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Home»Fan Fiction»U ARE ONLY MINE I AM ONLY URS (RAGLAK) SHOT-8
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U ARE ONLY MINE I AM ONLY URS (RAGLAK) SHOT-8

HaripriyaBy HaripriyaSeptember 21, 201724 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hiii friends…. Really tq for reading my shorts…thanks a lot for the comments… It values more to me…love u all…and i have doubt..wheater to complete this in 10shorts or u want a long flashback…please say ur suggestions…

Lets start…
L:bhai get up…we have to pick up chotu..
S:what…with irritation…
And saw laksh..fully ready…
S:is this my dream…
L:bhai..with a pout..
S:oii now it is just 5..they must be sleeping..
L:but we have to get ready..
S:r u saying this..because of chotu or…
L:bhaiii..hitting sanskar..
S:ohh someone is blushing here like a girl…
L:uuuu…and pushed sanskar into bathroom…..come soon…
Laksh went and stood before the mirror.. And adjusting his hair..

Lak pov..
Is that I am excited to see chotu or rags…but what happened to her..why she behaving weird…..she was my best friend..She was my lucky charm….i still remember.. When i saw her…
Flashback…
Laksh after completing…. 12th..has planned to join…a famous clg…in Mumbai.. (This all about place and clg is not true)
L:maa i want to join only in that clg…
A:but..don’t u think of us laksh…ur dad..bhai..and all
L:but maa this is my dream..
A:i know but..the place is the problem..
L:what do u mean ma..
A:that is very traditional… And u will not be allowed to use technology…
L;but maa I want to join..
S:who is waiting to give u admission…
L:bhaiii..
A:it is very though to get admission their…
S:s and u should alone go to get admission.. If u r selected… U have to continuously… Be their for 4yrs…and u can’t contact us..
L:this is my final decision….i am leaving tomorrow… Gud n8.

Next day morning…
He said bye to all..and boarded the train…it was a ac couch..and pre booked.. He was setting alone…then a girl came..covering her face under het dupatta…along her father..
F:see u should get admission… Its my order.. .
G:s sir…
F:and don’t talj too any one. .
G:s sir..
And he say laksh opposite to her seat..and he called ttr…laksh was looking at him confused..
F:change my daughter place. .opposite to some girl.
T:sry..it already re-served.. So we can’t change. Its rules..
F:hell With ur rules….and ttr goes..then he saw laksh and then her..
F:she..u should not talk with.. This boy..pointing laksh…
G:s sir…bending her head..
F:kk read properly..bye..and he moved out…

Lak pov…
What kind of father he is…he so harsh to her…and not concerned about her…it is hell being with him…i think its going to be bore..being with his daughter… Who will wear…gugad…in this generation…
And saw her…only her lips were shown…
How will she be..but her lips are like rose petals..
His thought was disturbed…by the girl..
G:oiii…
He saw her in a questioning way…am i dreaming…. How it is possible..
G:yeh man….see weather my father has gone…
He checked.. Once..
L:s he s gone..
The train started….
G:is it confirm…getting up checking her father has gone…..were she didn’t notice a bag is going to fall on her…from the top….when she saw..it she closed her eye in fear…

Then she felt a sudden pull…yes was nonother then our laksh…due to the sudden action.. Both feel on the floor… He was on top of her….
Some how he lifted himself…but dashed the seat and again feel on her…due to this…his lips landed on her cheeks…where her half face was covered..then slowly lifted his head nd saw her..who was still sheavering…in fear…he slowly lifted her gungad…and saw a angelic… Face..its our ragini…he was totally mesmerized…
Screen freezes on….

Plzz give ur suggestions guys…if u say i will complete this in another…3shots….

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    24 Comments

    1. Akankshanna on September 22, 2017 12:30 am

      papa khalnayak(villain)……..possessiveeee ………….laku don… nnnnn

    2. teitokUn1718 on September 22, 2017 12:32 am

      Loved it…
      Long flashback but final decision is your’s…

    3. lovely7 on September 22, 2017 7:11 am

      Awesome

    4. nishu on September 22, 2017 8:33 am

      nice amazing superb next part soon don’t be late

    5. Aleeza on September 22, 2017 11:29 am

      Awesome

    6. Anju on September 22, 2017 3:31 pm

      Awesome episode want long fb

    7. Malu on September 22, 2017 4:20 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    8. Mintu on September 22, 2017 4:27 pm

      Awesome dear..post little bit long update

    9. Vini on September 22, 2017 4:47 pm

      Loved it, keep writing more episodes

    10. Raglak_fan on September 22, 2017 5:24 pm

      Fantastic dear

    11. Sherin on September 22, 2017 6:50 pm

      Awesome dear and want long flash back

    12. Elizabethlovely on September 22, 2017 7:56 pm

      Awesome

    13. Vennila on September 22, 2017 8:37 pm

      Awesome episode

    14. Monisha on September 22, 2017 9:40 pm

      Superbbbb

    15. Arjuna on September 23, 2017 7:14 am

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    16. Jiyani on September 23, 2017 8:45 am

      Amazing dear…plz write long flashback

    17. Thahseem on September 23, 2017 11:48 am

      Nice

    18. Soumya on September 23, 2017 12:19 pm

      Superb di….post next soon

    19. Ammu on September 23, 2017 1:00 pm

      As usual outstanding episode dear. Raglak first meeting is interesting and I loved it a lot. Please write long flashback because I want to know what happend in Raglak life in past detaily. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP. Love u dear and take care

    20. Aamy on September 23, 2017 2:42 pm

      Awesome

    21. Monu on September 23, 2017 3:26 pm

      Interesting dear

    22. Laashya on September 23, 2017 4:22 pm

      Lovely di and of course make it long
      Plz di don’t end soon plz plz

    23. Ashly on September 23, 2017 7:06 pm

      Awesome superb

    24. Pearly on September 23, 2017 7:57 pm

      Nice part

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