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Home»Fan Fiction»Twinj- Marriage, betrayal, love (66)
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Twinj- Marriage, betrayal, love (66)

MonaaBy MonaaJanuary 18, 201715 Comments6 Mins Read
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Episode-66
@morning–
Kunj came to twinkle’s room n saw her sleeping peacefully having a smile on her face..
kunj came their for his plan but was just lost in her face admiring her..
After what felt like eternity he came into senses n headed towards twinkle n bend towards ehr..
he caressed her face lovingly n kissed her forehead n adjusted his comferter properly n arranged somechits in her room with some gifts..
He left the roo after completig his work not before glancing her angelic face before leaving..

after sometime twinkle woke up n stretched her arms..
her eyes fell on her side table.. were she found a mug of coffee.. with a note..
she took the note n unfolded it..
Note says–
“May your day be as wonderful as the first sip!”
she took the mug n taste the coffee..
A beautiful smile appeared on her lips..

Kunj was watching her every action from outside her room’s door..

Next she got up from her bed n headed towards washroom..
on the door of washroom.. she found a beautiful card.. with a wish written on it..
It reads–
” Good morning, may God smile on you and take good care of you today.”
she again smiled readin this..
She kept the card on dreasing table n she headed towards washroom for daily work..
Inside washroom..
She is having tooth brush in her hands n watching herself in mirror while brushing n thinking about the card n coffee..
tw-(herself) Who did this??
it actually made my day.. kahin mahi ne to nhi..
par mahi kyu karegi ye sab mere liye.. (confused)
After thinking for sometime she left from there n headed towards her coupbord to get her clothes..

As soon as she open her almirah.. she found a packet with a note on it..
it reads–
“You are never fully dressed without a smile”
“Always keep smiling n please wear this dress today”
From… Guesssss???
Tw- huh! what is dis? is there something special today..?
but what??/
why is someone giving me this much memorable gifts..
yeh sab sid ne to nhi??
(confused) no.. why would he do so??
chodo.. mujhe kya??
kuch der me apne aap pata chal jayega..
oh.. let me see.. what is der in this packet?

she started opening it..
“a simple yet eligent black n red combo gown”
again there is a note inside it..
which reads..”a perfect outfit for a perfect girl”
reading this a smile appeared on her lips.. (shy smile )
She took the same gown n went to washroom for bath.. she came back getting ready in the same gown n headed towards mirror..

there is one more note on mirror..
it reads…
“Though ur smile itself is ur ornament but still today i want u to look more special, its a special gift for a special lady
(fingers crossed) hope u will like it”
with a downward sign..
she saw downward where sign is showing.. here again one packet is there ..
packet itself is looking beautiful..

She signed n opened it with a big wala smile n found a silver chain with a star pandent.. it was looking beautiful..
twinkle was just watching it smilingly..
Just then she received a sms on her mobile n she opened it..
It showed a message from unknown number..
Message reads–
” A little star for my star (twinkling star)”
She searched this number in true caller but it shows nothing except ‘guess? who’
she smiled n wore the pandent..
She did a little makeup n headed towards her shoe section..
there she again found a gift box..
She was surprised..
tw- aa shoe bhi koi gift karta h kya??
her phone beeped showing again a message..
message reads–
“jyada mat socho syappa queen.. pahle box open karo..”
tw- what?? syappa queen??
it means its sid only.. i knew it.. a mad can only do this much madness.. (smiled slightly)
but what is special today.. why is he doing so..
is it my b’day??
noo.. its still 2 months for that..
soooo.. what is this for??
(hell confused)
leave it! first i should open the box..

tw- omg! omg! its shoooo sweet of him..
‘ A pair of anklets”
but itne big box me sirf anklets..

again her phone beeped..
message ” are yr tu kitna sochti h.. pahle ye anklets to pahn”
she slightly hitted her forehead with her palm n started wearing it sitting on nearby stool..
It was looking pretty on her feets..

She again saw towrds that box.. n found one more big box under it.. she opened it n found a pair of half heels..
she got excited as it was matching to her dress..
She went in front of mirror n saw herself with a shy smile..

