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Home»Fan Fiction»U never know what destiny has kept for u….TwiRaj (episode 28)
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U never know what destiny has kept for u….TwiRaj (episode 28)

risaBy risaJune 24, 201617 Comments3 Mins Read
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28th episode! Gonna reach 30 soon…. hope to see new comments for my new dp on the 30th episode….guys plz keep comments….writers no that there r many silent readers…..but its the comment of the readers that give us strength to continue…..if u like this ff n want it to continue than plz comment…..its request yaar….if u want u comment not forcing u…..n heres the epi….

Inside sports room
Twiraj were stuck badly. Twinkle took ball n hit yuvi.
Twinkle: found only sportroom or wat? Couldnt u get stuck in canteen kitchen…..oops….
Yuvi laughed.
Yuvi: so jangli billi is hungry……so sad i have bubbly u no…
He showed twinkle bubbly chocolate.
Yuvi: want or not?

Twinkle: give it to me!
Yuvi: never.
Yuvi ran. Twinkle chased him.
Twinkle: give my bubbly then run.
Yuvi laughed n continued to run.

20 mins later
Twiraj were tired. Twinkle was huffing n puffing.
Twinkle: my bubbly…..
Yuvi: no….never….
Words were not able to come out. Finally yuvi gave in. He gave choclate to twinkle.
Twinkle: yippee!!!
Yuvi: dont get so happy…..
Twinkle saw packet. It was empty. Twinkle fumed. She pinced yuvi.
Yuvi: ouch!!!!
Twinkle: locked in sportroom, then making others run in sportroom, now no reward for running…
Yuvi: so baby wants reward…..
He kisses her cheeks suddenly. Twinkle gets shocked. She comes back tosenses n hugs yuvi n kisses his cheeks back.
Twinkle: love u!
Yuvi: love u too!

Voice: *cough*
Twiraj turn around. It was nik n chinki who opened sportroom window to save them.
Chinki: i got ur message n came running here…..but now i think i should not have come so fast….should have taken time….
Nik n chinki laugh. Twiraj blush.

Outside
Twiraj n nik n chinki were walking.
Yuvi: couldnt u message little later….we had just began to enjoy u no…..
Twinkle: so my romeo wants more romance…..
Yuvi nods his head. Twinkle laughs.
Behind bushes abhi was hiding.
Abhi: not so long…..i will separate u two forever…..hahaha…..

At taneja house
Twinkle returned. Leela was sitting there.
Leela: so how was sports day.
Twinkle: nice.
Leela: ok…..go n fresh urself….
Twinkle felt weird at her moms reply. But she ignored n went on.

At twinkle room
Twinkle freshened up n sat there. She put her head on pillow n was staring at yuvi’s pic on her phone.

Twinkle: hotness ki dukaan…..kitna pyaar karti hoon main tujhe…..my monkey man….
N she kissed the pic. Leela who was standing near door saw this.
Leela: puttar….i dont want to separate u from yuvi….but he is anita’s son…i no i am planning all this with anita…..but somewhere i do trust u……i no u cant be wrong….but what if that munda is playing with ur feelings….i love u puttar….wish u can understand ur maa…..
She went away. Twinkle still kept staring at photo n smiled by herself. (Maybe lost in her ‘dreams’)

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How was it. Plz comment. Sayonarra. Comment. I wanna see comment.

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    17 Comments

    1. taanu on June 24, 2016 7:05 pm

      Awesome

      • risa on June 24, 2016 8:45 pm

        Thanks tannu. Hope to see more of ur comments 🙂

    2. Taanu on June 24, 2016 7:07 pm

      Nice

      • risa on June 24, 2016 8:46 pm

        Thanks again Tannu.

    3. Laddoo on June 24, 2016 7:13 pm

      Hey bhagwaan! ‘Ab aage aage dekho hota hai kya’ type ka kuch ho rha hai. Uff can’t wait to read ahead…

      • risa on June 24, 2016 8:47 pm

        Thanks laddoo…..twist aa raha hai 😉

    4. Manny on June 24, 2016 7:23 pm

      Nice!!!!!

      • risa on June 24, 2016 8:47 pm

        Thanks manny

    5. rashiverma2199 on June 24, 2016 7:45 pm

      Risa…fab dear….awesome…..

      • risa on June 24, 2016 8:48 pm

        Thanks rashi. 🙂

    6. Sayeeda on June 24, 2016 7:53 pm

      Amazing…..loved it….too good..
      Happy to see ur episode …love u

      • risa on June 24, 2016 8:48 pm

        Tq sayeeda. Good that ur loving it. 🙂

    7. anjvi on June 24, 2016 7:59 pm

      nice very nice

      • risa on June 24, 2016 8:49 pm

        Thanks a lot anjvi. 🙂 plz comment like this in all my coming episode. 😉

    8. 123 on June 24, 2016 10:24 pm

      Loved it risa.;-) fab writer. Keepwritinglikethis. Love u ★★★★★★★

    9. sohana on June 25, 2016 4:38 pm

      I was a silent reader.but now I cant stop myself from commenting ..thanks for such good ff..pls update the next part soon..

    10. Sparkle on June 25, 2016 5:07 pm

      Nice

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