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My unsaid love raglak os

PrincesskrishaBy PrincesskrishaJune 5, 2017Updated:June 5, 201729 Comments3 Mins Read
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She walled into a room filled with extreme darkness,she moved near a guy with happiness glistened in her beautiful doe shaped eyes.Her breathing was uneven,after all she was going to propose her love.she was holding a emerald ring in her hand.she went near him with slow steps.The guy said something to her,she smiled for him.but tears emerged threatening to fall from her eyes,she excused herself n went. She locked her room,n began crying ,she fell down hugging her knees close to her chest. Her doe eyes became red of crying.She wiped her tears n plastered a quick smile.She went near her sis,not her own sis, but her half sis whom she thinks as her own sis. She hugged her whispering a congrats .she went to her dadis room n laid her head on her dadis lap,she said that “dadima pls accept what I’m going to say.ull na for ur ladoo,the old lady nodded seeing her only world.the girl said dadima laksh n swara loves each other,so let’s marry them.the old Lady nodded with difficulty she asked what about you??she said I’m happy n hugged her.she said this to all.laksh came to her n said thanks ragini I love you ,u have done a great favor which I can’t return friend.thank you.ragini nodded with a smile n said in friendship no thanks n no sorry.laksh was very happy .on marriage day ,swara ran way with sanskar her love.laksh was too broken, he was shattered.if she didn’t love him ,why did she accepted when he proposed.

He was alone in a dark room.when ragini entered with slow n heavy steps,she loved him truly,her heart broke to see laksh in that condition.She walked with great difficulty with her breath hitching,tears flowing continuously.she was about to keep her hand on his shoulder,but withdrew.she stood beside him n stared at the moon.He saw her n said u came.she said hmmm not able to speak,she knew she’ll break down if she speaks .He hugged her n asked am I not that worth,that swara left me ragini ,I’m so broken she could have at least told na that she loves someone,she broke me ragini.ragini heart was wrenching seeing laksh broken.With great difficulty she mumbled the words move on laksh.laksh jerked her.he said move on ,move on how ragini how could I?all the thing I see remembers her,u easily said move on as you have never loved anyone na.ragini ran from there letting her tears fall. Her ring had fallen in the room.laksh went from there.the moonlight fell on it showing words crafted,”I love you laksh”.

Guys hope u like this is.ifso pls comment bye. Share ur views how u felt when reading this os.

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    29 Comments

    1. Anju on June 5, 2017 4:17 pm

      Awesome

    2. Malu on June 5, 2017 4:23 pm

      Amazing story

    3. Arjuna on June 5, 2017 4:29 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    4. Jaanvi on June 5, 2017 4:37 pm

      Very well written dear.. But can you pls make it two shots and unite Raglak… Just a suggestion.. Otherwise great work..

    5. Elizebathlovely on June 5, 2017 4:42 pm

      Awesome

    6. sinni on June 5, 2017 5:02 pm

      Nice

    7. sanchami on June 5, 2017 5:43 pm

      Ss dr plz make it 2 shots dr

    8. lovely7 on June 5, 2017 5:51 pm

      Please write one more part and unite them

    9. Soumya on June 5, 2017 5:59 pm

      Plz unite raglak di

    10. Asw on June 5, 2017 6:07 pm

      Nice

    11. Ammu on June 5, 2017 6:17 pm

      Awesome os dear and feeling bad for Raglak. Please unite them ???

    12. Monisha on June 5, 2017 7:16 pm

      Nice nd unite raglak

    13. Sherin on June 5, 2017 7:20 pm

      Awesome dear

    14. Aamy on June 5, 2017 7:31 pm

      Want another shot

    15. aleeza on June 5, 2017 8:06 pm

      Nice

    16. Ashly on June 5, 2017 8:12 pm

      Awesome superb

    17. Bela on June 5, 2017 8:19 pm

      Aww……truly, it was unsaid love. She didn’t say???

      I wish you would continue this but even as a standalone, this is perfect ???

    18. Vennila on June 5, 2017 8:23 pm

      Nice part

    19. Megha on June 5, 2017 8:54 pm

      Amazing

    20. Monu on June 5, 2017 9:10 pm

      Interesting

    21. Vini on June 5, 2017 9:18 pm

      Very nice

    22. Aadya114 on June 5, 2017 9:37 pm

      It was amazingggg, if you can continue it then plzz do otherwise it is perfect

    23. mark@lotha on June 5, 2017 10:11 pm

      super dear..bt if raglak r united ten it wil be d most outstanding..jst a suggstion plz dun min dear

    24. Sreevijayan on June 5, 2017 11:38 pm

      Amazing start dr

    25. avika on June 6, 2017 9:14 am

      nice

    26. Rehna on June 6, 2017 10:46 am

      Superb dear

    27. Pearly on June 6, 2017 7:30 pm

      Awesome

    28. IQRA222 on June 6, 2017 11:21 pm

      superb

    29. hemalattha on June 7, 2017 12:07 pm

      Awesome

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