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Home»Fan Fiction»UNEXPECTED-TWINJ (TWO SHOTS) SHOT-1
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UNEXPECTED-TWINJ (TWO SHOTS) SHOT-1

aamuBy aamuMarch 25, 201752 Comments7 Mins Read
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–UNEXPECTED–
i was sittin in my balcony remembering our past…
how dat days changed…
omour colourful life change to colourless…it was a sudden transportation ….
he is not wid me today…
but
our memories will always stay in my heart…
today its 2 years…m not able to find him nor he himself came….i cant beleive my life without him…
being a spy also i cant find him den wats d usefullness of my profession….
i was in deep thoughts wen my phone rang….
(on call)

me:ya..!
chinki: di cm home fast…!.
me:chinki wat happen..?
ch:tw di..maa again got attack
she said crying
i got a shock
i reply her dat m cming…
soon quickly i prepare myself to b strong..yes i had to b from 2 years as kunj had left…our marriage was goin to happen n suddenly he disappear…i m wating for h im from dis 2 year..no not only me chinki n usha aunty n manohar uncle tooo
usha aunty had got a problem of heart….
i went in my car….
‘wait’ i asked driver….n saw around
no one was der…as always i felt sm no1 seeing me…but no1 was der?
i said to resume..

N went to d hospital
At hospital:
After consoling dem i met usha aunty who was now better…her operation had been done…. I make her eep
Dr. Told me to bring sm medicine…
I left
Wen i came back…i saw sm1’s sound jumping from d room
I quickle asked
“Who is it..?” But strang no 1 was der…
I washed away my thought as i need to suppose to b quite as she was sleeping…
I again got into my world…no not mine OUR world MY N KUNJ’S world…
I remembered d last day we met…
After our haldi ceremony..

V were not suppose to meet…BUT..
FLASHBACK(no p.o.v)
Tw came out of f bathroom wearing a simple kurti as her phone rang..suddnly her phone rang…her lips curve into a smile…
Tw:yes hubby to b..,!
Ku:can v meet..?
“Wat…v r not suppose to right..?”
“Yaa but i want to…pls..silently”
“Okay at rose garden in 10 min”
“Hmm”
At garden.
“Wat happen kunj.? Anything serious..?”tw aske
d
“Promise me dat u will always take care of urself..?,” he spoke making her cnfused
“Wat..?”tw question

“Promise me now….?” He again spoke
“Ok…promise but i dont need to as u will always b doing dat.”tw spoke
“Wat if i will not der…but u hav to take care of urself…!_”said kunj again making her shock
Tw:wat happen kunj anything wrong…today u r so low
Ku: nothing…now i think v should go
Tw:wat ..? Hav u gone mad…? First u told me to meet n now dis…wat happen kunj..
He just hugged her
Ku,:tw always b happy..keep smiling…n take care of urself n pls ur n my both maa n papa…love u..
Tw smile but she felt strange…
He kissed her on forehead

Tw also gave a peck on his cheek…
N dey went…kunj turn to tw from far n shout TW I LOVE U N ALWAYS WILL B DOING DAT?
Tw smile

FLASHBACK END
He was so low dat tym…nor does he spoke about our marriage which was gonna happen in two days…it was last tym we met from den i had not met him
Now dying to c him….dying for his touch…for his talk..
“twinkle…?” Sm1 shouted
Oh i was again in d thought of MY kunj
“Yes” i said…
Oo my god…

It was mornin now…!
Dis r only my days from wen he had left..mwhole day n night only he…
“Wat happen..?” I asked worriedly
“Nothing mom.is going to smdischarge today so v r leaving…n thank u di for d help from 2 years”chinki said
“Yes beta u was always der wid ur although kunj left us..” Manohar uncle said
“First thank u uncle…n 2 uncle kunj had not left us…he had gone for a while..he will.surely cm..my ku will surely cm i hav faith in god he will return him back to me..”i said wid a proud smile my sked on my face
Coz actually now i m also lossing faith

On evening:

V r at sarna mansion after usha aunty discharge
Suddenly der house phone rang
I picked
“Yes..!”i asked
“…………..”no1 replied
“Whose dis..?”
“……..” Again no reply
I flt sm1 weeping on d phone silently

“Hey who r u….n y r u weeping…spoke up…?”
“…” No one spoke
N suddenly phone was cutted
I was shocked…v
Chinki was passing i asked her about it
“Di…i donno but dis type of phone calls r cming

