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Home»Fan Fiction»Valentine week FS~ Shot 2 (Chocolate day nd Teddy day) by Kruti
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Valentine week FS~ Shot 2 (Chocolate day nd Teddy day) by Kruti

krutiBy krutiFebruary 10, 201727 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hey guys….here’s d nxt part of my FS.

I was happy with the responce I recieved for previous part. These incidents r my golden memories which I can’t even try to forget…..nd with such good responce on my FS u guys are making them even more spcl for me.

I am combining the days because when I wrote them individually they turned out to be too short. Hope u guys have no issues with it.

So without any delay….here’s d nxt part

HAPPY READING

SHOT 2
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09th February 2013, Saturday
CHOCOLATE DAY

Before d class began

Just like every normal morning Kunj Uv Mahi Chinki Cherry nd Rohan were in d last bench of the class half of them sitting on d bench nd the other half sitting on d desk forming a mini round table conference. The only difference was that when we carefully looked at their faces all of them had a new yet the same expression on their faces.

Kunj was just looking at everyone’s face. The view that was infront of them left their eye and mouth broads open. There was a paper bag kept in b/w all of them which consisted of about two dozen chocolates which included toblerons, temptations, Silk, Ferrero rocher nd many more(mujhe itne hi yaad hai).

Uv- r u insane??

K- what?

R- Chocolate day will still remain chocolate day if u give only 1 chocolate…..ye pura dukan lane ki kya zaroorat thi

M- Guys understand he hasn’t brought all of them for Twinkle….only one is for Twinkle(she picked a chocolate nd gave to Kunj)….All d others r for us….After all kausi rule book mein likha hai Ki chocolate day is not for frnds

R- then no worries

Everyone started picking up chocolates while Kunj’s jaws dropped down.

K- No ways(saying this he started snatching d chocolates from everyone’s hands)…..these chocolates r only for Twinkle…..nd u guys have to help me only to hide them….today is saturday…nd there may be checking [ Let me tell u….electronic gadgets weren’t allowed in school….nd saturday being half day probablities of bringing gadgets was high….so saturdays ko random bag checking hoti thi]

Chinki- kanjoos kahin ka….I am not going to be a part this time

R- neither am I

Kunj makes a puppy face.

Uv- guys lets help him na( saying this he smirks at Mahi)

M-(in excitement)But on one condition

K- I know….a treat for u all at Ice cafe

Uv- very smart…so chalo lets help him.

All of them divided the chocolates among them. A few of them hided them in their bags…while the other few put them in their pencil pouches nd threw them below the bench.

It was the 3rd period. Geography class was in progress(I swear I can never forget this class). And as expected a checking incharge staff entered the class nd started checking. The geography teacher was a bit soft spoken….so students use to take an advantage of this always.

Mahi Chinki nd Uv use to sit in the 2nd bench. A few chocolates were thrown down. There were 3 chocolates in Mahi’s bag. The checking incharge questioned her

CI- Y have u brought such big nd costly chocolates to school…nd that to particularly today

M- Sir chocolates are brought obviously to eat….not to throw

Uv- nd sir what’s so particular in today…is it chocolate ban day.

M- Is it sir….so sorry I dint know….but now when I have brought it I cant waste it na….Its ok sir u can eat them

CI-(a bit annoyed) Its ok…keep it with yourself

Mahi let a sigh of relief. [A fact to be known…Mahi nd Uv in the real story were the two naughtiest boldest nd biggest dramebaaz in the whole class]

The checking was in progress Kunj Rohan nd cherry were seated in d last bench. They were trying to hide d chocolates when the incharge doubted them. When he went forward to question them……Uv screamed

Uv- Sirrrrr.

The incharge questioned him what?…Uv was nudging Mahi to speak something while Mahi was hopeing to get some help from Chinki. When suddenly Mahi got an idea.

M- Sir y dont u check above the smart board….they can hide anything there….or even inside the keyboard drawer[ The digital board had some gap on its top b/w the wall nd the board…That was the place where we use to hide things but fortunately that day we hadn’t]

When he couldn’t find anything there he was about to get back to check d bags

Chinki- Sir inside the book rack

The incharge was still searching in the rack when the teacher said

Tchr- Sir my class is getting wasted u may continue your checking later I have to complete d syllabus as exams r nearing

The incharge walked out of them class nd all of them let a sigh of relief.

Finally all the classes were over….nd thankfully that checking incharge dint turn up again. They reached their adda….not a real kind of… It was d badminton court….On saturdays the 10th grade students use to have extra class till 1.30 so the school vans use to leave only then thats y all the other grade students use to be free from 12.30 to 1.30. And no badminton classes on saturday so they could be there for a long time.

@The badminton court

All of them where waiting for Twinkle to come. After a few minutes she finally came with another friend of her’s. They were having some random talks. Then finally one by one everyone started to assemble all the chocolates together in one bag. Twinkle was just looking confused.

T- I know its chocolate day today….but 1 chocolate would also make this day remain as chocolate day what was d need of so many.

She said looking at Kunj. While all others laughed….coz this was the same thing they told him that morning. Kunj gave a shut your mouths look.

K- I brought them for u….now they are yours….u can do anything with them…nd By d way Happy Chocolate day

T- annoyed???

No reply…..

T- accha sorry…I dint mean to hurt u….nd thank you…..not for these chocolates…..(pulling his cheek) for being the cutest boyfriend

All: Awwwwwww

Kunj smiled

T- But I cant eat so many chocolates let us all share them

Uv- ya sure y not

M- Kunj……thank god your girlfriend is not so kanjoos like u

C- Haan….nd now its double treat for us…..chocolates bhi milgaye…nd bechara Kunj ko treat bhi deni padegi.

