Close Menu
  • Submit Your Article
  • Featured
  • Activity
  • Members
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
  • Home
  • Contact Us
  • Submit Article
  • Activity
  • Register
  • Login
  • Members
  • Logout, {username}
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
  • Home
  • Featured
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
Home»Fan Fiction»Twinj..a magical land (episode 2)
Fan Fiction Tashan-e-Ishq

Twinj..a magical land (episode 2)

AngitaBy AngitaAugust 1, 201625 Comments5 Mins Read
Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Share
Facebook Twitter LinkedIn Pinterest Email

Niya’s office
Prutosh:_Niya vo will you pls let twinkle join us in the football match please..
Niya:but why yaar..twinkle you’re a girl..why’d you wanna take part in such activities… I’m sorry I’ll not allow you…head back to your rooms everyone
All of us:_but…
Niya:_no ifs or buts.

***twinkle’s POV***
I head into the dragons….I was surprised by the sight I saw.. When I entered three small fire dragons surrounded my head…granting permission I guess…but the spark that lit on my neckless made me shiver..the room was big…spacious too..two beds..I didn’t wonder why 2 but I just tossed my clothes on the floor….to my surprise it hanged itself…that’s when I heard this knock on my door..it was Prutosh.. Yuvraj..they came to call me out…I invited them in..
Yuvraj:don’t you know twinkle??
Me:know what?
Prutosh:the dragon never let’s anyone who is not choosen by it to come in…and where’d you get that necklace…I’ve seen it Kunj’s diary..
Me:where are the rest??
Yuvraj and Prutosh: aarav and rahul are at the savegons(a jungle type magic area composed by me)hunting prey I guess..Kunj.. He never tell us where he goes…its weird…he’s also a newcomer just like you..rude he is but still our friend…we don’t know where his room is even…we wanted to invite you to see the park…magical of course..
Me:sure…I’ll love to..
***end of twinkle’s POV***
(Guys some dialogues will be in twinkle POV or any POV and some will not..if not it will be like this:_)

***Kunj’s POV***
This girl…what’s about her..her necklace ..is she the one I’m looking for?..no it can’t right!..I’m confused…my pet ran towards me..flew actually(Cheshire cat..who watches Alice in wonderland?)
Park
Twinkle Prutosh and yuvraj were very keen in looking at all! Around them….there was a pet adoption center(sorry guys love pets to much bear with it)..magical pets..many unicorn..dogs in a complete different form..
Prutosh:_wanna adopt any pets twinkle?
Twinkle:_I’ll love to..and went to a small dragon..this one
Prutosh: dragons??
Yuvraj:_bro she stays at the dragons remember!?
Prutosh: yes but the dragon must choose you..not the other way around! You’re suppose to walk surrounding the dragon thrice..it it shines it allows you but if not..
But the dragon shines immediately..
Yuvraj.. Prutosh.. Twinkle:_were shocked..yeah kese

***twinkle’s POV***
I took the baby dragon and that minute my necklace shined….it seems the ‘pets’are independent themselves..
It was night
I gave my dragon(u guys pls suggest a name for it)
Food and lied and sat on their bed. Food appeared by itself steaming hot…. I took a bath first so that the food cools down but it didnt,..I said to,myself how I wish it cools down and the minute I said that the food temperature was just great….ooh magic I thought to myself….it was quite late so I just lay on my bed….hoping to fall asleep… But I couldn’t ..flashback was keep on flashing…it was me with a girl…I cry…I’m at a river…that’s all…suddenly I heard the sound of the door cracking open..I panicked… It was dark…
Person: guess you never thought of the second bed..did you twinkle?
Kunj I said….yes he was Kunj….I can’t believe he’s my roommate..well I said hello…can we be friends??
I got a really rude answer in return…it was why are dying to be friends with me…I’m dead…not to be your friends…I didn’t understand actually…good night I said as I fell asleep…well kind of…keep on thinking of Kunj…I knew he knew I was awake…I was really surprised when he spoke to me..
Kunj:you’re really lucky to be in the dragons you know..others might not but I do…that necklace..
There was firmness in his voice…the voice which made a shiver run down my spine…ooh well I thought..suddenly there was a really loud shriek…it was my dragon(name required)..
Kunj screamed: who brought this guy here,,…don’t you know we were enemies…well actually I want to kill him
I was just laughing looking at his state…my dragon on top of him..both of them totally wet(don’t ask me how)….his hair fully messed up…..his clothes scattered down the floor and his look..
He looked so charming…..his eyes conveying innocence cuteness behind the rude guy…hum duno eyelock seemed very lovely….as if he was my…..
I went into the washroom…wanted to slam the door but meh bulghayi ki yeh magic land heh…the door closed itself aah…
Don’t hide Neja..I heard Kunj screaming…
Neja..I thought what does he know about me?
I went out only to see that he was unconscious..
Kunj I screamed while running to his aid
***twinkle’s POV ends***

***Kunj’s POV***
I was still unconscious but I’m weird…I know what’s happening around… I didn’t mean to call her neja..I don’t even know what it means..,but I know she’s attached to my past…though I don’t know how…looking at her concern for me I had a few blur flashbacks….
In present twinkle was weeping..for me??
She splashed the heanin water on me(according to my imagination it heals everything)..I knew I knew something about her as she did maybe…..

Hello guys still Angita.. Sorry if you guys find it boring …pls share your views through your comments..do you guys want me to add something in it??? And ya pls suggest the pet dragons name yaar pls pls pls…
I love you guys
If there is any silent reader pls comment.

