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Home»Fan Fiction»Who am I to you- Intro
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Who am I to you- Intro

AstraBy AstraSeptember 22, 201631 Comments5 Mins Read
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A house is decorated very grandly. Swara is sitting before a mirror and Ragini is making her ready.
They listens a car sound out.
Ragini: didi, jiju has come…
She says and runs down.
Swara remains unreacted.

Ragini runs down and looks at the car. Laksh, Ap and Dp get down from the car.
“Wow, jiju is very handsome…” she says to her mom and dad.
Shekar and Sharmista receive them.

Ragini comes and stops them at door.
Ragini: mr. Laksh jiju, you are going to engage my sis. If I have to allow you, you have to give me any gift…

Laksh: arey Ragini, I’m going to become your jiju, this is a big gift to you…

Ragini: don’t tell me filmy dialogues, I want gift.

Then Laksh takes a teddy bear and puts it in plate.
Ragini: do you think I’m a kid??

Laksh: oh, come on… what do you want.
Ragini: my didi is very precious. You can’t buy her with money or gold…

Laksh: oh… I see…

Then laksh takes a lizard and throws in her hands. Ragini scares and shouts. She jumps and goes aside. Everyone laugh and come inside. Ragini realizes that it’s a doll lizard.
Ragini: jiju..!! did you carry all these while coming to engagement??

Laksh: I know how mischief you are. That’s why, I have to bring them…

Laksh sits on stage and Swara is also brought there. Laksh keeps looking at Swara passionately. She sits beside him.
Laksh slowly: hai…
Swara doesn’t reply.
Laksh: I really started liking you just seeing you in photo…
Swara is calm.
Laksh: plz, talk something…

Ragini comes in middle.
Ragini: jiju, why are you disturbing my sis. Can’t u be calm.
Laksh: can’t you leave us alone??
Ragini: no..! till marriage, I won’t leave you alone. I said know, she is precious.
Laksh: oh my god…!!

The engagement rituals start. Laksh puts ring to Swara and she too puts ring. They go back to their places after the function.
Evening, Laksh calls to Swara’s phone. But Ragini lifts it.
Ragini: why did you call?
Laksh: hmm…why are you coming in our middle always.
Ragini: you gave me hand without giving gift.. unless you give me gift, I don’t give phone to my sis.
Laksh: ok, what do you want??
Ragini: you have to take care of my sis always. I want nothing more than that…
Laksh smiles: oh Ragini, you are so sweet. I love your sister very much. I will surely take care of her…
Ragini: thnx jiju…
Then she gives phone to Swara.

Laksh: hai Swara, what are you doing…
Swara doesn’t talk anything.
Swara: actually, I’m sleepy. I will talk later.
She cuts the phone.
Ragini is amazed with her behavior.
Rag: swara, why are you not talking with him. He is your going to be husband.
Swa: going to be..! not husband right…!! Do your own work..
Swara sleeps.

Then Laksh messages Swara. ‘if you don’t like me, you can tell at least now also. I won’t force you to marry me.’

Ragini feels sad looking at the message. She replies. ‘Nothing like that jiju, she is feeling shy to talk with you. And she is really tired now.’

Laksh says ok. Ragini keeps thinking.

Next day is marriage day. Ragini asks Swara straightly, that she likes this marriage or not. Swara doesn’t answer her.

Ragini keeps thinking. Then Laksh calls her.
Ragini: haa jiju…
Laksh: ragini, I will send you a message. See it.

Ragini reads the message. She is shocked. Swara sends him a message that she doesn’t like him. She is in love with someone else already. She want to marry him.

Ragini soon calls him.
Ragini: jiju, didi might be kidding.

“Then where is she…??” asks Ap, Dp who just came there. Ragini shocks. Laksh is behind them. He is very sad.

Shekar and Sumi comes.
Sumi: I will bring Swara, then we can start all rituals.

Ap: she has run away already, she is not at home. You people don’t know this being in same house. But, we came to know.

Shekar and Sumi shocks. They run to her room and see a letter. That she likes Sanskar named boy and ran away with him.

Ap: this is your parvarish. You don’t know to bring up a girl.

Ap and Dp starts taunting them.
Laksh: maa, papa, it’s enough. Let’s go away.

Shekar: no…! one daughter has done a mistake, now our other daughter will rectify it.

Ragini looks shocked.

