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Home»Fan Fiction»UR wish, MY command….twinj (part-3)
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UR wish, MY command….twinj (part-3)

twinjfan.tamannaBy twinjfan.tamannaSeptember 13, 201639 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi, tamanna here…thankyou so much fr cmmnting..u know my cmmnts dropped from 21 to 15…plz do say m I boring u all..if u feel its not nice u can say me as I said whether it be positive or negative…so plz do comment..

Lets begin…

Epi starts tw seeing album n smiling…she says
Tw-kunj tum yahan nahi hokar bi mujhe smile kara rahe ho…I m missing u…plz come back…

She comes out of her thoughts when Someone rings the door bell…she opens the door n gets shock..both- TUM!!! It now shows that its none other than kunj standing shocked(pretending) on the door..

Tw- tum yahan kya kar rahe ho….tum mere picha kar rahe the na…mai acchi tarah jhanthi hun tum jaise ladko ko..beautiful ladki deki nahi ki chaalu…(keeps blabbering)..
Kunj tries to speak but tw doesn’t let him do so..he keeps on listening to her talks thinking that she will end now but tw is also tw she keeps on blabbering…its enough for kunj…he closes her mouth by his hand…tw stops n looks at him giving death glares…she looks on n then bites his hand…
Ku-aaaahh.. kya bhooki sherni…aaimaa…(makes crying wala face)…
Tw-tumhena aisa hi karna chahiye…tum Jaiso ke wajah se hi hamara samaj ganda ho raha…ummmm..umm..(stops as kunj puts the gumtape on her mouth)
Ku-(laugh) ab tu mujhe bite bi nahi kar sakthi…hehehe…
Tw-ummm…ummm..(passes death glare to him)

Ku-achha okay..ok..ab mai kehtha hun tu sun..Wo actually mai chinki ka cousin hun…usne kaha ki tujhe pg chahiye..aur mujhe chahiye tha ghar…so here I m..aur mera naam ku…(stops as he sees something…)

He leaves her hands (forgot to mention kunj was holding tws hand so she was nt able to take the gumtape off her lips)…he goes near the album n pics it up…by now tw was released so she directly picks up the flower vase kept on the side table n was about to hit him when…

Ku-twinkle…meri tw…
Tw-hw…tumhe mera naam kaise patha…tum tho koi bade gunde lagthe ho..n hw dare u call me yours..tumhe sharam nahi athi…(she keeps on blabbering…)
Ku-(frustrated) bus kar meri maa…kitna bolthi hai..patha hai mera naam kya hai..kunj…kunj sarna..kuch yaad bi hai..

Tw-(tw gets a big shock..her eyes is filled)kya..tum kunj ho…tum kunj nahi ho sakthe mera kunj kisi ladki ka aisa picha nahi karta tha..tum kitne badal gaye ho..ur so chang…
Ku-(interepts her)bas kar yaar siyappa queen..kitne baathe karthi hai..(nw dramatically…) meri tw bhi aisi nahi thi…woh itni baathien jo nahi karthi thi n also wo bohot cute bhi thi aur maine kaha na ki mai yahan pg bankar aya hun..mujhe chinki ne yahan ka patha diya…aur tu athe hi mujpar badak pa…(he stops as tw hugs him..he is taken back..he is surprised but then respondes)
Tw-(crying *khushi ke aansoo u know*)kunj..tum kahan..the..I missed u so much..tum kahan chale gaye the..*sobs*

Ku- tw tu ro kyun rahi hai..tujhe mera aana pasand nahi hai kya…accha teek hai mai Chala jatha hun..(he leaves her n turns to leave)
Tw-hawww..tum kya keh rahe the..chala jaun ga mai..(mimics him)tum na bohot bure ho..abi aaye ho aur jaane ki baath kar rahe ho..abhi toh mere Papa bhi mujhe chod ke chale gaye (starts to cry)..
Ku-(tries to console her) accha srry baba.. srry mai mazaak kar raha tha..mai kahin nahin jaaunga..ab khush..ab smile karegi…
Tw-(her crying face turns to angry one)
Ku-ab kya hogaya..(innocently)

Tw-(starts beating him on his chest)tumna sach me bohot bure ho..aur tumne mujhe kya kAha ki Paile cute thi..kya ab nahin hun??
Ku-(smiles at her innocence)haan teek hi kaha Maine…pehle sirf cute thi ab beautiful bi hogayi ho….
tw-(blushes) Tumna bohot badmaash ho gaye (hits his chest playfully)
Ku-ye lo ji..ab taareef karo tho bhi maar…acchai ka tho zamana hi nahi raha..(pouts)
Tw-(smiles) chalo andar akhir tum mere pg jo ho..

Tw n kunj side hugs each other n then moves inside…

To be continued…
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Hw was it boring…I guess boring…or jaise aap sabki guess yes kunj is only her pg…

Drop ur cmmnts…whether positive or negative..any confusion do ask me…suggestions are always welcome…

Byee…

Love u all

TAMANNA,

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    39 Comments

    1. baby on September 13, 2016 2:24 am

      heey luvd it 2 d core amazing wowwwowoowww so cute epsidoe
      post nxt asap u are fab………………..

