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Home»Fan Fiction»UNDENIABLE DESIRE – PART-8
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UNDENIABLE DESIRE – PART-8

Aastha_ReddyBy Aastha_ReddyApril 2, 201750 Comments6 Mins Read
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“Aah……..”-Rudra shouted from washroom after meeting the horrible himself.
Om awaked from his beauty sleep . Whole family gathered in his room to check on their baby Oberoi.
“Om… long hair is your speciality but why this long mustache!!”- Shivaay was stunned after watching the long line under the sharp nose of his artist brother.
“ha ha…. “- Saahil laughed along with Soumya. The culprits are in open.
“I am Omkara.. you guys made me look like a Samurai from Japan”- Om watched the mirror.
Rudra came out from wash room to see a fare going in his room.
” ha ha ha….”- Soumya laughed at him.
“I know you guys have made my face as a world map with all colours”- Rudy was cool,”I don’t mind it is Holi today”.
“We all did it!!”- Pinky denied positively.
” Soumya and Saahil did the amazing job”- Shivaay gave the credit.
Annika smiled at Saahil. He is enjoying with Oberoi . She need nothing more in her life as long as her baby brother is happy.
“Your face is looking like a canvas Om threw after misusing it”- Shakti made fun of Rudy. Rudra tried to wash it away but the colour is adamant not to leave his handsome face.
He decided to leave it for looking colourful on Holi.
“Sumo.. I will not leave you”- Rudra saw as Soumya clicked both their painted face with her mobile.
Soumya walked up to Saahil and pulled his cheek fondly.
“You are so sweet and cute Saahil”- She praised the brain of the little child.
Saahil looked at Soumya …his secret crush…
“beta!! mann main doosra ladoo phoota”- His inner soul remained.
Rudra get hold of Soumya and the tom jerry fight started only to result in a broken mobile.
Dadi gave a long lecture about Holi and fun.
Shivaay dragged Annika in to pool side by the back door with out gaining attention.
“Again you dared to drag me”- Annika is super angry as she wanted to hear the long boring speech of Dadi as it was very interesting for her.
“I am very daring Annika”- Shivaay threw Annika in to the waist deep water filled pool .
“Help!! help!!”- her shout attracted many attention and Shivaay ran in to his room.
“Didi… why are you taking bath in open pool”- Rudra ‘s logic failed,”fully dressed”.
“I fell in the pool Rudra”- Annika hided the real reason.
The bhagad billa spread all raita and went at a helicopter speed to his room. She wanted to give him a piece of her mind.
Shivaay smiled after getting support from an angry Annika
standing in his room.
Despite of all the problems in their life they are enjoying the art of living. All thanks to the new addition to his family.
————————————————
“Shivaay threw Annika in to the pool”- Omkara the truth speaking monk told.
“Did they both fight?”- Shakti was more worried for the well being of his son.
“Yes…they did”- Dadi used her experience,” but it was a love fight”.
“Enough of Oh My Maata.. now all have breakfast and we will rock the celebration”- Pinky looked at her Jethani. Her disease is spreading among other like a viral fever.
Annika, Soumya and Prinku joined the breakfast table.
Soumya attacked the aloo paratha looking at an annoyed face of a protein shake Oberoi.
————————————————
Saahil sat on the provided seat looking at all as they applied colour on each other and on him adding more and more love.
The latest songs from all movies with Holi sequence played in loud sounds and they twirled.. danced on its beat till they get tired.
Saahil tried to go away from there to stumble against the slippery floor.
“careful”- his SSO managed to balance him on… kept his walking stick on side and carried him in his strong and protecting arms.
Annika ran after the retreating figures.
“Thank you Billuji”- she voiced her feeling out.
” I saved my brother”- he has some duty for Saahil.
She had nothing more to say so went to bring some juice for Saahil.
” Next Holi.. we both will dance on the latest songs of your favourite songs”- Shivaay Singh Oberoi promised a little child…his friend.
The new maid Gayathri survived her first heart attack as she placed the bowl of juice on the side table of the bed.
Annika reentered the room to check on Saahil.
“Annika … come to my room”- the good boy asked with a naughty smirk on his face.
“I am coming”- Annika replied instantly..
She don’t want create a scene in front of family. The bhagad billa is searching chances to touch her.. drag her.. pick her up in his arm. She obeyed him in a single time.
“we are going to Delhi today evening”-Shivaay informed after a few calls.
“You don’t have to come with us Billuji”- his pet name adorned with respect from her mouth sounded like the Ramayana in Srilanka.
“I want to Annika”- his Tadi back to form.
“congratulation … you are progressing in a right track”- he teased tongue in cheek.
She gazed every where except him.
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“Shivaay .. I am needed in Bareilly”- Om waited for his request to be granted.
“The owner”- Shivaay couldn’t complete the sentence.
” Some Thakur promised to vacant the occupied land”- Om was more desperate to earn 500 crores from this new project.
“We will be going in the afternoon Om”- Shivaay added Om in his plan .
“I can manage alone Shivaay”- Om assured.
Shivaay knew he is capable. He is very strong and can manage any situation.
” Not me .. its we”- Omkara threw a question through his eyes.
“Saahil and Annika are also going with us”- Shivaay told.
“I will manage.. you proceed with Saahil”- Om is also an Oberoi and best at his attitude.
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“Om bhaiyya”- Saahil came and Om bend on his knee,”you are looking like Badri with this pony tail”.
“Barun Dhawan”- Rudra tried to remember the hero who had short hair on his head.
“No Allu Arjun”- Saahil watches South movies too.
“Your hair is so smooth and strong”- Saahil praised.
Annika took blessing from elders before hopping in the car with Saahil.
Om and Shivaay took the front seat. Dadi smiled at them.
Pinky ran to the temple at home to give a new wish list to God.
Omkara wanted to stop at the art gallery to instruct his helper.
Shivaay took a right turn to reach his private jet.
“Wow… helicopter”- Annika was excited too along with Saahil .
“Its a chopper”- Shivaay showed his class.
No one heard him as he was left behind. He hurried towards the jet to see them sitting seat belt buckled.
Omkara reached the railway station to catch the evening train to Bareilly.
———————————————— Rudra was left behind to carry the shopping bags of Oberoi ladies. His easy targets are absent so he went to hug Dadi.
“With whom will I sleep tonight”- He thought aloud.

