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Home»Fan Fiction»Unknown heartbeats- A teaser by Abbi
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Unknown heartbeats- A teaser by Abbi

AbbiBy AbbiJune 13, 2017Updated:June 13, 201749 Comments3 Mins Read
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When the one you love finally comes back to you, will you now have the courage and risk your friendship for love?

A TEASER.

It’s quarter to six in the morning, and I still haven’t slept. I can’t help but think about him, about how we used to be. It’s been almost a year and a half since he left, and up until now, I’m hoping that he’ll come back, still as the person I used to know. But I think it was nearer to impossibility.

He’s a superstar now. Maybe he already forgot about me. What am I to him in the first place? The best friend from the past life? A lover who still hopes? Yeah, maybe I am those two. And he will never ever remember me. He meets thousands of people every day. He has over two million followers on Twitter. Yeah, and he doesn’t even follow me which only means I am now nothing, well maybe, from the start I already am. But now, all I’m sure about is that I miss him.

I miss how he’ll wake me up at 6 in the morning by throwing pebbles on my bedroom window. I miss how he’ll laugh upon seeing me in my messy hair and Spongebob pajamas. I miss how he walked with me to school. I miss how he asked me to bunk a class all because he wanted to eat ice cream. I miss how he dragged me out of the classroom when we’ve been dismissed. I miss how he played with my hair while I was lost in our assignments. I miss how he stayed up, and sang lullaby until I fell asleep. I miss his weird presents during my birthdays. I miss his jokes on my worst days. I miss how he cried me while watching romantic movies. I miss how he just held my hand and never ask a thing when he knows something was wrong. And lastly, I miss how he never forgets to remind me how beautiful I am even during those times when I look like a total disaster.
Thinking about how we used to be makes my heart drown in tears. I decided to turn my laptop on, and checked Twitter. As I go pass through the tweets, one caught my attention. It was his tweet about two hours ago.

Shivaay Singh Oberoi: Back to India for holidays. Going to my best friend’s house later.
Just then, something hit my window. I paused for a while. For more than a year, no one has done that. It was only him. I knelt on the matress and peeped through my window.

There he was. Standing with his hands in his pockets, head held high, and wearing that smile I haven’t seen for a while. The second he saw me, he waved his hand. I felt my heart skip a beat.
He’s here. Less than a mile afar from me. But I guess, it will be the farthest from reaching his heart. It will be the farthest he’ll ever be to falling in love with me. He’s not miles away now, but he’s a heartbeat away.
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Heeya people! It is my first ever write, I really enjoyed writing, thankyou for your time reading this. Hope ya’all like it. I pray your support up until the end.
See you soon. ❤

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    A dreamer. A reader. A learner.

    49 Comments

    1. Arfa on June 13, 2017 1:27 pm

      SO nice,this Abbi

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:04 pm

        Thankyou Arfa. ❤

    2. Aashi on June 13, 2017 1:37 pm

      woohooooo
      lovely episode
      update soon

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:06 pm

        Thankyou Aashi. ❤
        Will try my best. ?

    3. anagha on June 13, 2017 1:54 pm

      Wow!!.. an Hollywood touch but still a desi TADKA!!!!.. loved it!!

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:07 pm

        Thanks Anagha! Yeah it is kinda ?
        I’m glad that you’ve loved it. ❤

    4. Shivika on June 13, 2017 2:01 pm

      Awesome….
      Seems an Intriguing story…
      Continue Soon… 🙂

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:08 pm

        Thankyou. ?
        Yeah I will.

    5. nikita_jai29 on June 13, 2017 2:31 pm

      It is nice one dear eargly waiting for the next update

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:10 pm

        Thankyou Nikita, I’m happy that you’ve commented. ❤

    6. Ruchika on June 13, 2017 2:37 pm

      U just amazing I’m love it keep writing

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:12 pm

        I’m that you’ve loved it. Thanks dear. ❤

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:38 pm

        Glad*

    7. Farheen. on June 13, 2017 2:42 pm

      Hi Abbi, loved this teaser. You did a great job, by your writing skills it isn’t seems like you wrote it for the first time. I usually comment often but this pushed me up to do so. Update the further story soonish. ?