She again saw a note on dressing table.. it reads-” everything is perfect, just open ur hairs n u will look my fairy princess”
Reading that she smiled brightly.. n opened her hairs n combed it..
she muttered- “perfect” n was leaving for downstairs.. but found flowers bouque on side of door..
she pickedit n caressed the flowers.. its then she again found a chit..
it reads–
“beautiful flowers for a beautiful lady”

now her phone beeped again —
message reads-
“now come down n have ur breakfast prepared by one n only chef sid.. after that don think much.. just come out sit in red car execlusively waiting for u”
She came down n saw no one in the hall.. she went to dinning table n had her favourate breakfast.. pasta with frooti.. (actually its my favourate combination so just added it her)
She again saw here n ther but saw no one..

Again her ph beeped..(i know bhot jyada messages ho gaye, but pl zhel lo)
message reads–
“bola na jyada mat soch.. sab log mandir gaye h pooja ke liye.. now u just cpome n sit in car”
your… guess??

tw- what guess who?? i know its u only sid.. remember u only messaged ‘ food prepared by one n only CHEF SID’
bhul gaye?
(laughed a little n went outside n sat in car as ordered)
Kunj saw her car leaving n he too left in other car..
Screen freeses on twinkle smiling face n kunj determined face…
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Hello friends hows the episode???
i tried to make it interesting n long and it took me 3-4 hours to write it..
i hope u will like it n comment on it n will tell me what u liked the most in whole gifts session..
byee.. hope to see u soon…
byee..
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    There are lots of people I admire and respect, but I don't necessarily want to be like them. I'm too happy being myself.:) ?

    15 Comments

    1. nish on January 18, 2017 10:49 pm

      It ws just awesome
      I know I know first time cmmnt kiya sry…..
      No actually a big wala sry
      Bt u know I hve all yr your epi n its amazing n ya the story is different. ..
      Plz post asap bcoz really waiting fr the confession n twinkle s reaction
      Bii
      Tc

    2. Sohi on January 18, 2017 10:58 pm

      It was awesome, superb amazing
      You nailed it! every message and note was fab
      Liked twinkles dress and chain very much
      Plz post next episode soon
      Do continue

    3. Dheemahee on January 18, 2017 10:58 pm

      Awesome one ab Maza ai ga continue and Post soon.

    4. Priya23 on January 18, 2017 11:20 pm

      Hey mona,
      Tum bol rahi ho konsa gift part accha laga but yarr I LOVE the whole epi very much ?????????? and its AMAZING ????? The gift giving part was just WONDERFUL ???? LOVE it ❤❤❤❤ i LOVE it ❤❤❤❤ Now eagerly waiting 4 next post,,,???? Love you ???

    5. Purnima.agrawal30 on January 19, 2017 12:58 am

      awesome amazing fabulous

    6. Presha on January 19, 2017 1:24 am

      Hey Mona’s you got late nono bcoz I was desperate but its really rocking one but a age ke storyline shocking lag rahi hai but desperate to read ahead
      Post soon

    7. SidMin on January 19, 2017 3:13 am

      Hww it was so sweet
      Kunj is such a sweetu loved it
      Love you post soon ?

    8. SidMin23 on January 19, 2017 7:56 am

      It was awesome and waiting for next part

    9. Aafi on January 19, 2017 4:32 pm

      It was tooo good and romantic
      Twinj are cute
      Do continue

    10. Sushmitha on January 19, 2017 4:36 pm

      Awesome episode monna I loved kunj’s surprises for twinkle post asap

    11. Chiku on January 19, 2017 5:31 pm

      Woaaaaah!!! Sooo lovely. Soo cute
      Pos soon??

    12. Ramya on January 19, 2017 6:25 pm

      Awesome amazing monaaa
      Superb n msg wala idea superb lovely
      Loads of love keep smiling

    13. SidMinTwiNj on January 19, 2017 6:49 pm

      Awwww sooooo cute epi… Loved it to the heart core… Post next soon plzzzzzzzzzz…

      With love❤

    14. Aanya_pandey on January 20, 2017 8:07 pm

      Wat an update!!! Soo soo soo good.. just loved reading it.. n kunj knew each n every habit of twinkle.. that was the best thing that i could have read today??

    15. baby on January 23, 2017 2:05 am

      monaaa di☺
      it was too cute d gifts♥
      d lines lovely words for his love hayeee☺
      amazing fabulous luvd it☺
      luv u lods♥♥

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