From much tym…
“How much tym..?”i investigated…
Ofcourse i should b being a spy
“Probably 1 or half year”she said n leave as manohar uncle called her
I was Shocked…
Quickly i make a calll n order to track dat no.
I left out of d house…driver had gone for a lunch

I took a bicycle n left…as i had no tym
Soon i reached d destination
It was a farflung place where no1 would b living
Oh wait 1 house is der means sm1 living
I rang d bell
N sooon d door got open…………..
N

____________________________
TO B CONTINUED
_____________________________
Hello lovlies…!?
Guess who…
Achcha pata hai ki tum jaante ho
Its AAMU
????FINALLY BACK ????
Wat should i telll..
Okay first SORRY
To..?
To:
SAMEERA
ADEEBA
AASIYA
BABY

Sorry dat was a prank…
U know wat i m talking about….i just sent u dat msg so da u will b shocked cum surprise cum happy(hope so) to find me UNEXPECTEDLY
U all r special naa..! So wanna make u more happy on my return..
Sorry again if u got hurt(if any)

Happy naa…!
Ur AAMU is back…
CONGo TO U …! CONGO TO ME…MY EXAMS GOT OVER TODAY..???????????????????
HUUF…FINALLy
So…evry1
ALL D TU MEMBER…!
Sorry for not being in touh wid u alll from dus 3-4 months
I know how i spent widout u alll…widout dis best ff writers n readers
U ALL KNOW ME NA..! K bhul gaye??????
Okay so for new members…

HEY..! ALL OF U…
ITS AAMU HERE…
BACK AFTER D EXAMS…
WOULD U ALL B MY FRND…
HA..?! LEMME INTRODUCE MYSELF
M A BAKBAK QUEEN(u had got to know till now?)
A TWINJ FAN..NOT ONLY TWINJ
A BIG DEVAKSHIAN TOO(will soon b writing ff on dem tooo)
I HAD …
D love bu gave to my J
UNOON WALA mreakfast)b ISHQ was incidible…hope u alll will support me further tooo dis one is just “2 SHOT” for my re-entry in tei update..
So hold on i will b cming wid a story sooon probably 1 april…sooo…pls suppor me guys n shower ur love to me again on my new story tooo
Hope u alll enjoyed dis(a lthough it was not enjoyable)1
Will b soon uldate part 2 as i m tired now…just came after giving exam n writing as promised….
So now i m HUNGRY as i had gone to giv exam from dout
– 10( 10-1(widout breakfast)
Its already 3…nnow hungry sooo bahbye

N yaa again SORRY TO SAMEERA,ADEEBA,AASIYA N BABY TO HURT U…i was not suppose to…kust wanna surprise u alll…
N yaa drop ur cmnts below …..
Will b eagerly waiting…update after much tym.m?

Bahbye
Love u alll
Missed u alll
N yaa next will b updated tomorow only .i was suppose to upload today in 1 but i cant as its still left n i cant continue now…sorrry run ur brain horses…
To know more
Keep reading…
Dis is just 2 shot…
Ff will b writing soon..
Love yaaa??

Again sorry…(not to hurt u all)
Ta..ta
cmn if happy

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    52 Comments

    1. SidMin23 on March 25, 2017 11:37 pm

      Interesting and I hope twinkle find her kunj soon.

      • aamu on March 26, 2017 2:57 pm

        Thanx sidmin23..
        Glad u liked it?
        Than for d cmnt

    2. sweta on March 25, 2017 11:43 pm

      GOSHHHHH ammu……..u know I m so hpyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy…..nw only I was thinking dat ammu’s xams must b got over today n hoping to find ur article n I saw dis I was thinking bout u when I open dis I scrolled down n saw ur name n u know how hpyy I m feeling nw…….well u must b thinking who am I????well I m one silent reader from the ff junuun wala ishq……….well coming to d epi its really so amazing…..fabulous………waiting for the next epi dear…….
      N ya thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxx for making my night so amazing….by posting ur article……..I really missed u n ur writing dear…..oki lovvvvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu????????????????????

      • aamu on March 26, 2017 3:07 pm

        Thanx for ur sweet long n lovely cmnt sweta…reallly made me super happpppy…
        Dekha yaad kiya or aamu haazir.?
        Thanx…
        Will post next soooon..?.may b today or tomorrow
        U made.my night tooo wid ur cute cmnt…
        Actually read at night but bcoz o lazinesss replying now,?
        Love u?

