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once upon a time…. when villain meets his angel…. Chapter 3 (damn it… I missed her again…! Part-2)

hi guyz its heena again here,
sad to knw the news that balika vadhu fame anandi aka pratyusha banerjee commited sucide y’day afternun in her kandivali flat at mumbai , may her soul rest at peace…. (y)
thankfull to all cmnt regularly, bt
disappointed as many aren’t
cmnting, guyz i felt lill hurted, if u guyz find it boring then tell me, give me fèedback,guys here we dnt hv a option for like the only way i can knw that u r reading is cmnt i dnt need big cmnt only 1 word is ok 4 me so, its my rwqst plz do cmnts
inf of bak bak, here we go,

recap – laksh cursing himself and swasan movements.

*damn it… I again missed her…! Part_2*

the scence starts wid laksh thinking who was the girl performing and teacher entering grèen room, and girl standing wid her back facing ,
music.T – Well done, beta we r proud of u, u performed very well, dnt wry no 1 would come to knw that it was u performing instead of ammu 😉 , ur name ragini is suitable wid the quality of ur voice, thank u beta u saved our clg dignity frm falling… (yes guys the girl was none other then rags * no 1 was able to sèe her face properly due to dark lights)
rags- not a prblm mam, its my pleasure or yeh to mera kartaviya hai, jis clg ne mujhe itna support kiya uske liye kuch bhi.
Teacher blesses her goes.
* fb is shown (as rags remembers how she agrèed to perform wid her shonu ) *
as swara goes frm there rags was abt to go towards her room when suddenly she saw ammu coughing badly she gives the water to her n cls teacher , her voice got heavy n rough due to it and same happnd teacher asked rags 2 perform she was goona say no bt ammu rewqstd her, so kept a condition that her face should nt be seen as she thinks what if every1 teases her n if the perfomance would be bad then whole clg may tease n gets scared( guyz dnt get shockd bt she is vry innocent) n teacher agrees
*fb ends*

in auditorium*
here laksh gets thinking :
laksh pov :
why the hell everytym i nt able to her face whats wrng yar thats nt fair and every1 is saying they didnt say face err… Disgusting,
* fb is shown (its the fb where lucky misses to see her face 4 the 1st tym when he heard her)*
lucky along wid her mother goes to mandir lucky was abt to step in when he rececives cl , he is talking here rags is singing bhajan he gets attracted towards voice goes in bt till that rags had gone, 2nd tym it happens when the same he goes wid mandir in hope that he will se her bt on the way to mandir he listen the voice again frm sumwhere n again fails to she her
fb ends*
present
lucky was abt to go to search rags as he was going mad n tens when rags cl his name hi! Laksh , can i sit here pointing towards the empty sead next to him.. Laksh nods his head in yes, she sits there where as he again gets thinking.
Laksh pov.
I was abt to go to search her when i saw her calling out my name and her innocent eyes looking at me , aww its so cute when she called my name , wait wait bt she called me laksh not lucky whoa then also i didnt reacted y beta huh ? o.O bt it felts so specail to hear laksh frm her 🙂 oh god this girt she making me crazy stop u mad person what will she think that u r mad jst seating quite i was abt to ask her when she again cld me , laksh if u dnt mind can we go out umnn to search swasan she askd me wid worlds most innocent puppy eyes and pout face i couldnt say no, ofc rag… Ini damn what i was abt to say ragu huh cntrl beta mat karna vapas yeh karnama , varana aj toh hona hi tha drama 😛 wtf y did i say poem this girl is making me say poems. We stood up n she was abt to fall when i hold her tightly through waist we both were so close i felt a suddent current im my body we were lost in each other (soch na sake played in bg)when i came into sences when she again was abt to fall.

Recap: rags wid laksh at……. (suspense*)
end of chap – 3

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