Fan Fiction

UNFORGETTABLE LOVE :SHIVIKA (Part 20)

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Annika throw water on shivaay , karan , omru,RiYa cupped their mouth in shock
Sometym before

OM
Omri room
Shivaay enter in room and found crying gauri sitting on floor with support of bed shivaay came and sat beside her gauri notice him but didn’t say anything
S: gauri i know u r upset with me and u have to and u don’t want to talk to me and i am not forcing u to talk to me and i don’t come here for giving u any justification i came here to know about annika’s condition how is she now ??? And where is she ??? Plz tell me i really want to know about her and i promise i will not force her for anything jabse mujhe pta chala h ki wo mujhe bhool chuki h tabse me apne aap ko maaf nhi kr paa raha hu somewhere no only i m responsible for all this but ab me apni galti sudharna chahta hu i know u r vry much close to annika i saw same pain in ur eyes like mine 2 years ago don’t think i m clarifying my self no not at all but plz tell me how is she
Gauri didn’t utter a word for few minutes shivaay loose his hope so he stand up and went to door before he step out gauri spoke
G: she is fine now and karan bhai took her to her home hope this much information is enough for u(without looking toward him)
S:(smile) yaa thank u gauri
And he leave
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Next morning

Mahika place
Annika wake up and found herself on her bed then she remember yesterday incidence
Karan enter with breakfast in her hand
K: gud mrng madam
M: (confusingly) gud mrng what happened r u allright khi chhot to nhi lgi
K: me i m perfectly fine what about u
M: i m gud wht can happen to me
K:yaa ryt now have this breakfast and do rest here don’t u dare to step out until i come back
M: what and where r u going
K: OM and u r not coming with me
M: and may i know why
K: bcz u r not well
M: hey i m fine and i’ll get bore alone in this house
K: no u r not u can come to OM and but u can stay here and gather more information about mehta’s employes
M: oo yaa i remember u went to lab what happened there
Karan explain her everything in detail
M: okk u go and i’ll try to find out about the person
K: okkk
M: wait u didn’t tell anybody about my yesterday happening
K:(naughtly) noo i didn’t okk byy and don’t forget to take medicines like yesterday
M: okk(innocent child)
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OM
D:om how is gauri now is she f9 did u speak to her
O: actually dadi she didn’t utter a single word and in morning she went to out
D: but without doing breakfast beta she didn’t take dinner properly and now she skip her breakfast too its not good for her health
O: i know dadi but she is not listening to me
Karan enter and everyone notice him
Everyone try to find out annika but she is not with him
J: karan today u came alone where is mahira
K:actually she didn’t came
S:q is she fine
K:( confusingly) yaa she is but why r u asking about her like this
B: wo nothing actually gauri bhabhi told us about her health so we are just worried about her nothing else
K: okk she is fine actually she has some pending work to complete so she will come tmw
S: okk
Shivaay was restless bcz he is not able to see annika today
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O: shivaay now its evening and gauri didn’t come yet and even she is not receiving call
S: let me call khanna
S: khanna track gauri location immedietely
KH: sir gauri mam no. is locating in Mahakaal temple
S: okk
S: om she is in mahakaal mandir
O:what that temple is so far and she even didn’t took anycar with her i think i should go and pick her
S:yes u r ryt and i m also coming with u
O: okkk lets go
They reached the mahakaal temple