    3. adeeba_zain on March 25, 2017 11:54 pm

      Hey aamu aisa prank kyun kiya tune…main kitna sad thi uss din aur main apni aamu jaan se kabhi angry ho sakti hun..bata tu….aur kamini tune aisa mazak krke bht badi galti ki h samjhi..??? isiliye ab tujhe promise krna padega ki ab tu aisa mazak kbhi nai karegi aur mujhe ek kissi de jaldi se???..aur sunn abhi mujhe bht neend arahi h..isiliye..maine tera os nai padha..kal pakka promise padh lungi..aur han meri jaan..ek baat yaad rakhna tu meri lyf h toh..main kabhi tere se angry nai ho sakti han main royi thi uss din jis din tune bakwass kiya tha..but abb main bht happy hun..chal bye..mujhe neend aarahi..aur kal tera os padhungi..
      Luv u..
      Byee

      • aamu on March 26, 2017 2:58 pm

        Awwwwie…so sweet of u adeebu…??
        Luv u tooo??

    4. maha on March 26, 2017 12:02 am

      awsm..intresting..plot
      post..soon

      • aamu on March 26, 2017 2:59 pm

        Thanx maha…
        Glad u liked it…n surely i will post next soon may b today or tomorrow,??

    5. Sohi on March 26, 2017 12:05 am

      Wow our Ammu is back again
      I’m really happy to see you back
      I was terriblely missing ur writings
      How ur exams went dear
      This ts is very good and interesting
      Waiting for the next update
      Do continue and post soon
      Bye

      • aamu on March 26, 2017 3:02 pm

        ??
        Thwnx sohi…
        M soooooo happy to c ur cmnt…
        N happy for d return of mine on TU…
        My xamz were awesome…? …
        Really rocked dem?
        N d next part will b post very sooon today or tomorrow…
        Actually its d 2 day of vacation…
        So bit busy as i hav to write….chat n watch movies(new release)
        So bohot saare kaam hai
        But dkn wrry will post ekdm sooon
        Thanx for ur lovely cmnt??

    6. Sameera on March 26, 2017 12:12 am

      HATE U huh understood just hate u but i LOVE YOU more than tha soooo i am forgiving u for this huh u almost took my life by saying u were not going to come huh but yess u are back my bak bak queen missed u sooooooooooooooo much can’t even describe babes yesss loved this shot wanna know kunj reason behind this soooo upload soon as I’ll be waiting for it and yesss my new ff name is kuch to hua hai ???do read that k ….
      Aur kuch bolna tha Kya Umm yess don’t forget i hate u ????….
      Ba byeeee … Wanna see u soon ….
      So just post the next one soon ?????

      • aamu on March 26, 2017 3:13 pm

        Thank u shammmu for ur cute cmnt…
        Jldi post kardungi…m free but not free..
        I mean boho saare kaam hai…
        Exams thi itne dino se movies…serials nahi dekhe
        To wo coverup karna hai..firbhi jldi post kardungi?..may b tomorrow
        Love u toooooo
        N muj pata hai tumhare ff k baare me…me pagti nahi thi lrkin information rakhti thi…
        N can u pls do a favor ek chota sa summary chahiye..
        Read nahi karpauungi i think pehle se…plshhhhhhhh???

        Love u tooooooo n surely read

    7. Nisha on March 26, 2017 12:32 am

      Nice

      • aamu on March 26, 2017 3:14 pm

        Thans nisha?

    8. Presha on March 26, 2017 12:42 am

      Hey wlcm back
      ….
      Its just awsome yaar…
      Loved it.
      .
      Too good

      • aamu on March 26, 2017 3:15 pm

        Thanx prisha DI(i think u r elder)
        Glad u liked it….
        Thanx for ur lvly cmnt
        ???

      • Presha on March 26, 2017 3:34 pm

        May be…
        I m 16 ab tum dekh lo elder hoon ya nahii

      • aamu on March 27, 2017 11:30 pm

        Ooo me 15 n half…
        Bohot kam fark
        So only PRISHA?
        sweet name btw

      • Presha on March 28, 2017 12:56 am

        Thank u …
        Well my nami is Prashansha nd my friend call me Presha as they think prashansha is a long name

    9. zainab_shaikh on March 26, 2017 1:54 am

      Interesting….post nxt 1 soon

      • aamu on March 26, 2017 3:18 pm

        Thanx zainab…
        Willl post ay b tomorrow

    10. Simiyy on March 26, 2017 4:54 am

      Welcome Back Aamu
      Amazing start post soon

      • aamu on March 27, 2017 11:32 pm

        Thanx simiiyy..
        Glad u liked it?

