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Ek Duje Ke Vaste Fan Fiction

u r my heartbeat…a shraman os (ek duje ke vaaste)

MarieBy MarieJuly 12, 201643 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello guys!! 😀
Maria here wid a romantic emotional is….
—-u r my heartbeat—–
Hope u lyk it…….

Shr n sumo love echothr deeply…..
But they hid their love frm their family n frnds just waiting fr d ri8 tym to tell dem……..
But fate lead dem to such way where thngs happen unexpectidlyy……
—————–
Shr pov:
I ws dammm happy when she wake up after an huge accident…..i thought dat i almost lose her….. but my sumo cm back to me……

HOSPITAL:
sumo open her eyes n looks around confusingly…….

Shr pov:
But my whole happiness turned into sadness when……..

Hospital:
Sumo wakes up….n shr goes to her…
Shr slightly : sumo…….
Sumo luks at him: excuse me can u plzz…..call my mom…

Shr pov:
when i get to know dat she lost her memory……

Hospital..
shr is in big shocked cause sumo lost hr memoryyy n didnt knw who is he?
Rishab shr frnd told shr in d hospital dat he loves sumo…….
—-she get a double shock aftr listen dis—–cause sumo is shr luv— but nobdy knws dis—-

DAYS PASSES N SUMO CMS HOME…….
—-she gets better bt her memory still didnt came—-
—she just claimed shr as a good frnd but shr loves her deeply—–

Finally rishab’s parents cms to sumo house fr rishab-sumo alliance…..
—rishab is happy as he luvs sumo—-
—-sumo is not happy nor sad she is just obeying her parent’s wish—-
—-shr is dam sad as sumo is d luv of his lyf….but he decided to sacrifice his love fr his best frnd…….
Cause he knw dat sumo’s those those feelings n luv before d accident cant come……

2 DAYS BEFORE D ENGEGMENT :
—shr cms to sumo room—
Shr: hey beautiful…… 🙂
S: hyy..!! 😀 glad u came….i want to show u my engagment dress…..
(she shows him he gives a fake happiness)
Shr: beautiful……just lyk u……. 🙂
—sumo luks on—-
Shr: actually i came here to give u dis…… 🙂
Sumo: wats in dis box…… 🙂
Shr: open it…… (sumo opens d box)
—-it is a beatiful red heart shaped diamond ring in d box—–
Sumo: wow!! 😮 wat a beautiful ring fr me…?? 😀
—-shr nods—-
Sum: thank u thnk u…!! 😀 ( she happily hugs him)
Shr: acha m going…….u take care ( sumo nods)
Shr cms out of d room a tear rolls frm his eye…….—-…..

FLASHBACK:
1 day before d accident….
(sumo n shr r in sm place )
Shr sit on his knees n proposes her wid d same ring……
—-they hug eachothr—–

Present:
—she thinks abt dis n smiles but den gets sad—-

ENGAGMENT DAY:
evrybdy is busy in prepations…..
Preeti cms sumo wid engegment ring…
P: di here is d ring……make rishooo wear dis ring ok…?? 😀
(sumo nods)
—suddenly she feels dat her one earring is missing—-
—she fogot to wear it—-
—-so she go to her room—-

IN ROOM:
—Sumo wears her earring n strts to go when sve finds a diary on her table—-
Sumo goes near table n pick d diary…..
—wbose diary is this??? —-
She opens it n it ws shr diary…….
—–she is shocked to read evry word its all abt her n shr—-

She gets n headache…..n collides with a table…..
She strts to remembers small prts of her memory……
Wind strts blowing n diary’s last page opens……
—-their is a pic of both of them—-
when be proposed her……
—she is shocked tears rolls down frm her face—-
She i weak…. but manages to open her cupboard….

—she takes out d ring—-
—she gets small flashbacks whwn smone makes her wear the same ring—
–she holds her head– in pain—

Door knocked:
A maid sm to call her….
Ma’am engegment function has already strted evry bdy is waiting fr u….
Sumo frm inside: yes!! i…i cmming…….

She goes our her room n decided to tell evrybdy that her memory came back…….
But stopped when she saw dat evrybdy is soo happy……
—evrybdy is having fun—-
N rishab is waitig fr her on d stage—-
She goes n feels helpless…..
—-she has both rings in her hands—-

—she stands in front of him n cries silently—-
—she takes out rish ring n abt to make him wear when he steps back—
—she looks on—-

Ris goes to shr holds his hand n makes him stand infront of sumo—-
—everybody is happy n shr n sumo ws confused—
Ris: here is ur groom make him wear ring…. 😀
sumo confusingly luks at him sbr also—-
Ris: wat m saying d truth….luks at sumo…it ws me who keeps d diary in ur room….so ur memory can came back…… look my try worked….

