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Home»Fan Fiction»Unknown heartbeats- Chapter 1 by Abbi.
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Unknown heartbeats- Chapter 1 by Abbi.

AbbiBy AbbiJune 13, 201755 Comments6 Mins Read
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For those who’ve missed a teaser, hit the link below!
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Chapter 1:

“Annika!” he shouted.
I hurriedly went downstairs. He was standing outside the gate. I ran towards him, and wrapped my arms around him.
“Missed me so much?” he teased me.
“You disappeared for like a year and a half, then you’re asking me if I missed you?!? Really, Shivaay?” I joked, and he just chuckled.
“Let’s eat ice cream!” he suggested.
I gave him a weird look.
“Are you kidding? Ice cream at six in the morning?” I asked, raising an eyebrow.
“Okay, okay. Hum, let’s just have coffee?” he replied.
I nodded, “But can I go, and change first? You don’t want to be seen in the headlines with a girl in her pajamas, do you?”
“Well you look beautiful in your pajamas!” he exclaimed, and I just rolled my eyes.
I dragged him inside my house, and let him sit on the sofa.
“I’ll just go change. Enjoy yourself, and feel at home,” I told him before heading to my room.
“Of course. This used to be like my house,” he answered.

He’s right. Before he left for US, he used to stay here with me all day long. He would usually sleep here.
I slipped in a pair of leggings and a long blouse. I just combed my hair, and let it fall freely, I love my hair every morning. It’s a bit wavy, but it’s attractive for me. I just don’t like my hair straight.
I went out, grabbed a pen and paper, and wrote a note to my sister.
“Gauri, I’m out for coffee with Shivaay. Yeah, with the Shivaay Singh Oberoi you favourite singer. He just came back, and we need to do some catching up. I’ll be back before lunch. Take care. –Annika”.
I’m two years elder than my sister which means she’s only 20. She haven’t really met Shivaay before because she just moved in with me 5 months ago. She grew up in Dubai because she wants to study there while I grew up here in Mumbai, India. Just after she left, I met Shivaay. She grew up apart from me, but we were really close especially if it’s about singing. At first, she won’t believe me when I told her I used to be Shivaay’s best friend, but after seeing our pictures and other evidences, she did.
“Your sister is a fan?” Shivaay said, reading the note from behind me.
“Yeah. She’s head-over-heels with all of you,” I answered
“I should meet her!” he exclaimed.
“Oh yeah, after reading my note, she’ll be asking me to see you. So yeah, you should come over again later,” I suggested.
“Sure. So let’s go now?” he replied.

I posted the note on the refrigerator using a magnet, then moved out with Shivaay.
“Starbucks?” I asked him.
“Yeah!” he said then grabbed my hand. He dragged me, going to Starbucks.
We entered the front door. When the cashier recognized him, her eyes lightened up.
“Hello!” she greeted us.
“Hello there,” Shivaay said.
The girl stared at him for a while as he ordered as if asking herself, ‘Is Shivaay Singh Oberoi really talking to me?’ Shivaay’s smile widened.

After listing our orders, we chose the table near the window. We were chatting when the cashier walked towards our table.
“Uhm, can I have a picture with you?” she asked Shivaay.
“Sure,” he replied. She grabbed her phone.
“I’ll take it,” I volunteered.
She gladly handed my her IPhone. Right after I have captured their picture, the cashier turned to me.
“Are you Shivaay’s best friend that he was talking about on Twitter?” she asked.
“Yeah,” I answered.
“Can I also have a picture with you?” she told me.

At first I was shocked, but then, of course I agreed. Louis took the picture. She carefully got her phone from Shivaay as if trying not to remove his fingerprints in it. I laughed to myself, imagining how he made her day, imagining how she’ll go home, and scream all day. And I just realized how lucky I am.
After we finished our drinks, we waved the cashier goodbye, and left.
“What time is it?” he asked me.
I glanced to my watch.
“7:30, so early to go home,” I said.
“Yeah. We shall go to the park,” he replied.
I smiled in response. We had a 15 minute walk to the park. The park is really near, it’s just that we walked slowly. Upon arriving, we sat on the grass.
“How I missed this,” I said as I closed my eyes and feel the fresh air’s breeze.
“And how I missed you,” he replied.
My eyes opened after hearing his response.
“Me too. By the way, how’s you and Tia Kapoor? I heard a lot about your relationship from the internet,” I said.
“Tia? She’s great, but maybe, we’re not meant for each other,” he answered.
I was unsure about what I heard.
“W-what?” I asked him.
“I thought you’ve heard a lot about us? We broke up just last week,” he said.
How come I don’t know?!?! Oh. I’m so stupid, and I even asked him about ‘them’ when it’s still fresh.
“Sorry. I don’t know!” I said, bowing my head in shame.
“It’s fine,” he said then wrapped his arms around my shoulders.

