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Udariyaan story my way – FS Part-3

arshiya_princessBy arshiya_princessJuly 26, 202131 Comments6 Mins Read
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Tejo: no he has some work so he will go now but I promise if you want to meet him you can call him

Jeet: no mumma I have met him for first time today other’s father stays with them but why can’t he stay with me

Tejo: jeet please …..if he could stay he would have na …..i am saying na you can meet him later

Fateh: I will stay with you

And he lifts jeet and looks at tejo making a please expression

Fateh: so what you want to eat tell me now we will go their first

Jeet: yehhh…..i want to eat burger

Tejo: no burger…….. no outside food for week did you forgot

Fateh: but why …..

Jeet : mum and I have rule that I can have outside food once in a week and according to it I had yesterday noodles so I can’t …………but mumma papa came after so long na…..so can I have burger …I promise I won’t eat outside food for two weeks …..

Fateh and jeet : please (making a cute little puppy face )

Tejo : okay fine

Then trio sit in a park and have food……. later jeet plays and tejo and fateh talk while looking at him

Tejo: since you got to know the truth you can meet jeet whenever you want

Fateh: but I want you guys back in my life

Tejo: that’s not possible …….you didn’t married jasmine out of guilt towards me which you say is love …….i don’t want to go through all over hardships again as at that time if it weren’t for jeet I don’t know how would I live till now …..and this time jeet will get involved too …..i don’t want my kid to go through all those things which I went

Fateh: tejo you are thinking wrong ………. I really do love you …….i just didn’t realize as jasmine kept coming in front of me making me confuse ……….at that time I started feeling for you but jasmine always came to me that she still loves me …….and it affected me which is why I got confuse about my feelings towards you …….whenever I was with you I used to not remember her but as she kept coming it disturb me maybe because she insulted my love for her in front of everyone ……….and my mistake was thinking those effect as love ………..that’s why when you asked me that I still love jasmine at the hospital I said yes but that didn’t mean I wanted to end my marriage with you ……..i just meant that I stil love her but I know she doesn’t and I really wanted to try hard to move on ………… I got clear idea of my feelings when you left me ………but why did you left without meeting once and you didn’t even come back after having jeet ………I know I did lots of bad things but I had the right to know about him

Tejo: when I asked you about that night ……you had regret in your eyes so how could you expect me to say that I am pregnant with your child ………..most importantly I never wanted you to take me or our relationship as burden nor ever said that our child was a mis…..

Fateh after hearing keeps his hand on her mouth

Fateh: don’t ….i could never think that …………nor I regretted that moment ….i had that expression because that morning I saw the pendent of jasmine which I gave to her and those thoughts made me think I had that moment with you when I didn’t realize my love for you nor was with you whole heartedly which was so wrong with you …………I just had that guilt

They have an eye lock which later gets disturb by jeet

Jeet: mumma will papa stay with us tonight

Tejo and fateh both look at each other

Fateh: yes tonight I will stay with you …

Jeet: yehhhh

The trio reach the house

Jeet: come papa I’ll show you my toys

Tejo : jeet first …

Jeet: first hand wash and change the clothes then show the toys to papa …..i know you mumma

Tejo : oh really ….go

He goes to change clothes

Tejo: fateh you also get freshen up and change ……..oh what will you wear …..

Fateh: clothes I have in my car ……since I had some work here ….i will go and bring from car

Later they had dinner

Jeet: papa you will sleep with me and mumma in our room today

Fateh: ofc……

Tejo: no he will sleep in sofa here

Fateh and jeet: why ….

Tejo: he snores

Fateh: lie I never

Tejo: he also moves a lot in bed if he kick you then …

Fateh: lie I never kicked you at least

Jeet: mumma please ….

Tejo: you go and brush your teeth first

He goes to brush his teeth

Tejo: fateh why are you insisting

Fateh: why means …..it’s my child and my wife ….why can’t I sleep with you

Tejo:  I am not your wife I gave you divorce

Fateh: oh really then why do you still put sindoor in your forehead plus you didn’t give me divorce just gave me divorce paper which I didn’t sign and by the way since when did you thought jut signing papers means the couple are divorced it has some procedure okay

Tejo : oh so u didn’t marry jasmine because of it

Fateh: tejo please don’t misinterpret and misunderstand me …..i really love you that’s why I didn’t sign …… but I hoped atleast to give me divorce you would turn up in front of me but you never came back

Tejo : when I left I didn’t want to go to my house so I went to gurudwara where I saw some ladies going to chandigarh gurudwara as they were having some pandal and needed help …….. I thought since last time I went to gurudwara so anyone can find me and I wanted some time alone ………where after few days I found I’m pregnant …..then I didn’t want to return for forever ………but my heart didn’t gave permission to not put sindoor as we are still married so …….