    11. _Manu_ on March 26, 2017 9:33 am

      Aamu diiiiiiiii finalllllllyyyyyy u r back soooo happy on cloud 9 u can’t even imagine soo happy I am was missing u sooo much ur bakbak everything and must say u r back with a bang superb stry just awesome…waiting for ur ff also post soon…hope u didn’t forget me

      • aamu on March 27, 2017 11:36 pm

        Thanx MANU…
        Thanx for ur warmth welcm
        But sorry reallllly very sorry
        I dint recognise u…
        I donno dimag pr bohot zor daala fir bhi…!
        Tum hi bata do..
        N pls sorry again
        N again sorry
        N apni intro jarur karana
        Tumhe mere bakba pasand hai?..?
        Like seriously
        Waise me b apni bohot badi fan hu apni iss ada se hi???…
        Thabx again n infinitely sorrry

    12. adeeba_zain on March 26, 2017 10:03 am

      Hey aamu maine finally tera os padha its amazing yrr..aur kunj ne aisa kyu kiya yrrr jaldi post kr nxt part i m eagerly waiting for it..aur sunn meri bakbak queen mujhe kabhi sorry mat bolna..samjhi..chal bieee

      • aamu on March 27, 2017 11:38 pm

        Thanx adeebu…
        Aaj post karne waaali thi but nahi kar payi i.allah kal?

    13. Fatimaa. on March 26, 2017 11:10 am

      Heyy aamu…
      I loved this…its amazing..
      Glad dat u r back…i was a regular reader of ur ff…but silent reader?..
      Now i ll surely comment….
      Post soon..love u

      • aamu on March 27, 2017 11:40 pm

        Hey fatima…
        Welll thanx for d cmnt…
        N soooo happy to find one more silent reader…now pls keep cmntng?
        Willl post very sooon mau b tomoroww….
        Love u toooo????

    14. Cp on March 26, 2017 12:01 pm

      Hey I don’t know if you know me or not. But anyways I am Cp☺☺☺and a regular reader here……???and glad that you are back??…well the episode was awsome and suspensefulll….post next soon??

      • aamu on March 27, 2017 11:42 pm

        Thanx cp…
        Well.u kmow me…
        Thanx for ur cmnt…
        Glad u liked it…
        Will post soon
        Keep reading…enjoying n yaa cmntng tooo????

    15. Ramya on March 26, 2017 12:38 pm

      Aamu u r back
      I’m so so I mean hell happy to see u back
      N congratulations for completing ut exams
      N ha i missed u
      Awesome amazing

      N I think dat phone call is of kunj
      Lovely
      Love u keep smiling

      • aamu on March 27, 2017 11:44 pm

        Hey ramya…??
        Sachvhi soo hapoy to c ur cmnt…
        Thanx for dat…
        N ur guesss is…..

        Y should i tellll u…
        Keep guessing n cmntng
        Love u..
        N willl post may b tomoroow??

    16. Shalini15 on March 27, 2017 12:00 am

      Hi Aamu my partner happy to see you back ??????? but this is not fair you talk with all but not with me I’m not your friend? ??????????? par koi nahi I’m happy that you will write another story.

      By the way it was awesome mind blowing fabulous episode. Loved it’s concept nd plot. Do continue soon.

      Lots of love ? ? ? ? ?

      • aamu on March 27, 2017 11:49 pm

        Oye my shalu…
        nalaaz ho gayi..??
        Well me kisi se baat ni kar rahi thi…starting me kart thi bu not after december…n fis prañk was sudden …
        During my exams..i dont had tym so eid whom i talked last..i just msgd one dst m not cmimg back on TU…bidding bye forever n just copied it to sm other…
        Sachchi….
        U r my frnd yaar..
        Aisa kyu socha????
        Welll ab ready ho jao..din raat pareshaan karugi????

        Thanx for ur cmnt ….
        Love u partner??

    17. Purnima.agrawal30 on March 27, 2017 1:10 am

      AMAZING interesting shocking epi

      • aamu on March 27, 2017 11:50 pm

        Thamx purnima???

