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Home»Fan Fiction»Uncontrollable feelings (swasan ff)by Mars part 8
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Uncontrollable feelings (swasan ff)by Mars part 8

MarsBy MarsJuly 26, 2017Updated:July 26, 201768 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello!!
Uncontrollable Feelings (swasan ff)
Part 8:
Rajesh’s house:
Sanskar’s room:
Swara(cutely): Sanskar plzzzzz
Sanskar:swara what u will do by going there?
Swara:huh!! What we do in clubs. Ofcouse enjoy.Right daffy?
Daffy nodded his head.
Sanskar (shocked):Daffy will also go to club?
Swara:no but he is supporting me. Plzz find out.
Sanskar: ufff okay I will find a club today then u can go on Sunday.Happy?
Swara:super happy and u will also come with me.
Sanskar:nooo
Swara(moves closer to him): yes
His heart was ready to burst bcoz of their proximity.
Sanskar(stammer): no swara
Swara moves more closer and only they were inch apart.
Swara: yes
Sanskar now can’t take the risk of saying no as I more step closer and their lips will be locked.
Sanskar:okay yes.
Swara(laughs): woooowww
She kissed sanskar’s cheek and ran away followed by Daffy.
Sanskar stood numb there.
Sanskar:ohhh god what she did. She will be my death someday.
He signed and left to office.

Evening:
Swara kavita and sahil are sitting in park. Now it has become their routine to sit like this and talk. Daffy as usual in swara’s lap. Sanskar just came from bank and swara shouted
Swara: Sanskar did u found??
Sanskar:yes one is nearby only.
Swara:wow that’s great.
Kavita:about what u r talking swara?
Swara: yeah kavita I have to ask from u also. Actually me and sanskar are going to club this Sunday plzz u both also come.
Kavita:club?? No I never went.
Sahil: I could have come but I m busy this Sunday.
Swara: ohhh but kavita u can try
Kavita: no no I won’t be comfortable plzz u enjoy with sanskar ji.
Swara: okay then.
Later kavita and sahil left.

Sunday:
Evening:
Hall:
Swara is pacing here and there waiting for sanskar and Daffy is following her when she go left he go there and when she go right he do same.
Swara:I won’t leave this Sanskar what he is doing from this much time.Don’t he know we will be late for club.
Daffy starred her with his big eyes and then ran to sanskar’s room.
Sanskar came out of room and saw daffy. He rotate his head but sanskar didn’t understood. Then he saw Swara angry.
Sanskar(picked daffy): ohh so your girlfriend got mad at me.
Daffy nodded.
Sanskar: i must say she taught u many things.
They came near Swara
Sanskar: let’s go swara
Swara: finally u came.
Sanskar: sorry was checking mails.
Swara: come daffy let’s go to daddu’s room.
Daffy jumped on her.
Swara: ohhh my baby will miss me. Will come soon.(kiss him)
Sanskar roll his eyes seeing their romance. Swara leave Daffy with rajesh and went with Sanskar.

Club:
Swasan entered inside and looked around. Swara dragged Sanskar to dance floor.
Sanskar: swara I never did dance.
Swara:so what start from today.
She held her hand and started dancing.
Sanskar also started slowly.
After half an hour,
Sanskar: I can’t dance more Yarr
Swara:u got tired also I can dance for hours.
Sanskar;then u r energy ball not me.
Swara(laughs):okay.
They both came down and stood near counter.
Swara:which drink you want Sanskar?
Sanskar:any juice.
Swara: no juice I m asking about alcohol.
Sanskar: no way I never had it.
Swara: then start from today hihi
Sanskar:but..
Swara:nothing will happen just once.
Finally Sanskar surrendered and took the drink.
Later, sanskar’s head was spinning. He was feeling out of the world. Sanskar was totally out of senses as its his first time. But swara was little okay as she is used to it and can control.
Swara:sanskar let’s go home.
Sanskar(salute her): okay madam Ji.
Swara laughs and both came out.
Swasan came near car and swara said
Swara: I will drive the car now.
Sanskar shook his head in no. and said
Sanskar: nooooo we both will sit on back seat.
Swara: then who will drive??
Sanskar:let the car drive itself why do we care.
Swara: yeah but I have to drive it. U sit inside.
Swara made sanskar on the front seat and herself settle on driving seat.
During whole journey, Sanskar was blabbering something.
Soon they reached at home.

Swara being in little senses take out sanskar and took him to her room as it was near. Then she bought daffy who was desperately waiting for her. Rajesh had already slept.

