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UNFORGETTABLE LOVE :SHIVIKA (Part 51) ( shopping and shock )

Guys firstly sorry for being late update but honestly speaking that was not my mistake it’s bcz of problem in tellyupdate , last week i wrote full chapter but at the time of submission it deleted so i was hell irritated bcz of which i have to write full episode again and i m doing update now so plz read and enjoy

Next day
oberoi family ,rajvanshi , and luthra family youngster went for shopping instead of adhiraj , kriyan and arohi

At mall
Shivaay and raghav both were trying to talk with their respective partner but they were not giving any heed to them everybody notice the tashan between them so they left them alone so they can saut out their problem by themself but tanya was tanya sticking to shivaay which makes both shivika iriked but they can’t say anything
Other side
Samaira was chossing dresses and rejecting every dress which salesman showing her salesman get irritated raghav who was watching all this smiling at her antics and feel pity 4 salesman so he stand near to her at dress counter and start searching for dress from all those pile up dress without saying anything which make her more angry
Raghav to salesman
R: pack this dress(showing him dress)
Salesman: yes..(before he complete sammy cut him)
She snatch the dress frm raghav hand
Sammy: to salesman :are u idiot or wht i choose this dress first na then how can u give this dress to him
Salesman: bt mam u rejected this dress
Sammy: now u r saying i m lying haa(angrily)
Salesman: no mam i didn’t mean this
Sammy:so wht do u mean haa pack this dress immediately
Salesman: yes mam
Raghav: no u can’t i choose this first pack this dress 4 me
He again snatch the dress
Sammy look at him in anger
Sammy: this is my dress, r u going to pack this dress or not
She again snatch
Salesman: mam wo..
R: i will take this dress pack it
Salesman look at them in confusion to whom he should support
They both were playing mine game by snatching dress by snatching dress
Salesman left the place in confusion
Sammy: why u want this dress go and bring other dress na there are lots of dresses in this mall
R: even i can say the samething
Sammy: no u can’t bcz i was the first who see this dress so i will take this dress
R: dekhney se kya hota h maine pasand ki or maine pehley pack karnay k liye bola so basically i will take this dress
Sammy: why u want this dress only , wht will u do with dress pehnogey kya
R: nhi , kisi ko pehna na h
Sammy:to whom
R: my jaan my love , who is very angry on me
Sammy:i will not wear any dress given by u
R: when i took ur name
Sammy: wht do u mean
R: i mean i didn’t take ur name (by snatching dress frm her hand and plAce it on the side and cmg closer to her)than how come u became my love haan…bt if u want u can also become my jaan i don’t mind at all

(Now sammy stuck between counter and raghav)
Both get lost in each and other eye

Otherside
To shivika
Tanya was chossing dresses and showing shivaay which makes him irritated bt he tried not to loose his calm and smiling to her
Aanika who was watching this frm distance murdering dress in her hand mercilessly nikky who was noticing this smiling at her
So an idea stike in her mind
Nikky: mahi wht happened
A: nothing bt y r u asking
N: look wht u did with this dress
Aanika notice dress in her hand and immedietely place in counter
A: wo bs …
N: it’s okk bt look there na
Point 2wrd tanya and shivaay
Both are looking so cute with each other just made 4 each other nazar na lage look shivaay how he is helping her in choosing dress such a romantic couple
Anika(mind) :romantic my foot or mere saath toh kabhi nhi ki ab dekho bt mujhe kya hmm
A: whatever
N: lets go to them na And join them
A:u go i have to try a dress
She pick up random dress frm counter and left
Nikky smile and move 2wrd shivaay and tanya
N: arey tanya u r here i was searching for u so long
T: why
N: actually i don’t understand wht shld i brought and i heared ur choice is best by pinki aunt so will u help me
T: yaaa i can bt shivaay…
N:it’s okk shivaay will not mind will u shivaay
S: no not at all u go and help her
T: okk come
Both turn to go bt nikky turn to shivaay
N: yaa shivaay actually karan is looking for u ,go and meet him he is nearby trial room at left
S:okk
Nikky smirk to him he get confused bt left
While he was passing near by trial he stop by voice
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Sammy: wht r u doing
R:wht m i doing u herself saying naa that u r my love so i was just…
Sammy push him
And tried to leave frm there bt raghav stop her by holding her hand and pull her toward him she hit to his chest and he wrap her in his arms
R: i m sorry sammy
She struggling in his arms to make her free bt no use at last she stop struggling
R: when u very well know na u can’t than y u always try hmm(teasingly)
She start beating him with her palm and tear brimm in her eyes
S;u monster, idiot, duffer,i will not talk to u , how can u say this ,leave me
Raghav smile at her and stop her hand and kiss on her palm
R: i know i made a big mistake , i shouldn’t say all this , i promise u that i will make u happy always bt i myself made u cry i m sorry bt u know na when u was angry i have no control on my mind and i speak rubbish plz forgive me , u know na i didn’t mean this , u should slap me at that tym when i was speaking rubbish na bt u herself left , i m sorry bt plz forgive me i will never do this again
S: pakka u didn’t mean this naa if u do this again na than i will never talk to u
Raghav nodded
Sammy hugg him
S: even i m sorry i should understand ur feeling
R: it’s not ur mistake
Raghav kisses on her tear to which she blush hard
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RM
Two men enter in rajvanshi mansion there face was not shown
Man1: where are all(to servant)
Servant: wo mam…
Before he said
Pinki cut him
P: OMM who r u
Man 2:wo me..
Before he complete
Sagrika and chaya who was coming frm downstair were shocked
SagCha:TUMMMMM……
Hearing therir voice OF were confused to see new entries on the otherhand yash, shanshank, adhiraj , arohi came and they were equally shocked and shouted in union: TUMMMM/AAAAAPPP
Voice: haaa ye (from entrance)
They found kriyan
Everybody again look at man
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Shivaay who was near trial room knock at door but before he speak stop by hearing anika voice
A: thank god nikky u came plz help me naa yaar to tieing the dori of this blouse i am not able to do it again and even my hands are paining now come fast
Shivaay look left and right and found no one so without any option he enter in trial room and lock the door and found anika strugling the dori
He stop her hand
Anika shiver by his touch
She put her hand down
Shivaay side her hair and take dori by touching her back with his fingers
She tightly clutch her skirt to control and closed his eyes
Shivaay was smiling like an idiot after watching his effect on her and he tie the knot
He thought it’s best tym to talk to her
He make her turn