    18. Purvi128 on March 27, 2017 9:54 pm

      OYEEEEEEE HOYYEEEEEEEEEEE CELEBRATION TIME…………..
      YAYYYYYY YIPPPIIEEEEEE
      AAAMUUUUUUU IS BACKKKK…… OHHH GOSH YARRRRR WAS WAITING FOR U LIKE A MAD PERSON…… TU SOCH NHIII SAKTI HOW MUCH I MISSED YOU… ND HAAN WESY BHI HUM DONO TWINS HAIN KYUN..???? SAARI LIKES HAMARI SAME HAIN…… TOH TU MUJY MAAF KER DY GI NA FOR LATE COMMENT.. PLSSS MAAF KER DY….
      EK MNT EK MNT……. ME TUJHE YAAD BHI HUN YAAA NHIIII?????? BHOOL TOH NHI GAYI MUJHY HAAAN?????????? MUJHSE WAIT NHI HOTA.. MERA COMMENT PADH KE FORAN REPLY KERNA…
      OR TERE EXAMS KESY HUAY????????????
      BTW TERA COMEBACK TOH BHTTT JHAKKASS HAII MATLAB KYA SHOT THA…
      AMAZING SUPERB MINDBLOWING EXCELLENT FABULOUS… WORDS NHI MIL RAHYYYY… ITNI EXCITEMENT HORAHI HAI KI TU WAPIS AAGAYII…… SHOT 2 JALDI POST KER CAN’T WAIT…
      SORRY EMOJIS NHI DAAAL SAKTI. PC SE KER RAHI HUN COMMENT…..
      LOVE YOU SIOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH DARLING… MY JAAAANN…
      LOVE U TONNES……….

      • aamu on March 27, 2017 11:27 pm

        Oye judwa behna????????
        Soo happpu to seee ur cmnt yaaar…
        First o alll thanx for dis cute n long cmnt…
        N second tuje thappad maru kya..?
        Me TU se leave li thi apne dimag se nahi…
        Yaad hai…
        Teri bday 5 november smthng i mean november me hi hai..
        Fir tere favourite celebrities same as me..
        N
        Etc
        Etc
        Etc
        Exams bojot avmchche gaye….
        N c m back…
        Dekh net slow hai fir b reply kar rahi hu…??
        Chalo bahbye…..
        Willk post soooon
        Aaj karne waali thi kar nahi payi mayb tomorrow?

      • aamu on March 27, 2017 11:29 pm

        Or ek baat or
        Love u dher saaara?????????

    19. Twinj on March 28, 2017 11:50 am

      Hey aamu,
      Wow that was amazing…love it to the core…muahhhhhhh kya shot tha….suspensefull….kunj ne yesa kyu kiya….kyu….pata nai…plzzz jaldi post karna plzzzz can’t wait aur plzzz ek request iss ka ending na happy ending plzzz tumare ff junoon wala isqh ka ending yoh abhi tak nai bhool le…aur sry for cmting so late…may na late comer hochuki hu…maaf kardena
      Plzzzz post soon

      Loads of love♥♥♥
      Twinj

      • aamu on March 28, 2017 4:40 pm

        Hey akku…
        Thanx for liking dis story n cmntng…
        N no worry…
        Kuch sovha hai to achcha hi socha hoga na..!
        Abtune bola to no sad ending…
        Post karne waali thi lekin tym ni mil raha..so very soon post karungi
        …??
        Love u

    20. Swasti on March 29, 2017 8:06 am

      Hii aamu,
      Pechana ki bhool gayi…miss bhi kiya ki nai pata hae miss nai kiya mujhe par maine toh bahat miss kiya.Aaj may bahat jyada khush hu tu wapas ahgayi na issliye.

      Kya likti hae tu.Am in love with ur writing.Chaal aaj propose kardeti hu teri writing ko.

      Dear aamu ki writing,
      Mujhe pata nai kese par mujhe tumse pyaar hogaya hae.I am in love.I love u.U r just awesome amazing.

      Late honeke liye maaf kardena.I was a bit buzy.

      POST VERY SOON

      • aamu on March 31, 2017 9:24 pm

        Hey swasti..
        How can u just think like dat…ofcourse i remmber u….
        Meri bakbak queeen…??
        Ofcourse i remember u…
        N dats soooooo sweeeeettttt offf uhhh…!!.
        Meri writinbko letter

        Reply from.aamu writing
        Thank u dear swasti…!.i m gkad u liked it…n i will post my next chapter very soooon dont worry

        ……
        Or haaa chatter box ab tera koi bahana nahi u hav to register now…pls mere liye..?
        Tumne promise kiya tha jab tak me ni aati tum nahi karogi…now m back…plsh…tumhe register karna hoga…..
        Love u chatty
        ..?