Swara’s room:
Swara came with Daffy and saw sanskar lying on the bed. She put daffy near sanskar and went to washroom to change.
Sanskar saw Daffy. He got up and sit on bed by crossing his legs. Daffy is sitting in front.
Sanskar looked at Daffy with narrow eyes and said
Sanskar (point his fingure at him): u r my enemy.
Daffy shook his head in no.
Sanskar: yes bcoz u r trying to take her from me.
Daffy again shook his head.
Sanskar lean closer to daffy and said
Sanskar: swara is mine.Mind it!!
Daffy looked at him in rage and barked.
Sanskar:ohh u means she is yours but no she is mine
Daffy again barked
Sanskar:mine
Daffy bark
Sanskar: mine
Daffy again Barked.
Sanskar got angry and picked daffy and went to door.
He put daffy in corridor and said
Sanskar:every night u sleep with her. Tonight I will be with her. Get lost.
Sanskar came inside the room and closed the door.
Daffy sit near railings waiting for Swara.
Swara came out and saw sanskar near door.She looked around but didn’t found daffy.
Sanskar saw her. She is wearing light pink nighty. His breath got stuck in his throat. He went closer to her.
Swara: where is Daffy sanskar??
Sanskar (carelessly):I don’t know.
Swara: let me see outside.
Swara was about to open the door when sanskar pulled her and pin her against wall.
Swara:Sanskar??
Sanskar(put finger on her lips):ssshhhh
He started caressing her hairs seeing in her eyes. Swara got lost in his dark brown eyes. Sanskar lean and kiss her forehead.She closed her eyes.
Sanskar:(whispers huskily): u r very beautiful swara.
Swara’s started breathing heavily as his rough lips touch her soft cheeks.he kisses her sensuously. Swara clutched his shirt collar.Swara was unable to control her feelings anymore and she confessed
Swara:I love you sanskar.
Sanskar who was busy in kissing her neck stops for a second and then said
Sanskar: I love u too swara.
Sanskar said unknowingly but Swara’s happiness has no bound.
Swara :I m soo happy.
Sanskar:hmm
Sanskar stare her glossy lips. She closed her eyes in anticipation. It took just few seconds and both got busy in kissing each other. When they got out off breathe, they broke it. Swara felt shy and hugged him. In turn he tighten the hug.
Later, swara heard daffy’s sound as if he is calling her. She broke the hug.
Swara:sanskar Duffy is out. Let me bring him.
Sanskar: don’t leave plzz
Swara: I have to go daffy is calling me.
Swara came out of sanskar’s grip and opened the door.
Daffy who was sitting near door jumped in her lap and hugged her.
Swara:aww my baby how u went out?
Daffy saw sanskar in anger and sanskar make faces.
Swara kissed daffy. His eyes shines in happiness. He looked at Sanskar showing that see she is mine.
Sanskar got jealous and said
Sanskar (mumble): saala kutta kahika!! (huh!! Such a dog)
Sanskar:I m going to my room swara.
Swara: okay good night.
Sanskar:good night
Sanskar went near daffy and said
Sanskar:I will see u later.
Swara got confused but ignored.
Sanskar went to his room and slept unaware what blunder he had done.
Swaffy also slept soon.
To be continued…..

Precap:Swasan avoiding each other.
Swara due to shyness and Sanskar????

Done with next part.
Thank you.

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    68 Comments

    1. saki on July 26, 2017 3:55 pm

      awesome dear .too good .sanskar and daffy jealous .oh god

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 5:02 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    2. Smiley on July 26, 2017 4:13 pm

      Sanffy part wasss amazing mind blowing……. haha…. I am laughing so much……

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 5:03 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    3. Anjali on July 26, 2017 4:18 pm

      superb

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 5:03 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    4. ankita Gaude on July 26, 2017 4:22 pm

      awsome

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 5:04 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    5. SHAN on July 26, 2017 4:23 pm

      Wow awesome!!! I am loving this ff more

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 5:04 pm

        Thank you so much Shan di

    6. independent on July 26, 2017 4:29 pm

      Aww poor sanskar awesome chappy dear

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 5:05 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    7. seebu_s on July 26, 2017 4:36 pm

      awesome…??

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 5:06 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    8. anu on July 26, 2017 5:11 pm

      awesome update next part soon

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 7:34 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    9. phoniex on July 26, 2017 5:34 pm

      haww so this was the confession?

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 7:37 pm

        Thank you dear and regarding confession firstly very sorry to disappointe u but according to storyline I can’t give grand confession here as this part was just to let swara know that Sanskar loves her. Else wait for further story.