Aanika whose eyes were closed and head bowed down to blush
Shivaay hold her chin and make her face up
S: open ur eyes and look at me
She slowly open her eyes and found green eyes staring at her ,she lost in his eyes
S: i want talk to u
A: hmmm(without breaking eyecontact)
S: wo whatever u r thinking about me and tanya relation
Hearing tanya she comeback to her sense
A:i don’t want to listen anything
And she start moving bt shivaay hold her by arm and push her back toward him
S: weather u want to hear or not bt u have to listen
A: what if i m not
S: than i have otherway to make u listen bt today u have to listen me at anycost
A: do whatever u want to do bt i will not scared frm u and i m going

She jerk her hand and tried to go bt shivaay again look at push her and this time her back hit the wall of trial room and his both arm around her to block her way
A: ye kya badtameeze hai
S: this is the only way to make u listen and i m sorry for this bt u didn’t left any other option
A: mujhe batana itna kya zaroori h apne rishtey k baare me haa, aakhir lagti kya hu me aapki haa
S: it is important to tell u bcz u r everything to me god damit,
A: how
S: bcz u r my wi..(stop)
A: u have no answer na so let me go
S: okk bt listen to me plz me ye sb i mean engagement with tanya it’s just
Aanika stop him by showing her hand
A: no need first go and find who m i
Before she complte she got a call and she immedietely take the call and left from the room
A: ji veer ji
Ad: bachcha where r u
A: we r at mall bt wht happened
Ad: nothing much bt come fast we have something for u all as a surprise
A: okk we r cmg
Ad: come fast love u
A: love u too veer ji
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Aanika informed everybody instead of shivaay and tanya who were not there so everyone left to parking lot and aanika move inside to look for shivaay and tanya
She found them standing at corner while tanya holding his hand
Bt shivaay make her shock when he take tanya hand in his palm and caresses it and look at her lovingly and talking to her smiling (guys she is not able to hear anything bcz she was standing at ground floor and they were at the 1st floor and she was looking up)
She feel hurt
Bt his other action make her more shocked
Shivaay jerk her hand in anger and start shouting at her in anger and even tanya was not less at last shivaay push her and she fall on floor and he leave frm there
Aanika who was shockingly look at them in anger left frm there without saying them anything bt send message to both to come fast
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While entering RM main gate aanika notice kriyan message on her mobile

Message
Come fast anie i have a surprise for u

All comeout frm the car and start going inside ,while aanika stop raghav and show message to him

R: i knew it about it
A: wht is this
R: let it be surprise
A:so u r not going to tell me
R: yes
A: okk i will see u
R: dekh lena
R: even i don’t know
A: wht
Sammy: are u guys cmg or not
RagAn: cmg
And both move inside
Everybody stand on door, when they notice two men sitting on sofa whose back were facing
Chaya notice all
C: lo bachchey bhi aa gaye , come guys see who has come to meet u
Both men turn but before all see the faces Kriyan and Arohi come and stand in front of them and block the view of all five to face each other
Kriyan cover aanika eyes and arohi gauri eyes and said u five(karan, aanika, raghav,gauri and sammy) will not open ur eye,shivaay ,om ,bhavya rudra and nikki look at them in confusion bt they ignored it
Till than all left instead of seven
Aanika , gauri and raghav take little steps with everystep their heartbeat start beating fast
At last they stand at side near sofa
KrAr: stay here
All nodded

Man1 &2: u guys can open ur eyes
Hearing voices all open their eyes and get shocked
Yash: meet karan , samaira , raghav ,gauri and mahira
There was smile on karan and sammy face
Aanika face become white and same goes with gauri and raghav
Their expression become changed and become blank after watching their face
One man is alok and other is …(secret)
Ground slip from aanika and raghav leg even gauri was feeling some michmichi
Aanika and raghav look at kriyan in shock to which he nodded
And gauri look at adhiraj , he side hug
Ad: everything is fine chutki …i m here (whisper in her ear)
Om look at both in confusion
To which she nodded and compose herself
But wht is more shocking was aanika and raghav which was noticed by shivaay,adhiraj and karan
Aanika face was blank, her eyes were red and wht not world has stop 4 her at same moment( both men were equally shocked)…they trio understood that it is not shocked bt much more even raghav was like this bt his condition was not bad like her
Both men turn towrd yash and family
Man1: ye
Yash nodded in positive
Yash: yes i got my chutki and doll back,she is chutki (point 2 wrd gauri)
Both man: gauri.. chutki
Gauri is not feeling good bt she give respect
G: namastey
Y: or ye hai meri doll..(point 2wrd aanika direction)
And all get shocked
Finding she was not there
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Aanika throw herself in bed and crying
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Screen freeze on aanika face

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