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Home»Fan Fiction»Two selfish lovers – Ragsan (pt 10)
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Two selfish lovers – Ragsan (pt 10)

A12345By A12345February 12, 2018Updated:February 15, 201824 Comments5 Mins Read
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Let’s begin….

Rag was worried confused scared panicked and wat not..
She was sweating….

She looks at sanskar…

San burst into laughter……????

He rotates his around her face

San????????:hahaha… Just look at your face..i didnt knew you will take me so seriously…hahaha…omg..omg…haha….haha…damn…your this reaction is printed in my mind for forever… Hahaha..the way you are reacting like i will eat in no second…hahaha…. Sanky looks like even your day hv come.. the one who is impossible to believe me was affected by my words..one miniute ha…

He takes his mobile:plz just one selfie with your that reaction..you were looking so cute…

Rag angrily looks at other side..bt she was relieved…his question made her froze for a moment…she never felt this weak..bt his questions made it…

Rag herself:did i hv really loved laksh then?…no..no..no..Ragini wat you are thinking!forget his madness..it was his prank…and I love Laksh…Laksh is my love and it’s only him…and now..i m in the verge of losing laksh bcs of Sanskar..if i would hv not come here… I..i cant forget laksh…i hv sacrificed everytime and everything i love for others…bt not this time… Laksh is mine …he is mine

This was more like she was assuring herself…bt somewhere in her heart Sanskar questions is raising…

San himself: you don’t need to tell me Ragini…bcs your eyes is a open book of your heart and your facial expression hv confirmed it! I needed this much…ab beta Sanskar don’t leave any chance…???

After sometime….

Rag looks at sanskar who driving…

He was smiling continuously….

San continuing his smiling session: don’t stare me..kuch kuch hota hai Ragini tum nai samjogi

Rag looks other side..and murmurms:mad

He starts to whistling…he was so happy like he hv won something big

Rag was noticing him: why r u smiling continuously?

San: omg..Ragini..shaadi hua nahi..from now only you r behaving like wife

Rag:ahh…m sorry…bhaksh dho mujhe…

San:waise bhi..i was abt to tell you only…

Rag:i m not interested..

San:bt i m interested…like after marriage..we both will go on long drive like this only…and at back seat our 4 kids..3 girls and one boy..how cute

Rag keeps her palm on eyes being frustrated…

San was looking at Ragini…

Rag looks front: sanskaaaaar….aage dekho…

San looks front puts the sudden break…

Rag immediately comes out of the car

And there was a little girl who has closed her eyes by her hands…due to fear….

Rag goes to her and kneels to her

Rag:beta aap theek tho hai…did something happened

Rag looks at her making sure she isn’t hvng any wound..

Rag:baccha..you are alright dont get scared

The lil girl immediately hugs her…
Rag at first was shocked then smiles..

And hugs her back..
Rag:you r alright…

San comes:let me check the lil princess

Lil girl turns to him..she looks at him…
And then smiles..

San smiles at her widely

Lil girl:is this car yours?

San smiles:ha..

She hugs him from his waist

San smiles…

She leaves him and picks her bag…and runs and sits in the car confusing both Ragsan

Rag:sanskar..if you see the road the girl would hv not been scared

San:m sorry…i was just lost!aage se nai hoga

Rag goes and sits

San too sits…

Rag:wat is your name?

Lil girl:khushi!

Ragsan smiles..:good name khushi

San:san..do you want to go somewhere? where’s your house?

Khushi to Ragini:wat is your name?

Khushi takes book and pencil from her bag…

Rag smiles:Ragini!

Khushi:spelling

Rag:R.A.G.I.N.I

Khushi to Sanskar:wat is your name?(she hits her head)full name?

San laughs a bit:Sanskar Maheshwari

Khushi:big name…she smiles widely…spelling

Rag:S.A.N.S.K.A.R M.A.H.E.S.H.W.A.R.I

San to Ragini:you know…wow

Rag:wat a joke..should i laugh?

Khushi:Yay my family complete…MY DAD SANSKAR MAHESHWARI..MY MOM RAGINI SANSKAR MAHESHWARI AND ME KHUSHI SANSKAR MAHESHWARI

Ragsan:waaaaaaaaaaattttttt???????

San:wat you just said beta?i think my ear drums are playing drums

Rag:khushi..wat did you say?

