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TWINJ: Punar Vivah Part 12

Part 11

Thank You so much everyone who commented on the previous part= Jaya Darshini,SidMin23,Padu,Queen, Sohi, Adeeba, Ritzi, Fatimaa, Mia, Nisha, Lucy, Asna, Franciee, Kiya, lovely, Sameera, Rasiverma2199, Teju, Aafi, AKA, Presha,Cp, Kruti, Ramya, Purnima Agarwal, Maha and Sana(sorry if I missed anyone)I was really happy especially everyone who commented for the first time. I won’t end my FF soon.

Next Day
Bebe entered the kitchen with Usha and seen that the Ladoos were made. She took some and tried some they tasted divine. Bebe= Usha Rani try some. Usha tried some and smiled. Wow Bebe they taste really good. Who mad them? Bebe= I don’t know. Ramu Kaka who made these Ladoos. Ramu Kaka= Twinkle beta did yesterday after everyone had dinner. Bebe smiled whilst Usha made a face. Usha= Bebe she could have made them today. Bebe= Usha rani at least she made them, you like to taunt her a lot it’s not good I wasn’t like that with you. Usha didn’t like Bebe telling her off because of Twinkle.
In the afternoon all the 3 brothers were sitting down in the lounge with the baby in the cradle. Mahi was up resting upstairs in her room. Bebe went out with Leela to invite everyone to the babies name ceremony. Usha was in her room balcony talking to some on the phone. Twinkle and Chinki were in the kitchen preparing for dinner.
In the lounge

Kunj= UV everything has changed in your life just in a day.
UV= I know Bhai, I can’t believe I am a father
Abhay = Bhai when Prince grows up he won’t call me chachu

Kunj and UV looked at each other and laughed at their not so younger brother anymore. They were enjoying pulling their younger brothers leg when suddenly Prince cried. Uv took him in his arms but he wasn’t stopping to cry. UV= Bhai he’s not stopping to crying. Kunj then took Prince in his hands but he still didn’t stop crying. Abhay= Maybe he is hungry. UV= he can’t be he had his milk 1 hour ago. Abhay went in the kitchen and told Chinki and Twinkle that Prince wasn’t stopping and was just crying. Chinki= Twinkle please go and check my hands are not clean as I am kneading dough (atta). Twinkle= Me??? (she remembered how Usha said to her to stay away from her grandson as she doesn’t want anything bad near him) Abhay= Bhabhi please come. Twinkle went so that Prince stops crying.

She saw that Kunj was carrying Prince in his arms trying to calm him down and UV was showing him teddy bears. She smiled and went to them. Kunj= thank god you’re here Twinkle please take him. Twinkle took him in her arms and started to rock him gently in her arms and he became quiet and went to sleep. Kunj was admiring the way Twinkle was carrying Prince and making him calm down. UV and Abhay saw their brother admiring his wife and smiled. Unfortunately this was noticed by Usha who was coming down. She became angry and quickly went downstairs. Abhay= WOW Bhabhi you have magic in your hands he became quiet as soon as you held him Kunj and UV smiled. Usha came towards them and snatched the baby from Twinkle arm shocking everyone. Usha= What did you do to him? If you don’t know how to carry a baby you shouldn’t have carried him. What if something happened? Twinkle felt sad ,Kunj got angry as Usha was telling Twinkle off unnecessary. Kunj= MAA please stop shouting at her unnecessary. Usha= Wow Kunj now cause of this girl you are talking to me in this tone. Kunj= Maa she has got a name it’s Twinkle. Mahi woke up and went downstairs where she saw Usha carrying her Prince and everyone surrounding her. It looked like she shouted at Twinkle again. Chinki also came out of the kitchen after making the atta.

UV= Maa Prince was crying a lot and wasn’t stopping to cry so Bhabhi took him and made him calm down. Usha= Where is Mahi? Mahi= I am here mummy ji I was upstairs resting upstairs. Usha= Next time you want to rest leave Munna with me so no-one takes him (referring to Twinkle). Kunj got angry and was going to say something but Twinkle stopped him by holding his hand. He looked at her and she told him through her eyes to calm down.Mahi= Mummy ji his nickname is Prince so please don’t call him Munna I don’t like it. I actually first brought him to your room but you were talking to someone on the phone so I didn’t want to disturb you. UV= anyway Maa if anyone takes him its ok we are all one family. Usha= I don’t mind if some people take him but I don’t want some people near him. Everyone knew that she was talking about Twinkle and felt sad for Twinkle. Twinkle also felt bad and had tears in her eyes which was seen by Kunj whose anger had rised up a lot. Before he could say anything the doorbell rang. Chinki= I will go and check who it is. She goes to open the door is shocked to see a man standing there.

WHO IS THAT MAN???
I know that Usha is a really bad mother in law but it’s a part of her character. Soon she will learn her lesson. LOL.
Anyway tell me how you found it. You can comment both negative and positive but please comment.

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