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Fan Fiction Swaragini

whose mistake?? Part 1

vishiBy vishiFebruary 17, 201714 Comments1 Min Read
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Hello frnz.. Its my 1st ff so plz 4give me 4 mistakes.. Its based on swara n sanskar

.. It’ll take few shots.. So let’s start the story..

Location: A big mall is shown.. Some goons are attacking a pregnant lady 4 their escape bt a girl comes in between n they shoot hr continuously 3 bullets.. That lady screams and the grl fell down with the pool of blood.. Security caught the goons n took the girl to the hospital..
Here the lady was sweating badly in the mean time his husband rushed to her n gave her sm water.. After seeing him she felt little relaxed bt then that girl’s face came to hr mind n she said to hr husband

Lady: Sanskar!!!! That girl…. Who saved me… Plz sanskar plz let us go to the hospital ( in a fumble voice and crying tone)
Sanskar: relax kavi.. Its not good 4 ur health.. I’ll go n check hr..
K: no sanskar.. Plz.. She is totally unknown 4 me bt she saved me n even I can’t go for hr well being..(cryingly)
S: OK… Let’s go..

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    14 Comments

    1. Sara on February 17, 2017 5:36 am

      Awesome ………please continue

    2. sneha on February 17, 2017 6:26 am

      awesome

    3. Kakali on February 17, 2017 7:54 am

      Vishi, welcome to SwaSan family dear..!! ur ss seems interesting..!! Continue soon..!!Do write the chapters lil bit lengthy..!! Thnk u.. 🙂

    4. mica on February 17, 2017 8:39 am

      waaa.. it’s lookalike my skirt, so tempting but too short 😀

    5. vishi on February 17, 2017 8:49 am

      Thanks kakali.. Sure I’ll update soon…..

    6. Sus on February 17, 2017 10:07 am

      Nyc

    7. independent on February 17, 2017 11:00 am

      good concept vishi

    8. SRSL on February 17, 2017 1:47 pm

      Nice…welcome to swaragini family…be comfortable here..

    9. a on February 17, 2017 2:51 pm

      Nice

    10. AnuAnn on February 17, 2017 3:20 pm

      Nice dear… But short….

    11. Shreeyu on February 17, 2017 3:42 pm

      Nice dear… Continue soon?

    12. vyshu10 on February 17, 2017 9:14 pm

      nyc

    13. A.xx on February 18, 2017 7:45 am

      nice xx

    14. anu on February 18, 2017 7:26 pm

      nyc

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