Khushi:oh ho mumma papa..i m your khushi!

Ragsan were like??????????

Khushi:papa…papa..papa..pappa

San looks at her and points to himself

Khushi smiles cutely

Khushi:i m Papa’s princess na…!

San??:ha?
Khushi smiles:i hv prepared a song you pappa..shall i sing

San was in shock he nods his head
Khushi sings
Chanda Ne Poocha Taaron Se
Taaron Ne Poocha Hazaaron Se
Sab Se Pyara Kaun Hai
Papa Mere Papa
Papa Mere Papa
Papa Mere Papa
Papa Mere Papa

Khushi:it was good na pappa…
She looks at Ragini who no less than sanskar

Khushi: don’t feel bad mumma..i hv something for you too…

Khushi sings:Tu Kitni Achchhi Hai, Tu Kitni Bholi Hai
Pyaari Pyaari Hai O Maa Aa Aa O Maa
O Maa Aa Aa O Maa
Ke Yeh Jo Duniya Hai, Yeh Ban Hai Kaanto Ka
Tu Phulwaari Hai O Maa Aa Aa O Maa
O Maa Aa Aa O Maa

Khushi:how was it mumma..bolo na..pappa..!

Ragsan looks at eachother?????

To be continued…..

Confused? Who is Khushi?and why she is admitting Ragsan as mom dad?
Now you would definitely be thinking “yeh kya naya siyappa hai…hai na!”

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A12345

    Fan of drashti&gurmeet and obviously tevar my ragsan???i get new story on them everyday bt too busy to write?

    24 Comments

    1. manu on February 13, 2018 4:50 am

      Fantastic

    2. vini on February 13, 2018 5:52 am

      Outstanding

    3. Ammy on February 13, 2018 6:23 am

      Superb

    4. maha on February 13, 2018 7:08 am

      Sooooosoooo superbbbbbbbbb update.

    5. Mk on February 13, 2018 8:00 am

      Amazing dr.

    6. Ishu on February 13, 2018 8:46 am

      Nice

    7. Smriti on February 13, 2018 9:32 am

      Just can’t wait for d next part…. Please update soon… ??

    8. sug on February 13, 2018 11:01 am

      ossssssssooooooommmmmmmm update soooooooooooooooooon

    9. Myrah on February 13, 2018 11:03 am

      Hehe , reading it here again 😛 , aloooooo tu naa ab jaldi update kar dena !!
      Laado ko bohot pasand aaya ye wala part !! Ab bata meri laado ko aur kitna wait karwayegi ??Update complicated naa pleashhhhh !! And and story of a girl is pending from ages
      Laado love ….Laado story of a girl …..Laado aloooo …..Laado update karnaa ….Laado request kar rai h ….Laado please

      • A12345 on February 13, 2018 4:40 pm

        Ages????hawww…

    10. nive on February 13, 2018 4:13 pm

      Sisssy I’m also shocked after reading this part. Ragsan had a daughter. Loved it. Update next part soon.

    11. Ria on February 13, 2018 4:22 pm

      Superb di… omg I literally wanna see ragsan reactions..

    12. pinky on February 13, 2018 4:48 pm

      Awesome. Nice twist.

    13. keerthi on February 13, 2018 5:44 pm

      Awesomeee

    14. vani on February 13, 2018 6:07 pm

      Amazing dear. U have a super fast brain

      • A12345 on February 14, 2018 11:31 am

        ??? hehe why so?

    15. RAGSANIAN on February 13, 2018 6:20 pm

      Amazinggggggggg. Just can’t wait to read next part. Update pyaar ki daastan also.

    16. aditi on February 13, 2018 6:29 pm

      Awww mumma pappa its so nice yaar.

    17. geet on February 13, 2018 6:57 pm

      What????? Ragsan married that tooooooo daughter. Fantabulous.

    18. Anu on February 13, 2018 7:14 pm

      Nice

    19. Ragsan on February 13, 2018 7:42 pm

      Awesome. All RAGSAN writers update ur stories.

    20. PriyaS on February 13, 2018 8:09 pm

      Awesome. Ragsan are so cute

    21. Neethu on February 13, 2018 8:50 pm

      Awesome

    22. moni on February 13, 2018 9:42 pm

      Superb

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