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Home»Zee TV»Do Dil Bandhe Ek Dori Se»Two Hearts in One String : Rani Three Shots- Part 1
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Two Hearts in One String : Rani Three Shots- Part 1

RevuBy RevuApril 9, 20229 Comments8 Mins Read
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Shivani’s View

Raghu, why you haven’t arrived till ? 5 years have passed and I was waiting for you, Why you are not coming back,Raghu.

Dad : Don’t be a fool Shivani. Raghu is dead, why you are not listening to us ? How long will you look at this photo ?

Shivani : Did the police give his body ? Unless I sees Raghu infront of me I won’t believe in these sort of things.

Dad : Shivani, Commissoner has arrived to see you.

Shivani : Why ? I already quit the job, I am a big failure being a police officer. My husband Raghu was trapped and kidnapped by them. And I wasn’t able to find the criminals and I didn’t find Raghu also.

Dad : Shivani beta stop blaming yourself for this. You are a brave woman, so go and do your duty.

Commissoner : Shivani

Shivani : ACP Shivani reporting sir.

Commissoner : We need to find a person who has kidnapped Home minister’s child. Shivani department needs your service. Please come back.

Shivani : Sir, I already said post Raghu’s missing I am not able to focus on anything. That’s why I quit the job.

Commissoner : Shivani don’t say like that. Our job doesn’t gives 100% guarantee of protection. Does that mean we should stop doing work ?

Dad : Commissoner is right Shivani. I think you will also get a change if you goes with him.

Shivani : Okay dad.

Shivani looks at the another wall pic of hers with her dad and Raghu

Shivani wears her uniform and goes with Commissoner. On the way she recalls her moments with Raghu.

AT THE FIRST NIGHT OF RaNi Marriage

 

Shivani was crying continuously

Raghu : Yeh kyaa, You are a police officer and you are crying ?

Shivani :Police officer doesn’t have the right to cry ? I told my Chaacha – Chaachi a lot don’t do this to me.

Raghu : But Shivani after taking approvals from us only they took the decision.

Shivani : I never wished for being in an arranged marriage.

Raghu : Toh kya tum love marriage chahti thi ?

Shivani :No, I just don’t marriage in life. It will affect my profession. Moreover why only girl needs to leave home and should go to Sasural ? Why boys are not leaving ?

Raghu : These are part of rituals, I seriously don’t know the reason behind it. But one thing I wants to say, You looks very bad while crying. I know you have been bought up by your Chaacha and Chaachi as your parents died when you was a kid , they did your upbringing well and you became a police officer. In my case I was bought up by my Dad only. And dad considers you as his beti. He always wanted he should get a beti, but bad luck I born as his son. But now he is happy as you have come as his beti.

Shivani : Did he say like that ?

Raghu : Yeah Shivani.

Shivani ; Raghu you are really very sweet person. But I feels I didn’t match you well.

Raghu ; Don’t say like that, Shivani. If you feels I am not the right choice then you can give two-three punches on my body like you deals with certain thieves who steals bag, purse .

Shivani smiles with teary eyes

Raghu : Keep smiling and give a punch to me.

Shivani quicly hugged him, Raghu was surprised with this deed, he couldn’t hug her back

Shivani : Thanks for being friendly to me, Can you please take me to a long drive in your bike ? Please

Raghu : Now?

Shivani : Yeah,please Raghu

Raghu : But Shivani

Shivani : You thinks what will others say , hey naa ?

Raghu : Don’t worry. I will take you.

Shivani : Is it

Raghu nods his head.

RaNi comes infront of their house

Dad : Where are you going ? Woh bhi in wedding dress ?

Raghu : Dad,  Shivani wants I should take her for a long drive

Dad smiles

Dad : May be she would have bored with all wedding customs and a long drive can cheer her well. Go for it, guys

Shivani : Thanks Dad. I can call you dad naa ?

Dad : Of course beta. We can talk later. Go fast.

Shivani : Ji

Raghu starts the bike, Shivani sits in back of the bike

Raghu : Chale

Shivani : Yeah

At a point Shivani started again crying. Raghu stops the bike. he finds the chunari has fell down at road. Raghu picked it and covered her head with the Chunari.

But Shivani was crying and crying only,

Raghu : Oh My God! How should I stop tears of this cute Police Officer ? Shall I say jokes ?

Shivani looked him with teary eyes

Raghu : It will not work, Okay. Shivani actually before marriage we didn’t get any time to interract with each other. So that’s why we don’t know very much each other. When you keeps crying what will your Chaacha do to stop it ?

Shivani : When I was kid Chaacha used to take me to mela and I use to sit at the Carrousel and I used to enjoy it a lot.

Raghu : I can’t make arrangement of that one by overnight. But I promise I will take you there one day.

Shivani : Thanks Raghu, You are too good. I won’t cry and trouble you again.

Shivani wipes her tears

Shivani : I feels so tired, Can we go back home ?

Raghu : Why you only said you wants to go somewhere ?

Shivani : Yeah but, Raghu please I think if I sleep well by tomorrow my mood will be refreshing.

Raghu : As you wish

They reaches back home , as soon as both entered in the room Shivani fall asleep in bed .

Raghu smiles , he sleeps on the sofa .

