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Home»Fan Fiction»Uncontrollable feelings (swasan ff)by Mars part 11
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Uncontrollable feelings (swasan ff)by Mars part 11

MarsBy MarsAugust 11, 201733 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello!! Thanks for your comments.
Uncontrollable Feelings (swasan ff)
Part 11:
Swara’s room:
As sun rays strike Swara’s face, she opened her eyes. Her face is pale and tired. She saw daffy and smile slightly. Then she remembered what all happened at night her eyes got teary.
After placing daffy on bed she went to washroom.
Later, she came back after getting ready. She saw daffy staring her.
Swara: good morning daffy
Daffy made puppy sound.
Swara sit on bed and dialed shekar’s number.

Swara: hello papa
Shekar: hi shona how are u?
Swara: I m good just plz book ticket for me. I m coming back.
Shekar: okay but suddenly?
Swara: yes plzz come to take me.
Shekar: okay I will inform and come to take you.
Swara: hmm bye.
Swara cut the call and took deep breathe.
Swara: we are going back Daffy.
Later shekar inform that he will come tonight and then they will go back tomorrow.
Swara went to rajesh’s room.

Rajesh’s room:
Swaffy came inside and went to rajesh.
Swara:dadu I want to talk something.
Rajesh: yes say
Swara:actually i m going to Kolkata tomorrow papa is coming tonight.
Rajesh:why so soon u are going?
Swara:I m thinking I should join papa’s business now.
Rajesh:then I will not stop u go ahead.

Swara:thanks and plz u also come to Kolkata we will live there together.
Rajesh:yes I will come once sanskar and kavita get married.
Swara (look down): okay I should go.
She went from there quickly.
While moving in corridor she is talking to Daffy. Sanskar who came out from his room saw them.
Sanskar: good morning swara.
Swara looked at him for a second and then said looking down

Swara: morning.
Sanskar was about to say something but she went away with daffy.
Sanskar felt sad but he is only reason of all this.
Then he left to bank without breakfast only.

Evening:
Hall:
Kavita sahil rajesh and swaffy are sitting and having snacks and chitchatting.Sanskar came back from bank and saw Swara laughing. He felt relief seeing her normal.
He went closer to them and as soon as swara saw him, her smile vanished. Sanskar who observed it felt pinch in his heart that she is unhappy bcoz of him.
Sanskar:Kavita u here?

Swara got busy with daffy ignoring him.
Kavita: yes Swara is going back tomorrow so a small get together.
Sanskar was not able to breathe for few seconds just thinking that Swara will not be there now. He was not able to stand there for more time so he went to his room. Swara thought he don’t care.
Later, kavita and sahil went back.
Swaffy went to room.

On the road:
Kavita and sahil are coming back when sahil looked at kavita and held her hand.
Kavita: what sahil?
Sahil: I want to say you something.

No one is on the road as it was late evening.
Kavita: hmm
Sahil:I think I love you.
Kavita(jerk his hand): this is not possible I m engaged with sanskar.
Sahil:but u never told me.
Kavita: I didn’t find it necessary.

Sahil:okay tell me do you love sanskar?
Kavita: love doesn’t matters here. My parents has fixed my marriage with him so I will marry him only.
Sahil: your both life will be spoiled.

Kavita: plzz don’t think all this nothing will happen.
She went from there.
Sahil (thought): I know u also love me kavita and soon u will confess.
He smile and went to his house.

Night:
Sanskar is feeling restless. He don’t know what is happening to him after he get to know swara is going.

Sanskar: she is leaving. This only I want that she should go away from my life now why the hell it’s hurting me. But its better for her. If she will live here I will hurt her more. May me we are not meant to be together(idiot).May I see her once bcoz from tomorrow she won’t be here.
Sanskar went to swara’s room and stood at the door. He can listen her speaking.
Swara: daffy give me that bag.
Sanskar saw inside, Swara is packing her stuff.

Sanskar (mumble): she is full ready to leave.
He wiped his tears before they fell down his cheeks and left.

Next day:
Sanskar didn’t came out of his room not even once and this thing made swara upset.
Swara(thinks): he don’t want to see me last time also.
Kavita has came to say bye to swara.
Swara’s things are kept in hall and she is leaving shortly.
She met everyone.
Kavita: where is sanskar Ji?
Swara became conscious as she listen his name.
Rajesh:he must be in his room.
Kavita:let me call him.

Sanskar’s room:
He is Standing near window looking out with his wet eyes. Kavita came inside and said
Kavita: Sanskar ji, Swara is going what are u doing alone come and meet her. Sanskar: hmm I m coming kavita.
Sanskar came in hall. Swara is looking down. As he was approaching their hearts were beating like anything.
Swara can feel him standing near her.
Sanskar:all the best swara for your future and happy and safe journey.
Swara looked at him and this is first time when their eyes met after that night.They shared a painful eye lock which was broken by Swara.
Swara(fake smile): thank you.

Sanskar: bye Duffy.
Daffy looked at him angrily how he dare to hurt her Swara. Sanskar understand and thought
Sanskar: ohh god both are hell angry at me.
Later all came out and swaffy and shekar sit in car and left from there.
Sanskar went to his room and closed the door.