And searched her at every possible location but didn’t found her then they asked nearby people about her by showing her picture in phone
Omkara to preist : did u see this girl anywhere
Preist: this girl mmmmmmm yaa i remember she came here today
O: shivaay come here
S: what happened om did u find her
O: he saw her
S:so where is she now anyidea
Presiest : actually she fell uncincious on road than someone came and bring her with him
O: who do you know him
Pre:no i don’t know but that guy he said he know her and took her in his car
S: kya aapne car ka no. Note kiya yaa kuch aur anything
Pre: no i don’t know
S: okk thanks
O: shivaay now where we find her
S:relax om i call khanna and ask her to track her no. i know she must be fine and we will find her
O: yaa
S:lets go lagta h baarish hone waali h
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Sametym in OM
Rudra recieved a call on landline and he shocked after call he and bhavya immedietely step out in car
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Sametym in Mahika place
Annika in kitchen preparing something
Karan too came
M: so how is gauri now
K: she ihas temperature but now she is sleeping
M: waise where did u find her and why don’t u brought her to OM
K: when i was coming back i saw her crossing road and then she immedietly fall unconcious and i didn’t bring her to OM bcz that place was so far and so i brought her here and i informed in OM about her condition
M: theek kiya
K: waise what r u trying to make
He saw flour with full of water in bowl
M: actually i am making cake any problem
Karan laugh
She fumes
M: now why are u laughing
K:(supress his laughter) because isse cake toh nhi banega par kuch or kaam zaroor ho sakta h.
M: and wo kya
Karan cast his finger in batter and put it on her face and laugh hysterically
M: what the hell is this now u wait and watch and she empty full bowl in his head
K: angrily mahi you i will not leave u
And both start their tom and jerry fight and kitchen turn into war zone they destroyed the whole kitchen and run to the hall mahira found jug full of water on table she immmedietely took it and run behind karan both were lost in their silly fight
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Shivom and Ruvya came to the place together they were shocked seeing each other
Shivom:u both here
R: bhaiya someone called us and informed that gauri bhabhi is not well and she is there so we came here to pick her but u too
Shivaay : same here we are looking for gauri
But are u sure she is here
B: yes bhaiya he informed me about that place
O: okk come
Bhavya rang the door bell but no one open the door
Shivaay feel annika presence but he ignored his feeling bcz ryt now gauri is more important
S: wait look door is unlock so we can go
B: but bhaiya without permission entering someone house is not good na
S: its okk bhavya and shivaay open the door
Sametym karan stand in front of main door and mahi is just opposite to him with jug in her hand she throw water on karan he quickly move aside and shivaay open the door same tym and splash on shivaay face
All stand dumbstruck and omru, bhavya and karan cup there face
Mahira didn’t believe her eyes what happened here exactly and shivaay remove water on his face in anger but his anger melt when he saw who throw water on him
M: sorry mr. Oberoi actually it’s just mistake i don’t want to throw water on u actually it was all his mistake (pointing toward karan)
K(shockingly) mine
M: yes ur what need to move aside look what happened bcz of u now say sorry to him
K: (still in shock) but why will i its u who drenched him not me
S: guys its okk and no need to say sorry may we come in
M: yaa yaa sure come in
They all come inside
K: why u guys come here
Annika hit his head
M: duffer only u called them and informed about gauri remember
K: oo ya i remember

