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Home»Fan Fiction»TWINJ: Punar Vivah Part 11
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TWINJ: Punar Vivah Part 11

SimiyyBy SimiyyMarch 27, 201731 Comments5 Mins Read
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Part 10

Hello everyone. Hope you are all well. Everyone who commented thank you so much it really made me happy. Guys I am really upset as I got 15 comments only and in the part before that I got 20. The comments reduced. Please let me know if you want me to continue or not otherwise I will leave it or end it.
Continued
Outside Yuhi room
Bebe , Usha and Leela had arrived quickly as soon as they heard that Mahi had gone into Labour and her delivery was going to happen at home.
Bebe= Has the Doctor arrived?
UV= No Bebe she on her way
Leela= Then who is inside with Mahi?
UV= Twinkle Bhabhi and Chinki the Doctor over the phone are telling them what to do.
Usha= What? What if that girl (referring to Twinkle) does something wrong and something happens to my grandchild or Mahi
Kunj was annoyed as Usha only put the blame on Twinkle. He didn’t know why she disliked her so much.
Bebe= USHA! Think positively and nothing will happen hopefully. You are also forgetting that Twinkle is not there alone Chinki is there too.
15 minutes later
Inside the room
Twinkle= Mahi one last push come on, you can do it.
Mahi= Aaaaahhhhhhhhh she screamed and the baby cried
Everyone outside the room smiled in happiness and hugged UV.

Inside the room
Chinki= Mahi you did it
Twinkle= yes Mahi, congratulations you’re a mother of a boy now
Mahi smiled= Mera Bacha
Twinkle gave Mahi her baby and she kissed her son on the forehead.
Chinki opened the door and smiled
Abhay= Kya hua
Chinki= Beta

Everyone was happy. UV rushed into the room to see his new son and wife followed by Bebe and Leela. Twinkle came out of the room
Usha to Twinkle= Pray that Mahi and my grandson are in good health when the Doctor comes and checks them otherwise. . She nods her head.
Kunj noticed this and was about to say something to Usha but the Doctor came.
Usha= Please check my puta and bahu quickly
The doctor went inside the room and checked both mother and son.
Doc= There is nothing to worry about. They are both perfectly fine
Everyone smiled and Twinkle took a sigh of relief.
Everyone was fighting to carry the new born. When no one was looking Usha whispered in Twinkles ear= Stay away from my grandson I don’t want anything bad near him. Twinkle felt bad but held her tears in and exused herself from the room. This was noticed by 2 pairs of eyes.

In the Kitchen
Twinkle in a broken voice= Ramu Kaka can you please bring something sweet for everyone
Ramu Kaka= Beta there is nothing sweet apart from chocolate in the fridge.
Twinkle= Go and give everyone some chocolate I will go freshen up and make something sweet.
Twinkle goes in the shower and freshens up. She then goes in the kitchen and make some suji ka halwa and goes to serve it to everyone.
Usha= twinkle what is this? Why have you made suji ka halwa. You should have made ladoos
Twinkle= sorry
UV= Bhabhi please don’t say sorry I love suji ka halwa
Abhay= same here
Everyone talks about the baby and what they might name it
Twinkle goes back into the kitchen and checks if all the ingredients to make ladoo were there. She began to prepare to make ladoos and also made dinner for everyone. Whilst everyone was eating dinner. Twinkle went to the kitchen to make the ladoos. After everyone had eaten they all went to their rooms. Twinkle was really hungry but all the food had finished. There was some fruit in the fruit basket but she remembered how Usha had once shouted at her for eating fruit telling her only the family members can eat the fruit no outsiders. She took a glass of water and drank it. It was the only thing she had all day.

Twinj Room
She entered the room and saw Kunj was busy working on his laptop. He looked at her and smiled. She smiled back. She took her night clothes and went to change. 15 minutes later when she back she saw that Kunj was not in the room. She went to the balcony to check if he was there but he wasn’t there. She then went to the study but he wasn’t there. When she went back to the room she saw that Kunj was there. Kunj stood up and held her hand
Twinkle= Kunj where are you taking me?
He took her to the balcony.
Twinkle= why have you brought me here?
Kunj= sit down
He made her sit down and there was a plate of food in front of her. She looked at Kunj and he spoke.
Kunj= today was a hectic day for you and you haven’t had food
Twinkle= how do you know?
Kunj= I just do
Twinkle= Kunj but there was no food left
Kunj= I know, when you were in the kitchen I quickly placed a food order and asked them not to knock on the door as everyone would get disturbed
Twinkle smiles at him= Thank You
Kunj= Its ok now eat
Twinkle starts to eat and offers Kunj some. He refuses at first but Twinkle puts the morsel in his mouth when he was talking to her. He looks at her and they both laugh.

I hope you enjoyed it. Please tell me if you want me to continue or not
Thank You
Loads of Love Simiyy

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    31 Comments

    1. Jaya Darshini on March 27, 2017 9:16 am

      It was amazing! I’m sorry I couldn’t comment on the prev episodes. But they were equally good as well. Please keep this going.

    2. SidMin23 on March 27, 2017 9:21 am

      Nice but this Usha is too much and how can she said to twinkle as twinkle help to get delivery and I like how kunj being good for her and twinj having food moment was nice and waiting for next part and hope your ff comment will increase as u deserve it.

    3. padu on March 27, 2017 9:30 am

      it was really cute usha shouldn’t have been so rude to her
      do not worry about comments exams are going on so you are getting less

    4. queen on March 27, 2017 9:31 am

      Very nice.

    5. queen on March 27, 2017 9:38 am

      But mujhe twinky ke liye bura lag raha hai. Btw kya yuhi ke baby ka naam app antariksh rakh sakti hai.