It’s funny how wrapping his arms around me, or simply touching me means nothing to him when it completes my day.
“I thought you forgot about me,” I told him.
“I won’t. Never,” he replied, removing his arms on my shoulders, and resting on my lap.
“I followed you on Twitter. I mention you for like 10 times a day, and you don’t notice me,” I said.
He looked at me.
“You do?” he asked in disbelief, and I nodded. “Before I left, you told me you’ll never make a Twitter account.”
“Yeah. I told you. But I made one for you. Because I thought we might miss each other, so we could still keep in touch,” I explained.
“Okay! I’m following you now,” he said then grabbed his IPhone from his pocket. “Done!”
I smiled at him.
“When are you leaving for tour?” I asked him.
“Next week,” he replied.
My eyes widened. Next week?!
Uh-oh.
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Heyaaaa. Chapter 1 is here. Writing this chapter really is creepy for me. Every time I save it as a draft, it disappears then after a few minutes or after I restart my laptop it pops out again. Lol.
Anyways, hope you liked it.
Comment your suggestions, and everything.
Take care, guys!
Wear a smile!
Love lots. <3

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    55 Comments

    1. fati on June 13, 2017 11:52 pm

      Abeera I am loving the storyline?. I don’t have words to praise u❤ Do u even realize how good writer you are?
      Continue soon whenever you get time..?
      And just frankly asking, are u a 1D fan? Cause in one line it’s written Louis so??? Just asking??

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 1:05 am

        Well thank you❤ btw, even my mum and my sisters can’t believe that I wrote it.
        I was free today that’s why I posted it this sooner. And I dunno when will I post the next one ’cause my last practical is on it’s way, so yeah probably after few days.
        As you asked ’bout that ‘Louis’ I used to love 1d when Zayn was the part of it, but not any more. That was a typo’s mistake truely, and that blame goes to my Laptop ’cause that ditched me at last moment I had to write the whole chapter on my phone AGAIN! And auto correction did the job. Mummmaeyy I din’t do that intentionally, I’m so sorry. ???

      • fati on June 14, 2017 3:30 pm

        Tell your mum and sister that you write it and show the comments?❤
        Chalo okay I’ll be waiting for your update because I can understand the tension of practicals?
        It’s okay about 1D. Actually u know why I thought like thr because Louis ( 1D member) and singer (he is) so I thought like?
        I also wrote the chapter on mobile cause it takes too long to update from laptop but my fingers hurt when writing on mobile so I am thinking like to write on lappy this time?

    2. CrazygirlS.P on June 13, 2017 11:52 pm

      Awesome

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 5:27 pm

        Thank you girl. ❤

    3. Abbi on June 14, 2017 12:13 am

      Well there’s a typo mistake, sorry for that. 🙂

    4. Aashi on June 14, 2017 12:27 am

      its a nice episode
      luking forward to Shivaay’s POV
      update soon

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 5:29 pm

        Thank you Aashi. ❤
        Well I’m not looking forward to add Shivaay’s POV ’cause it’s totally based on Annika’s. Sorry for disappointing you, but I garantee it you will love to read further.

    5. Harshada on June 14, 2017 12:29 am

      I love the concept!! Keep it going!!

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 5:30 pm

        Thanks Harshada! It means a lot. ❤

    6. fffan1234 on June 14, 2017 12:33 am

      Loved the update

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 5:31 pm

        Thankyou love. ❤

    7. kanfi on June 14, 2017 12:43 am

      Ammazimg…
      I m really loving the plot..
      Post next soon

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 5:32 pm

        I’m delightful that you loved it, thanks Kanfi. ❤

    8. Banita on June 14, 2017 2:49 am

      Abbi It’s Amazinggg…… Luv it…. It’s different from others…. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt…

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 5:34 pm

        Thank you if you found it different, and thank you for commenting. Love. ❤

    9. Ibrah on June 14, 2017 3:27 am

      You nailed it girl. Loved it very much.

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 5:36 pm

        Thanks Ibrah. ❤

    10. Farheen on June 14, 2017 3:45 am

      I love you for posting it early, yaayy I can’t even tell you what i am feeling right now. Love yaa.

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 5:39 pm

        Haha I love you too. ?
        I’m totally relatable to your happiness sweetie. Thanks for commenting. ❤

    11. heebae on June 14, 2017 3:47 am

      Am I dreaming or what?? You actually posted it. Just wanna say one thing that it was mind blowing. ??

