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Fan Fiction Manmarziyan

I want your suggestions guys

administratorBy administratorDecember 23, 201558 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hello Guys It’s Me Princess
actually I’m thinking to write a new story the story is about hate that will turn into love because Soon I’m going to end the first story
” Love Is All I Need ” and before ending this story I want to know that do u guys want me to write the second story or not
Here is a small intro of the new story

Our Heroine
name:Haya
age:19
nature:sweet,cute,caring,beautiful, bubble,fun loving she is open minded but shy also she think that girls is equal to boys and can do whatever they like she live in orphanage because her parents died in a car orphanage and her relative refuse to take care of her and mother(who take care of orphanage) took haya with her in orphanage she love haya a lot because she don’t have any daughter and haya is like her daughter she completed her study and she is a painter and every kid in orphanage call haya as didi.

Our hero
name:Arjun Mehra
age:23
nature: hot,handsome,arrogant and proud of himself he think there is nothing like love in this world it’s just that people want physical pleasure and that’s what people called love he had many girlfriend and physical relationships and all girls are behind him because of his money that’s why he don’t believe in love and if he like something he want it at any cost no matter what happened but he love his family a lot on a name of family he have only 2 sisters his parents are dead and he is a big successful businessmen his business is of making jewelry

arjun’s sister
sona and rubi both are of same age 18 and both are cute and sweet and love there brother they like painting and they are learning how to paint
there are more people like Arjun’s office stuffs and his sisters frds I will tell u about them on upcoming episode if I will write this story
and this is just a dp of manmarziyan this ff is not on manamarziyan
till then bye take care love u guys a lot an do tell me about intro that u like it or not

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58 Comments

  1. Ranaji(narendran) on December 23, 2015 10:26 am

    It is nice

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 5:43 pm

      thanks ?

  2. Grace on December 23, 2015 10:39 am

    seem to b a really nice story.

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 5:43 pm

      thanks ?

  3. Anu on December 23, 2015 10:51 am

    It’s is nice I have read your all parts of love is all I read I loved that story too nd if you can write than write swaragini swasan ff too as I think u r really very very very gud writed

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 5:44 pm

      thanks anu u made my day ??

  4. Hayathi on December 23, 2015 10:58 am

    Nice intro dr but can u plzzzz change our heroine name radhika plzzzz yaar…. dont mind

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 5:46 pm

      thanks ?? actually I like the name haya a lot that y my heroine name is haya I hope u don’t mind dear ?

  5. mira on December 23, 2015 11:07 am

    I am waiting 4 this story princess…..

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 5:46 pm

      will post soon ?

  6. Jwala on December 23, 2015 11:07 am

    Waiting to read ur next update on this story

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 5:47 pm

      will post soon ?

  7. Ananya on December 23, 2015 11:27 am

    Plz continue princess.. I totally loved ur other story and want u to continue ur this new story…

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 5:48 pm

      thanks a lot ananya ?

  8. manha on December 23, 2015 11:32 am

    yes i love the intro. u can write it in mmz ff. just change the heroine name radhika if u hav no prblm with it. plz.

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 6:31 pm

      right now I will write this one
      I will think about writing ff on mmz hope u don’t mind dear

  9. Shree on December 23, 2015 11:38 am

    Nice start dear !! Please continue.. Update soon

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 6:32 pm

      thanks I will continue ??

  10. Lakshmi on December 23, 2015 11:40 am

    Nice intro and continue ur story

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 6:34 pm

      thanks ?

  11. Devi on December 23, 2015 11:42 am

    Nice introduction yaar continue

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 8:14 pm

      thanks ?

  12. deepa on December 23, 2015 12:18 pm

    Nice looking forward

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 8:14 pm

      thanks ?

    • aditi on December 23, 2015 10:02 pm

      Deepak cntr u plzzz continue arjuna RashidA crazy love ff I really like date plzzz cntr u plzzz continue plźzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzxxxxxxxzzzzzzzzzżxzzzzzzxzxxxxzxxxxxxx

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 10:10 pm

      deepa plzz read aditi’s comment ?

  13. haya on December 23, 2015 12:49 pm

    Nice

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 10:13 pm

      thanks haya ??

  14. Harshita on December 23, 2015 1:24 pm

    It should be Radhika instead of haya pl change it

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 8:16 pm

      Its not radhika because I like haya and when I will write De on mmz then surely it will be radhika hope u understand dear ?

  15. Renu on December 23, 2015 2:33 pm

    Its nice. Pls do continue

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 8:16 pm

      thanks and i will continue ?

  16. zara on December 23, 2015 3:07 pm

    fabulous intro ! !!
    yes, want to read further…
    plzz continue it.

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 10:06 pm

      Thanks Zara ?