Shr looks at sumo in shock…..
—evry body strts clapping fr them—
Ris: u sacrificed ur love fr me body…….but when i came to ur room dat day…..

FLASH BACK:
BEFORE D ENGEGMENT….
one day rish cms to shr room…..n finds d diary he is shocked….n tells evry thing to evry body…..he decided to reconcile them…..

PRESENT:
shr hugs him…. 😀 thanks yr thank u soo much…..
Sumo cries in happiness……
Sumo: bt how do u knw my memory……
(i can c d pain in ur eyes when u were standing infront of me) said rishh
Ris: so make echothr wear rings……
Rish: wait….sumo??
—sumo gives him heartshaped same ring—
R: here shr make her wear this ring…….dis ring belongs to her….

—–both makes eachothr wear ring——n got engaeged—–
—shr hugs sumo—-
Shr: i love u…i cant lose u…..
Sumo: m also glad my memory came back…..my feeling…..i love u toooo
shr: u r my heartbeat…..
—n kisses her on cheeks—

———THE END———-

so guys how ws it?? 😀
did u lyk it.. ??
If a little bit then plzzz cmmnt…..!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
N silent readers dont stay silent u toooo cmmnt….. 😉 🙂 😉

By by guys !
LOVE U ALL…..! 😀

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    43 Comments

    1. Lily on July 12, 2016 4:57 pm

      Sweet and lovely…..

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 6:44 pm

        Thanks a lot dear….!! 😀

    2. Fatimagulesarfraz on July 12, 2016 5:01 pm

      What a story yr ???? .. ap k mind me esi stories ati kahan se hn ? ? … really hats off ????

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 6:45 pm

        Hahah thank u sooo much dear…!! Wat a lovely cmmnt! 😀 😀

    3. Prettypreeti on July 12, 2016 5:12 pm

      Hey maro yaar u r awesome how can u write so much and so nicely loved it a lot and dp change kr li nayi photo aayi ki change ho gayi dp loved ur d,ur os ,ur ffs and u

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 7:01 pm

        Hyyy preeti dear!! 🙂
        Awww thank u sooo much dear!! M glad u lyked it! 😉
        Hahahah dp change…..!
        Thank u so much fr loving evry thing….!!
        I tooooo love u sooo much dear…!!

    4. Nandu on July 12, 2016 5:22 pm

      Its was really cute and sweet. Keep writing.

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 6:59 pm

        Thank u sooo much Nandu dear !! 😉 🙂

    5. Khushi on July 12, 2016 5:22 pm

      Yaar Maria aaj toh lagta hai ki mera rone ka din hai….subah se kitni baar to chuki Hun…..but thank God u had a happy ending yr….Varna jab Maine padha ki sumo ki memory loss ho gya toh sachi meri eyes mein aansun the……u r just out of the world Maria….itne ache ideas hote hai tere paas….stay blessed dear…..big tight hug and big kiss from me…love u dear???

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 6:57 pm

        Awwww hamari khushi roti hoi nai hansi hoi achi Lagti hai!! 😀
        N thank u so so much fr such a sweet cmmnt yr….!! Ur cmmnts r really boosters fr me as I said already….!! 🙂 🙂
        Lots of kisses n tight hugs frm me toooo dear….!!
        Love u too dear…!
        Stay happy stay blessed!! 😉

    6. Nandu on July 12, 2016 5:23 pm

      It was really cute and sweet. Keep writing. Are u maria?

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 6:47 pm

        Thanks a lot dear!! Yes dear m maria! 🙂 🙂

    7. LovelyLady on July 12, 2016 5:29 pm

      Ooo my os queen… u really deserve this….
      I loved d story upto its core… hw cn u wrt so good yaar?? Kuch tips hme bhi do…
      Really loved rishab of this story. He was d real hero… isnt it??

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 6:55 pm

        Awwwww thank u sooooo sooo much fr such an amazing compliment di….!!
        N abt d tips hahhahah how can I give u tips jabke Maine khud apse hi inspire hi kar likhna seekha hai u r my inspiration…!! 🙂 🙂
        Yes rishoo is d real hero….wo na hota to shahiad…….
        Love u di…
        N erglyyyy waiting fr the ep of together forever n ANJCK….. Season 2….!! Plzz post soon! 😉

      • LovelyLady on July 12, 2016 7:41 pm

        thnk u sooo mch fr sYing all this… bt really ur wrtng inspires,me…..,a lot ….
        no majak…. i m saying dis,seriously….
        ya,dear,i wll try to post vry soon… perhaps,tmmrw…
        i am too missing all thise love n cmmnt on my pGes….