Shekar: Ragini will marry your son.
Laksh shocks.

Laksh: I have loved Swara not Ragini. I can’t change my heart as your decision. Maa, papa let’s go away.

Then Shekar holds Laksh’s hands. “Beta, don’t say like that. It’s our mistake not knowing her heart. She could have at least said us. She has damaged our reputation by eloping. For this, our second daughter has also to bear the pain. No one will come before to marry her.”

Ap: so, why we should come??
Sumi: Ragini is not like her. she is very good. Ap ji, however your reputation will also go down if this marriage will not happen. So, what if you make ragini as your bahu.

Ap thinks.

Ragini is about to speak something. But Shekar sumi closes her mouth. Ap, dp closes Laksh mouth. At last, Raglak are married forcedly.

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next part is the actual story. This is just trailer…

RagLak OS—— who Am I to you…

Nxt part by tomorrow evening.

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    31 Comments

    1. rafeee on September 22, 2016 3:26 pm

      superb dear…

    2. Shrinjal on September 22, 2016 3:29 pm

      Wow Astra…Great Going…Cntnu

    3. lolita on September 22, 2016 3:35 pm

      super dr so plz update soon

    4. Ashnoor on September 22, 2016 3:38 pm

      Amazing astra .

    5. Savi singh on September 22, 2016 3:38 pm

      Plz post next part.. I m waiting… Loved it

    6. Sally_blr on September 22, 2016 3:40 pm

      Hum Apke Hai Kaun? Wooow I know you have not scripted the story of the movie. Salman’s movie makes me crazy. Don’t mind. Good story line. As always with adorable, understanding Laksh.

    7. LovelyAliya on September 22, 2016 3:46 pm

      Hope will get it soon! Really I want to read thesesome type of story!! ???? waiting eagerlt

    8. vavachi on September 22, 2016 3:50 pm

      Super twist plz plz update next part soon waiting dear

    9. Joyful Jessica on September 22, 2016 3:51 pm

      wow nice Astra di………. post nxt part soon

    10. j on September 22, 2016 3:53 pm

      wow interesting super

    11. tani on September 22, 2016 3:54 pm

      More than awesome.. But I have read dis somewhere, I don’t remember properly

    12. Divya on September 22, 2016 4:21 pm

      Its too good.waiting for next epi

    13. Teja on September 22, 2016 4:55 pm

      Astra giving so much surprises is not good superb amazing love raglak and your trailer too

    14. dharani on September 22, 2016 4:57 pm

      awesome

    15. Fats on September 22, 2016 5:07 pm

      Great start/ trailer Astra. RagLak’s forceful marriage sounds exciting. Can’t wait to read more about their relationship.

    16. j. on September 22, 2016 5:38 pm

      amazing looking firward for it

    17. nitu on September 22, 2016 6:14 pm

      Wow.. awesome intro…

    18. Akshata on September 22, 2016 6:28 pm

      So you are back with new rocking story, i know it will be awesome as always. one question is this os? if yes then can you pls covert it into ff or ss.

      • Akshata on September 22, 2016 6:55 pm

        convert*

    19. Sharanya on September 22, 2016 7:27 pm

      Awesome dear

    20. Ragz_teju on September 22, 2016 7:35 pm

      awesome yaar… just trailer is amazing then sure story will be beyond it..

    21. nikky on September 22, 2016 7:41 pm

      amazing waiting for next part soon

    22. Riya on September 22, 2016 7:48 pm

      Astra u r back again with a lovely Raglak story? Waiting eagerly to read the further parts?

    23. Ammu on September 22, 2016 8:36 pm

      Interesting trailer dear and eagerly waiting for next part.

    24. varsha on September 22, 2016 8:36 pm

      Awwwww so happy that you have come back dear, luv it, luv u muah

    25. Athira on September 22, 2016 10:15 pm

      guyzzz… can anyone tell me how to update ff on tellyupdates… it had been changed so i don’t know how… tell me how….

      • Astra on September 23, 2016 12:10 pm

        you have to register first. then you have to press ‘submit article’ button on top. next, you will undersatnd everything.

    26. Sreevijayan on September 22, 2016 10:58 pm

      Awesome start dear..loved it

    27. rethu on September 22, 2016 11:36 pm

      Astra dear ????.what to say . I can’t express my happiness . Awesome dear . keep rocking????

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