  17. fatarajo(joyee) on December 23, 2015 4:58 pm

    You should carry on , continue 🙂

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 10:07 pm

      thanks ?

  18. Rg on December 23, 2015 5:08 pm

    Hi if possible just change d heroine s name to radhika

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 10:08 pm

      hello this is not mmz ff when I will write mmz ff then surely it will be Arjun and radhika ? hope u understand dear

  19. aditi on December 23, 2015 6:23 pm

    Awesome story continue did I will miss or other story and @DEEPA r u the writer of Arjuna radhika crazy love plzzzzz continue DAT i am a damn fan of DAT off PRINCESS can u plzzz give did message to her

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 10:09 pm

      thanks and why not ?

    • deepa on December 24, 2015 11:07 am

      Aditi sure yaar i vll update as soon as possible as far nw its difficult yaar becos am busy with my exams and for sure I vll continue it atf my exam its for sure

  20. Brity on December 23, 2015 6:52 pm

    It’s cool… You are amazing writer… I’m one of your Silent Readers…!!! Do accept me…!!!

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 10:12 pm

      thanks a lot for telling me that I’m an amazing writer because u r silent reader and u comment on my ff n your this comment made my day dear so thank u so much ????

  21. karthck on December 23, 2015 7:07 pm

    realy nyc yaar…. keep it up

    • Princess on December 23, 2015 10:13 pm

      thanks ?

  22. Ananya on December 23, 2015 9:13 pm

    Mmz fans our Monica Sehgal (RADHIKA) now acting in chakravartin ashok samrat show of colors.. As kichak’s wife. A small role…

  23. aastha on December 23, 2015 11:23 pm

    Hey princess intro s gud…..cn we still nt persuade u to change te mmain female char to Radhika???????

    Hey Anaya tanks 4 te information……I have left a msg 4 u in Nisha ‘s horror story…..plz check it…..

    • Princess on December 24, 2015 12:20 am

      I’m really sorry aastha I can’t I have already started to write sorry hope u don’t mind dear?

    • aastha on December 24, 2015 7:19 pm

      Its ok….i dnt mind

  24. nisha on December 24, 2015 4:38 pm

    hey princess dear , I know its a dare to start a new story here for arjun a new heroine but who said it difficult you prove it that its not impossible even its damn easy .
    YOur words are magical just like this name haya .

    Hey princess jiske naam me hi haya ho
    uske liye hum kya kahe
    Wo jaanasheen banegi teri kaahani ki
    jise arjun ki hone ke liye hum dua kare

    love u dear jiske naam me hi haya ho wo character to khoobsoorat hoga hi and its not that difficult to find rads in haya isn’t it .

    I am sorry for my bad shayeri dear when came to comment box I can’t control my fingers and heart to experess it loved ur story so much dear Wecome to manmarziyaan dear. Live ur manmarziyaan fully here. and we are here to read ur story and always like a friend for u dear.
    Its a pleasure to be your friend princess .
    Love u by heart
    and yeah I may not visit tomorrow dear . so Merry christmass to u dear lots of love to u .
    May god bless u so much and give u lots of happiness and yes in ur new story as You started it I want ur suggestion dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    You get bumper comments and always likable to fans here dear I pray for it . Aahmeen.
    Love u dear always by heart
    Once a friend always a friend.
    Keep smiling always.

    • Princess on December 24, 2015 11:18 pm

      thanks a lot nisha your comment made my whole week
      Love u a lot dear thanks a lot for this comment feel like I’m on cloud nine ???????????????????

  25. nisha on December 24, 2015 4:40 pm

    hey zara meri jaan how r u dear . Love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much and miss u loads dear.

    YOu are running and I am here dear Merry christmass zara . Dear god will give u lots of happiness to u and your family members dear meri jaan. how r u . Miss u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much. dear. love u always by heart.

    Keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend.

  26. Ameena on December 26, 2015 11:56 am

    I loved the intro…plzz continuee…..
    One lovee?

    ♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥

    • Princess on December 27, 2015 3:05 am

      thanks a lot ?

  27. Hareem on December 26, 2015 8:05 pm

    Heyyyyyyy princess…the intro is awesoooooooooome..continue this story

    Well…it would b amazing imagining our favourite Radhika as Haya…soooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeet name…loved it
    kEEp SMiLiNG alwaaaaayzz dear…

    Love u loads?

    • Princess on December 27, 2015 3:06 am

      tthanks and don’t forget to read 1st n 2nd episode 1st is posted and im posting 2nd

  28. Mansi (Mandy) on December 28, 2015 8:10 pm

    Hey princess !!
    Nice intro !! Waitimg to read !!

    • Princess on December 30, 2015 10:21 pm

      thanks ?

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