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Home»Fan Fiction»Whispering hearts (Chapter 1)
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Whispering hearts (Chapter 1)

DivyanshriBy DivyanshriJuly 8, 201638 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello guys…. Hope u will like the story….

? :I post HEARTLESS SANSKAR HELPLESS SWARA but I dnt know what happen it is not posted. I dnt have any copyright so have to write again. So those who r waiting for the ff please forgive me.

(“Don’t cry over the past,Its GONE”
“Don’t stress about the future, it’s Haven’t ARRIVED”
“Live in present n make it BEAUTIFUL”)

A big Mansion is shown where a lady of late 50’s is praying with tears in her eyes.
Lady:?Hai Ghanu shamji… Please bring my daughter n my granddaughter back to us. Dnt know where they r? I miss my shona n sumi so much please god bring them to us. ?
(The lady is shown n she is Dadi Parvati Gadodiya)
A old man in his late 60s come to her n place his hand in her shoulder.
Man:Parvati….Dnt cry everytime will be fine. we will get back our shona n sumi back. Have faith in god.
(He is Deen dayal Gadodiya)
Par:Yes we will find them soon. N our family will be complete that day.

MUMBAI
A man with black track suit jogging talking in his Bluetooth. He has a perfect build up body.
Man:Yes ACP sanskar Maheswari speaking…
OS:….
San:Okay u dnt worry I will be in 10min.
By saying this he speed up.
He went to a bar n order a drink.
San:Waiter bring vodka shots.
The waiter bring 5 shots.
San look towards him n gave him a tight slap.
Wai:?why u slapped me?
He again slap him twice.
Wai:??Arree why r u slapping me.
San:What I asked u to bring?
Wai:Vo..votka..
San again slap him:I asked u to bring wine. Go n bring wine for me.
Waiter nodded n brought wine for him n he run from there.
San fill his glass n was about to drink when he again call the waiter.
San:Hai u come here?
Waiter was hell scared.?He was hiding his both cheeks with his hands.
San saw n gave him a tight punch in his stomach. The waiter fall down. By looking at the waiter his partners(goons) come towards him
Goon:Why r u betting him?
San:Becz…
Goon:Becz ??
San hold him n gave three punch on his stomach he fall down. Soon others too attack San.
San being a trained officer over power them. after betting them black n blue. He drag them out to a school field in front of the bar.
He took 5 bags from the students n asked the goons to wear them.
As the goons dnt have any energy to get betten up again so they wore them.
San:Complete 50 round of the whole playground.
All the goons were shock as the playground was very big.
They were not moving so sanskar take out his gun n point towards them.
San:*Shout*?RUN.
All started to run in fear.
After completing the round they were full exhausted n there whole body was paining like hell.?
San:?So Now will u agree to close this bar?
Goons nodded in fear n tiredness. ?
San:?OK…. Good so write a apology letter in English.
Goon:We don’t know how to write…
Before he could complete sanskar gave him a tight slap.
San:N u r telling principal to close the school so that u can run the bar.
Goons bow down.
San call a student and ask him to teach them how to write letter.
They boy did so.
Principal thank sanskar.
Pri:Thank u so much Mr. Sanskar.
San:No need to thank me it was my duty.
Pri:it was our Maths teacher advise to complain the police as the goons were disturbing us a lot.
San:Oh…Can I meet him.
pri:Ya u can but it’s her not him she is a lady. Sarmishtha….. Sarmishtha SINGHANIA.
San:?Sarmishtha…..
Pri:Yes any problem.
San:Can I see her bio data?
Principal nodded n gave him her bio data.
Sanskar had tears of happiness in his eyes. He thank Principal n went from there.
San:(call someone):Hello We find her….
OS:…
San: Calm down Laksh…. Yes ….She is in Mumbai.
Lak:I am soo happy .I am coming…
San:Come soon. okay bye…..
After he cut the call he smile n say
San:?We will meet soon my bubbly….