Suddenly all burst in laughter except annika and karan who were shocked bcz of their sudden reaction
K: guyz what happened why r u all laughing like maniac
Rudra between in laughter : did u see each other guys aapne apni kya halat banai hui hai
They notice their condition and laugh
Shivaay lost aftet watching annika laughing
A: wo sorry u guys go and meet gauri she is (there (pointing toward room) and we’ll go and change
B: okkk
They all move to gauri room and mahika move to respective room to make themself presentable
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Gauri wake up and found all
G: omkara ji humm
O: don’t say anything u just do rest and what if anything happened to u agar karan nhi aata toh pta nhi kya hota
G: omkara ji i m fine
S: gauri i m sorry its all my mistake
G: no bhaiya even i m sorry i overreacted plz forgive me all
B: bhabhi don’t say sorry we understood ur situation at that tym even we are sorry
R: yes bhabhi we all r responsible for all this
G: don’t say sorry ab iss barey me koi baat nhi karega
Karan enter
K: kis bare me
All shicked
B: nothing aisey hi
K: okk and how r u chutki
G: i m f9 bhai and thank u 4 brought me here and took care of me
Annika enter
A: bhai bhi bolti ho aur thanks bhi not done
K: yes chutki not done
Everybidy smile
G:sorry aage se nhi kahungi
K: thats like a good girl now have ur medicines and rest
O: shall we bring her back to OM its late now
B: yaa and everybody there must be worried
K:yaa u can but there is one problem
S: and what is that
K: wo actually it is heavily raining outside and she have fever so its not good to take her back now and it will take more than an hour to reach OM so i don’t think she should travel in such state
B: yaa bhaiya he is correct bhabhi need rest and i don’t think this rain will stop soon so
S: yes om they are ryt its not safe to travel in rain
O: okk if u don’t mind shall we…
A: its okkk u can stay here and we don’t have any problem with that
Shivaay is jumping from inside bcz now he will spend full night with her in her house and mentally say thank u to karan for his suggestion
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Everybody in hall including gauri
R: waise bhaiya i must say ur house is very beautiful and big
K: thanks but this is not my house actually its my frnds house
R: ohhh to only aap dono akele rehte h iss ghr me
M: actually yes only we two and sometym i get bore in this house no one here only we both
Shivaay didn’t say anything he is just lost in annika
B: kya hum dekh sakte h
K: yaa sure come i show u
( guys it is big house of 5 room guys he didn’t show kitchen to them bcz it was messed up)
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M: so u all like it
S(unknowingly): yes i love u
M: what
S: i mean i love ur house its beautiful
M:okkkkk
R: now i m hungry
G: even me too
B: yes me three
O: guys behave
K: ohhh its okk actually i forgot its dinner time
R: bhaiya lets go to the kitchen and prepare dinner for all of us
S:okkk so where is kitchen
K: that way
Okk we go to kitchen and prepare dinner till than u guys wait
Annika and karan: yaa kitchen(slowly)
Nooooooooo both of them jump out from their seat and shout together
Everybody jump from their position in shock
B: what happened
A: actually u can’t go to kitchen am i ryt
K: yaa ryt
S: may i know the reason
K: stammering) wo … wo actually
O: what r u trying to say
K:wo mahi batayegi (in one go)
M: me haa wo woo
Door bell ring
M: aa gaya
All : what comes
M: dinner
All: what
M: yes dinner actually i ordered dinner from nearby resturant
S:but its raining ourside than how comes
K: it is opposite to our house and so there is no problem
B: okkkkk
Annika open the door and take parcel from the delivery boy hand and handover him money
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Every body sit on dinning table and doing dinner silently
R: karan bhaiya if u don’t mind can i ask u one question
K: yaa sure
R: do u have any girlfrnd
Hearing this annika and karan dinner stuck in their throat and start coughing
Shivaay suddenly passes water to annika
S: have this r u okk
A: no thanks and i m f9 and yaa karan plz tell us do u have any grlfrnd(smirking)
K: what kind of question is this u know it very well whom i loved most and yaa i have
Annika and karan pass smile to each other and shivaay notice this and he feel jealous
G: so where is she
K: where is she ??? Where is she mahira tell her she is asking something
M: woo(stammering) i don’t know how do i know about ur girlfrnd
K: tumhe nhi pata hoga to kise pta hoga(smirking)
Everybody notice them and shivaay too whose face turn red because of jealousy but they can’t do anything for him
S:ye kya baatein kr rhe ho tum log have ur dinner its getting cold
M: yaaa yaa
Karan smile at her condition
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They were sitting in hall and talking about random stuff
Suddenly annika phone ring and she saw the caller id it shows kriyan and then karan and gave her i will kill u look she excuse herself and attend the call
She came after 15 minutes
K: whose call was that mahi
M: (angrily) ur mother
K: ohh my mother and what was she saying
M: she said shaadi kab karni hai happy
All shocked
All:shaadi
K: whose marriage mahira
M: hamari happy
Shivaay was speechless and even everyone
But karan was passing cheeky smile to her bcz he knows whose call is this
Shivaay left in anger and everyone too
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After some tym karan came to mahira room and find her roaming here and there in anger
K: what happened mahi
M: u came now what u want i warn u not to tell that to anybody but u dhol
K: what i did
M: subha se 1000 baar phone aa chuke hai
K: so
M looks at him angrily
Karan hug her shivaay came and saw karan hugging annika (he wants to kill him but he can’t do anything)so he left in anger
K: okkk i m sorry now relax actually i was worried that tym and sammy called me so i just told her everything in that state of mind (in same position)
She cool down
M:okkk i forgive u
K: have ur medicines
She have medicines
M: now listen to me carefully
They discuss about something for an hour and move back to their respective bed and slept
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Nxt morning
All came to hall but not shivaay
K: where is mr. Oberoi
R:actually bhaiya had an urgent meeting so he left early morning
O: but rudy rain
R: don’t worry rain has stopped
B: i think we should also leave now
Omri notice tension on their face so they agree
O: yes i think we should leave now
K: but chutki
G:don’t worry i m f9 bhai and everybody must be worried for us in OM
K: okk as u wish
O: thanks and byy
M&k: byyy
And they left

Screen Freeze

Precap

Bhavya came to know about Mahika identity
Shivika love start
Kriyan entry

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And once again thanks
Byyyy

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