NEXT DAY MORNING

Shivani wakes up early and finds Raghu was sleeping at the sofa only. She looks his face and smiles. Raghu woke up much late and when he came down he finds Shivani and Dad were playing Antakshari. Dad kept his hand on her cheek

Dad ; Shivani, now I feels so relaxed, Beta tomorrow we can play any other game

Shivani : Yes dad

Raghu : Accha , so now you both joined without me ?

Dad : Learn something from your wife. She wake up early, did yoga, then took a bath and also prepared coffee for me. Now we played Antakshari. Tum hamesha Kumbhkarna ke jaise sote ho, kabhi time pe udta nahi.

Shivani : Dad, Raghu must be tired that’s why he wake up late

Raghu : Exactly, thank god At least you believes that I am not Kumbhkarna

Shivani ; Thing is he was a daring demon, but you are a cute Rakshas only.

Dad : Rakshas cute bhi hote hein ?

Shivani : Kyun nahi ? By the way I have bought something to you.

Raghu : For me ?

Shivani : Yeah , Raghu show your hand

Shivani ties a watch on his wrist.

Raghu : Shivani yeh toh

Shivani ; My first gift to my Husband , How is it ?

Raghu : It’s beautiful

Dad : Yeh toh koyi bhi keh sakte hein. Tumne koyo gift nahi diya apni wife ko ?

Raghu : Dad, woh..woh

Dad : Ek number ke Donkey ho tum , Apni wife ko gift nahi diya ? Dekh meri beti kp kitna khayal rakhti hein tumhara , aur tum. Shivani , I need to meet one of my friend. Raghu I will come bit late. Waise bhi mein tum donon kee privacy mein interfere nahi karunga.

Raghu : Dad there is nothing like that

Dad : Tum naa donkey ke baccha bankar hee raho, Kuch samjho

Raghu : Kaise samjhun ? Dad mein toh Donkey kaa baccha hoon naa ?

Dad : Tum yeh toh nahi kehna chahte kee mein donkey hoon ?

Shivani laughs

Raghu : What can I do ? Mein toh aapka beta hoon.

Dad : Tumhein toh mein

Raghu starts running, dad follows him

Raghu : Shivani, save me .

At their running race, Raghu hits Shivani accidentally, Shivani fells down

Raghu : Shivani

Raghu picked up Shivani in his arms

Dad : Lo ho gaye. Abb toh mujhe samjhane kee zarurat nahi, he smiles and leaves

Raghu takes Shivani to room and makes her to sit at the bed.

Shivani looks Raghu

Raghu : You feels pain, I am sorry .

He applied pain balm on her leg .

Raghu ; You may take rest. I will bring juice for you.

Slowly Raghu and started building up friendship , as per their families wish both of them goes for a honeymoon trip. They stayed in a resort.

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    9 Comments

    1. Jasminerahul on April 10, 2022 2:02 am

      Shocking that raghu is asummed to be dead.surprising that shivani is a police officer.like raghu said she is a cute police officer.shocking that shivani cried as she didn’t want to get married.how raghu was cracking jokes to make her cheerful was cute.surprising that she hugged him.night drive was cute.dad n shivani bonding is so cute.when I read the first scene I didn’t think that he was her father in law.I thought he was her dad.raghu n dad teasing each other was funny.RaNi watch scene was cute.when shivani fell down raghu carrying her in his arms was sweet.honeymoon in the resort.cool.waiting to see their honeymoon scenes.perfect pics.

      Is this the Arhan Mansi os you planned to write a few days back?

      • Revu on April 10, 2022 7:44 am

        Yes, actually due to lack of time I split it as three shots, will give next part when I get time. Thanks a lot

    2. Jasminerahul on April 10, 2022 2:04 am

      I am glad that you wrote a raghu shivani story. Bcz these days I prefer to read ffs on old jodies on which no one is writing ffs.

      • Revu on April 10, 2022 7:46 am

        Yeah I miss this show very much, especially Arhaan is one of my favourite actor. I heard that Arhaan will come in Gud se Meetha Ishq but not as the main lead, May be he will be paired with Meera( Chakor of Udaan)

      • Jasminerahul on April 10, 2022 9:47 am

        Actually I have not seen this show.i have seen the pics n promos.but I liked the jodi.I also like Arhaan.yes,he is there in gud se. I hope he gets a parallel track n is opposite meera,not a villain like jinn.I hope his role doesn’t get over like it happened in jinn.

    3. Jasminerahul on April 11, 2022 4:43 pm

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TlQrdmAC4ms
      have u seen this trailer of Ashwini Surve’s Pocket FM story?Is it possible 4 u to write an os or TS on this concept?Since its Ashwini in the trailer,you can either cast Atharv Vividha in this story or any other couple who suits this story.
      I have posted part2 of Sasumaa’s bahu no:!.

      • Revu on April 11, 2022 7:11 pm

        I haven’t watched it , for now I won’t be able to write as I am not getting enough time. Will watch and tell you if I can write on it or not

      • Revu on April 11, 2022 7:12 pm

        Will read your articles soon

      • Jasminerahul on April 11, 2022 7:43 pm

        There is no need of writing it now as you have lots of ffs.you can write it whenever you get time.

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