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Home»Fan Fiction»UNDENIABLE DESIRE – PART-4
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UNDENIABLE DESIRE – PART-4

Aastha_ReddyBy Aastha_ReddyMarch 27, 201732 Comments4 Mins Read
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“Sir want to talk with you”- Mishraji passed the mobile to his boss.
“Annika”- his voice echoed in her ear.
“I am home safe, you can’t ask any money after releasing me from your clutch “- Annika sounded confident.
This man is driving her crazy right from their first meeting. His damn husky voice is enough for her to recognise him.
“Shivaay Singh Oberoi speaking” – he threw his name adorned with a surname.
“Annika”- she became polite.
“Full name “-he ordered to know more details.
“Annika”- came the same reply.
“Only Annika”- He sounded disappointed, “can you meet me in half an hour”?.
“If you are not planning to kidnap me again”- she is always straight forward.
“Not you , this time Saahil is with me”- He put his terms and condition.
“Just send me the address you bhagad billa”- she got ready to kill him in bare hands.
Saahil is her sole reason of existence now. She will not leave that Billu in peace. he will regret meeting her.
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Her “CHAMPA”came to halt at the lion’s den.
Last night she came here…no was brought forcefully by that Kidnapper.
The large gate, black dressed security,a white fountain among the green plants and colourful flowers, the large statue at entrance …all things are unchanged from last evening…
“Bhabhi wel-come”- Rudra chirped but pulled away from her by a tug from Omkara.
“Be aware of her Rudy” Om warned,”she bashed Shivaay Singh Oberoi yesterday”.
They can call her , tease her, make fun of her , hug her, fight with her after her marriage with Shivaay , their Bhaiyya. They have to gain some more patience for that. They move aside and Annika entered.
“Saahil”- She shouted from the stair going towards his room.
“Annika didi I am sitting in the pool side playing with water”- Saahil answered back.
Annika entered the pool side from a room, white curtains blocked her way, she parted it and then saw both of them sitting, leg deep in water and empty ice cream bowl in floor beside them smiling at her.
“Didi SSO is very nice”Saahil became the free advocate of his new found friend.
He is a child and ice cream is enough to fool him.
“Saahil, he is a kidnapper” She tried to put some sense in her brother.
“I love adventure and he kidnap me in style didi, brought me in this huge house and ate ice cream with me”- Saahil is also a fighter.
Saahil had experienced a Hindi film , specially screened for him. He is happy for that.
Annika dragged him down stair away from that dangerous man.

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“Dadi , we are going home”- Annika felt right to inform the old smiling lady.
Pinky looked at her from distance. Annika walked up to her folded her hand and apologised not even being at fault.
Hold Saahil safely and came out to sigh at the sight….
Champa is sick. Her back wheel punctured.
OmRu hided behind a car. Saahil winked at them.
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“Annika didi ..I will drop you home”- Rudra volunteered.
Dadi stamped him feet.
“Ouch!!”- escaped from Rudy.
“Shivaay can drop her back. He know her exact address”- Pinky created an opportunity, “Rudra is a child. He may lost way”.
The devil smirked at her.
———————————————–
Annika opened the back door. Saahil took his place there.
“I am not your driver”-,Shivaay mentioned looking at her.
She came to sit in front seat, beside him .
A car journey can be this pleasurable, shivaay had never experienced it before.
The distance between their home seemed to decrease. The silent journey finished soon.
“Bye”- she went inside. Saahil followed.
Shivaay knew then she is more Tadibaaz then he is.
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“Annika asked sorry from me”- Pinky informed her husband.
“She is very nice and I want her to join our family”- Jhanvi added.
“She is very stubborn “-Shakti showed them the path full of thorns.
“Shivaay Singh Oberoi loves hard task only”- OmRu ended.
Shivaay entered his room to get a small golden thread lying in floor… numerous moon attached to it. her bracelet… Annika came to pool side through his room. Suddenly his nostril filled with a very nice smell , Annika’s perfume from the moon bracelet.