Share. Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Previous ArticleKasam 1st August 2016 Written Episode Update
Next Article SWASAN SS BY ANU 08 – WE ARE DESTINED TO BE TOGETHER “pain”
Angita

    merry merry christmas

    25 Comments

    1. Romaisha on August 1, 2016 10:45 pm

      Heyy angita … It was awesome yaar it’s a different kind of story … Loving it? n sorry im bad at naming pets sorry nah? ? … Love u … Post soon

      • Angita on August 2, 2016 6:08 pm

        Thanks a lot romu…its okay you can’t name pets…even I’m really bad at it…will post soon

    2. Aamu on August 1, 2016 10:59 pm

      amazinggggggggggg……………..
      fast update i liked it

      • Angita on August 2, 2016 6:09 pm

        Vo I’m on sick leave isiliye jaldi post ka rahi hun
        Thanks for commenting

    3. SidMin on August 1, 2016 11:01 pm

      Anita it was so sweet Loved the episode and Twinkle’s pet and Kunj’s fight was awesome Loved it waiting for the next 🙂

      • Angita on August 2, 2016 6:10 pm

        Thanks a lot sidmin……I guess my name is not Anita kyunki I’m not a villian on tei yaar
        ?❤?❤

      • SidMin on August 2, 2016 7:32 pm

        Sorry voh auto correct hogaya tha

      • Angita on August 3, 2016 6:51 am

        Koi bath nai
        I was just joking
        ?❤?❤
        Love you

    4. Shivanya on August 1, 2016 11:04 pm

      Really nice and it is not boring .Plus don’t say like this that it is boring . While reading ur ff I thought I am in some kind of fairy world. This is really awesome. Thanks for episode and play updates next episode soon.

      • Angita on August 2, 2016 6:12 pm

        Thanks Anya…mind if I call you that??
        Glad you feel it’s like a fairly world
        ❤?❤?

    5. Shivanya on August 1, 2016 11:06 pm

      Its pls instead of plus and play

    6. sidhantfan on August 2, 2016 12:19 am

      Awesome it’s a different kind of story

      • Angita on August 2, 2016 6:13 pm

        Thanks a lot sidhant fan
        ?❤?❤
        (You’re a girl right)

    7. Sidhanshi on August 2, 2016 1:02 am

      Awesome..

      • Angita on August 2, 2016 6:14 pm

        Thank you
        ?❤?❤?

    8. Purnima.agrawal30 on August 2, 2016 1:59 am

      awesome

    9. Lovely on August 2, 2016 7:46 am

      Meri fairy world ki princess.. Yaar too good..and for the pet!..what about dogu??..hehe..and what about..Dash..or Dokes??..
      If I’ll get another.. I’ll surely tell..okay..
      Love you

      • Angita on August 2, 2016 6:15 pm

        Thanks meri love world ki princess
        I’m taking the name dash…
        ?❤?❤❤
        Love you

    10. Sayeeda on August 2, 2016 9:46 am

      Angita first of all hats off to u for writing a ff based on different storyline …
      While reading it I was imagining myself in the fairy world ….
      Amazing ….episode ..
      loved it to the core ….
      love u

      • Angita on August 2, 2016 6:16 pm

        Thank a lot sayuu di
        Its all because reading to much fantasy novels..he he
        Love you to
        ?❤?❤?❤

    11. baby on August 2, 2016 11:37 am

      angita omg osm yr luvd d episode soooo mch bas last part mein me thoda cnfuse hogyi pls cn u clear my cnfusn cn u explain d last prt agn odr wise yr u r fab n give d name on ur choice

      • Angita on August 2, 2016 6:18 pm

        Which part you didn’t understand…. If it was Kunj unconscious part its because of the past and if not the soul comes out of his body so he knows what’s happening,, if both no pls ask me
        Thanks for commenting
        ?❤❤?❤

      • baby on August 2, 2016 6:27 pm

        thnks angita now its cleared i m luving it

    12. bulbul23 on August 2, 2016 4:23 pm

      Yr angu u are amazing just like ur ff yr kya likhti ho han
      I know ke maine late comment kiya but kya karoon and I was literally dreaming abt that world do post soon

      • Angita on August 2, 2016 6:19 pm

        Thanks bulbul
        I don’t care about late comments
        And glad to know you’re in dreamworld reading it
        Love you
        ❤?❤?❤

    Sponsor
    Latest Posts

    Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance

    November 29, 2025

    Manpasand Ki Shaadi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Arohi Receives Love While Kanika Grows Jealous

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Anjali Accused of Theft While Padma Goes Missing

    November 29, 2025

    Shiv Shakti (Colors) 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mahadev Stops Ravan and Declares His Second Test Failed

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Kavya Misuses Mehek’s Jewelry

    November 29, 2025
    Sponsor
    Latest Comments
    • Anon on Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance
    • Anonymous on Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Intrigues and Secrets in Virani Family Wedding Plans
    • Yoni on Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai 22nd November 2025 Written Episode Update: Broken Circles
    • Enam on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Enam on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Enam on Anupama 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Pari Defends Anupama and Video Evidence Released
    • Hina on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Jacky-UK on Anupama 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Pari Defends Anupama and Video Evidence Released
    © 2025 TellyUpdates - All Rights Reserved. Privacy Policy | Terms

    Type above and press Enter to search. Press Esc to cancel.