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Home»Fan Fiction»Uncontrollable feelings (swasan ff) by Marsuu part 17
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Uncontrollable feelings (swasan ff) by Marsuu part 17

MarsBy MarsOctober 14, 2017Updated:October 14, 201763 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello guys!! I’m really sorry for not posting this story.

Uncontrollable Feelings (SwaSan ff)
Part 17:
Recap: swasan haldi and nikil came, sanffy jealous.

Night:
Swara is ready in black gown as sanskar has asked her. They both are going out. Swara don’t know where they are going bcoz sanskar said its surprise.
She came down and sanskar is waiting near car.
Swara: let’s go sanskar
He turn and got mesmerized seeing her. Sanskar(whisper): looking gorgeous
Swara (blushes): thanks
Sanskar open the car door for her and she sit inside.
They were about to leave when Sanskar asked
Sanskar: where is daffy??
Swara: he is with nikil I thought to be only with you.
Sanskar (shocked): you preferred me over daffy good improvement.
Swara: nothing like that its just for few hours otherwise he will be always with me.
Sanskar signed and they left.

Sanskar stop the car infront of a restaurant.
Swara: we came for dinner???
Sanskar: let’s see
Swara pout as he is not telling her anything.
Sanskar held swara’s hand and took her inside. He has booked one small hall.
Swara was surprised to see the room is decorated with two chairs around the table in the centre, soft romantic music is playing in the background. The light was only of candles in the room.
When swara was lost in admiring the room, Sanskar whispered in her ear
Sanskar:its candle light dinner.
Swara shivered as his lips rubbed with her earlobe.She turn and smile at him.
Swara: thank you for surprise I loved it.
Sanskar: this is first I’m giving surprise to someone I’m happy you liked.
Swara: its so beautiful how I won’t like.
Sanskar: let’s have dinner.
Sanskar pull chair for her and made her sit and himself went to other chair.
Swara was about to serve but Sanskar stopped
Sanskar: today I will do everything.
Swara: ohh making me feel special??
Sanskar: yes
Sanskar served both of them and they had their dinner with few casual talks and feeding each other.
After dinner, sanskar extent his hand towards her, she smile and place her palm on his.
Sanskar pull and she fall on his chest.
After sharing a beautiful eyelock , sanskar lean and whispered
” Pal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho”
Swara got amazed listening his melodious voice. He twirl her and back hugged. He continued singing with next line
” Jeevan meethi pyaas yeh kehti ho
Pal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho”
He stopped signing as the song was played. They danced slowly.
Sanskar lean and kiss her bare shoulder. Swara close her eyes falling back against his chest lying her whole weight on him.
Sanskar’s lips reached her neck adorning it with several kisses.Swara fisted his hand on her waist. He turn her and cups her face she closed her eyes and he softly place his lips on her and kissed gently.
” I love you”sanskar mumble against her lips.
” love you back alotttt” swara said making him chuckle.
They joined their forehead.

Next morning:
There is hustle bustle in the house after all there is marriage. Today is mehndi and sangeet function and tomorrow is the marriage.
Swara(shouted): kavitaaa
As kavita and sahil entered inside. Swara ran and hug kavita.
Kavita: hello swara Congratulations for your marriage.
Swara: thank you and you both got married without informing me(pout)
Sahil: sorry swara it happened so fast that we didn’t invited anyone.
Swara: but I want party.
Kavita: sure will give.
Sanskar signed as swara started at the door only.
Sanskar:let them come in swara
He shake his hand with sahil and smile at kavita.
Swara(hit her head): ohh I forgot plz come inside.
They came inside. All settle in the hall.
Nikil swasanffy kavhil.
Nikil: so you both also got married.
He said to kavita and nikil.
Sahil: yes but why you are sad??
Nikil: I’m not understanding why all are marrying and spoiling their life.
Swara: actually he don’t believe in marriage.
Nikil: yes
Sahil: but I’m happy with kavita.
Nikil: wait as time will pass you will get fed up.
All signed listening him.
Swara: kavita let’s go to my room I will show you my bridal dress.
Kavita: okay.
Swakav left with Daffy.
Only nikil, sahil and sanskar is left.
Nikil: guys what about bachelor’s party???
Sahil(laughs): I’m no more bachelor.
Sanskar: and swara will get angry so I also don’t want to do.
Nikil: huh!! Puppets of their wife com on you should also enjoy life. Okay will do in my room only drinks tonight.
Sahil: yeah not that bad.
Sanskar; I had once drunk and it had created big mess now I will not repeat the mistake.
Nikil: okay you take cold drink but come with us.
Sanskar: okay will try.