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:35 pm

        Hey Farheen, well tbh I din’t know that I wrote this great, thankyou for commenting. I’m humbled that you loved it. Will try to update asap. ❤

    8. Temmo on June 13, 2017 2:47 pm

      Loved loved loved it! If the teaser is that awesome so just imagine how great the further story will be. Post the next update as soon as possible. ??

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:49 pm

        Hey temmo! Thanks a lot for your precious comment, I’m blissful that you found it good. I will try my best. ❤

    9. heebae on June 13, 2017 2:50 pm

      Great storyline Abbi. You wrote it beautifully. Would love to read further. I’ll be waiting….. ??

      • Ibrah on June 13, 2017 3:29 pm

        Hiba what are you doing here?
        Abbi we both are sisters and commented from a same id. ??

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:51 pm

        Oh that’s great. It’s totally fine btw. ??

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:50 pm

        Thanks Hiba. I’m happy that you liked it. ❤

    10. Ibrah on June 13, 2017 3:04 pm

      My my I love you Abbi. It was so sweet, I think I found myself in that girl that’s why I like your story. Keep writing.

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:54 pm

        Thankyou Ibrah! I know right, her character is basically based on an everyday girl. I’m delightful that you felt it.
        I will definitely. ❤

    11. Vini on June 13, 2017 3:07 pm

      It’s intresting pls update soon

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:56 pm

        Than Vini for commenting and found it interesting. Will do that definitely. ❤

    12. aryaraju on June 13, 2017 3:56 pm

      Interesting

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:56 pm

        Thanks Arya. ?

    13. CrazygirlS.P on June 13, 2017 3:56 pm

      Awesome

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 5:58 pm

        Thank yaa. ❤

    14. fati on June 13, 2017 4:16 pm

      Oh My God Abbi! You are such an amazing writer?
      The teasee itself is so nice? Wondering the story will be outstanding
      You should a add one more thing in your bio
      “A DREAMER. A READER. A LEARNER. A WRITER”?

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 6:08 pm

        Look who’ve commented, an amazing author itself. I’m so gratified by your comment Fatima. Thankyou. Well tbh I’m very bad at writing, and I’m kinda surprise by this reaction. I AM HAPPY NOW. ?
        I’ll add that too when reach at that level at least.
        Love you. ❤

      • fati on June 14, 2017 3:33 pm

        U are making me feel so special Abbi.. ❤ You deserves this? I don’t feel so that u are bad at writing cause beacause the story is well-written. Always be happy?
        U already are girl?
        Love you?

    15. Madhuani on June 13, 2017 4:17 pm

      Awesome…
      Keep going dear.

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 6:08 pm

        Thanks Madhuani. ❤

    16. Aayushi on June 13, 2017 4:32 pm

      Amazing teaser…i cant wait to read further…
      update d next part soon plzz…

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 6:10 pm

        Thank you Ayushi for appreciating me and for the commennt as well. Will update soon. ❤

    17. gayathri.visu on June 13, 2017 5:14 pm

      Abbi…wow!! Amazing teaser…. Loved it!

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 6:14 pm

        Thankyou Gayathri! ❤

    18. alekhika20 on June 13, 2017 8:39 pm

      Lovely update

      • Abbi on June 13, 2017 10:13 pm

        Thnaks Alekhika! 🙂

    19. Arthi on June 13, 2017 10:43 pm

      Abbi this was superb. … Just perfect….love it….

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 12:09 am

        Thank you Arthi, it means a lot! <3

    20. kanfi on June 13, 2017 11:53 pm

      What a storyline..
      Just fabulous.-
      Really loved it…
      Waiting for next part

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 1:18 am

        Thank you Kanfi. Love ❤

    21. fffan1234 on June 14, 2017 12:28 am

      Wow!!! That was interesting start

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 1:19 am

        Thanks a lot. ❤

    22. Ankita27 on June 14, 2017 8:38 am

      Great start.. Amazing.. loved it..

    23. Jerry_36 on June 14, 2017 11:21 am

      Heyoo Abbi.
      Well I am really sorry for commenting this late. And I must say you are a fabulous writer. All the things were penned down so beautifully that I instantly fell in love with your writing. A lovely teaser indeed and the last part made my heart jump, so good.
      Love yaa❤

    24. Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 2:57 pm

      This is exciting…! Amazingg
      waiting for next to next one’..
      as I have read the next oneee

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