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Home»Fan Fiction»“That Unknown Feeling”- Chapter 21: Apologies and Stubborn Demands
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“That Unknown Feeling”- Chapter 21: Apologies and Stubborn Demands

FanficwriterBy FanficwriterJune 4, 201728 Comments6 Mins Read
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Chapter 20: Chapter 20
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*****
The next day Sayyam woke up to feel a gentle hand on his forehead, he tilted his head up and saw Suhani, who had tears in her eyes.

“Sorry Beta-” Suhani started.

“No Maa,” Sayyam sat up, “It’s my fault…If I hadn’t-”

“It’s no one’s fault,” Yuvani cut in, entering the room, followed by Yuvraaj and Sharad.

“Why are you all here? You’re acting as if I’m sick or injured…” Sayyam asked. Yuvani face-palmed and Sayyam realized that he was in fact injured. Whatever happened the previous night came rushing back at him and he felt his head throb. He looked around him, and realization dawned upon him. He wasn’t in the outhouse…this was Krishna’s room.

“Who bandaged me yesterday?” he asked, slight panic in his voice. Everyone was silent, not knowing who’d taken care of Sayyam.

Yuvaan, who was leaning against a wall, spoke up irately, “Yeah, that’s what I was asking, why is he in Krishna’s room? Who took care of him?”

“Yuvani did,” a small voice was heard from outside the room. Krishna walked in and nudged Yuvani. “Right Yuvani?” Krishna stressed. The two girls shared a subtle look, while
Sayyam looked on clueless.

“Uh…Yeah,” Yuvani fibbed, “I took him to Krishna’s room ‘cause Krishna was sleeping in my room anyway…”

“Thanks, Yuvani” he looked up at Yuvani and gave her his most grateful smile, while Yuvaan went back to his position against the wall. Krishna turned away, fixing her stare on a photo frame. Sayyam wondered why she was being so distant; then he internally smacked himself, remembering that he was the one who was supposed to be distancing himself from her. She’s Yuvaan’s fiancé, he reminded himself; he had to stop thinking about her.
_____

For the entire of the next week, Sayyam was forced to stay in bed. “Just in case,” his mother had told him, “What if you get hurt even more?” Sayyam was more than happy with all the extra love and attention from Suhani, but he was dying to get out of his room. To add to it, he’d barely had any human contact except for when his mother occasionally came to bandage him. Yuvani would sometimes drop in to talk to him, but it seemed like everyone was busier with Krishna’s engagement.

Krishna.

Every time she entered his room to give him his food or medicines she would keep glancing at him. It was like she was almost…guilty. It was obvious that she thought he didn’t notice, but it was hard not to take note of her when she was consistently peeking at him. There was a more pressing issue on his mind though; he was concerned about Anjali, it had been a week since he’d met her. Her treatment would start soon, and here he was, stuck on a bed.

He was so caught up in his thoughts that he hadn’t seen Krishna enter the room. It was only when she held out the medicines in front of him that he became aware of her presence. He took the packet from her hand and quietly watched as she set down a plate with breakfast on the bedside table. He observed her steal a couple glances at him and leaned back in the bed, exhaling calmly, “Look, Krishna, I know I’m devilishly handsome, but you don’t have to keep sneaking looks at me.”
Krishna jumped at the sound of his voice, tripping over the rug behind her. Sayyam couldn’t stop himself from smirking. ‘Some things will never change’ he shook his head in amusement. Before he could complete that thought, his eyes widened in alarm. Had he just called her…Krishna? Why did he feel so comfortable? Her name had so naturally rolled off his tongue; it honestly surprised him.

“Um…sorry…” Krishna whispered, standing up.

“Sorry for what?” Sayyam raised an eyebrow, “for falling?”

“No,” Krishna shook her head, “what I said that day…it wasn’t right…”

Sayyam stiffened. “It doesn’t matter.” His voice was ice-cold.

“It does!” Krishna exclaimed, a new-found vigor in her voice. “Everything I said, it wasn’t true. I didn’t know the truth.”

‘The truth?’ Sayyam cocked an eyebrow in surprise; had Yuvani told her everything? Even if she had, he couldn’t blame her, he probably would’ve done the same for her. He sighed, letting the whole issue blow over. He had more important things to do.

Sayyam scooted over to the edge of the bed, wincing a bit when his injured foot touched the floor. Ignoring the pain, he stood up, almost immediately losing his balance. Krishna rushed forward to steady him, her eyes reflecting his pain.

“I’m serious,” she pleaded, looking at him earnestly, “I’m sorry, please Sayyam.”

Sayyam pulled away from her slightly, “I know, it’s ok…it doesn’t matter.”

“It does matter!” Krishna pouted, pulling him back to her innocently, “and where do you think you’re going? Your foot is still healing.”

Sayyam collided with her, his irritation clear on his face. “Excuse me, Girnewali, I’m going to meet Anjali, and the likes of you can’t stop me.”

Krishna huffed, “Look, Mr. Khadoos,” she raised her voice, imitating him, “Suhani aunty put me in charge of you, and besides, who said I was stopping you?” she paused for a moment, walking to Sayyam’s drawer and taking out his car keys.

“I’m driving you there.”

*****

Wow, what an unsuspenseful cliffhanger, am I right? hehe…

Also, guys, the voting time is done, so I just want to say that those of you who guessed were ALL correct…entry #3 is mine…Thank you to all of you who voted and everyone who took the time to read it..I was a bit flustered when I was writing the kisses cause I felt like I wouldn’t be able to do justice to Kriyam. I’ll post the OS under my username soon…thnx again for everything guys!

