As I am so upset with ongoing track and don’t want to watch further until they realize the importance tejo ……………. Hence, I thought to share how I want the track to go …….hope u all like it.
The engagement day of jasmine and gippy
Jasmine and sweety in her room
Sweety: I told you fateh has move on in life
Jasmine: I don’t believe it …….i will wait for him till last minute ……..i did many things to prove that I still love him ………..i acted drunk to get tejo’s trust back so I can meet fateh , I got close to gippy so I can make fateh jealous……..and what not ……..i clearly saw in his eyes yesterday that he still loves me when I burned my passport.
(suddenly she hears the noise of jewelry box falling on floor and turns to see tejo standing shock at the door……….both gets shock seeing tejo)
Jasmine: tejo that ………
Sweety: I will go and see if aunty needs my help
(And she left the room)
Jasmine: tejo listen to me first
Tejo : enough jasmine ………I can’t believe you did all these …….from childhood to till now how much I did for you ……….i even married fateh
Jasmine : that’s what you did wrong …..you should not have married fateh ……u snatched him from me ……u had options either to tell me about him loosing job beforehand or you should have said no to marry him
Tejo: how many times should I tell u that I just got to know few minutes before of varmala and still I wanted to say the truth to u but papa gave me his swear …………and how much I begged u to marry him …..but u handed over chudda and asked me to marry him
Jasmine: I don’t know anything fateh was mine and will be mine
Tejo: don’t you feel ashamed of yourself u did so many things still I forgave you and you betrayed me to snatch my husband from me
Jasmine: snatch ……u snatched him from me …I just taking back what was my mine
Tejo: mami ji already warned me but still I chose to trust u ……and u…..(she goes from their crying )
( tejo cries remembering everything but stops herself after seeing everyone preparing for engagement …..she goes to her mom when she sees fateh entering the house and gets shocked as he said he won’t be able to attend ….and then suddenly remember jasmine’s words when she was talking to sweety )
Tejo: I have to talk to him
( suddenly satti comes to her and she sees fateh being restless and secretly escaping to jasmine’s room …..she tries to go behind him but satti holds her hand and takes her away somewhere)
Jasmine seeing fateh in her room
Jasmine : I knew you would come
Fateh: you won jasmine ……………yes I still love you but now it’s too late ….it’s your engagement day
Jasmine : fateh i….
He runs away as he sees someone coming …….tejo then sees him and stops …..was about to ask him but they suddenly hears satti shouting jasmine and both runs to her room ……they see jasmine unconscious lying on ground and blood coming from her hand …..fateh holds jasmine and lifts her to take hospital pushing tejo (as seen in the promo ) the family members also goes behind him though they were shocked with fateh’s action but jasmine was hurt they let it go for now….in hospital doctor aids jasmine and inform family that nothing to worry she is alright ……fateh realizes his actions and search for tejo who was going after hearing that jasmine is fine …..he runs after her and stops her
Fateh : tejo….(while trying to hold her hand and she stops him from touching her )
Tejo: just answer me first fateh …..do u still love jasmine
Fateh: yes I am ..
Tejo : does that night meant nothing to you
He doesn’t answer
Tejo: I got my answer ( while whipping her tears ….fateh was about to say something but someone informs them that jasmine got conscious back and he runs leaving tejo ………….tejo cries seeing him going and leaves the hospitals …………..tejo comes back vrik mansion holding some paper in her hand which she hides after seeing mahi )
Mahi : Bhabhi you came back I thought you will stay with your family today………..i got to know about jasmine how is she now
Tejo : she is fine…I was tired so I came back ……..did everybody went to sleep
Mahi: yeah as we thought u will stay their today so everyone had dinner had slept ….i was just studying for my exams so I was up and was about to go to sleep when I heard ur noise
Tejo: u go and sleep now as it late now
Mahi: yeah but where is fateh veerji
Tejo : he ….he had some work so he said he wil come later
They both goes to their respective rooms tejo locks the door of her room keeps the paper on bed and cries standing in shower remembering everything ……..she cries for few hours like that and then changes her clothes removes chudda, mangalsutra and wirtes a note for fateh …..and leaves the mansion secretly early morning with her bags …………..later fateh comes back morning and mahi sees him
Mahi: fateh veerji you were out for whole night
Fateh: yeah I had some work ….where is tejo
Mahi : she didn’t wake up yet and I thought to let her sleep as she was looking tired
Fateh : okay
Fateh goes to his room and doesn’t see tejo but sees a note
In letter
Tejo : i don’t want to bind you in this unwanted marriage anymore so I am leaving you ……I have sign the divorce papers …..you are free to marry jasmine …..