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    32 Comments

    1. Sairan on March 27, 2017 10:39 pm

      Superbbbbb.. Awsomeeee

    2. shravanrishi on March 27, 2017 10:43 pm

      superb

    3. Adhya on March 27, 2017 10:48 pm

      Wow..excellent…loved it dear

    4. Miss. Murty on March 27, 2017 10:50 pm

      I loved it

    5. shivika on March 27, 2017 10:52 pm

      Wowwwwwww

    6. Jerry_36 on March 27, 2017 10:52 pm

      Oh ! Once again you wrote amazingly. Very nice chappy. Waiting for next…☺

    7. thedreamsoul on March 27, 2017 10:57 pm

      This is beautiful .

    8. Purva on March 27, 2017 11:00 pm

      Awesome….. Post next part ASAP

    9. vincy on March 27, 2017 11:11 pm

      Awesome

    10. Neha-17 on March 27, 2017 11:15 pm

      Nice update…dear

    11. ShivikaSince2016 on March 27, 2017 11:16 pm

      I am in love with your work and the suspense is killing it

    12. Arpita on March 27, 2017 11:39 pm

      He astha baby??? It was really nice plz post the next part soon ASAP

    13. Surbhi Sharma on March 27, 2017 11:41 pm

      Hayeeee !! Meri astha di , love u ?? kya ff likha . Dil khush kar dita . ( punjabi mein ) . Loved it . Post soon plzz . No you have to post soon . This is your behen’s order …?????

    14. Bhavana on March 27, 2017 11:42 pm

      Finally! a longer update… Eagerly waiting for the nxt.. Update asap!???

    15. Ahaana on March 27, 2017 11:50 pm

      Awesome dear???

    16. Shrutika on March 28, 2017 5:54 am

      Amazing

    17. Setu on March 28, 2017 6:55 am

      Awesome

    18. Lilly on March 28, 2017 6:59 am

      Superb epi

    19. Shivika1233 on March 28, 2017 8:19 am

      It’s awesome waiting for next

    20. Kiki on March 28, 2017 8:25 am

      It’s awesome Astha

    21. Shivika on March 28, 2017 10:02 am

      Awesome….Tadibaaaz Anika…. 😉
      Waiting fr d nxt…

    22. nikitajai on March 28, 2017 10:11 am

      Mast update dii… I am reading it almost five times…. You rocked dii…

    23. sumitha on March 28, 2017 10:47 am

      nice dear……..

    24. M. Harshitha on March 28, 2017 11:42 am

      Hey Astha , dis is Harshitha reddy. I should concede that your story line is damn good

    25. Charitha on March 28, 2017 1:03 pm

      Nyc

    26. Archiya on March 28, 2017 1:04 pm

      Astha darling
      So finally after telling u so many times, u are up with ur FF.. m glad u r up with one
      I don’t know whom i love more, you ,shivika or the OF.. hmmm i conclude tat i love u more.. why???
      For giving such an adorable FF… i totally completely loved loved it..
      I read very few FF’s , its quite difficult to keep me glued.. an ur FF glued me so well that i read all ur 4 parts in like 5 mins .. please increase the length dear

      Shivay in love with anika from first sight, an shivay is softer an anika is more tadibaaz here.. seems interesting

      Now coming to some positive criticism, I felt there was less continuity in the scenes…. but after reading all 4 parts, i understood that u tend to keep it that way…

    27. alekhika20 on March 28, 2017 1:20 pm

      Superb part

    28. Anu on March 28, 2017 5:10 pm

      Asthu gaaru!! Love you darling! I am totally in love with ur FF.. Shivaay going head over heels for annika.. I love this Shivaay!!
      I know it’s not easy but wud love it if u have lengthier updates dear! I din want to stop here.. just felt like reading non stop..
      Can’t wait for the next part!!
      Thanks for taking efforts to our request and giving us this beautiful FF!! Love u loads!! ?

    29. Astha_Reddy on March 28, 2017 6:16 pm

      Thank you every one for reading my story. I am not replying individually but I read them.
      Thank you for the love you all showered on me and my SHIVIKA…

    30. IBFan on March 29, 2017 1:13 am

      Good that Pinky too is in favour of Anika..
      And Shivay love at first sight!!
      Wish the bracelet scene was shown on tv too…

    31. kanfi on March 29, 2017 2:47 pm

      Ohh astha,,its just amazing,,i read all episodes,,,just loved it,,,ur writing skills r awesme,,,all the best for nextt epi

    32. shahabana on March 29, 2017 6:37 pm

      AAstha its something different than original story…..shivaye fallen for anika tjsts easily and he is very soft towords her….how its possible…i cnt beleive it

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