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    50 Comments

    1. Sairan on April 2, 2017 12:35 am

      Fantastic

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:15 pm

        Thank you. Sairan.

    2. Shree on April 2, 2017 12:41 am

      Awesome update Aastha………read all d prts bt today got d tym to cmnt…….. sorry fr tat…….really nice storyline

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:16 pm

        Thnx. Shree my brownie…

    3. Samm on April 2, 2017 12:48 am

      loved it tons 🙂

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:17 pm

        keep loving it Samm… thnx.

    4. banita on April 2, 2017 2:37 am

      Awesome….. i’m a silent reader read al d prts al r just fantastic… post nxt prt soon dear

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:18 pm

        Banita … I will post soon.

    5. shivika on April 2, 2017 2:46 am

      Superbbbbb

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:20 pm

        Thnx. Shivika dear…

    6. nikitajai on April 2, 2017 6:17 am

      It is awesome dii….. Ek dum jhakass….

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:23 pm

        Hain… Maahi ka nasha utra nahi kya!! Nikku ek dum jhakaas!!!!

    7. Anu on April 2, 2017 7:17 am

      Aaj Mann me doosra laddu phoota!! Lol??
      Asthu gaaru Are we gonna see Gauri the next update?? If so yay!!

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:26 pm

        Yay… Anu tumhare mann mein to numerous ladoo phoot rahe hain.
        Sure Gouri is coming soon.

