unpredictable love story (part-1)

Hello guys I m trying to write a ff on swasan although I know I m not a good writer but trying to some new things ….. well my fanfiction will continue on the bases of ur reviews if the response will be good I ll continue my ff…. well enough of my blaberring lets start …

HERE WE GO…….
It’s a shinny blissfull morning … sun is shinning spreading its light while birds are chirping telling ur the arrival of the day…… here in a room a girl is sleeping covering her face from blanket……nd their after someone shouting on her…. Shone get up its getting late …. We have to see off ….. kanak .. get up
But our sleeping beuty is sleeping beuty she didn’t get up….
A girl came holding hot coffee in her hand ….. wearing white skirt yellow top…. She applied minimal makeup looking adorable…. Guys she is non other than ragini
Ragini- shone get up I m warning u
No response
Ragini-( thinking something nd then smirk)
She take coffee near her take out her finger from blanket nd dip it in hot coffee mug
The sleeping beuty shouts … AAAHHHHHHHHHH
Yes the sleeping beauty is non other than our swara…..
She shouts LADDO I LL NOT LEAVE U TODAY
Saying this she get up from bed and started throwing things on ragini…..
Ragini- shona beat me later first get ready.. yr we have to see off kanak and its getting late
Swara- OHHH god !!!!! how I forgot this
Saying this she ran towards washroom to freshup
After half an hour she got ready ……
In pink crop top and white jeans she is just lookin breathtaking she applied minimal makeup nd went towards the hall

Here in another big mansion…..
Two boys just came from jogging they are non other than our handsome hunks sanskar and laksh
And jst then someone called from behind
Sujata-hey mara ram ji chora kathe gye the tum dono bhool to nhi gye .. ki aaj thare bade bhai adarsh aur pari ki anniversary hai…. Aur tum dono ho ki subah se ghumne nikal gaye
Laksh- are meri pyaari chachi … ise ghumna nhi jogging kehte hai or agar hum dono ye sab nahi karenge toh aapke liye achi achi bahuyein kaise layenge
Saying this he wink towards sanskar
Sanskar- haan mom ab btao aap nhi chahte ki aapke bche ache dikhe bolo …
Sujata – chalo chalo theek hai magar aaj ghar jaldi aa jana .. or sanskar tu mujhe bazaar le kar jayega manne parish(pari or adarsh) k liye kuch gifts lene hai…..
Sanky- mom laksh ko le jao ye free rehta
Laksh – chachi aap toh jaante ho na ki main kitna thak gya hun agar main chala jaunga toh ghar ki arrangements kon dekhega vaise bhi bhai ki chice bhi bhut achi hai (he said it with a puupy face)
Here sanskar is giving him a deathly glare
Sujata- haan sanskar tu hi mare sath chalega
And episode end with sanskars….. angry yet disappointing face and laksh’s winning smile
Precap- based on your comments

Here I wrote my first part ….plz plz plz comment sielent readers also……………………..