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 5:41 pm

        No, no you’re not dreaming I actually posted it. ?
        Thanks! I’m glad that you’ve loved it. ❤

    12. Nita D on June 14, 2017 5:25 am

      Hey Abbi….Awesome chapter….Post next one soon…..

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 6:25 pm

        Hey dear! Thanks a lot for your appreciation. <3 Thanks again.

    13. Prapti on June 14, 2017 5:32 am

      I love this ff a lot!!! Please continue….

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 6:26 pm

        Thank you Prapti! Love. <3

    14. Shivika on June 14, 2017 8:18 am

      Awesome Update….
      I’m just loving this story….
      The last part was cute….
      Post Soon…. 🙂

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 6:27 pm

        Thankyaa Shivika! I happy that you’re loving it, sure. <3

    15. Arfa on June 14, 2017 8:27 am

      its maindbowling,beautiful the conccpt Abbi.next part jaldi dhna ok.

      • Abbi on June 14, 2017 6:28 pm

        Thankyou Arfa! I’ll surely do that as fast as I can. 🙂 <3

    16. gayathri.visu on June 14, 2017 8:42 am

      Awww!! Lovely concept. Awesome…. Eagerly waiting for next part dear.

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 2:12 am

        Thank youu Gayathri! Will surely try to do my best. Love. ❤

    17. Lauren on June 14, 2017 9:41 am

      Hlo abbi…it was amazinggggg post nextsoooooooon

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 2:14 am

        Thanks Lauren! Sure. ❤

    18. Madhuani on June 14, 2017 11:03 am

      It’s fantastic dear.
      Loved the storyline n your way of presenting.
      Update next when you are free byeee.
      ALL THE BEST for your last practical.

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 2:18 am

        Thank yaa Madhuani! It is so overwhelming that you liked it. ?
        Will surely post that and thanks for wishing me I need this. ❤

    19. Ashwinee on June 14, 2017 11:23 am

      This is amaaaaaazzzzziiiiinnnngggg

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 2:19 am

        Thankyouuuuuuu Ashwini! Love you. ❤

    20. aryaraju on June 14, 2017 11:54 am

      Wonderful ??

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 2:22 am

        Thanks Arya. ❤

    21. Jerry_36 on June 14, 2017 12:24 pm

      And yeah I am wearing a smile all along while reading the chapter. So so good. Everything was just awesome. Shivaay is so adorable, and that cashier was so cute, poor Anika was left stunned. Now the question is there about Shivaay’s feeling. Excited for the next episode sista !! Do check my comment on your teaser, I posted it a bit late..
      Love yaa?

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 2:38 am

        Heeeya Jerry! Is that really you? I mean am I hallucinating or what? You’ve actually commented. Thankyou so much I means a lot for me really. Yeah, Shivaay is indeed a cutie, you will find him more adorable in upcoming chapters, ahan that cashier well I found myself in her btw, lol. Well ’bout his feeling it is a mystery, kinda. Well it’s totally fine, even I’m late too to reply you back.*Maafi*
        Love you too. ❤

    22. nikita_jai29 on June 14, 2017 12:54 pm

      It is nice one dear

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 2:39 am

        Thank you Nikita! Love. ❤

    23. Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 1:09 pm

      Hey dear..really geniue effors fot this..awesome chapter
      Loved ittt
      Waitibg for the next
      ‘Welcome to this writing world a writer in you has been unfolded..!
      Superb!
      Love ya!

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 2:42 am

        Thankyou dearest Sana! I’m blissful that you loved it.
        Aww that’s so sweet of you. ?
        Love you too. ❤

      • Neha-17 on June 15, 2017 11:52 am

        Hey, dear Thedreamsoul is Sana…Its me Neha..here!
        Even, I am glad reading your sweet reply..!

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 3:29 pm

        I’m so sorry I din’t know that, please don’t mind.
        Thankyou Neha! ❤

      • Neha-17 on June 15, 2017 3:31 pm

        Yes, that’s totally fine..! Welcome dear.

    24. Ankita27 on June 14, 2017 2:30 pm

      Amazing update.. loved it..

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 2:43 am

        Thank you Ankita! Love. ❤

    25. alekhika20 on June 14, 2017 3:49 pm

      Superb update

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 2:44 am

        Thankyaa love Alekhika. ❤

    26. anagha on June 14, 2017 4:06 pm

      Wow Abby!! That was just .. what say.. mind blowing or utterly irresistible.. everything!!… loved it !!.. woahh yaar … got so much of writing talent!!

      • Abbi on June 15, 2017 2:48 am

        Thank you Anagha love! For liking it and commenting, really I happy that you’ve loved it. My got my price now, even you write FANTASTIC! ❤

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