    8. Arpita on April 2, 2017 8:59 am

      “Mann main ladoo futa” Astha baby.tumhe dairymilk shots itna pasand he kya???? ??? just kidding. I also love that chocolate.
      Tumhari writing bhi chocolate jaisi he . Ekdum sweet.I really enjoy it.??????????????????

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:31 pm

        Arpita… I love Cadburry a lot.. kiss me .. close your eyes.. miss me … I can feel your smile on my finger tips … happiness in your eyes….lolz… Thnx.

    9. diyas on April 2, 2017 10:28 am

      good didi…please update soon…

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:33 pm

        Ok Anisha love very soon…

    10. Bhavana on April 2, 2017 10:58 am

      Superbbbbbbbb

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:34 pm

        Thnx. Bhavana.

    11. Lilly on April 2, 2017 11:39 am

      Superb….

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:38 pm

        Thnx. Lilly.

    12. fffan1234 on April 2, 2017 12:05 pm

      Super awesome…

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:39 pm

        Fffan…. thnx.

    13. Akansha on April 2, 2017 1:26 pm

      awesome Astha di

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:41 pm

        Hayee… Akansha you too… I felt nice to see your cmt. on my ff.

    14. Jerry_36 on April 2, 2017 1:29 pm

      It’s so sweet. Adore this one to the fullest. The descriptions were a treat to read.

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 1:47 pm

        Thnx. Jerry for enjoying my efforts and encouraging me.

    15. Chavi on April 2, 2017 2:31 pm

      D way u described is superb yaar..keep going..

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 4:32 pm

        Thank you Chavi….

    16. alekhika20 on April 2, 2017 2:34 pm

      Fab

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 4:34 pm

        Thnx. Alekhika…

    17. Charitha on April 2, 2017 2:36 pm

      Super

    18. Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 4:36 pm

      Thnx. Charitha…

    19. Surbhi Sharma on April 2, 2017 6:25 pm

      Astha di . Amazing . Loved it . Sorry couldn’t comment on your ff ‘s last part coz of my project . Really sorry . This one is amazing . Loved it . Post soon ha .

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 7:12 pm

        Thnx. Surbhi…
        Its ok… but do leave at least one word for me on every part.

    20. Shivika on April 2, 2017 6:59 pm

      Awesome…Superb…
      SSO here is too cute…
      Post d nxt asap… 😉

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 9:57 pm

        Shivika.. SSO is always Tadibaaz .. only some times cute.. my cute brother SSO.. so I am not gonna make him bad ever…in this story.

    21. vincy on April 2, 2017 7:25 pm

      Awesome

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 9:59 pm

        Vincy..thnx dear.
        Shivika are like the character of your dp in my story…

    22. shuklarashi on April 2, 2017 7:54 pm

      Awesome

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 10:02 pm

        Rashi… thnx.

    23. diyas on April 2, 2017 9:19 pm

      wow…niceabout u dear sis…

      • Astha_Reddy on April 2, 2017 10:04 pm

        Anisha… its your second time…for the same part.
        You seems very addicted to my ff lolz….

    24. navz on April 2, 2017 11:51 pm

      Wow aastha..u have added south indian touch(allu arjun)…itz superb.day by day i am becoming fan of ur writings.nyc storyline yaar.soo gauri is going to be entered next…….quite exciting…post d next soon…gn……
      Sry for late commenting.??

      • Astha_Reddy on April 3, 2017 9:08 am

        I am from A.P so my locality touch… was Allu Arjun…
        Thank you…

    25. navz on April 2, 2017 11:55 pm

      Aastha r u married?? Sry for asking personal matters over here.i seen have in written update page that u r married….dont think otherwise .just out of excitement. I have asked it.
      Gn..sd

    26. Astha_Reddy on April 3, 2017 9:05 am

      Navya I am not married. It was a MU in TU page… lolz…

      • navz on April 3, 2017 4:35 pm

        Kk…..bdw i am also frm vizag.
        Post d next part soon haa

    27. Fffan1234 on April 4, 2017 8:19 am

      Very nice. Hope none of the oberoi family turn NB

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