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Twinj:Immortal struggling love (Chapter 38)

Roshini125By Roshini125November 16, 201611 Comments4 Mins Read
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Note: the story is followed by the T itanic story line bt nt exactly the same. Changes is made according to my fiction.

I can’t write such a passionate one bt i am trying my best plz excuse me if I failed to reach ur expectations.

Chapter -38

Twinkles pov:
I made an excuse n came out of that party hall, I could nt controll my tears.
Why? My life is like this,everything is against my wish in my life, I can’t marry him, I even can’t tell this to mom. Even I can’t share my life with him, I knw what’s Naman is, he is a womaniser. I even knw why he is marrying me nly fr the sake of lust. Orelse who will come forward to clear all our debts without expecting anything frm us.

I had no one to share my feelings for all at once I decided to end my life. Yes.. why should I live? Why should I give myself to a bladdy womaniser. It’s better to die than to be a puppet of lust in his hands. No matter abt this now. Atleast I can die peacefully.

With a tears gushing out if my eyes I ran towards the end of the ship. I climbed on the railing of the ship and stood at the top with my eyes closed.
I prayed to god as I knew that wt I am doing is wrong bt i had no option left.
As I was abt to jump I heard someone. I turned to see a man tall n fair in complexion,with a white shirt n brown coat over it n a cowboy pant. He had a cigar in his hand .
*end of twinkles pov *

(It will be nice to listen in thirds persons view,so go thru dialogue pattern)
The guy is kunj nly.

Twinkle= stop, don’t cme towards me, orelse I will jump.
Kunj=miss. What ru upto over here?
T=it’s nun of ur business
K=ya….but do u think u can jump?
T=what stupid question?

Kunj started to remove his shoes n socks.
K= it’s not an easy thing
He moves little forward.
T= I said stop…
He stood the nly
K=do u think it’s so easy to jump frm here n die, no miss. Plz come back
T= who are u to tell that? Never mind plz leave.

Kunj moved further
K=I…. will just… throw..this
He moved towards the railing n threw the cigar.
It’s nt easy miss, as u knw how cold it is, if u drown u feel like 1000 knives stabbing into ur heart all at once (this is my favourite comparison which he gives..heheheh)

Kunj looked at her, he could sense a little fear in her face.
K=do u think u can do it?
Twinkle looked down n was tensed to see her death infront of her.
T=no..
She slowly uttered.
K=give me ur hand, slowly…
Twinkle slowly gave her hand.
K=dnt get tensed , u wil be fine.

He held her one hand n she turned towards him. While she was climbing the railing her long frock struck to her shoes n she slipped.
She lost her grip, nly kunj was holding her.
She was tensed
T=aaaaahhhhh.
She shouted
K=dnt get tensed, dnt leave my hand.
Twinkle nodded in fear,Kunj tried to pull her up.
Slowly he made her hold his one more hand n drags her so that she reaches the railing n he pulls her up. With the support of railing twinkle climbs up.

Kunj pulls her away frm the railing n she falls on him.
At that time all the security ppl with Naman arrives thr.

Twinkle wakes up.

Precap: as u knw; kunj will be blamed n Arrested. Twinkle saves him. They become frnds….etc etc

Hope u r liking it. My next exam is on Tuesday so I am hving time.
Do support frnds no cmnts at all very less unbareable.
Let me clear frnds i will be quitting frm April 2017. I can’t help it out.

Tq fr ppl who commented fr last one. I will reply each of u in next epi.

Bye
Urs lovingly
ROSH

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    11 Comments

    1. Purnima.agrawal30 on November 16, 2016 1:18 am

      awesome amazing fabulous cute ep

    2. SidVee on November 16, 2016 2:25 am

      Wow really loved this epi.. the way kunj saved twinkle???.. do cont soon ❤❤

    3. Ramya on November 16, 2016 3:42 am

      Awesome amazing fabulous episode loved it
      Bt y r u quitting dear plsss don’t quit na plsssssss

    4. Alex on November 16, 2016 9:36 am

      Hey, it’s just awesome ,wonderful and so on.Waiting for the next episode.
      Love ya…

    5. Chiku on November 16, 2016 10:07 am

      Wowwwww it’s awesome ?????lovely. Loved it
      Plzzz post next soon
      Love u❤️??

    6. Sohi on November 16, 2016 2:12 pm

      I liked the scene very much and that line is also mine favourite too do continue bye

    7. Anayaali on November 16, 2016 3:12 pm

      Awesome job roshini and u know i have not watched titanic movie so its all is suspence for me and sorry for not cmnting in previou epi

    8. Presha on November 16, 2016 5:28 pm

      awesome rosh
      hii
      hw r u
      this one was lovely

    9. TwinjSidMin on November 16, 2016 6:08 pm

      Hey rosh this is my first comment on ur ff…this episode is amazing…loved it…aur haan I haven’t watched Titanic movie so reading ur ff and imagining SidMin TwiNj is a bliss…dear post ur other ff I was I was full of tashan and u were full of love ff…plzz…

    10. SidMin on November 16, 2016 7:05 pm

      Loved it, it was too good 🙂 awesome 🙂 Precap bechara Kunj

    11. baby on November 24, 2016 12:35 am

      ohhh god roshini di srsly dis episode was wow.
      u know wat i bought a book from libraray named titanic☻
      bt den wen i visted tu dat day i saw ur ff n u know wat it stated titanic i was on cloud 9 dat i didnt had to waste my tym reading whole book n was soooooooooo happy n dat was it u r eally making me lyk wooohhaaaa d stry is going perfect i dont know d stry naa soo srsly njoying uff loveing it♥♥♥
      love u lods di thanks ♥☻♥☻♥☻♥☻♥

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