Fateh: I am so….

Jeet : mumma I done with my brush so please can u let papa sleep with  me …….

Tejo: alright …..i will join you guys after I am done with my work okay

Jeet :okay

He then takes fateh with him to the room …..later tejo enters the room finding both fateh and jeet sleeping in same posture she laughs with teary eyes and covers them with blanket and takes a pic of them sleeping ….she then goes to sleep when fateh unknowingly puts his hand on her hand .

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    31 Comments

    1. Naveen on July 26, 2021 10:39 pm

      This way of story is good if this continues we will continue to watch udariyaan or eles its over.
      Who ever is written this FS PARTS WILL THE STIRY CONTINUE THOS WAY OR IT WAS YOUR IMAGINATION

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 1:06 am

        This is all my imagination

    2. Mubeena on July 26, 2021 11:32 pm

      I like this please continue this story… otherwise we will stop watching udaariyaan… please continue I want to c fateh and tejo together…

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 1:35 am

        It’s my imagination please don’t get confuse and it will be short as I don’t have much time in my daily routine …..I chose to write as I couldn’t bear the pain seeing the promo and wanted to give peace of mind to all fatejo fans as well as Tejo fans

    3. Dolly on July 27, 2021 2:37 am

      I am enjoying your story line very much 😄😄😄. Thank you for giving hope to all the Fatejo fans.🙏🙏🙏

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 7:31 pm

        thank you

    4. S on July 27, 2021 5:55 am

      Deffo the bit of positivity we FaTejo fans needed. I know that people are keen for the actual story to have Tejo getting pregnant but I would really like Fateh to accept / realise his love for Tejo, no strings attached. I want FaTejo to give us couple goals.

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 7:32 pm

        thank you

      • Aanchal on July 27, 2021 8:23 pm

        Me too. I don’t want her to get pregnant so soon either.

    5. Harsimran Kaur on July 27, 2021 9:07 am

      Next?

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 7:33 pm

        i have submitted should get upload soon …………sorry for late update

    6. Raj gupta on July 27, 2021 9:08 am

      Good story

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 7:33 pm

        thank you

    7. Naman on July 27, 2021 11:47 am

      I am feeling bad for tejo …. hoping that ahead fateh and tejo be together always,,,,and jaismeen just get lost from their life….

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 7:34 pm

        hope my story gives you satisfaction

    8. Vasantha on July 27, 2021 12:12 pm

      Plz post next episode i liked very much plz plz plz …..

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 7:36 pm

        thank you and i have submitted next part it will be uploaded soon sorry for late update

    9. Ammu on July 27, 2021 4:23 pm

      Iam feeling bad for tejo. Tejo will get heartbroken by jasfa. I really wanted to fateh to realize the difference between Tejo and Jasmin and also his love for tejo.Fateh will surely regret hurting tejo’s heart. I really enjoyed ur story line. Pls post next episode.

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 7:37 pm

        thank you

    10. Fatejo ❤️ on July 27, 2021 5:14 pm

      Actually I enjoyed this story more than the original one, they can get the storyline form this also, If the story goes this then I will be more excited to watch the Udariyan

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 7:37 pm

        me tooo

    11. Vidhi on July 27, 2021 5:14 pm

      Its so amazing.. Please don’t stop writing and also your ishq par zor nahi fs are amazing…
      Kaash tv par ye track ata.. 🥰

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 7:40 pm

        thank you and by the way i didn’t write any fs of ishq par zor nhi ……..you may be got confuse or their is someone else with the same id

    12. Golu on July 27, 2021 5:44 pm

      Hi

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 7:40 pm

        hey

    13. MD on July 27, 2021 7:06 pm

      Awesome,It’s incredible,
      Excellent thinking ,the story should go as same ,but it should also show Fateh’s struggle in finding and searching tejo then it will be Chartbursting…

      • arshiya_princess on July 27, 2021 7:41 pm

        thank you

    14. Mila on July 27, 2021 8:56 pm

      Loved it. Tejo is marvelous.

      • arshiya_princess on July 28, 2021 12:11 am

        Thank you

    15. shaniageer on July 27, 2021 9:37 pm

      Omg I love your version!!! Please keep writing 😭❤❤

      • arshiya_princess on July 28, 2021 12:12 am

        Thank you

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