WANNA DATE WITH U : A TWINJ FS EPI 7
Episode starts from twinj was lieing in bed….kunj was on the top…
Ku : yeah laila i m ur dream only…..
Twinki smiles n wraps her around his neck….he pulls him closer to her…
Ku : kya…before he could complete twinkle smashes her lips in his….kunj was shocked by her action soon he also responds her with a equal passion….it was sweet one first but soon it turns into a hungry one….kunj moves his hands from her cheeks to her waist….twinkle pulls him more on her…..after sometime they parted away due to lack of oxygen….they joined their forehead….both are breathing heavely….
Kun : i m not ur dream….
Twi : i know……
Kun : i love u….
Twi : i love u too….
Kun : baapree for saying thiz three words u made to beg u…
Twi : awww…..saying so she pulls his nose….kunj tightens his grip on her waist…he pulls her more closer towards him…
Ku : so u have to pay for it…
Twibkle smiles n kunj again captures her lips….its lasts for sonetime…kunj leans to her neck n starts to kiss her nape…but twinkle pushes him…
Kun : aree i said na u have to pay…
Twi : i ll give u the payment later now go….
Kunj makes faces twinkle pushes him n send him out through the window…she close the window n leans against it….she was touching her lips n smiles….soon she slept….
At morning kunj came to hostel in his bhai’s bike…n takes at to his clg….he takes her to the clg ground’s stage…
Kun : hey my friends…listen plzzz. .
All looks at him….
Kunj : today i wanna share this with u all that she is TWINKLE TANEJA….is my girl friend sorry not gf she is my soul my heart my beat my breath my love my life…..n now i m going to propose her now infront of u all….
Kunj kneels down before twinkle…
Kun : i dont know the cheesy words thats not my type too…n now i have to say this that u r my first ever love i dated many girls but there is no love in that…it was just a day out…but u…u r my love i wanna share my life with u…will u accept me….will u marry me twinkle ….will u be MRS.KUNJ SERNA….
Saying so he forwards his hands….twinkle gives her hand n nods….kunj standsup…n whispers in her ears…
Kun : till now u dint say the three words….
Twinkle whispers in his ears : kiss me than i ll tell u….
Kunj shocks twinkle rocks….
After sometime kunj takes twinkle for a day out than he takes twinkle to his house n tells them that he loves her…his parents accepts her n calls twinkle’s family they also agreed…n after two years twinj n pushti got married….
After five years…..
A lil boy of 4 yrs seen running behind a girl of his age….while running
Girl : arun plzzzz….leave me i wont come with u….
Arun : no priyuu dear I WANNA DATE WITH U plzzzz na….sach u ll be my first gf….
Pri : haaa i have seen u saying this to sooo many so please dont try to cheat me….
Arun : priyaaaa….but before he could ran a lady of early 30’s came infront of him while crossing her hands against her chest…..
Arun whispers : mamma….
Twi : yeah mr.arun serna…i m ur mom only….
Arun starts to ran towards a home…..there a man of his mid 30’s came n takes arun in his hands….twinkle came there
Man : what happen why r u chasing my champ….
Twi : haa kunj see ur son na he ll be like u only…listen he was chasing priya for a date….
Kun : haaaaaa…..gave a hifi to arun…so asking for date is not a crime mrs.kunj…
Saying so he leans closer to her….
Aru : papa i m also here….
Kun : so what
Saying so he pecks his cheeks n pecks on twinki’s lips….screen freezes on twinjun happy faces…….happily ever after….
********THE END******
Thank u sooooo much guys for all ur support…n here i m giving u the last part of WANNA DATE WITH U….hope u guys like it…n plzz silent readers atleast plzzz comment today…..bye guys
37 Comments
Really Maha this fs was amazing
Both characters were awesome
Plz keep writing such amazing plots
Do continue
thankx sohi…will try
Loved it 🙂 awesome end …. It was so sweet
But I want more ….. I hope you come back soon with a new story which would be was good as this one …
Love you 🙂
thankx dear love u too…
Hey kaha really ur fs was cute and lovely one
Loved it to core
Plz be back with new story
Love u
Muaaa
thankx dear…love u too umahhhh…n will try to write next…
Awesome amazing fabulous cute epi
thankx purnima…
Hey Maha
it was really cute
write more that too soon
thankx dear will try…
Iam mad ? st u for ending this ff but hope soon you will coke with new one like this cute one love it if possible do continue with this ff
thankx dear will try to write some other ff but i cant continue this one bcz i said earlier that it will contain only 6-7 epis so here it is ended n thank u sooooo much for ur support dear….
I think this is my first cmnt fr u…bt dear u really really nailed it n i loved it to the core though I didn’t cmnt I used to follow ur ff regularly….I loved the way u portrayed the characters n romance….so sweet n cute
Loved it like anything, do come back with one more will be waiting
Tq so much dear
Love u…..
Urs rosh
I think this is my first cmnt fr u…bt dear u really really nailed it n i loved it to the core though I didn’t cmnt I used to follow ur ff regularly….I loved the way u portrayed the characters n romance….so sweet n cute
Loved it like anything, do come back with one more will be waiting
Tq so much dear
Love u…..
Urs rosh
Bye
thankx dear i m happy that u commented now…n will try to write another….love u too
This was soooooo cute maha I loved it idhe madhiri innum write pannunga I’ll be waiting for ur writings
nandri sush….n will try…nengalum indhamadhiri stries padinga…love u dear
Hey Maha awesome episode dear but I don’t want you to end it so soon but it’s OK but surely come with another story really loved your writing dear and you too ??????
Hey Maha awesome episode dear but I don’t want you to end it so soon but it’s OK but surely come with another story really loved your writing dear and you too ?????? keep smiling
thankx rutu….love u dear….glad that u liked it…
Maha it was mindblowing, awesome, superb, amazing and what not… Love it from the core of my heart… It was one of my most favt. fs… But it ended sooo soon…:( I’ll miss it very much… Hope u’ll come back wid another blast soon…
Nd hey is that u in u’r dp??? Awww!!! U were sooo cute… Hehehe… Chalo bye… Love u… Ummaahh…
oh dear it was not me its my cutiee virat…yeah u r rite he is sooooooo cute na…
hey maha…y u ended so early sweetheart it was so fab yrrr chalo koi but i have to come…..wid a new ff dear plzz,,plzzz
thankx adeeba n will try love u soooo much dear….
Awwww!!! That was sooo sweet???lovely. Loved it ???????
Y u ended it so early??
Anyways do come up with something new
thankx chiku….
Hey maha
It was a cute and lovely OS… Wish u could have continued… Do come back with new piece of writing…
thankx sidmintwinj….
hey maha,
Ur ff was really cute one… I had thoroughly enjoyed the journey… and kunj’s son how cute… bilkul kunj par gaya hai
with love,
Urs Tamanna
yeah dear arun will be like this only after all he is our cute kunj ki son hai na…thankx dear
Maha u ended it so early I thought u will write more
But episode was superb d way kunj proposed twinkle loved it
Write more
Loads of love keep smiling
thankx dear…n sry for disappointing u….
Awesomeee.. but u ended it so soon.. Plz do come up with a new story 🙂 .. loved this ss alot ❤
thankx yashvee n will try to come back…
ohhhhh god maha u gave an end to such a sweet piece of riting hayeee 😀
m toh srsly flat
shoooooooo cute ♥
their son running after a girl for a date hahahaa voh bhi 4 years hahhahaaa
osm fabulous lovely adorable fs i will miss it 😀
plsssssss do rite more♥♥♥
thankx baby…