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Home»Fan Fiction»UR wish, MY command….twinj (intro n prologue)
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UR wish, MY command….twinj (intro n prologue)

twinjfan.tamannaBy twinjfan.tamannaAugust 23, 201644 Comments4 Mins Read
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hi,tamanna here again to bore u all..thankyou so much for commenting on my previous os…i was so happy…i was smiling all day..when something sad would happen with me i remembered ur cmmnts n be happy..today i got to know the value of cmmnt…thank u so much…i have replaid to ur comment…
sonali05, rochika, dreamer…arundhati, sidmin-daamini, sayeeda, dolly, joonakansha, shikha, sameera, sidmin, cp, thanmy, purnima.agarwal30, ayu[shreya], aamu, shatakshi, zakiyah, jisha, adina, sanjanaagarwal, romaisah, monica, angita, sidvee, baby..thank u so much all of u..hope i have not missed anyone..if any thanks to u also..
..so this is few shots ff n it wil end soon…

characters–
kunj sarna {sidhant gupta}-he is a 24 years old…son of usha n general monoher sarna…mom passed away…just joined army after training…lives with twinkle…cute,handsome,hot,caring,fun loving, respects girls{aaj tak koi proper word hi nahi nahi mila sid ko define karne}…loves monoher…obeys RT like his own father…he can do anything for his loved one specially his love lady ????…

twinkle taneja {jasmine bhasin}-she is 22 years old..daughter of leela n rt..mom passed away..just completed her studies…lives with kunj in his house…cute,bubbly,beautiful,gorgeous,caring…loves rt..she madly trusts her loved ones especially her love of life ????……
yuvraj luthra{zain imam}-he is 25 years old…neighbour of twinj…lives alone…good friend of twinj…works as a teacher in college…he is a mystery which will reveal later…
munoher sarna-father of kunj..he is general officer in indian army..loves his son alot..best frnd of RT…can do anything from him….
RT/Raminder taneja-father of kunj…he is also a general officer in indian army…loves his daughter alot.. best frnd of monoher….he will be just in the prologue…
other characters [if any] they will be revealing later..
plot-

kunj n twinkle lives together in kunjs house…they r too much close frnds..together from 1years..yuvi is neighbour of twinj n good frnd with them…rt n monoher r best frnds…
so the prologue..
a place is shown…many soldiers are guarding it..a gun shot is heard..all gets into the gun fight…someone gets shot…its revealed to be RT…a man comes running to him..it is revealed to be monoher..he calls ambulance..the ambulance comes thier n rt is rushed in it…rt shows someones photograph n says to monoher who is sitting beside him…
RT-monuher this my daughter as u know..this photo is given by the attackers…i dont have more time..i m leaving my daughter on ur behafl…take care of her…plz save my daughter..agar ek camera wahan jah saktha hai so gun tho zaroor jaa saktha hai..[a camera can go then surely a gun can also go]
MS-rt dont say like that nothing will happen to u…n about ur daughter.. nothing will happen to her..i ll protect her..as she is also like my daughter…
RT-thank you so much monoher…i believe u..[ he takes his last breat there]
monoher cries…he calls someone..

a boy is shown…he is workng out…he looks so hot in his perfectly packed covered with sweat body..his phone rings…he pics it up..
boy-hello papa, whats up all fine na..
ms-hello beta[son],[whilecrying] rt is no more…i called u bcz of promise which i made to rt…i want u to fulfill it..
boy- what????rt uncle….[his eyes fills with tear]yes papa…say the work which i have to do..
ms-u have to protect his daughter..[he tells him the whole mattter]..n remember she should not get to know about ur reality….understand..nw im sending u the pic of the girl..
boy-papa whats her name,
ms-twinkle..

boy-TWINKLE TANEJA OKAY papa.i will surely protect her…as UR WISH,MY COMMAND…bye..
the boy recieves the pic of same girl..
hw is it????liked it??? boring???want me to continue….if yes than whch would u prefer-
1.happy ending….or…..2.sad ending ..if any confusion u can ask me…
i wanted to tell u that i cant post it daily..as u know projects,homework n all…
plz drop ur cmmnts….whether -ve or +ve..
love u all..
bye..
TAMANNA,

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    44 Comments

    1. SidMin on August 23, 2016 8:59 am

      Loved it
      I want a happy ending
      Please post the next part soon 🙂

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 5:35 pm

        thank you so much sidmin…will try to post soon….love u

    2. Priya_ on August 23, 2016 9:06 am

      Interesting prologue..
      Looking forward for the story..
      About the ending obviously happy one

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 5:38 pm

        thankyou so much for cmmnting priya…love u..

    3. Purnima.agrawal30 on August 23, 2016 9:56 am

      awesome amazing…..want Happy ending…..