Fateh sits down crying and seeing divorce papers, chudda and mangalsutra
Fateh : tejo why did you do this
Five years later ( chandigarh )
Fateh on phone : yaa I have seen the place it’s good for opening our academy here …
And he collides with a lady as he was talking on the phone and was walking to his car
Lady : I am sorry …
Fateh : tejo ………..
the episode ends here i will upload next part mostly few hrs later hope u all like it .
36 Comments
Amazing 🤩
Although I would have liked to see Tejo totally give everyone a piece of her mind and make a big scene and maybe slap Jasmine 🤣
But the whole running away and divorce papers was perfect 👌🏽
👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😜😜😜I like.. Very nice story
well i want that but since tejo’s character is like pure soul so i don’t think she can slap her sister plus knowing that there are guest outside and it’s her engagement
Brilliant 👏👏👏
I like this version better… Can’t wait for the update👍
thank you so much
Wow, amazing story line. I loved it. 😍😍😍
I agree with @Ally that Tejo should have slapped Jasmine 😏😏😏, but the divorce papers was also nice touch.
But I wonder how the story would be without the leap 🤔🤔🤔
thank you so much and with out leap i guess the story would be a mess and fateh will turn up like total jerk which i don’t want to portray it..
I enjoyed reading your take and I really hope Fateh realises what he has with Tejo. Not sure which direction the drama is going to take but I’d be up for a Buzzo/Mahi prank on Fateh, for him to realise what Tejo means. Kinda similar to when Tejo went missing and he lost his rag with Jasmine. Not sure what tomorrow holds with the drama, I’m not sure if I’m looking forward to this weeks episodes but I’m looking forward to reading your continuation, need some FaTejo positivity.
well i hoped for the same but seeing a BTS clip video where he was hugging jasmine made me loose all my hope so i am not watching the show anymore
Keep up the good work!! I’m pissed off about the current track I don’t wanna watch😑
thank you
AWESOME episode….❤❤❤
thank you
Can you please bring someone else in tejo’s life instead of uniting hum with Fateh. I feel so irritated that despite being a total jerk ML gets his way through the girl in the name of true love. For once I want the female lead to move on with someone else in her life who truly cared for her. No one cares about the good guy… every one wants the same old jerk….so maybe you can try that.
And this was nice 🙂
well i want that jerk that to realise he lost diamond in search of gold that’s why i will continue with the same thought and plus i planned to keep it short so….
It was lovely…why 5yrs later?!! Anyways, fateh will surely realise his love for tejo…. tejo shld hv memory loss or something a love story all over again.. pls
thank you so much ……..well i would’ve tried for memory lost but would’ve take it long way then ……and i want to keep it short as i don’t have much time in daily life
Telly update par writers ko koi charge dena hota hai kya??
no ….there are no charges
The story was good what you’ve writtened…… I got fed up of the uddariyan storyline these day’s, I mean why fateh is getting attracted to jasmine over and over again he should atlest think of tejo she have done so many sacrifices….. Fateh have to realise importance of tejo.
thanks ……and i also want that …….but looks like it won’t until the show ends
Next
i have submitted the next part it should get upload soon
I really love this show its amazing yrr and it’s sounds some special I love this story also I think we should watch this episode ♥️
thank you
Amazing I don’t know why but it feels like u have pen down my thoughts that is exactly same 👌
oh really ……….thank you
Yeah entire concept of your story is excellent 😊 except a leap so early,as still fateh should regret his decision of leaving tejo and should face all the hurdles and then leap…remaining it’s Perfect and very good than original ongoing track🤗👏.
well i made him regret atleast in my story you get to know it when u will read next part hope i did satisfy you him being regretted let me know ur thoughts after reading next part
@arshiya_princess How to share stories like the tracks of our own ? To tellyupdates…i have many good tracks in my mind for fatejo love story and more .
write down your story in word then search for submit article option in header side …..where u can go through guidelines follow the step and share your stories …….after submit they will go through your article and would send you notification of upload it takes sometime to upload like hours or some times in few hours and also they would notify if their is some error
Loved ur version too… But I also would have loved Tejo to give Jasmine a hot slap….. In private
I surely want to do that so I have a surprise for u guys Which u will see in next parts
I want her to leave everything as the show is getting worse day by day. Even at some point her parents also favour Jasmine more. And there is no point staying with them to get more hurt.
I want a guy who should love tejo more than anything and heals her heart and that man is not fateh.
He is so selfish and I hate it.
Super story
Expecting this track tip be true
Amazing waiting for next