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Home»Fan Fiction»a twist in the tale; swabhiman (chapter 13)
Fan Fiction Swabhimaan

a twist in the tale; swabhiman (chapter 13)

NainaSharmaBy NainaSharmaApril 8, 201716 Comments5 Mins Read
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at night, naina gave karan the medicines he had to take.

naina: karan, you have to have a spoon of this syrup and take these pills.

karan: naina, they all taste so bad.

naina: karan, it’s just a matter of three months. after that, all of this is over.

after karan took his medicines, they had to decide who was going to sleep where.

naina: karan, i’ll sleep on the sofa and you sleep on the bed.

karan: no naina, you sleep on the bed, i’ll sleep on the sofa.

naina: but karan,

nirmala heard them and came in.

nirmala: naina, karan, is everything okay between the two of you?

naina: yes ma, why?

nirmala: then, why are the both of you sleeping separately?

naina: oh ma, vishal bhai said that it’s better if for the next three months we slept separately in case karan gets touched or he touches me.

nirmala: so naina, why don’t you sleep in another room instead of sleeping on the sofa?

naina: ma, the medicines might affect karan at night and if it does, someone should be with him to help put the cream on so it doesn’t hurt as much.

khyati passed their room and entered when she heard what naina said. khyati decided that she would do whatever she could to separate naina from karan and this was her only chance.

khyati: bhabhi, i’ll sleep on the sofa and help karan bhai. you should sleep in the other room, if not you’ll get disturbed in the middle of the night.

naina: no khyati, it’s okay.

nirmala: naina, if khyati’s insisting so much then it’s okay. you sleep in the other room, khyati will help karan.

nirmala left and naina explained khyati everything about karan’s medicine.

naina: khyati, if the medicines are affecting him, it’ll hurt a lot and i think he’ll get some rashes so use this cream on the rashes and karan will be fine shortly after.

khyati: naina bhabhi, i know how to take care of my brother. don’t worry.

khyati didn’t pay attention to what naina said. naina left the room and in the other room, couldn’t get sleep. naina was up walking around her room worried for karan. it was 4am when karan started getting pain.

karan: ah, naina!

khyati woke up.

khyati: bhai, are you okay?

karan: khyati, cream.

khyati: oh my god, the medicines are affecting you. wait, i’ll put the cream.

khyati tried to find the cream but she didn’t know which one it was.

khyati: oh god, which cream should i use?

karan: khyati, hurry!

khyati: bhai, i’m going to call naina bhabhi. one minute.

khyati ran to naina’s room and saw her pacing around the room.

khyati: bhabhi, karan’s in pain. i don’t know what cream to use.

naina ran to karan’s room and saw his condition. naina found the cream and went to karan.

karan: my back hurts.

naina: take off your clothes.

karan: what?

naina: karan, i can’t put the cream on with your clothes on and if you don’t take it off, i will.

karan agreed and took his shirt off. naina put the cream on the rashes and was slowly blowing on his back as it hurt when she touched him. after sometime, karan felt better.

khyati: naina bhabhi, i’m so sorry. i’ve blamed you for a lot of things but i know now that none of it was true and i guess it was just my misunderstanding. i know you care for bhai a lot and so i think it’s better you sleep here and take care of bhai.

naina: khyati, it was all just a misunderstanding. don’t worry about it.

khyati left the room and karan looked at naina.

karan: naina, i’m sorry for waking you up.

naina: karan, i wasn’t sleeping.

karan: naina, it’s 4am. why weren’t you sleeping?

naina: i couldn’t.

karan: why not?

naina: because i was worried for you. i didn’t know if you were fine or not, i thought maybe you’d need my help.

karan smiled.

karan: well, now that you’re here, you can sleep. i’ll be okay and i’ll call you if i need anything.

naina: okay.

naina sat on the floor next to the bed waiting for karan to feel better while talking to him, eventually karan felt much better and fell asleep. naina, without realising how or when, fell asleep there too.

thank you for reading! i’ve been wanting to write this since forever now and i don’t know if it came out like it thought i would. basically, naina was really worried for karan on one side and on the other, khyati didn’t know what was going on. because khyati didn’t pay attention, karan got to know that naina really cared for him because i mean, she stayed up till 4am for him and was probably going to stay up all night if khyati didn’t call her. the next chapter will be a continuation of this, the next morning’s events and what happens that night. after the next chapter i’m a little short of ideas so please comment any ideas or anything you want to see and i might put it in the ff!

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    16 Comments

    1. Tamihna0808 on April 8, 2017 12:16 am

      This was too good! Really loved how Khyati realised the importance of Naina in Karans life! Well written and cannot wait for the next part! ❤??

      • NainaSharma on April 9, 2017 2:50 am

        thank youuu! i just submitted the next chapter, should be up soon. ❤?

    2. Aarzu on April 8, 2017 12:23 am

      Hey it was awsm…. I loved it please post ASAP

      • NainaSharma on April 9, 2017 2:51 am

        thank you so much! i just submitted the next chapter, it should be up soon.

    3. Pratha on April 8, 2017 12:34 am

      Lovely but please continue with ur ideas…

      • NainaSharma on April 9, 2017 2:51 am

        thank you x

    4. Threemaimai on April 8, 2017 12:59 am

      it flows good… after 3months will be grate

      • NainaSharma on April 9, 2017 2:51 am

        i’m excited to write the chapters after the leap too!

    5. Naina on April 8, 2017 1:19 am

      Awww! That was so cute!? Naina was so caring…I loved the way you explained that Khyati didn’t listen and Naina had to intervene after all…Naina’s staying up until 4am just for Karan proved how much she cared for him?

      • NainaSharma on April 9, 2017 2:53 am

        thank you so much! i’ve really enjoyed writing these scenes, where khyati realises naina is not wrong and when naina is so worried for karan that she doesn’t sleep. i hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters as much! x

    6. Manvinahar on April 8, 2017 11:42 am

      loved it and please post soon cannot wait for the next chapter

      • NainaSharma on April 9, 2017 2:53 am

        thank you! the next chapter should be up soon.

    7. Juveria on April 8, 2017 2:36 pm

      Awesome episode dii story is becoming more interesting day by day I love it loved naina caring for karan and kyathi is realising nainas importance in karan life please post next chapter as soon as possible. Eager to read the next chapter and when are u going to post next chapter

      • NainaSharma on April 9, 2017 2:54 am

        thank you so much! i just submitted the next chapter, it’ll be up soon.

    8. ibra on April 8, 2017 11:05 pm

      More updates please

      • NainaSharma on April 9, 2017 2:54 am

        i’ll try post as soon as possible, sorry for the delays. the next chapter should be up in an hour or so as i just submitted it.

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