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 5:40 pm

        thankyou purnima…love u yaar.

    4. Sayeeda on August 23, 2016 9:58 am

      Tamanna u again rock dear… U made me amazed by ur writings skills they r superb…..
      Interesting plot… Amazing… I think Yuvi is one whom Twinkle loves… ??…..

      I want a happy ending Please…
      Post next one soon…
      Love u ??

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 5:55 pm

        thankyou so much yaar sayeeda for telling such wonderful words…n about ur guess it ll reveal soon…love u…

    5. Fan on August 23, 2016 12:30 pm

      Awesome!.do continue..n i need i happy ending..

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 7:16 pm

        thankyou so much..yaar love u..

    6. Sameera on August 23, 2016 2:03 pm

      Omg amazing tamanna
      Do cont soon
      Happy ending
      ??????

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 7:19 pm

        thankyou so much yaar…love u…

    7. Nimisha on August 23, 2016 2:50 pm

      Nice I want happy ending

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 7:24 pm

        thankyou so much yaar…love u…

    8. sanjanaagrawal on August 23, 2016 2:59 pm

      Awesome ???? and ofcourse a happy ending …… ??

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 7:34 pm

        thankyou so much yaar love u…

    9. shreya098 on August 23, 2016 3:26 pm

      Very interesting…
      Amazing….
      Looking forward to it…

      And ya happy ending

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 7:42 pm

        thankyou so much shreya …yaar love u …

    10. Monica on August 23, 2016 4:26 pm

      Really interesting. Loved the plot! continue soon x so glad you wrote again. Love ya x

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 7:47 pm

        thankyou so much monica …its because of u all..I tried to write again…love u…keep encouraging me..

    11. Angita on August 23, 2016 4:30 pm

      Awesome start

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 7:50 pm

        thankyou so much…love u..

    12. SidVee on August 23, 2016 4:42 pm

      It seems very interesting.. it’s awesome.. and I would like a happy ending.. and sid is just goals??.. do cont soon ?

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 7:53 pm

        thankyou so much yaar.. love u..

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 8:14 pm

        thankyou dea…love u…

    13. Ayu(Shreya) on August 23, 2016 4:53 pm

      Awesome yaar! Hatke storyline hai… Pls post soooon

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 8:17 pm

        thankyou so much yaar…love u…

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 8:19 pm

        thankyou so much…love u dea..

    14. Romaisha on August 23, 2016 5:56 pm

      Awesome story line
      I’m eager to keep reading ! 🙂

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 8:21 pm

        thankyou so much fr liking it…love u.

    15. baby on August 23, 2016 6:03 pm

      tamana amazing yr osm strt
      pls cntinue n post asap
      n yah i wuld prefer happy endings
      so luv u n post asap dear

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 24, 2016 4:55 pm

        thankyou so much dear…love u .

    16. SIDMIN-daamini on August 23, 2016 6:11 pm

      Tamanna
      Superb
      Such an interesting amazing story
      Plzz continue n give it a happy ending as I’m already disturb with current track of tei ??
      Post asap
      Loved it
      U r writing an amazing story
      ????????????????

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 23, 2016 8:36 pm

        thankyou so much yaar..love u

    17. Aksa(SidMin's and the ff writers die hard fan...) on August 23, 2016 8:38 pm

      Amazing plot…luved it…cont soon and happy ending…it kinda sound like main hoo naa…overall WOW epi..in karan johar’s word…

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 24, 2016 4:59 pm

        thankyou so much yaar…yah I got the idea from main hoon na…but it will be in my style…n will be lovestory…I was waiting who will guess it as I was going to tell it in my next epi..love u…

    18. Sana(sanu) on August 23, 2016 10:28 pm

      Fantastic

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 24, 2016 5:00 pm

        thankyou so much sanu…love u..

    19. thanmy on August 23, 2016 10:56 pm

      Awesome plot I just loved it
      And its too interesting
      I want a happy ending plss
      And I just want to ask what is ur age sorry if I hurt u

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 24, 2016 5:03 pm

        aww..thankyou so much thanmy…n about my age…I didnt felt hurt infact I m so happy…I am 14 years old…I m in 9th std.. n love u..

    20. Soo on August 23, 2016 11:12 pm

      Hi… Well i want a sad ending bcoz d above commenters r twinj lovers n happy endn equal to twinj n sad endn equal to twiraj…right. Nice start. Gud nt.

      • twinjfan.tamanna on August 24, 2016 5:06 pm

        I m so happy yaar…I got a cmmnt from twiraj fan…I m so srry yaar.. thank you to read it…love u dea…

    21. Jisha on August 24, 2016 8:23 am

      Awesome plot…I would love to see a happy ending… seems interesting

    22. twinjfan.tamanna on August 24, 2016 5:07 pm

      thank u so much jisha di…love u…

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