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Home»Fan Fiction»Twinj os #happy bday amaya~By adeeba
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Twinj os #happy bday amaya~By adeeba

MABy MAApril 6, 201745 Comments3 Mins Read
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Happy birthday to u..
Happy birthday to u..
Happy birthday to u..
Happy birthday to amaya..
Happy birthday to u..

God bless u jaan..
Hope u succeed everything in future..

I m too bzy..half hour baad mujhe tuition Jana h..so a small piece of writing frm me

Twinkle’s POV..

Hello I m twinkle kunj sarna..I m married to kunj sarna..6 months passed to our marriage but still now we didn’t consummated our marriage some days before we confessed our love..but today I will make my kunj happy.. I m wearing a red saree with se*y blouse nd I m looking too hot yaa I know apne tareef nai krni chahiye but anyways.. I had decorated the room with red roses nd hearts..than I heard kunj’s car horn I hide myself..
POV end’s

Kunj’s pov
I entered my house but something was different I proceed to my room nd was shocked to see the ambience it was decorated beautifully.. Than suddenly someone back hugged me nd yaa she was twinkle I turned around nd saw her she was looking too hot today..her perfect figure her glossy lips..ummm..
“Kunj did u liked it” she asked
“I loved it” I replied.
“BTW..what’s for this” I asked nd smirked..
” kunj..she blushed..
Don’t u think its too hot today”I asked
“Yaa” she replied casually
I took her in my arms nd moved to washroom nd opened the shower tap..we got drenched in water..(ijazat plays in background)

Kaise bataye kaise jataye
Subah tak tujhme jina chahe
Bhige laboon ki gile hansi ko
Peene ka mausam h peena chahe

We looked at eo nd our lips met…this was the feeling of heaven..after some times we broke it..I pinned her to the wall nd slightly moved the pallu..I started giving the wet kisses nd love bits in her neck shoulder nd her cleavage..while she was moaning my name which is making me go more wild..she started unbuttoning my shirt nd she succeed in it nd kissed me on my abs nd again we share a liplock.. Than I fully opened her saree nd made our way to bed..nd I made her lay down..nd again kissed her than she flipped our position nd came on top of me..nd gave me luv bites..
Soon the dresses removed frm our body i coverd us with blanket nd we entangled our legs nd consummated our marriage..

The end

Sorry guys for this boring os nd once again amaya happy bday..guys I won’t be able to comment in any of the ff till 3 days..
Sorry for it..
Do share ur views

Bye guys
Adeeba

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45 Comments

  1. Sohi on April 6, 2017 4:00 pm

    Os was romantic
    And happy birthday Ammu

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 9:10 am

      Thank you sohi…..

  2. _Manu_ on April 6, 2017 4:31 pm

    Os was just tooo good and sooo romantic and I really loved that song and happy birthday ammu di

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 9:13 am

      Thank you manu…..
      BT it’s not Ammu…..It’s amaya

  3. Purvi128 on April 6, 2017 5:00 pm

    Adeebuuu.,, os was amazing.,, too hot…. such an amazing one…
    By the way…. today isn’t aamu’s birthday…, her birhtday is on 3 nov..
    Welll it was soo good.. too hot..
    Love u

    • Fatimaa. on April 6, 2017 7:34 pm

      Purvi jaan..
      Its not aamu…
      Its amaya’s bday today….amaya bhardwaj…

    • Purvi128 on April 6, 2017 8:10 pm

      Yeah I got it.. ?

    • You know on April 6, 2017 8:04 pm

      Amaya bharadwaj ka birthday hai aaj. She is a commenter of tu. Happy birthday Amaya. Love you..?

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 8:10 am

      Thank you so much dear….
      Luv you too

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 10:15 am

      Hey aduuuuu,
      Awwwwwwwwwwwwww……. THANK YOU so much jaanemanh……
      For this lovely gift of ur…..Kya Treet Diya h tune mujhe mere bday pr yrr….U made my day yrr…..It was the bestest bday just because of you…..I m smiling like idiot ???????????????????????????… Actually blushing??????????????? reading it…. And my face is worth watching now…..
      This os was ??????????????????????????????????????✋??????????mind blowing, amazing, s*xy, romantic and too hot…. Saachi m temperature rise hi fyi h issue padhne k Baad…. Garmi lag this h….. It’s TOO HOT… Thank you for fulfilling my wishes yr….. THANKS a LOT darling….
      ?????????????????????????????????????????????
      LOVE YOU TO INFINITY…. ????????????????????
      MUUUAAAAAAHHHH ????????????????????

      And sorry yaar tmne mere liye itni mehnaat see likha or Mai hi sabse last comment Kr rhi Hoon….By KL saara din m busy this yrr Tym hi ni Mila…. Family & Friends k sath outing PR gyi thi…Uske baad mere farmhouse PR party ki hmne…subah k 5:30 baje m Ghar wapis ayi Hoon…. or Ghar aate hi soon gyi…..Avi uthi hoo TOH you page khola h…. Tera os dekha and I WAS SUPERRRR HAPPYYYY????????????????????????
      Sari KL ki stress or thakan ek mint m door hi gyi….
      Thank you once again yrrr…..
      LOVE YOU aduuu darling…..??????????????????????THANK YOU EVERYONE. . . .U All MADE My DAY GUYS….. LOVE YOU ALLL??????????????????????????????????????????

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 9:15 am

      Hawwwww Purvi,
      U forgot me so easily. ….
      Dil tod Diya tmne mera yrrr…..???

  4. Presha on April 6, 2017 5:03 pm

    Adu fabulous os……
    Just loved it…
    Too hot and romantic….

