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Unknown love for u (Part 1)

NegisanyuktaBy 73 Comments3 Mins Read

Hello everyone,i m going to write a ff.This is my first ff.This is for both Kaanchi and Sanveer fans both.Plz comment down.Critics and suggestions are most welcomed.plz forgive me for grammatical mistakes.So,let’s start.

A boy is standing near a window and continuously watching the moon.Air is blowing and touching his hair as they wants to say something.His face is not clearly visible due to the intense darkness in the room.He has tears in his eyes.
Boy talking to a photo
B:Today is ur birthday.I’ll pray to god for ur well being.I love u soo much.No one take ur place in my life Saa…
Before he could complete his sentence,a servant knocked on the door.
S:Baba,sir is calling u.
B:ok.U may leave now.
Servant exits from the room.

In hall,
That boy is seen coming downstairs.Now,his face is clearly visible.He has wear a white colour kuta-pajama.His eyes r soo magnetic that any girl can fall for him.
B:why u called me?
M(loud voice):Yesterday i sent u with a girl and u threw water on her face.Do u know she is the daughter of Mr.Surya Thakur,the ricchest businessman of India.It’s ridiculous.
B:I did this bcoz she badmouthed about amy love and u know i can’t hear a word against her.
M:Shut up!she was a bertrayer a characterless and a characterless girl…
B(interrupted): dhokha dena uski fidrat nahi,
Dhokha kismat de jati hai ,
Kyonki woh aise khel khilati hai ,
Ki hasti khelti zindagi bhi rone lag jaati
hai.
And secondly,don’t dare u to speak a single single word against her.No one needs a character certificate from u.If a person like u can marry his own secretary just after his wife death,gives character certificate to other then people will say that one thief is giving advice to another thief of leaving wrong path .
M:shut up Veer!Have u forget ur manners to tslk with ur father.
B:If u elder,then plz behave like elders.
After saying this ,Veer move back to his room.
Screen freezes on Veer’s face.

“u all, as human beings ,crave only for happiness,but a little setback pours a stream of sorrow into ur life.I can understand ur pain Veer that one feels when time takes an ugly turn,I can understand anyone,but no one can understand me,bcoz i m the love.”

I know guys,I made our cutiepie Veer as Devdas.
But soon u will get naughty Veer back.???

Thank u for reading guys.
If u feel bored,then plz tell me i’ll stop writing.????

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73 Comments

  1. Abhilasha on

    Wowww it seems really interesting and would love to read further…… all the best for this and update soon!!

    • Negisanyukta on

      Thank u soo much.It really means a lot to me.
      Im to confused because my younger sister is a Sanveer fan and i m Kaanchi fan.So,i m bit confused.
      Keep reading dear.

  3. Neha7873 on

    Interesting plot!…. would love to see more of this…. continue… I’m waiting eagerly to read the next part

    • Negisanyukta on

      Thank u sooo much.Love u yaar.I think u r a Kaanchi fan???Next part is all about Kabeer intro.
      Keep reading dear.

  4. Moonlight25 on

    Dear,,,,,,,,It was a really good intro….i have a question is it kanchi or Sanveer?
    ……great epi…i loved it…post soon and keep writing dear…am eagerly waiting…if you don’t mind what is your real name? Don’t tell if you don’t want i was Just asking …….love you a lot dear

    • Negisanyukta on

      Thank u sooooo much.It really a means lot to get such appreciation from a author like u.
      Love u too di.
      My real name is Sanyukta Negi and i m from Uttarakhand(UK).
      Keep reading dear.

  7. Sajnana900 on

    A great one negisanyukta its amazing waiting for nxr part
    But i have a question
    Is it kanchi or sanveer????

    • Negisanyukta on

      Thanks dear for reading this.U will get to know about lead pair in further story.
      Keep reading dear.

  12. riyarocks on

    Sanyu dear(hope u don’t mind if I call u this)……an outstanding intro……life isn’t a fairy tale…….it has got its own ups & downs…..its never that simple……..thnx dear for showing a new trait in veer’s character….. btw, ur writings r osm……..keep writing & eagerly waiting for ur nxt one sweetie……….

    • Negisanyukta on

      Thank u soo much Riya.After reading ur comment,a big smile came on my face.Of course u can call me Sanyu.
      Thank u for commenting dear and Keep reading .

    • Negisanyukta on

      Thank u sooo much.Love u yaar.
      Don’t tensed u will get ur naughty Veer soon.
      Keep reading dear.

  18. Premamohan on

    Pls update next I want to see all the characters at wt stage in this ff I am kanchi fan so I want kanchi episode pls its my very humble request this start was really good..

  19. Dhruti on

    amazing one and the new way you introduce veer character is new thing and is this kanchi or sanveer plot ?
    please update next ne soon

  20. Saroj on

    Superb. Just loved it to the core.
    My Veer becomes Devdas, not fair. But this concept is soo unique. Keep writing dear. Eagerly waiting for next part.

  21. Tiya on

    Nice very nice…. Waiting yaar to know the love story of veer and sanchi…i m a big fan of kanchi as well as veer and sanchi…

  25. vimlesh patel on

    No it is a very interesting story and i appreciate to yu to write this story and continue your writing this the best story

  26. vimlesh patel on

    No it is a very interesting story and i appreciate to yu to write this story and continue your writing this the best story

  28. AnahitaAnnie on

    Sorry for being late to comment.. Firstly congratulations on starting this ff. *confetti falls*. Secondly u rocked the first part. I loved reading it.. I am so excited to see what will happen next… U are a very stupendous and amazing author. Can’t wait to read more from u.. Love u loads ?

    • Negisanyukta on

      No need to appologise…..Thank u soo much for commenting It really means a lot toget such appreciation from my favourite author.????
      Keep loving and supporting my ff and what about fourth part of ur ff,i m missing it very badly.
      Love u too dear.

  30. Logesh.M on

    I dont know which serial is this…But why you didn’t send me the link??Really the starting is nice…your English is not bad at all….Please write only in English sanyukta??????Loved it????I will try to watch this serial…Which channel???????please send me the links…Whichever serial it may be…I will read any serial ff written by readers of my ff????????

    • NegiSanyukta on

      Thank u bhaiya.I thought may be u don’t watch this serial.so,I didn’t sent u the links.
      Thank u so much bhaiya.It really means a lot to get such appreciation from a author like u.
      This show named Savitri devi college and hospital is aired on Colors at6:30pm
      And thank u once again.Love u loads.

    • Negisanyukta on

      Thank u Deepa.It really means a lot to get such appreciation from a multitalented person like u.
      Keep reading dear.

  35. monika on

    Keep writing….
    Its vry interesting… n not even a single word bored me…gud job….Now, i’ m keen to read ur more stories..