    21. SidMin on March 31, 2017 6:54 pm

      Just Loved it awesome … The plot looks interesting .. sorry fir the late comment I had my exams ..
      Love you post son 🙂

      • aamu on March 31, 2017 8:39 pm

        Thamx sidmin….
        N last shot post karna hai..half likha hai half likhne kaa mood hinni banta but dont worry kal tak post ho jaaega?
        N haaaa…!!!!.pls madam….
        Apna ff post kardo…
        Pls..pls..pls
        I asked for summary from sohi she said dat telll u to post ur ff den she will giv me..
        Pls post kardo..
        N yaa ho sake to summary b dedena …plsh..??
        Love uh?

    22. baby on April 1, 2017 11:59 pm

      Hiii ammiee jaan ….. 🙂
      Dekh ab yeh terI baby appi naa ek late lateef ban gayi hai…..
      Har cheez mein last bilkul always late….
      Or naa cmnt bhi kya pad bhi ni pati hai…..
      Yrrr…m soooo srrieee first of all to b dis mch late….after u telling me to hv a look at it…..sch mein….

      Well mein kya kahun voh prank ke baare mein I was sad n nervous nt now coz of ur dis surprise n all…mmm soooo sooooo happy dat I cant express……
      N also now I wuld luv to give my jaan a punishment 🙂
      Soooooo dear ur punishment is u hv to write a ff….n post it for us….asap…. 🙂
      Yayyayyyyy m soooo vry excited… 🙂

      Woohhoooo yaar dis 2s ohhh god it was soooo emotional sooo sad sooo cute dat I was jst crying….cant w8 to read more……

      N ek or punishment u hv to msg shonnaa dii to post her ffa asap….well maybe she will b posting by 6th of 7th bt stilll plsss u need to msg her n ask her to post her ff…will u… 🙂
      Hehhee
      Fasa diya naa mne or haan sohi di se bhi yrr……chal bieee

      Love u sooooo mch….cant w8 to talk to u agn….in a flow…. 🙂
      N teri ffs padne ka intezaar hai humein jaan….. 🙂 loved d fs to core…..beautiful it was….. 🙂

      • aamu on April 2, 2017 3:59 pm

        Thanx dammmu
        For dis evrlasting long cmnt..
        N dekho kinni jldi maanli punishment post kar diya….
        N aapki late cmnt ki punishment ye hai ki aap koi b ff likhe.(i hink u r not writing ..right,???) .i mean start karo pls…
        Pls ….n thanx for cmnt at last tooo
        N for lomg cmnt tooo
        Lobe u aapi???????

      • baby on April 2, 2017 9:59 pm

        Wattttt….nopssieee cant start any ff I guess….will trymy best for an os…..I posted intro n all….bt still abhi m on break coz vhi puraana rsn mera pc kharab hai….. will post soon jst for u aami…. 🙂
        Love u…. 🙂
        N madam aapne konsi ff post ki hai..?

      • aamu on April 3, 2017 12:02 pm

        Ok try for it…
        N no mene koi start nahi kiya..
        M soo disappointed….i got very less cmnt in d shot-2…
        So m not going to start …may b after 10-15 days…i will try..but cant promise…
        I made out soo muv efforts…skipped my lunch n wrote dat n got only 12-13 cmnt..???…
        So…may b i m not going to do anything right now..?

      • baby on April 3, 2017 2:09 pm

        Areeeee ammi….my jaan aisee sad nahi hote…yahan par most of d ppl r from class 12th or unke boards ke exam chal rahein hain….soo dats d rsn y we ppl r nt getting cmnts….jo log hain voh sab try kar rahein hain dat dey cmnt..or dekhna kuch silent readers bhi jaag jayenge n surely u ll get cmnts….thoda w8 kar n plss ek ff start kar..n dont skip ur lunch…. 🙂
        Ohkkk……love u sooo mch…hope to c u soon wid a ff… 🙂

      • aamu on April 3, 2017 5:07 pm

        If dey r having xams den i will start after april…
        I got very disappointed wid d response…
        Sorry for d trouble..
        N yaa love u tooo
        N m likh rahi thi isliye skip kiya tha…!

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