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 10:31 am

        awww…thankyou so much baby…will try to post soon…

        love u…

    2. dreamer...arundhati on September 13, 2016 8:27 am

      Tammu… I seriously luv ur writing… Jabra fan of this… Superb… Plz ctd soon

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 12:24 pm

        aru..thankyou so much…ur cmmnt made me blush…thanks yaar..love u..

    3. Sameera on September 13, 2016 9:55 am

      Hey tamanna awesome epi
      Wow so cute twinj scenes
      Loved it to the core

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 1:03 pm

        thankyou so much sameera..wil try to post soon..

        love u…

    4. Anshika on September 13, 2016 10:12 am

      Nice

    5. twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 10:34 am

      thankyou so so much aru…I m really glad u liked it…

      love u..

    6. Ayu on September 13, 2016 10:35 am

      tamanna u made me smile n have tears at the same time….how do u manage to do sa?? Fab epi dear. Cont soon??

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 11:58 am

        thanks yaar ayu…I m glad that u liked it..

        love u …

    7. SidMin on September 13, 2016 10:36 am

      Loved it and I knew it was Kunj (Twinkle PG ) Waiting for the next episode pls Post it soon 🙂

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 12:03 pm

        thankyou so much sidmin…yah I said na..ur smart..hahaha..will try to post soon..

        love u..

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 1:12 pm

        MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY SIDMIN…MAY ALL UR WISHES COME TRUE…

        LOVE U…

    8. Sidhanshi on September 13, 2016 10:44 am

      Soo funny and cute epi… Just loved it… Waiting for the next epi…

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 12:07 pm

        thanks dear sidhanshi.. will try to post soon

    9. Shatakshi on September 13, 2016 10:49 am

      It was shoo cute tamanna
      Loved it

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 12:13 pm

        thanks shatakshi…I m glad u liked it…

        love u..

    10. sanjanaagrawal on September 13, 2016 11:38 am

      Awesome sry for not commenting inprevious ones and I was not able to comment in upconing ones

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 12:21 pm

        its okay sanjana..anywayz thanks fr cmmnting..agli baar srry math bolna…

        love u..

    11. Monica on September 13, 2016 12:33 pm

      It was so cute ? I loved it. Do continue soon x

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 1:22 pm

        thanks yaar monica…I m glad u liked it..love u ….

    12. Sidhantian on September 13, 2016 1:57 pm

      Hey pls give a recap na…otherwise its awesome

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 2:30 pm

        i m so sorry fr recap…will surely give next time…n thankyou so much fr cmmnting…love u..

    13. shanaya on September 13, 2016 3:44 pm

      can u pls giv summary…i m new to it?..
      anyway amazing..but cnfusing

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 5:31 pm

        will surely give u a summary shanaya…can u tell me which part is confusing…thankyou so much fr cmmnting…

        love u..

    14. aamu on September 13, 2016 3:46 pm

      amazing….i m free today so read it…i
      it was such a cute…it was kunj only yeahhhh

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 5:40 pm

        thanks yaar ammu…I m glad u liked it..n can u tell me hw to add links..

    15. rashiverma2199 on September 13, 2016 4:12 pm

      Wow…tamana lovely episode….enjoyed…..

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 5:43 pm

        thankyou so much rashi…

        lovè u..

    16. Purnima.agrawal30 on September 13, 2016 4:15 pm

      awesome amazing fabulous cute funny epi

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 5:48 pm

        thankyou so much purnima…

        love u..

    17. Sayeeda on September 13, 2016 5:29 pm

      Tamanna my Tammu( hope u don’t Mind me calling u with this name ) ….yrrr I also missed u so much ….today I saw ur mail nd found ur msg ….
      Awwwwww ……my Tammu was missing me ….me too was missing u ????….
      I thought to revert u back but then I thought to reply u through my comment so that I can make u slight happy ….

      Ur ff is dammmmm lovely…. good ….I’m really lovi’n ur ff yrr …
      awesome ……
      loved it to the core ……

      love you…. nd missed u?????

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 6:22 pm

        sayoo.. why would I mind u calling me tammu..infact I m really happy..tume patha nahi hw much im happy today by seeing ur cmmnt..I guess I m the happiest in this whole earth…I m crying…no one made me feel so special till now…I don’t have any brother or sister bt today I guess I got a sister whom I hv always carving fr…mai khushi ke maare paagal ho gai thi…jab maine tumhara cmmnt dekha I was really really happy…jis jis ko mujhe thanks kehna tha unhe mai awesome amazing kehkar lik rahi thi aur jinko awesome kehna tha unko mai thankyou keh rahi thi..n by ur this u didnt made me slight happy bt u my life…ab tum soch rahi hogi ki yeh kya kehrahi hai sab day kehthe hain aur yeh life kehrahi hai..bt its true…I will never be able to forget u in my whole life…
        sayoo im really missing u so much…

        love u..

    18. Sana(sanu) on September 13, 2016 5:45 pm

      Awesome…. ..

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 10:00 pm

        thanks sana…

        love u..

    19. sujina on September 13, 2016 8:38 pm

      tamannu…loved it…its so cute…post nxt asap

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 13, 2016 10:13 pm

        thanks yaar…will surely try to post soon…

        love u…

    20. SidVee on September 14, 2016 12:03 am

      Awesome epi.. twinj scenes were so cutee??.. it wasn’t at all boring.. I loved it.. do cont soon ?

      • twinjfan.tamanna on September 15, 2016 6:10 pm

        thanks yaar sidvee…love u..

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