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 9:13 pm

        Great lovely di yaayyy…!!! 😀 ap ka ep bhi post hone wala hai m soo happy!! 😀
        thank u fr saying such great words fr me…….!! 😀
        even i m nt worth dat but u r…..!! 😉

      • Angel_pari on July 12, 2016 7:53 pm

        Heyyyy lovy how us ur health now?????
        Did ur fever says bye to u?

    8. ufaq on July 12, 2016 5:35 pm

      Knock knock Mario
      Small one but good one liked it infact loved it
      Love u most
      Take care

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 6:59 pm

        Opening door…………
        Aww thank u so much api!!
        Love u mostest!! 😀 😀
        U too take care…..

    9. Khushi on July 12, 2016 5:47 pm

      Hey Maria…I have got an idea for OS….with this same memory loss track….can I use ur this memory loss idea and go ahead with my OS???

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 6:46 pm

        Han Han kyun nai ye Bhi koi pooochne ki baat hai….
        Infact mujhe toh Lagta hai tu ye idea (memory loss) wala mujh se Bhi acha use kare gi 😉 😉 😉
        Go ahead…!!
        Really want to c in ur style!

      • Khushi on July 12, 2016 7:01 pm

        Haha aisa kuch nhi hai…bas dimaag mein aaya so thought to write… I will write and maybe it will get posted by tomm

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 9:18 pm

        Wah wah lekin yr tumhare dimagh ke ideas bhi kmaal bemisaal hote hain….!!
        Bs kl aajai jaldi se….. 😉

    10. WeirdSister on July 12, 2016 6:04 pm

      Wow….maria….loved it!!!!…..u write os so well….???

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 9:10 pm

        Awww thank u sooo much weird sis…… fr such a lovely cmmnt..!! 🙂 🙂
        m glad u lyked it…! 😀

    11. Shiny on July 12, 2016 6:39 pm

      Yaar kya kamal ki luv stry hai..heart touching…soooo niceeeeee…..

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 9:12 pm

        Thank u sooo much yr shiny….!! 😀
        So gald to knw dat u loved it…..!! 🙂 🙂

    12. Nikita on July 12, 2016 6:53 pm

      It was damn amazing.. Lved it to the core.. How can u write so well.. Love you marie di

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 9:20 pm

        Awww my cutie nikki…!!!
        Thank u sooo much yr !! 🙂
        Haha mere chote se dimagh me jo ideas aate hain i just write them….! 😉 😉
        Love u too my dear…!

    13. angel_pari on July 12, 2016 7:05 pm

      Wowwww maira it was really touching and emotional story with happy ending lov u u rocked

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 9:22 pm

        Thank u sooo much pari di…..!! 🙂
        So happy to knw dat u lyked it…!! 😀
        love u toooo !! 🙂

    14. sona on July 12, 2016 7:38 pm

      Oops..I’m become so late..
      But..still…I wanna..say..that I loved it..
      So..sweet story…u rocked my dear maria..?☺☺☺

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 9:24 pm

        Haha no worries…! 😀
        thank u soo much sona di…….
        Lots of love…!! 🙂

    15. Anamika on July 12, 2016 9:18 pm

      Maria Maria jus amazing….. this was short by soo cute…. loved it??

      • Marie on July 12, 2016 10:04 pm

        Awww thank u sooooo much anamika dear…!! M really glad u lyked it dear…!!

    16. Ishq Forever on July 13, 2016 3:11 am

      Awesome

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 10:22 am

        Thanks alot ishq! keep cmmnting! 😉 🙂

    17. Naina on July 13, 2016 7:22 am

      It was wonderful really heart touching loved it

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 10:24 am

        Thank u sooo much dear…!! 🙂 :)m reqlly glad u lyk it…!! 🙂

    18. Fatarajo on July 13, 2016 5:32 pm

      wow marie I am out of words its toooooo gooooooooooood loved it a lot

      • Marie on July 13, 2016 8:40 pm

        Thank u sooo much fatarajo…,fr such a lovely cmmnt..!!! 😀 😀

    19. madhuri on July 13, 2016 8:03 pm

      Nice maria. I love it
      ???

    20. Marie on July 13, 2016 8:41 pm

      Thanks a lot lot…!! Fr such an a sweet cmmnt dear…!! 🙂 🙂

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