Fateh sees tejo and holds her hand ……she tries to free her hand but fateh holds it tight
Fateh: tejo listen to me please I am sorry
Tejo : sorry …….why are you saying sorry I am sorry that I came between you guys …….any how you guys gave me punishment by not telling me that you guys still love each other and you guys have made up……that one thing hurts me more ………..why didn’t you came to me and said that you still haven’t moved on and you still love jasmine and that she loves you more than Canada now ……..i would have left you at that moment only…
Fateh: listen to me tejo please it’s not like that
Tejo: leave my hand fateh I don’t want to hear anything I don’t want to see you guys ………please leave me alone …..
She frees her hand and was about to go
Fateh: I didn’t marry jasmine …….
She gets shocked and then he holds her both hands and falls on his knee and with teary eyes
Fateh : I didn’t marry jasmine …………..i love you tejo ………everyone says that when you lost something you realize it’s value and it’s true I realized I love you when I lost you
Tejo: it’s not love it’s guilt and sympathy …….i don’t need your pity
Fateh: it’s not ……….please understand I really love you otherwise I wouldn’t have waited for you nor searched for you madly for five years ……..and jasmine has marry gippy
Suddenly a small kid comes and pushes fateh away and hugs tejo, which made him shocked
Kid: how dare you make my mom cry …….if you made my mom cry I will punch you and don’t think that I am small kid and I can’t do anything …..i am four years old and I know boxing as my father is a boxer so don’t you dare
Hearing that fateh realized it’s his kid and he looks at tejo who nods in yes …..then he happily hugs him and kisses him but that kid pushes him away
Fateh: I am your father didn’t your mummy said about me
kid: lie ….if you are my father then why would you make her cry
tejo: jeet ….he isn’t lying he is really your father
kid: but i don’t want to meet him as he made you cry
tejo: i told you na we had fight like you fight with your friend karan it’s the same
jeet: we fight but we never make each other cry ….
tejo: he did not made me cry their is dust in my eyes
fateh holds both his ears
fateh: i am sorry
then the kid hugs him
jeet: i missed you papa why did you come so late
tejo: jeet but why did you came here …..i was about to come to pick you
jeet: yaa mumma i was waiting for you but you were late then i saw you here and took permission of school guard
tejo: but still it’s not safe
jeet: okay mumma i am sorry ………but now let’s go papa came after so long we have to celebrate and i am hungry ………..
tejo and fateh looks at each other …………
hope u all like it
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Loved it. 😍😍😍
I am even hoping Tejo actually gets pregnant after she finds out about Fateh and Jasmine.🤞🤞🤞
Nice story line.👌👌👌
well in show i think if gets pregnant then fateh will do more wrong with her by thinking it’s a mistake or tejo will runaway as i narrated ……….
Sorry Arshiya, your version is nicer, yet I feel Fateh is getting away with murder n Tejo should move on with a new guy n completely IGNORE Fateh to teach him a lesson, what he did behind Tejo’s back is stooping too low & hence encouraging people to commit downright adultery n yet thinks he deserves forgiveness.
I think so this is far better than the og story love ur narration
Thank you so much
Wow it’s like someone read my mind. Hahaha. Was thinking of some changes in udaariyaan too for the whole week and my imagination is similar to yours. I had an idea that tejo will sacrifice for both jasmine and fateh’s happiness and hides her true feelings. After the separation she finds out shes pregnant but chooses not to tell the virk family because she doesn’t want the child to be seen as a burden/mistake or make fateh feel burdened to be with her again out of responsibility. So she moves out to live in the city to do continue doing what she always wanted, her PhD and teaching. Meanwhile fateh starts to see the differences in being a relationship with jasmine vs tejo. Time leap, tejos son name suraj is active in junior boxing tournaments and has a father figure in tejos new best friend who was with her from her pregnancy days upto helping her bringing up her child. Mine probably feels like an overused drama plot tho. Thanks for sharing your fanfiction on udaariyaan. Many of us could really use some right now.
I love this plot aswell.
Brilliant👌
Thank you
Fateh ne tejo ka dil tod diya unka trust bhi break kr diya. Ab tejo ko kbhi bhi fateh pr trust nhi krna chiye…. It’s only my think
Well in my story I made him regret the breaking heart of Tejo u will notice it in next parts …….
I think it’s a good plot but if she gets pregnant so soon then their relationship won’t grow the same way. It’s not even been 200 episodes yet. And also this is all very predictable. But you did good anyways.