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Home»Fan Fiction»Twinj:Immortal struggling love Chapter 24 by ROSH
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Twinj:Immortal struggling love Chapter 24 by ROSH

Roshini125By Roshini125September 23, 201619 Comments3 Mins Read
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Chapter 24:
As i saw twinj dieing I was shattered as I know what true love means I couldn’t controll myself as my eyes started to water miss love came to me.

Love: rosh, y ru crying? It’s a game played by fate again

As we were sad Mr.arrogant fate came to taunt us.

Fate: heyyyyy looser…
Love:but u r not a winner
Fate:ya u ppl can’t say that I am winner coz u hv lost naa..hahaha
Love:stop it, it’s nt the end.
Fate:still u r challenging me
Love: i will win for sure

As they were fighting god came thr
God:y u ppl r fighting?don’t u hv any work othr than fighting
Me: Mr. Fate is too much,he killed twinj for no reason.
Fate:ohh who? I killed them? Sry I have many things othr killing them
Me:then who will kill them? Othr than u
Fate:ask miss. LOVE
Love:yes I killed them
She said with he head bent.
I was shocked

God:i don’t know wt I ppl r upto but in this war between love n fate, only fate can win. I assure that.
Saying this god disappeared.
Fate:(with attitude n smile)see god is with me,as no one can go against me it’s me who can play with u.
Love:but u can’t play with me. I am immortal n pure. Now just get lost.

As she shouted fate went away. She saw me sad.
Love: rosh what happened?
Me: how can u do this miss. LOVE? How can u kill them?
Love: i have to dear as they can’t be together it’s a game plan of Mr. Fate
Me: what? I didn’t get u!!
Love: to make love fail Mr. Fate made kunj n twinkle in different species. U nly think hw can a mermaid n a man can live together. Fate made me kill our twinj. I nly killed them
Me:but ..
Love: wait n watch,they will have thr rebirth.

Saying this she kept a hand on my head n disappeared.i thought;

Me: ya…love is correct,she did right attest next time twinj can be together. Love is nt liking eo it’s being with eo n supporting eo. Living fr eo (eo=each other)

I am waiting fr them again…..ru guys ready ????

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Precap: janam 3

●●●●●●●

So guys sry I am late,told na exam pressure, next 2 months I can’t be regular.

Select any 1 fr next story line
1. A soldier n a lover story
2. A warrior n a princess story in Indian style.

Hope u all like os of mine
Twinj:expression of love

Keep supporting n share ur views.
Thankq

Love
Roshini rockstar

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    19 Comments

    1. Ayu on September 23, 2016 9:12 pm

      Hey rockstar! Ur amazing!! I love that tiff between love n fate..it is serious but i find it cute!
      Choose any storyline dear cuz i find both promising. Love u?

    2. Rehab on September 23, 2016 9:15 pm

      Ur so childish but ur storys r good

    3. Adina on September 23, 2016 9:15 pm

      So basically i am the first one to comment in this epsiode so its my order that u shOuld choose the second option….GOT IT? …..now follow my ORDER……LOL????( hope u didnt mind that the way i talk) AND YEAH I WAD REALLY SAD BY READING THIS EPISODE …..BUT I THINK THE NEXT SEASON WILL BE AWSUMMM…..eagerly waiting 4 ur ff …..plz post asap

    4. Purnima.agrawal30 on September 23, 2016 9:20 pm

      awesome amazing fabulous emotional sad epi….eagerly waiting for next part…..

    5. SidMin on September 23, 2016 9:32 pm

      Rosh Janam 3 WOW Loved it and Fate,Love ,God and your talks was so sweet Post the next part soon and I would ike you to write both the stories but If 1 has to be selected I would like to choose – A soldier n a lover story
      Post soon Love you 🙂

    6. shiny on September 23, 2016 10:28 pm

      Awesome yaar. Plz choose 1 yaar soldier and a lover will be interesting

    7. Sidhanshi on September 23, 2016 10:32 pm

      Rosh awesime epi… Nd about the janam 3 concept,,, i’m confused… I like both the stories… So, it’s u’r choice…

    8. SIDMIN-daamini on September 23, 2016 10:40 pm

      Haye roshugulla ??…….kal exam hai aur dekh main ffs padh ri hun but kya karu …tera dekha toh raha nahi gaya ……….. it was so interesting I mean conversation between love n fate was so interesting …………………. dekh bohot hua puraanaa zamana so I will choose 1st option ….. hey I didn’t meant to hurt ur feeling ….I mean I’m not saying that 2nd option is boring ……. it can exist in 21 century with advanced features ?? … but is just that 1st is so interesting that it would be great n greatest if u will be writing it so ………….. u got my pointna….. so that’s all I want …love u ?????????????????……do ur exams well n study hard ..?

    9. Sana(sanu) on September 23, 2016 10:52 pm

      Woq rpsh ekdm mast….
      I ll go with the first one…..
      Loved ur concept…..

    10. Sameera on September 23, 2016 11:11 pm

      Wow yar rosh u know what I am loving this ff day by day so my choice is soldier n His love story ???

    11. SidVee on September 23, 2016 11:23 pm

      Amazing epi.. the talk btn u,fate,love and gid was really nice.. choosing is a bit difficult but I will go for the first option.. but majority wins 🙂 .. do cont soon ?

    12. Sayeeda on September 24, 2016 12:14 am

      OMG …Yrrrr the talks between fate ; love nd God was soooo amazingly expressed…..
      I can’t tell u how much I loved it….really yrr u r a superb writer…..
      loved it so much….

      Nd plz go for the first option for ur story….
      All the best for ur exam’s…..??

    13. Payal .... on September 24, 2016 12:48 am

      Hey roshini
      it was amazing ?

    14. baby on September 24, 2016 1:31 am

      rosh my rockstar di u r suprb fabulous beautiful
      d talk of love rosh fate n god was wow
      luving it n d question u askd fr janam 3 i m cnfsd
      bt i want 2 choose soldier n a lover
      di amazing luvd d janam 2 ab alvida khene ka tym aa gya tha
      soo alvida kunj ki pyaari mermaid or pyaare kunj……………
      luv u di………………………..

    15. Ramya on September 24, 2016 6:19 am

      Hey roshini
      It’s beyond words.hw can u get this amazing ideas I’m wondered
      N I’m lucky to have a frnd like u dear
      Srsly u r unique
      Ur every ff n os has a different meaning n it touches my heart

    16. Angita on September 24, 2016 1:51 pm

      Amazing

    17. chandra on September 24, 2016 2:52 pm

      hi . mujhe yaad hain ? gussa maat ho na . mein to ff hi nehi pad pati aur coment to dur ki baat . apk bohot sari epi miss kar di . ab parhunga . bye . waiting for the janam

    18. Romaisha on September 24, 2016 3:41 pm

      Hey awesome episode di!
      Can’t wait in next janam to,start 🙂

    19. Lovely on September 24, 2016 4:19 pm

      Amazing rosh I have exams so I wasn’t able to comment.. Hope u understand.. I choose 2nd option…
      ?

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