    • Presha on April 6, 2017 5:07 pm

      And happy bday amaya…
      May ur all wishes comes true

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 8:11 am

      Thanks a lot presha……
      Love you

  5. Nisha on April 6, 2017 7:22 pm

    Happy birthday amaya
    Adu baby OS was awesome

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 8:12 am

      Thanks Nisha….
      Love you

  6. Fatimaa. on April 6, 2017 7:35 pm

    Heyy addu…
    The os was amazing…
    Sweet and hot…
    And amaya once again happy bday…
    Love u both

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 8:13 am

      Thank you so much doll…..
      Love you too
      ????

  7. Twinj on April 6, 2017 7:46 pm

    Hey adeeba,
    That was mindblowing
    Too cute
    Lovely…just loved
    The way they consummated their marriage was super cute.
    Keep writing n happy b-day amaya.Have a wonderful b-day.May god bless with all that u desire.

    Loads of love
    twinj

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 8:17 am

      Aww……. Thank you so twinj dear…..
      For ur lovely wishes…..
      Love you too
      ????

  8. Cp on April 6, 2017 8:01 pm

    Phirr se Garmii kar dii???????uff ……. Amazing…..And Happy Birthday to Amaya ??????

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 8:19 am

      Thanks a lot CP……
      Well what’s your name yrr….
      Love you
      ????????????

  9. Purvi128 on April 6, 2017 8:12 pm

    Happy birthday dearest Amaya.. Hope u enjoy ur day.. Wishing u a very happy birthday from the core of my heart.. may ur all wishes comes true…??

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 8:38 am

      Hey Purvi,
      Thank you so much jaan for your lovely wishes…..
      ??????????????
      When are u posting ur FF
      Plzu post soon
      Love you ????????????????

  10. Sameera on April 6, 2017 9:58 pm

    Happy bday Amaya and adeeba very cute and lovelyos yaar loveddddddd it…
    ???????????

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 8:45 am

      Sam dear….
      Thanks you….
      ????????
      Plz post your FF soon yrr….
      Love you

  11. SidMin23 on April 6, 2017 10:44 pm

    Happy birthday amaya and it was cute and hot as well.

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 8:48 am

      Thank you sidmin dear…..
      Love you

  12. Purnima.agrawal30 on April 7, 2017 12:14 am

    Happy birthday amaya…n os was hot AMAZING lovely

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 8:49 am

      Thank you purnima…..
      Love you ??????

  13. mia12 on April 7, 2017 1:59 am

    Wow Janeman,,???.. It was just Awesome,,????.. and toooo hotttttt yrrr,,???.. And twinj romnce was,,????.. love it very very very much,,❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤.. or haan time mile toh apni ff post kar dena ok,,??..
    .
    And Amaya dear,,☺☺☺..
    Happy Birthday 2 u,,????????..
    Eat yummy testy dishes,,??????????????????????..
    Stay happy always,,????..
    God bless you,,????..
    Love you both,,???..

  14. Simiyy on April 7, 2017 2:18 am

    Happy Birthday Amaya
    It was really good adeeba
    post soon

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 9:09 am

      Thank you simiyy…..
      Love you

  15. Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 9:07 am

    Hey Mia,
    Thank you so much yrrr????????????????????
    ABB tune mujhe bol hi happy rehne ko TOH he can I ignore your wishes….
    And I eat all yummy dishes u sent….
    MUuuaaaaaahhhh???????
    Love you too darling….
    Waishe ur name is Priya na……
    ?????????

    • adeeba_zain on April 7, 2017 10:57 am

      Mujhe thank you bola hi nai..huh..

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 2:27 pm

      Awwww…….Tujhe thank you ni bilingual Mai…… Friend ko thank you ni bolte…..????????????????????????????
      Hahahaha MERI jaan upar scroll Kr k dekhe…..For you complain Ni kregi…..
      Muaaaahhhhhhh ?????????????????????
      love you to core….. ?????????????????

  16. twinjfan.tamanna on April 7, 2017 9:25 am

    hawtt! I just loved it adu! beautifully written!

    Happy Birthday Amaya! may you achieve success in greater heights!

  17. Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 10:19 am

    Thank you so much tamanna dear for ur lovely wishes…..
    Love you

  18. SidMin on April 7, 2017 5:21 pm

    Happy birthday Amaya ?????❤❤
    The is was hot .. a sweet and short os .. keep writing
    Love you post soon ??❤

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 11:12 pm

      Thanks sidmin dear…..
      LOVE you ???????

  19. Ramya on April 7, 2017 9:55 pm

    Awesome amazing aduuu
    Who said it’s boring
    N happy bday amaya
    Stayy blessed be happy

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 11:15 pm

      Thanks Ramya dear….
      Love you ??????

  20. aamu on April 7, 2017 11:14 pm

    Oye adeeebbbbuuuuu….itna amazing…sachchi killing os tha..
    Jz maaar daaaalaaa….
    Loved it..
    N HAPPY BDAY AMAYA???????
    i mnow m late but still BELATED happy bday

    • Amaya Bhardwaj on April 8, 2017 12:00 am

      Thank you SO much Ammu darling…
      Love you ?????????????

  21. baby on April 16, 2017 5:55 pm

    omggggg……wowowaaa sooo how romantic………
    loved it sooooo mch amazing……☺
    loved it soooo mch………
    happy belated birthday Amaya dii………☺
    love u sooooo mch may god bless u n always stay happy………srriiiee m hell late…….I knw…….☺
    love u…..bth……….☺

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