsome janu . Keep going. Our support is with you.