He went to dressing table and saw the watch which Swara had gifted, then he remembered how on their first meet Swara thought him dumb. The best thing his tashan with Daffy. He never thought he will do such stupid things and the whole credit goes to swara and her lover daffy. He smiles as he reminiscences their fun moments. Few tears fell from his eyes as he realizes that everything is over now. No more fun and he have to be serious again and try to move on in his life which is very difficult he knows but he is left with no other option.

To be continued….

Precap: Kavita tells Sanskar that she loves sahil.

Thank you.

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    33 Comments

    1. independent on August 11, 2017 2:15 pm

      For the first time I’m loving kavitha and sahil awesome update dear

    2. SHAN on August 11, 2017 2:17 pm

      Wow awesome!!!loved it a lot…. A request mars!!! After sanskar tells his love to swara i want swara to show some funny tantrums on sanskar like a punishment!!!

      • Mars on August 11, 2017 6:44 pm

        Thank you shan di and request accepted will show swara’s tantrums.

    3. sus on August 11, 2017 2:21 pm

      emotional one dear

    4. Rachna on August 11, 2017 3:05 pm

      Awsm Dr…

    5. Tamil on August 11, 2017 3:11 pm

      Amazing dear…..feeling bad for Swasan…..

    6. reethu on August 11, 2017 3:25 pm

      awesome marsuuu.loving this .but sanskar should get punishment for hurting our swara ,give him punishments but not that much big little one.bechara sanskar haina
      bye
      take care

    7. JAPNAAZ on August 11, 2017 3:34 pm

      Lovely episode…plz try to update next part of dis fanfiction …..please its my fav story.
      Thank u Mars !!!

    8. Mannu on August 11, 2017 3:41 pm

      Nice

    9. AnuAnn on August 11, 2017 4:04 pm

      Awesome dear.. I want swasan patch up soon ..and sanffy tashan

    10. Stg on August 11, 2017 4:25 pm

      awesome ???

    11. anu on August 11, 2017 4:56 pm

      awesome update next part soon show sanskar getting punishment from swara

    12. Guna on August 11, 2017 5:17 pm

      Sanskar one stupid decision make 4 lives hell. I eagerly waiting to see swara reaction

    13. Vidhi on August 11, 2017 5:39 pm

      Marsuuuu… So here I come back again…
      Yar I told na about my exams.. So I missed everything.. Like today I am free so….i thought to read all the incomplete one and scope up with all the stories….
      So today u can see at the end of every ft my comment Hihi ??
      Coming to this.. That’s so emotional one yar… Like their separation..
      N I my I love with kavita n Sahil for the very first time… Just coz of u…
      Chal update soon dear ❤❤❤

      • Mars on August 11, 2017 6:37 pm

        Awwww welcome back baby and I m so happy to see expression Queen back. Thank you so much for liking this part and I will post soon.

    14. Samaira_khan on August 11, 2017 5:43 pm

      Hey mars its awsm yaar…. I don’t want sanskar to get punishment ..because is right and he didn’t ruin any of their lives … I want Sears to show some funny tantrums and sanffy tashan

    15. Kumu on August 11, 2017 6:39 pm

      Awesome..tc..

    16. phoniex on August 11, 2017 6:42 pm

      Amazing dear ??

    17. Neptune on August 11, 2017 6:43 pm

      he he marsuu ust like evryone even i want swara to show some funny tantrums…

    18. Simi on August 11, 2017 6:51 pm

      Awesome dear…
      Kavita n Sahil is going to unite ??
      Want punishment for sanskar,, he make Swaffy sad ?

    19. Soujanya on August 11, 2017 8:24 pm

      Awesome
      …..

    20. Kanha on August 11, 2017 8:51 pm

      Soooo sad episode. Feeling bad for Swara?????? Sansku is sooooo bad. How could he do that????????? Finally, precap is giving some hope. Post soon siso. Loveeeeee youuuuuuu??????

    21. NDSG on August 11, 2017 9:20 pm

      ??????????? all r sad because of stupid Sanskaar?????????? ???? his so called adarsh aur usul…
      Doll is hurt and crying but this boy still thinking about those stupid relation..

      But atleast kavita said truth thanks to kavita….

      Post soon

    22. pnap on August 11, 2017 9:37 pm

      awesome part
      feeling sad for swasan

    23. Prashasti7 on August 12, 2017 12:34 am

      aww my swasan gt separated but its ok it was needed
      wahhh marss precap is awsm
      gt ready with ur bags our ticket gt confirmed

    24. Febi on August 12, 2017 9:04 am

      Awesome and excellent as always dear

    25. Tani on August 12, 2017 10:35 am

      Its damn good….i read all episodes in one go…loved it to d core

    26. Anjali on August 12, 2017 11:09 am

      superb

    27. gayathri.visu on August 12, 2017 12:55 pm

      Marsuu….no punishments for Sanskaar, bcz already he is in pain. And for the very first time I love Kavitha n Sahil! Thank god atleast Kavitha has the courage to speak truth!

    28. Milestone on August 12, 2017 3:06 pm

      Nice..

    29. scooby on August 12, 2017 8:47 pm

      Awesomeee?? emotional ??
      Waiting eagerly for nxt part?? sanskar ready to bring swara bck to ur life????

    30. vyshu10 on August 14, 2017 11:43 pm

      awesome

    31. Veena on August 20, 2017 9:07 am

      Awesome

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