Boys are in room while girls are applying mehandi in the hall. Swara is sitting in centre and kavita is near her.
Swara:on one hand write Sanskar and other daffy.
Kavita: seriously swara???
Swara: yes otherwise daffy will feel bad.
Kavita smiles at her antics.
Swara’s both hands are adorned with hena till half of arms also.
After, that she went to her room where sanffy are sitting and watching tv.
Swara: Sanskar see my mehandi
She excitedly show her hands.
Sanskar: may I find my name??
Swara(sit on bed): yes
Sanskar started finding his name but first he found daffy’s name.
Sanskar (shock): swara you are marrying me or daffy u had written his name.
Daffy jumped in happiness.
Swara: no I had written your both names see yours
She show his name.
Sanskar: thank god I thought you wrote only his name.
Swara:how can I forget you sanskar.
Sanskar: aww so sweet asha swara tonight sahil and nikil are going to do party I will be with them but will not drink so I thought to tell you.
Swara: sanskar you can drink also I’m not that typical wife.
Sanskar: first time when we has drunk you know what we did.
Swara remember they kissed and confessed.
Swara: okay don’t drink who knows what you will do now.
Sanskar: that’s why I said
Swara: Sanskar I’m hungry
Sanskar: wait will bring food.
Later sanskar bought food and feed her.

Evening:
The music was playing as it’s sangeet function. Swara is wearing pink lehnga and sanskar white and pink sherwani.
All came down and function started.
Sahil and kavita danced with each other followed by shekar and shomi’s performance. Later, Dada ji , nikil and daffy danced.
Everyone were enjoying. Swasan are sitting on the stage.
Nikil, sahil dragged sanskar and kavita to swara on the dance floor and all danced together.
A lady in late fifties came with veil on her head. She is staring Sanskar continuously.But swasan are totally unaware of someone’s gaze.
The Lady came and hugged Sanskar.
Lady: my son where were you I was finding you like mad.
Sanskar got shocked even swara heard as she was near but others were busy dancing in loud music.
Sanskar: sorry but I don’t know you.
Sanskar moved back breaking the hug.
The music stopped listening to noise.
Lady: I’m you mother Sanskar. How can you forget me.?
Sanskar was a shocked to core. His mother?? but he is orphan and he know only rajesh as family.
Dadi: his parents died in accident.
Sanskar: yes
Lady: no sanskar I got saved just your father died. I was in coma for many years and when I came to senses you were no where.
Sanskar; why you came now and I don’t believe you.
Lady: you can’t marry this girl.
She said pointing towards swara.
Sanskar: and I’m not going to listen to you. Why shouldn’t I marry her??
Lady: bcoz you are already married in your childhood with someone.
He shouted making swasan and all others astonished.
To be continued….

Precap: will swasan marriage happen???

How was it??? I thought to bring little twist otherwise it will be boring.
And only 3 parts more are left as 20th will be last.
Kindly share your views don’t be silent plzz.
Thank you
Bye
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    63 Comments

    1. sreekkutty on October 14, 2017 3:19 pm

      What!!!!! What’s this????

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 3:25 pm

        Twist ????? wait for next epiii?? Thank you dear tc?????

    2. anu on October 14, 2017 3:30 pm

      awesome

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 4:15 pm

        Thank you dear tc???

    3. sus on October 14, 2017 3:36 pm

      don’t worry bal vivaah is illegal and court eaisly declare that null and void

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 4:18 pm

        Yeah your point is correct let’s see what will happen. Thank you dear??

    4. Halima on October 14, 2017 3:40 pm

      Marsu u r not gonna separate swasan I know that as ur crazy fan of them.seriously swara wrote both sanffy name in her hand.she is just crazy like u pls post soon or else katti with u

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 4:21 pm

        Yupppp I’m crazy for them let’s see what will happen. Thank you dear ?????
        Don’t be angry will post next part soon tc????

    5. Sandhiyaswasanian on October 14, 2017 3:53 pm

      Today I was the first one comment your ff.iam so happy.

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 4:25 pm

        Aww thank you so much for commenting dear tc????

    6. Tamil on October 14, 2017 3:53 pm

      Amazing dear…..shocking twist….

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 4:27 pm

        Thank you dear tc???

    7. Tani on October 14, 2017 3:57 pm

      Eagerly waiting for next

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 4:28 pm

        Thank you dear will post next part soon tc????

    8. Romaisa on October 14, 2017 4:13 pm

      Wow loved it plz don’t seperate them and yes marigge will happen ❤️?

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 4:29 pm

        Let’s see what will happen thank you dear tc????

    9. Arpita arohi on October 14, 2017 4:26 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 4:31 pm

        Thank you dear tc????

    10. nabamita on October 14, 2017 4:44 pm

      Nyc

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 5:19 pm

        Thank you dear

    11. pravee on October 14, 2017 4:49 pm

      who is that lady

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 5:05 pm

        Let’s see for that you have to wait for next epii thank you dear tc??

    12. Samaira_khan on October 14, 2017 4:56 pm

      Uff swara is sooooooooo crazy… U know sometimes I imagine helly don’t u think marsuuuu because helly is also so joyful whenever I see her and vk aka Sanskar Interviews it’s sooo cute.. Coming to the episode it was really amazing loved it❤️❤️
      Aww Sanskar informed swara before going.. Loveee it and Swara she is toh fully pagal just like me and u?? OK precap is horrifying!! I know ur crazyy but I’m sure u won’t separate them.. And lawfully child marriage isn’t allowed so I’m relaxed?