All of them laugh and share some random talks over the chocolates.

10th February 2013, Sunday
TEDDY DAY

As it was a Sunday Twinj couldn’t meet eo. But Kunj wanted to gift something to Twinkle. So he had already given a gift to Chinki to give it to Twinkle that day as Chinki nd Twinkle lived nearby.

Chinki went to Twinkle’s home with a reason of studies nd gave her the gift. The gift consisted of 3 cute teddy bear keychains nd a greeting card. Keychains r easier to hide from parents than the bigger teddy bears….probably that was the soul reason he gifted her that.

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Hope u guys liked it….this part dint have fiction…but the nxt part will have more of fiction.

Frankly speaking the 6 of us use to do all ulta pulta works but without the support of our whole class all this wouldn’t be possible. By mistake bhi agar kisi ne koi teacher ko boldiya hota(thankfully no one did) toh…I dont know kya hota

Pls share your views in the comment box …..I am eagerly waiting to read them.

Loads of Love

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    27 Comments

    1. Presha on February 10, 2017 1:50 pm

      Hey kruti awesome epi just falling in loved with it fabulous just loving it to core…it would have been so much fun na

      • kruti on February 12, 2017 6:00 pm

        Thanks presha

      • kruti on February 12, 2017 6:00 pm

        Nd yes it was too much fun

    2. SiyappaQUEEN on February 10, 2017 2:08 pm

      Hayee Kruti meli jaan mar dala….. Fabulous mind blowing episode….
      Cheti post krna next part. I am waiting. Bye. Love you…??

      • kruti on February 12, 2017 6:01 pm

        Thank u
        Love u too?❤

    3. Franciee on February 10, 2017 3:48 pm

      Truely he was the cutest boyfriend one can ever have! ❤

    4. maha on February 10, 2017 3:50 pm

      hey kruti awsme n feb epi post next part soon

    5. Sushmitha on February 10, 2017 4:46 pm

      It was fantastic kruti it’s very interesting to read post soon

    6. Sameera on February 10, 2017 5:00 pm

      Wah kruti its soooooooooooo cute yaar loved it sooo much so who are u in these ??? And by d way that Twinj was still together ???? But kunj is soon cute yaar loved the shot cutest ????????
      Do cont soon …

      • kruti on February 12, 2017 6:03 pm

        Thanks sam…glad that u are liking it
        The dramebaaz Mahi is me….nd unfortunately Twinj broke up after 2 years of all this
        Will post d nxt one asap

    7. Sohi on February 10, 2017 6:24 pm

      It was cutest os

      • kruti on February 12, 2017 6:06 pm

        Thanks sohi

    8. SidMin on February 10, 2017 7:19 pm

      Loved it Awesome episode ❤
      gosh you guys were too much ….. ?
      I mean if the teacher would have caught you guys then …. all gone ….?
      loved it …
      Love you post soon ??
      Happy Chocolate chocolate and teddy day ???

      • kruti on February 12, 2017 6:09 pm

        Thanks mili
        Nd yes frankly we all were too much???….but we use to enjoy a lot…..those were just d best days
        Will post d nxt one soon

    9. kritika14 on February 10, 2017 7:36 pm

      Hey Kruti,
      This was amazing! and truly, Kunj is THE CUTEST boyfriend. and that stunt that happened in the class was legit ? Will be looking forward to read the next chapter, post soon!

      Love you!

      • kruti on February 12, 2017 6:10 pm

        Thanks kriti….happy that u are liking it
        Will post d nxt one soon

    10. Purvi128 on February 10, 2017 8:26 pm

      Hey Kruti,
      This was so hilarious. That checking part was fabulous. I couldn’t stop laughing. And ya its true Kunj us the cutest boyfriend. So many chocolates.., hehehehehe.
      Post the next part soon.
      Waiting for it.
      Love you!

      • kruti on February 12, 2017 6:11 pm

        Thanks purvi…..i am happy that u are liking it
        will post d nxt one soon

    11. Chiku on February 10, 2017 8:37 pm

      Woaaah!!! I seriously loved it. Soooo cute. Woaaaha it’s amazing. Lovely???funny though
      U r which one from the six frnds????do tell
      Post soon

      • kruti on February 12, 2017 7:02 pm

        Thanks chiku…glad that u liked it

    12. SidMin23 on February 10, 2017 10:45 pm

      It was beautiful

    13. Simiyy on February 10, 2017 10:57 pm

      Hey Di
      I really loved it
      Pleas post the next one soon
      Loads of love

    14. RUTU..... on February 10, 2017 11:21 pm

      Hey kruti. It was awesome and cute too just loved it post next one soon plz
      Bye
      Love you so much ???

    15. Purnima.agrawal30 on February 11, 2017 12:21 am

      awesome amazing fabulous cute epi

    16. Ramya on February 12, 2017 5:47 pm

      Wowww kruti
      It’s amazing I’m njoying it
      N I think u also njoyed a lot while doing dis
      Love u keep smiling

    17. baby on February 14, 2017 2:27 am

      kruti di..☺
      srsly interesting………even our school have in each class there is one couple………..
      bt by chance no one is in my frnd list hehe………..
      lods of love♥♥
      there is one in my class too since 8th dey r together n now its 11th……..
      we all jst save dem frm teachers n all d time dey r together
      some teachers know bout dem no hard n fast rules………….
      ur scul was really too strict…………..
      well lods of love♥♥

    18. Aanya_pandey on February 16, 2017 11:34 pm

      Awesome update..
      N sorry for commenting this late

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