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Home»Fan Fiction»“That Unknown Feeling”- Chapter 23: Payback
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“That Unknown Feeling”- Chapter 23: Payback

FanficwriterBy FanficwriterJune 25, 201718 Comments5 Mins Read
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Chapter 22: Click here

(Recap: Krishna drives Sayyam to the orphanage. They spend some valuable time with Anjali. Sayyam finds out that Krishna bandaged him and they fight in the car on the way home.)

To visit all previous chapters: Click here for all episodes

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Sayyam leaned from side to side as he furiously tapped on his phone screen, completely engrossed in the game at hand, when Yuvani came barging into his room. She tapped on his shoulder hurriedly, trying to get his attention.

“Hmm?” Sayyam responded, his gaze not leaving the screen. Yuvani huffed, snatching the phone away from him.

“Hey!” He retorted, trying to take his phone back, “I was on the last level…I was this close to winning!” He held up his thumb and forefinger to represent how close he’d come to almost winning the game, pouting dejectedly.

“Forget the game, I need your help,” Yuvani rolled her eyes.

“With what?” Sayyam shook his head in annoyance.

“We forgot to check if Yuvaan’s ring fits him, and today evening is the engagement!”

“So?” Sayyam cocked an eyebrow, clearly not understanding the problem.

“Yuvaan’s not at home…”

“And? I still don’t see how this involves me at all.”

“Mumma said yours and Yuvaan’s ring size is probably the same…”

Sayyam looked up at Yuvani in confusion, still unable to assess the situation.

“You idiot, Mumma told me to tell you to try on the ring to see if it fits!”

“Oh.” Sayyam pursed his lips, “okay, where is it?”

“Right here,” Yuvani bit her lip, handing him a plain silver band. Sayyam gently took it from her and tried to slide it on his ring finger, but it wasn’t going on smoothly.

“Am I going to have to teach you how to put on a ring bro?” Yuvani mocked, smirking in amusement.

“Why don’t you try, miss perfect,” Sayyam stuck out his tongue at her.

“Here,” Yuvani grabbed his hand and tried to push the ring on, but it wasn’t working.

“Did it work?” Sayyam asked, his eyes shining in jest.

“Shut. Up.” Yuvani frowned disapprovingly, slightly self-conscious. At that moment, Krishna poked her head inside the room.

“Anything wrong Yuvani? I could hear your voice from down the hallway.”

“Hey, Krishna! Just the person I was waiting for! Can you help Sayyam put on this ring?”

Sayyam started to shake his head, refusing to take help from Krishna, when he was interrupted.

“Of course I will!” Krishna smiled sweetly, stepping closer to him, a glint in her eyes. She took hold of his hand and roughly shoved the ring onto his finger, grinning with satisfaction when he grimaced in pain.

“Does it fit?” Krishna bent down to his level, obviously taking pride in the pain she had caused him.

“Yes. It does,” Sayyam hissed through clenched teeth.

“Great!” Yuvani exclaimed, oblivious to what had just happened. She pulled the ring off Sayyam’s finger, causing him to wince once more. Grabbing Krishna’s hand, she rushed out of the room with the ring, leaving Sayyam to slowly realize that she had taken his phone as well.

“There goes my game,” he sighed, leaning back in his seat.
_____

Krishna looked around anxiously, her nerves getting the better of her, as she stood in front of Yuvaan, a ring in her hand. She glanced around her and saw that Suhani aunty and her Dadu were beaming proudly. She spotted Yuvani grinning at her and smiled back, noticing that Sayyam was standing at the end, his arms folded. ‘Leave it to Mr. Khadoos to look dull at a happy occasion,’ she pouted, turning back to Yuvaan.

He looked down at Krishna expectedly, slowly extending his hand out. Krishna blushed slightly, and gently slid the ring onto his finger. Her cheeks turning a deep crimson when everyone around her started clapping.

Krishna shyly held her hand up as Yuvaan began to place a ring on her finger. She saw him frown and looked at her hand, realizing that he was having trouble getting the ring on her finger.

“Should I help?” A voice rang out from the group. Krishna and Yuvaan glanced towards the voice, watching as Sayyam stepped towards them. Krishna blanched when she saw Yuvaan’s brow furrow in irritation.

“It’s ok, I’ll do it,” Yuvaan replied curtly, trying to force the silver band to fit her, his face turning red.

“No, it’s no problem,” Sayyam walked up to Krishna and roughly pushed the ring onto her left hand ring-finger. A small tingle passed between them and Krishna cringed in discomfort, while Sayyam merely smirked smugly.

“It fit, right?” He looked into her eyes, clearly meaning payback.

“Yes.” She scowled, while Yuvaan just crossed his arms exasperatedly.

“Good,” Sayyam smiled warmly, turning to Yuvaan to shake his hand, “Congratulations on yours and Krishna’s engagement.” He backed away slowly, heading back into the crowd, ignoring the tight feeling in his chest after saying those words. As Sayyam walked back to his place, he was stopped by Yuvani for a moment.

“Bro, what was that?”

“What was what? I just helped her put the ring on.” He shrugged nonchalantly.

“Fine, whatever,” Yuvani tilted her head to the side, trying to analyze her step-brother as he strode away.

*****
Hey guys!! I can’t even tell you all how sorry I am…school started and I’ve been really busy. I’ll definitely be updating more frequently. Thank you for putting up with me! 😉
Also, thank you guys so much! It’s only because of your love and constant support that I even thought about entering the competitions and was able to win. Thank you to everyone who voted for me or left me a comment. It means so much guys!