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 5:08 pm

        Yupppp even I can imagine hellu she is also cutie and fun loving.
        All are crazy swara readers and writer????? let’s see what will happen??? thank you so much dear tc?????

    13. NDSG on October 14, 2017 5:16 pm

      ??????? beautiful dinner date, beautiful song, beautiful SWASAN and their dance, beautiful Swara’s mehndi, beautiful Sanskaar feeding to Swara.
      But
      But
      What was in the last?????????????????. It spoiled my mood. Who was that lady who intend to separate my SwaSan????????????????????
      Tell that lady to stay away else ready for my anger?????????? and punches????????????????, slaps also????????????????.

      Swara really a mad girl who is writing Daffy’s name too… So cute she… ??????????

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 5:27 pm

        Awww everything was beautiful and beautiful and at the end twist???
        Don’t worry about that lady no one can separate swasan when marsuu is there???? indeed swara is cute??? thank you so much dear tc?????

    14. Stg on October 14, 2017 5:41 pm

      Amazing ???pls post next part soon…

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 6:11 pm

        Thank you dear will post next part soon tc????

    15. AnuAnn on October 14, 2017 5:50 pm

      ✌✌✌?????

      • Mars on October 14, 2017 6:12 pm

        What a comment anuu????? thank you dear tc????

    16. phoniex on October 14, 2017 6:01 pm

      what seriously ? she came after ages to tell that he can’t marry disgusting

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:11 pm

        Yeah may be wait for next epi it will be clear thank you dear tc??

    17. independent on October 14, 2017 6:14 pm

      whaaaattttt dear dont give us heartattack

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:12 pm

        Don’t worry just wait for next epi thank you dii tc??

    18. Priya on October 14, 2017 6:26 pm

      Awesome dear I loved it what the new twist

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:19 pm

        Thank you dear wait for the twist tc???

    19. shweta on October 14, 2017 7:12 pm

      wow….what a twist….I’m jzt waiting for d next part soon….eagerlyyyyyy

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:20 pm

        Thank you dear will post next part soon tc???

    20. Rachna on October 14, 2017 7:17 pm

      Awsm dr

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:24 pm

        Thank you dear tc???

    21. Cutie Andy on October 14, 2017 8:45 pm

      Amazing

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:26 pm

        Thank you dear tc???

    22. Kumu on October 14, 2017 8:45 pm

      Beautiful..
      Swasan dinner date and dance????
      Crazy swara wrote Duffy ‘s name????
      Last part ????
      Looking forward to this new twist??
      Tc??

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:28 pm

        Thank you dear will Post next part soon tc???

    23. Bush1122 on October 14, 2017 9:09 pm

      Waah…. superb epi di….
      Swasan date… their dance n their cute romantic moments were awesome….??
      Only Swara can do crazy things like writing daffy’s name also in her hand cuz she thinks daffy will feel sad… really a true crack piece….?????
      But a big wala twist at last….. but i know u will never seperate Swasan…❤❤ if u seperate them im angry with u…????
      Waiting for the next…
      Love u….??
      Tc

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:32 pm

        Ohhh so much trust on me?? lets see what will happen thank you dear tc???? will post next part soon love you ????

    24. mica on October 14, 2017 9:32 pm

      nooooo.. don’t separate my swasan :'(

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:34 pm

        Don’t worry about swasan I also love them thank you dear tc????

    25. Ashwini on October 14, 2017 11:37 pm

      Start was cute ? ? but who is that leady aa gai SWASAN marriage brock karne ?? I want my #SwaSan ll be together ❤️❤️

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:36 pm

        Let’s see who is the lady thank you dear tc????

    26. Febi on October 15, 2017 12:51 am

      Awesome and excellent dear

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:38 pm

        Thank you dear tc????

    27. yamee on October 15, 2017 8:50 am

      Awesome epi dear….and what a twist at the end!!!!very excited for next part post soon.

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 4:40 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc will post next part soon????

    28. Prashasti7 on October 15, 2017 4:58 pm

      U want to give us heart attack *pout
      I’ll kill that lady tell her to not interfere

      • Mars on October 15, 2017 5:24 pm

        ???? I don’t want to give heartattack dear wait for next epi thank you so much dear tc????

    29. Soujanya on October 15, 2017 7:47 pm

      Awesome….

      • Mars on October 16, 2017 7:15 am

        Thank you dear tc???

    30. Anjali on October 16, 2017 12:51 pm

      Superb

      • Mars on October 17, 2017 12:57 pm

        Thank you dear

    31. milestone on October 17, 2017 8:05 am

      Nice….. what a twist…..

      • Mars on October 17, 2017 12:59 pm

        Thank you dear

    32. vyshu10 on October 22, 2017 11:50 am

      superb

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