Also, since everyone guessed correctly, I might just sneak in a Kriyam surprise into this ff soon..you never know 😉

Love you all!!
– Shreya <3

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    28 Comments

    1. Aisha on June 4, 2017 1:29 am

      Finally kriyam i have been waiting for kriyam all day all kriyam writers post soon

      Fanfic writer wow this one was amazing
      Add more kriyam scenes please

      • Fanficwriter on June 4, 2017 7:32 pm

        Thnx for reading Aisha??
        There’ll be more Kriyam coming up?

    2. AnahitaAnnie on June 4, 2017 2:34 am

      Look, Krishna, I know I’m devilishly handsome, but you don’t have to keep sneaking looks at me.”.. Okay I was totally oit of breathe due to laughing due to this fantastic dialogue.. I was laughing so harf that my brother told I got crazy, yess I got crazy after reading ur fantastic writing.. Thr kriyam was so beautiful in ur writing.. I loved it.. And thats one cliffhanger u left.. I can’t wait to see what will happen next.. Loved the episode from core..

      • Fanficwriter on June 4, 2017 7:48 pm

        Oh thnx Annie?
        I thoroughly enjoyed writing that line , I’m glad you found it hilarious??

        Thank you so much for the encouragement…love ya!??

    3. Aisha on June 4, 2017 5:41 am

      O my god loving it. Keep posting.

      • Fanficwriter on June 4, 2017 7:53 pm

        Thank you Aisha??

    4. Prethiga on June 4, 2017 9:22 am

      This chapter was fantastic… sayyam and suhani started the “all-is-my-fault” game and yuvaani feels quite irritated with it… why is yuvaan acting so rude with sayyam… i actually expected yuvaan to be angry… also want to know what will sayyam’s rection be if he finds out that krishna bandaged him… and at last sayyam is getting that “EXTRA LOVE” from Suhani… and krishna apologized to him and sayyam forgave her… they are going to meet anjali and i want some kriyam scenes if you can put it in there… anyways loved this chapter as always… you write so well that when ever i get bored i keep reading you ff from the starting…

      • Fanficwriter on June 4, 2017 9:41 pm

        Thank you Prethiga, your comment on my writing means so much?

        I agree, Sayyam necer received that love from Suhani which we all expected him to receive….he deserved his mothers love…especially seeing that he was abandoned by her.

        Yuvaan just might not find out that Krishna bandaged Sayyam him up?

        But let’s see how Sayyam reacts when he finds out though??

        Thnx for everything Prethiga??

    5. Aman on June 4, 2017 10:58 am

      Loved the episode!!! Can’t wait for the next one update soon!!!❤❤

      • Fanficwriter on June 4, 2017 9:44 pm

        Thank you Aman?

    6. Rai on June 4, 2017 6:21 pm

      Amazing chapter ??
      I can’t wait to see saiyyam’s reaction when he finds out it was Krishna who bandaged him…….
      I look forward to reading the next chapter ♥️♥️♥️

      • Fanficwriter on June 4, 2017 9:45 pm

        Thank you so much Rai??

    7. Anshu on June 4, 2017 6:37 pm

      Loved it❤ plx update soon.

      • Fanficwriter on June 4, 2017 9:43 pm

        Thanks Anshu??

    8. Aisha on June 4, 2017 8:10 pm

      Really loved it. Also, I know this has nothing to do with today’s episode, but is the picture Anjali drew of Sayyam, Krishna, and Anjali. I feel like they are going to adopt her. Anyways really interesting, bring a lot of questions and thoughts in my head. Just post regularly or try to because nobody’s really posting any kriyam and I a man thirsty for kriyam ffs.

      • Fanficwriter on June 4, 2017 9:46 pm

        Thank you Aisha?

        You never know what I’m planning for future chapters…?

        I’ll try to post more often??

    9. Fidato on June 4, 2017 11:03 pm

      Hi… shreya…. “Look, Krishna, I know I’m devilishly handsome, but you don’t have to keep sneaking looks at me.”.. that’s I dunno how to explain…I was laughing…The most adorable part of the episode… Waiting for Sayyam found out… that Krishna bandaged him.. I’m also want to visit Anjali…

      • Fanficwriter on June 5, 2017 12:00 am

        Hehe?
        Thanks Fidato, I had a lot of fun writing that line myself?

        Thnx for commenting?
        Let’s see what happens?

    10. maria on June 5, 2017 12:57 am

      o my god u r such a talented writer am totally loving ur dialogues u nailed it dear and ofcourse the devillishly handsome sayyam slayed the episode great job keep going am so excited for the next part

      • Fanficwriter on June 5, 2017 8:39 am

        Thank you Maria??

    11. muniya on June 5, 2017 9:22 am

      Wow Shreya… just mindblowing….i enjoyed reading every single line.
      Sayyam’s dialogue about being devilishly handsome is so true….just love him.
      And i was right about ur os…it was fabulous.

      • Fanficwriter on June 5, 2017 4:47 pm

        Thank you Muniya?
        Sayyam is bae, I agree?

    12. muniya on June 5, 2017 9:24 am

      Wow Shreya… just mind blowing….i enjoyed reading every single line.
      Sayyam’s dialogue about being devilishly handsome is so true….just love him.

    13. Isha on June 5, 2017 7:36 pm

      Amazing epi Dr..loved it to the core ..plz add some kriyyam romance as I miss it..

      • Fanficwriter on June 5, 2017 10:27 pm

        Thank you Isgha

      • Fanficwriter on June 5, 2017 10:28 pm

        Isha* ??

    14. Jhanvi14 on June 7, 2017 2:00 am

      Hi!!! I m new here and read this chapter and I found to so nice that I read the previous chapters by the link given by you Shreya… I am fan of you!!! Love you!!! ???

      • Fanficwriter on June 7, 2017 6:03 am

        Wow, Jhanvi?
        Thank you so much, it truly means so much??
        I’m glad you liked my writing?

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