Love you all!!
– Shreya <3

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    18 Comments

    1. Sana on June 25, 2017 6:18 pm

      Hello shreya di? I always used to be a silent reader, but I really love your writing…congo once again on winning both competitions

      I just had a question…was your name @kriyam rocks before creating this account (you came up with d name kriyyamite?)
      Just wanted to know

      • Fanficwriter on June 25, 2017 6:24 pm

        Hey Sana, I’m glad you commented ?
        Thank you for the wishes.

        Yes, my name used to be “Kriyam rocks” before I made an account? Kriyyamite was a name that just kinda occurred to me?
        Thnx again for reading ?

    2. Kriyyam fan on June 25, 2017 6:24 pm

      Double amazing

      • Fanficwriter on June 25, 2017 10:26 pm

        Thank you??

    3. muniya on June 25, 2017 7:16 pm

      Amazing epi Shreya… loved it.
      It looks like its Kriyyam Engagement ritual done.
      So Happy that u posted os s also. Just fallen in Love with ur extraordinary writing skill.
      U know When i saw ur name as winner of the os competition i was literally jumping on my bed and my mom was like ‘Hv u gone crazy or u hv become a monkey’.
      Again congrats dear.

      • Fanficwriter on June 25, 2017 11:02 pm

        Yup, they indirectly got engaged ? let’s see what happens next ?
        I’m so happy you like my writing and I’m grateful to have a friend like you,?
        I can’t believe you got so excited and did that? You won’t believe how many times my mom has seen me being excited about something and asked if I was going crazy?

    4. AnahitaAnnie on June 25, 2017 8:50 pm

      That was such a cute episode.. U are fantastic with ur dialogues and amazingly done with the sibling relationship.. When I read ur story I can visualise them and that’s an amazing feeling when it comes to read.. I am totally in love in ur writing skills.. Amazingly done..loved it.. Can’t wait for the next one..and don’t take much pressure.. U can update when u are free…?

      • Fanficwriter on June 25, 2017 11:05 pm

        Thank you Annie, gosh, I just can’t thank you enough these days??
        I really see a lot of potential in ‘Sayani’ and I love their sibling bond.
        Your praise just overwhelms me…thank you girl!?

    5. Dinu on June 25, 2017 8:53 pm

      Loved d epi 2 d core dr.i’m so happy dat unknowingly kriyam made each other wear d rings. So dat means actually they r d one who got engaged.hikz.where hv u been dr.it’s been 3 weeks since u updated d last epi.I was missing ur ff so much. Nevermind.nw ur back. Plz update d nxt prt soon dr.cnt wait. I thought u quited TU.bye dr tc.n congratulations on ur 2nd place on d competition.

      • Fanficwriter on June 25, 2017 11:07 pm

        Thank you Dinu, school started and I was really busy all of a sudden, thank you for being so patient though?? I promise I’ll post the next couple of episodes frequently.
        Thank you for the wishes ?
        (By the way, I could never think of leaving you guys hanging and quitting TU, I’ll be sticking around for some time?)

    6. Mithila Farzana on June 25, 2017 9:32 pm

      Hey shreya congrats….u deserve to win…your writting skill is extraordinary…kriyam engagement happent but they didn’t understand….waiting for next epi….

      • Fanficwriter on June 25, 2017 11:09 pm

        Thank you Mithila, you’re too sweet? thank you so much?
        Yup, they’ve gotten engaged without realizing it themselves… let’s see what comes up next?

    7. Isha on June 26, 2017 11:46 am

      Kriyyam ki engagement tho ho gayi indirectly hi sahi?..ab shaadi ka intezaar hai. Congrats Shreya on winning the competition ..it was so amazing that I had to give 10/10 ..Loved it..?

      • Fanficwriter on June 26, 2017 4:25 pm

        Yeah, Kriyam got engaged indirectly?
        Thank you for the wishes and for voting??

    8. Fidato on June 26, 2017 4:00 pm

      Shreya…My gal…You rock it again… Congrats dear… Make us proud again… This Sayani bond really loving… Kriyam engagement had done…I really liked the unique way they did it…. Shaadi ke intezzar Mein…

      • Fanficwriter on June 26, 2017 4:47 pm

        Thank you Fidato, I really see a lot of potential in Sayani, I absolutely love them too??
        I know, sneaky engagement… let’s hope you like the marriage?

    9. Prethiga on June 26, 2017 5:01 pm

      Hey you are back… Loved this one as always… Loved the Sayani bond and the way Kriyam’s engagement happened and the PAYBACK was awesome….and looks like Saiyyam is not happy with Krishna’s engagement… Would love to see some Kriyam’s scenes in the future and the way the whole marriage unfolds… And one thing I like about your writing is that you make everything seem real… Without all the BGM and stuff…. Again LOVED it… Reading your FF just makes my day and eagerly waiting for the next one…

      • Fanficwriter on June 26, 2017 5:44 pm

        Hey Prethiga, thanks for commenting?
        Sayani is just amazing ? I love their sibling bond and their talent for mutual sarcasm?

        I’m glad you liked the engagement, I will include more Kriyam scenes in the future…like you said, I like to focus on all aspects of a story and write realistically? but the will definitely be more Kriyam scenes coming up.

        Sayyam knows that he cares for Krishna, but he’s trying at all costs to ignore those feelings.

        I can’t wait to give you guys the rest of the events, but I have a lot of twists planned, hope you like it?

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