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ON THE WAY TO MUMBAI
laksh was Riding to Mumbai. He was dame happy.
While he was going he saw a old lady asking a lift. He stop the car
lady:Please can u give me lift to Mumbai.
Lak was amazed by her voice as her look is old but her voice is much young.But then he agreed n she sat with him.
Both were going when suddenly from nowhere a car come in front of them. Laksh somehow apply a brake n come out of the car with much anger.
Lak:??what the hell…. can’t u see such a big car in front of u?
The people come out n they look like goons.
Goon:?Move back …we dnt have any Prblm with u… we want that lady.
Lak look towards the lady in the car who was sweating.
Lak:Stay away…. Dnt u dare touch that lady.
Goon:who will save her u??
By saying this all ? ???
After that goons attack laksh n laksh too fight with them with all his strength but the goons overpower them.
One of the goon was about to stab him with Knife when he get a kick from someone.
All were amazed to see the person. It was the same lady who was in laksh car.
Laksh jaw drop off.
The lady took off her white Saree n came out in jeans n T-shirt. She take off her wig n started to fight.
Goons try to attack her but she bet that up n frees laksh. Soon both beat the goons n rush from there.
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IN CAR
Laksh was confuse+a bit angry.
Lak:Who r u? N why the hell the goons are behind u.
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To be continued
Precape:U will get to know….

Guys please comment. If u like or dislike whatever it will be. just comment.

Heartless sanskar helpless swara will try to post today but if can’t will post tomorrow.
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Divyanshri

    Hi guys... It's divyu.....dont know what to say.... I am a Swasan... Fan... Not only fan ac also ? ...n I am Swaragini fan too.... Not the serial bond but... I love Swaragini....

    38 Comments

    1. Aahna on July 8, 2016 12:27 am

      awsm…
      really I like sanky too much how he punc goon. and apologizing letter part….

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 10:59 am

        Thank u ahana……?

    2. Swasan on July 8, 2016 12:29 am

      Nice…..

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:12 am

        thank you

    3. naina on July 8, 2016 12:33 am

      I just loved it…just imagine sanskar as ACP wow 🙂 n couple??? Plz swasan n raglak

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:01 am

        Dnt worry as laksh is swara’s bro so it will obviously be swasan ?
        Keep reading….. hope u will like our work

    4. niya on July 8, 2016 12:34 am

      nyc

    5. ansa on July 8, 2016 12:35 am

      Nice yrr keep it up

    6. surabhi Srivastava on July 8, 2016 1:08 am

      Awesome story and pls upload soon heartless sanskaar and helpless swara waiting your ff

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:03 am

        Thanks for commenting…… n I will post Heartless sanskar helpless swara today….. ?

    7. lisa on July 8, 2016 2:06 am

      amazing next 1 plz asap
      love rags

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:04 am

        Thank u Lisa…… will post soon ?

    8. cutiie on July 8, 2016 2:37 am

      Plz make swaaan raglak

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:05 am

        Dnt stress about couples cutie Becz swasan n Raglak are my favorite couples….. thanks for ur comment. ?

    9. Sarah on July 8, 2016 3:41 am

      Really good and very unique

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:06 am

        Thank u my cute sis Sarah……. ?

    10. soumya on July 8, 2016 5:31 am

      Divyanshri… Gazab… Luveeeeeedddddddddddd ittttttttttttt???????????

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:07 am

        Thank u soumya di…… ?

    11. jjjjjj on July 8, 2016 6:28 am

      Then wat about heartless sanskar helpless swara

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:08 am

        I will post it today jjjj

    12. Soujanya on July 8, 2016 8:11 am

      Awesome

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:08 am

        thank u soujanya

    13. tamanna on July 8, 2016 8:55 am

      Awesome…. Update next episode soon…

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:09 am

        Thank u tamanna…..next episode will post tomorrow ?

    14. Seeba on July 8, 2016 9:02 am

      Divya had already posted hs and his..but it didn’t get post..don’t worry she will post tat epi 31 once again…today..

    15. alia on July 8, 2016 9:15 am

      nyc

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:11 am

        thanks

    16. Afra on July 8, 2016 9:16 am

      Nice

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:12 am

        thanks

    17. SS on July 8, 2016 9:25 am

      Awesome..continue soon

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:10 am

        thank u…..

    18. Jwala on July 8, 2016 10:50 am

      superb divya..

      • Divyanshri on July 8, 2016 11:09 am

        thank u jwala Di……

    19. Vidhi on July 8, 2016 11:10 am

      Loved it????????update soon dear……

    20. vyshu10 on July 8, 2016 1:35 pm

      nice….is bubbly swara?

    21. SHAN on July 8, 2016 3:40 pm

      Awesome….. I think the girl is ragini as she is lawyer the goons are behind her….. Bubbly is surely swara….

    22. Ruhani on July 10, 2016 2:49 pm

      Superb.. Who’s that.. Was that ragini or swara

    23. mica on July 21, 2016 4:31 pm

      woooow nice

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