    6. adeeba_zain on March 27, 2017 10:12 am

      Hey simiyy first of all u will not end this cause of less comments if u will end than umm..I will also end NY ff than choice is urs..do u remember what u told me once that sometimes comments reduces but it doesn’t mean that u will end it..got it..
      Nd about the episode yrr as usual don’t have words to describe BTW I just hate usha..nd twinj so cute..try to post soon..
      Luv u..
      Bye..
      Aur end krna ka sochna bhi mat..

    7. Sohi on March 27, 2017 10:47 am

      Episode was really sweet
      Happy for yuhi
      But wanted to kill that idiot usha
      How can she do that
      Plz simmy don’t be upset coz of less comments
      Do continue
      Bye

    8. Ritzi on March 27, 2017 11:19 am

      Wow simmy…ya pls pls pllllsssss continue it yaar…u knw its exams ka season so everyone might not get tym to read it…don’t worry dear but atleast u should continue for all of us.

    9. Fatimaa. on March 27, 2017 11:25 am

      Heyy simiyy..
      Episode was awesome..felt bad for twinkle…but kunj is der wid her so no prblm…
      Post soon..love u

    10. mia12 on March 27, 2017 11:47 am

      Ohho simmy areh upset mat ho meri sweaty lovely si behna,,??.. and m sooooo sooooo sorry 4 not cmnting,,??.. little bz or sab ke ff par cmnt ka time nai milta,,??.. well I just love this episode to the core,,❤?❤?❤?❤.. it was just marvelous,,????.. bas muje usha par bhtt gussa arai hai,,??.. but kunj hamesha uski twinkle ki side hai na so not to wry,,??.. but plz end mat karna ok simmy jii plzz jii,,??.. m pleading jii he he sunlo jii,,??.. ok post soonish jii greedy me jii u knw na,,??.. Love you,,❤❤..

    11. Nisha on March 27, 2017 12:44 pm

      Simiyy it was fantastic
      Plz continue dear don’t stop to write
      I loved it
      Love u
      Bye

    12. Lucy on March 27, 2017 12:44 pm

      Love it. Awesome episode and plzz do continue it.
      Waiting for the next part.
      Post soon.
      Bye ?

    13. Asna on March 27, 2017 12:59 pm

      Awesome episode simiyy… I have reader all the episodes which I missed n they were more than awesome… ????????????????????do continue… koi comment kare chaena kare I will do definitely so plzz continue n don’t be worry be happy yr….

    14. Franciee on March 27, 2017 12:59 pm

      Hey! Don’t discontinue it pleaseeeeee its awesome <3

    15. Kiya on March 27, 2017 1:42 pm

      Nice episode ❤❤❤❤️❤️❤️???plz continue don’t end post soon

    16. lovey on March 27, 2017 2:08 pm

      Sorry i cam’t comment on pre part but you story is amazing plz don’t stop i love plz continue

    17. Sameera on March 27, 2017 3:04 pm

      Awesomeeeee yaar simmy loveddddddd it to the core awww kunj soooo sweet hate this usha ????….
      Do.cont soon plshh

    18. rashiverma2199 on March 27, 2017 3:37 pm

      Lovely episode….Usha???
      Twinj was awesome

    19. Teju on March 27, 2017 5:33 pm

      I loved your episode and Twinj was great.pls continue……

    20. Aafi on March 27, 2017 5:59 pm

      Fabulous episode dear
      But felt bad for twinkle
      Want to kill this usha
      Do continue

    21. AKA on March 27, 2017 6:01 pm

      Nice episode

    22. Presha on March 27, 2017 6:41 pm

      Hey simiyy…
      Plz don’t end it yaar…
      Its just awesome…
      Just loved it yaar…
      Too good…
      Usha is huh huh…
      Twinj are so adorable….

    23. Cp on March 27, 2017 7:45 pm

      Pleaseeee mafff kardoo???late comment kee liyee???….????aur app bhi end karne me baree mein baat kar rahe hooonnn?????please not againnn???……and ammaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzinggggg episodeee???????????

    24. kruti on March 27, 2017 8:28 pm

      Simiyy The epi was amazing Kunj’s care was just so cute
      Loved it
      Continue asap

    25. Ramya on March 27, 2017 8:28 pm

      Awesome amazing simiyy
      Plsss do continue
      Ager continue nahi ki tho I’m not going to talk wid u
      Awesome amazing kunj is taking care of twinkle
      Lovely
      Love u keep smiling

    26. Purnima.agrawal30 on March 27, 2017 10:55 pm

      Amazing awesome….bt usha ko esa ni krna chahiye twinkle k saath

    27. maha on March 27, 2017 11:34 pm

      awsm..epi
      kunj..is..soooooo..lovly..hubby
      post..soon

    28. Sana785 on March 28, 2017 12:49 am

      Awesome episode simiyy….

    29. Sushmitha on March 28, 2017 12:43 pm

      Amazing episode simmy pls don’t discontinue it I love ur ff yaar

    30. SidMin on March 31, 2017 7:32 pm

      Aww Just Loved it … but hate this Usha …
      Love you post soon 🙂

    31. baby on April 2, 2017 12:51 am

      Srsly simmy amazing sooo emotional soooo cute too…dis usha…m crying like anything ryt now…..
      Plss dont end it look mere tarah I hope heehehehehe or bhi koi hoga late cmnt krne wala dukhi mat hoo….plsss…..
      Lods of love beautiful episode….
      Twinkle is amazing… 🙂
      I appreciate her…n kunj too he is lovely… 🙂

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