    10. Kumu on July 26, 2017 5:37 pm

      Awesome..tc..

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 7:39 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    11. Shibil on July 26, 2017 5:40 pm

      Such a mind blowing part ….sanskar and daffy jealousy …ha ha very funny ….waiting for precap…

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:11 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    12. Ashwini on July 26, 2017 5:44 pm

      sanskar daffy sce to cute swasan first kiss …..awesome nd cute episode

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:12 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    13. NDSG on July 26, 2017 5:48 pm

      Sala kutta kahi k…??????? did he actually spoke that…???
      But he is right ??? Daffy is taking his place… Daffy go find ne partner for urself…

      SWASAN part was too good and that kiss??????????? love confession… Waooooooooooooooooooo.

      But I know this stupid will now ignore Shona ??? God ji is bewakuf Sanskar ko akal dena…

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:13 pm

        Thank you so much depuuu dear sanskar will realise soon

    14. Tamil on July 26, 2017 6:08 pm

      Awesome dear loved it

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:31 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    15. anu on July 26, 2017 6:08 pm

      awesomex dear

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:31 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    16. gennie on July 26, 2017 6:23 pm

      suprb

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:32 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    17. veena on July 26, 2017 6:33 pm

      i read all parts…too good?loving your ffs☺sorry for late comments..busy in office work..loved it!keep smiling:)

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:33 pm

        Thank you so much dear and don’t be sorry its ok

    18. Xxx on July 26, 2017 6:41 pm

      Awesome.. Loved it

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:37 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    19. Soujanya on July 26, 2017 6:43 pm

      Awesome…

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:40 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    20. Guna on July 26, 2017 6:56 pm

      Awesome. Part marsss.finally he confessed .poor dwaffy

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:41 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    21. sammykapoor on July 26, 2017 7:37 pm

      awesome dear..update noughty billow dear

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:42 pm

        Thank you so much dear and naughty billo tomorrow

    22. Kanha on July 26, 2017 8:02 pm

      Hahahaha. Sanskar aur Daffy fighting over Swara was hilarious??????? Sanskar vs Daffy????? OMG!!!! Finally, they both confessed their love?????? Don’t know what will happen when Sanskar will regain his senses??? Eagerly waiting for the next part siso. Lots of love siso??????????

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:44 pm

        Thank you so much sister. I love u too will post next part soon

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:44 pm

        Thank you so much dear

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:49 pm

        Opps sorry siso commented twice by mistake

    23. Stg on July 26, 2017 8:18 pm

      awesomeness overloaded ??

      • Mars on July 26, 2017 8:45 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    24. rini on July 26, 2017 9:28 pm

      another awesome shot

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 3:51 am

        Thank you so much dear

    25. AnuAnn on July 26, 2017 10:40 pm

      Loved it and I’m thinking what w’ll daffy do in swasan first night

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 3:52 am

        Thank you so much dear and even I m thinking same hihi

    26. Pramudi on July 26, 2017 11:37 pm

      Awesome. Sanskaar & daffy scene was so funny.

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 3:52 am

        Thank you so much dear

    27. Sus on July 26, 2017 11:50 pm

      its lovly dear

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 3:53 am

        Thank you so much dear

    28. Prashasti7 on July 27, 2017 1:40 pm

      Omgggg marsssss what sanskar did
      Now what will happen *biting my nail
      Post soon

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 3:42 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    29. gayathri.visu on July 27, 2017 6:11 pm

      Hehehe…..Sanskaar n Daffy part is funny! Jealousy Sanskaar n Jealousy Daffy….lol.
      Swasan’s part….Awwwwww!! So cute dear. Waiting for next part.

      • Mars on July 29, 2017 9:27 am

        Thank you so much gayuu dear I will post next part soon

    30. Simi on July 28, 2017 10:12 am

      Omg..Sanskar is too much jealous of Daffy ????n finally they confessed n kissed… ?
      Superb update

      • Mars on July 29, 2017 9:29 am

        Thank you so much dear

    31. pnap on July 28, 2017 8:46 pm

      OMG
      it’s really such a cute ff

      • Mars on July 29, 2017 9:30 am

        Thank you so much dear

    32. kat on July 29, 2017 7:43 am

      lol?sanskar is jealous of daffy?loved it

      • Mars on July 29, 2017 9:31 am

        Thank you so much dear

    33. vyshu10 on July 29, 2017 2:47 pm

      awesome…confession, first kiss??

      • Mars on July 30, 2017 3:57 am

        Thank you so much dear

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