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Home»Fan Fiction»TwiNj : Love On A Mission (One Slot) ~ by Shatakshi and Ria
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TwiNj : Love On A Mission (One Slot) ~ by Shatakshi and Ria

ShatakshiRiaBy ShatakshiRiaSeptember 11, 2016Updated:September 11, 201686 Comments15 Mins Read
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TwiNj: Love On A Mission (One Shot)
Hey all!
Shatakshi, the author of “So A Lion Fell In Love With A Lamb” and Ria, the author of “Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?” are together again.
Thank you so much for all your comments and support. We both are really glad that you all liked our previous one shot. Sorry we couldn’t reply to each one’s comment individually as we both were really busy this week.
As our earlier slot was a simple love story so this time we have tried something new.

Well, here’s another one for you all. We hope you all will like it.
(Pic credit: Google baba?)
So let’s start
• • •
The scene revolves around the Headquarters of Indian Army.

A girl is seen walking…she is wearing a blue jeans with a white tucked in shirt and a leather vest over it along with a holster holding her gun…her hairs tied is a high pony tail.

“My I come in sir”, she seeked permission standing infront of a huge cabin.

“Come in Agent Taneja”, the person sitting in the cabin said.

“Jai hind Sir”, she saluted him with a stiff posture and an expressionless face.
The name plated indicated that it was Field Marshal Amar Ravat’s cabin….a man in his early fifties.
“Agent Taneja…. Again Army needs u….u have to stalk an international Gangster Sameer Khurana….I know u might be thinking that what is the need of Army to interfere in these matters which could have been handled by the Police and Govt….but the issue is that he has some confidential information regarding outcoming operations and plan which later can affect our country’s security….u will have our force assistance with u….the work u have to do is to get information of his each and every movement and direct us….if u need some company in this operation u are free to say”, he guided her.

“No sir….I will do it”, she said sternly.
“I expected the same from u….take these …here are ur tickets , passport and yes ur new identity….from now u are Twinkle Agarwal….I hope everything is clear now….u have to fly for Paris within 2 days…u have to trap him and hand him over to California Headquaters….later after further investigations we will shift him here”, he said.

“Yes”, said Twinkle and saluting Mr. Ravat she left the place.
In 2 days all the preparations were done and now she left for Paris.

PARIS

Flight landed in Paris and a girl wearing a pink crop top with a loose shirt and capry came out of airport….she was twinkle….her new look made her look flawless.
She approached a taxi then drove to brokers place to get her new house keys which was earlier arranged for her…n then directly drove off to her house.
After unpacking many of her stuffs and arranging her GPS device which was tracing Sameer she started her work. Suddenly her door bell rang.
“Who will be here now?? Did anyone get information of me being here? Let’s check”, she thought and opened the door.
She found her broker and a guy facing his back.
“Actually ma’am he is going to share this flat with u as discussed earlier”, the broker said.
Twinkle gave a confused look.

“I wasn’t informed anything about it earlier….and why will he share this flat with me….I don’t even know him”, she said sternly.
“Ma’am it was known earlier….ur father booked the house and I informed him about the same….u can’t back off”, replied the broker.
Twinkle thinks, “I think Field Marshal Raval might have done this…but before doing anything I have to confirm.”
She instantly messaged him and he agreed broker’s words….she felt strange but then dropped the thought.
“Ohh…okay…let him be here….my father didn’t inform me about it”, she replied.
The Broker left and the boy turned around….he was approximately of the same age like her… Wearing a black full sleeves V neck T shirt along with a blue denims and a black shade….his body was sculpted and he had a maintained physique.
“Hey Lovely Lady”, he said forwarding his hand.
“Mind ur words…”, she warned him.
“Oops!!…I think u dont like compliments…but, anyways myself Kunj…Kunj Sharma”, he said entering the house.
“Ya ya Whatever….”, she said rolling her eyes and started moving inside her room when suddenly she stopped and went n sat on the couch beside him. Kunj arched his eyebrows seeing her.
T : What?
K : No nothing. (smiles)
T : Listen, I wanted to warn u that don’t u dare to enter my room….NEVER EVER…
K : (sarcastically) I can still stay here if u keep ur volume low.

T : Shut up….and u won’t talk to me neither spoil my privacy….everything will be done individually dont expect any kind of help or teamwork becoz I’m not gonna do anything for u…..n yes don’t even try to get cozy with me….becoz I’m a black belt n ur such act can harm ur manhood.
Kunj was smiling all the time.

K : n what if u tried to rape me??
T : (making a disgusted frown) U have a shitty head…n that’s never gonna happen.
T : ummm…so, what is ur profession?? I mean what do u do to earn a living?
K : I’m an employee in corporate office.
T : Ok fine…
Saying this she left for her room.
Kunj thought, “This girl is literally a bomb….” and smiled.
Days passed by n now it’s been a week since they are living together but, hardly talk…many a times, he tried but, Twinkle was hardly available. But, now they were friends….as she didn’t use harsh words for him becoz she found him good.

ONE DAY AT NIGHT

Twinkle returned completely exhausted and found Kunj in a brown leather jacket with a white round neck inner and a blue jeans.

T : R u going somewhere?? (She said relaxing on the sofa.)
K : Yeah.. Actually I was going to pub to hangout with friends….I know u are also going there only.

Twinkle thinks, “How does he know that I will go to pub behind Sameer….Strange!”
Kunj then clarifies his words.

K : I mean to say that u are coming with me….afterall we are friends right?
T : ok…I will get ready in 10 mins…
Saying this she went inside to dress herself. Kunj was waiting for her went he heard the sound of door. He was awestruck to see her beauty.
Kunj thinks, “God!!…she is so pretty.”
T : Come let’s go.
Kunj didn’t say anything….just kept on moving forward….here twinkle was moving back but didn’t utter a word. Finally the wall blocked her way.

T : Ku..kunj wh..what are u doing
K : shhh (placing his finger on her lips)
She closed her eyes on his touch. He then moved towards her ears.
K : (whispers) U look beautiful!
N then backed off. Twinkle blushed.
Suddenly a thought came in her mind, “Wait Twinkle what are u doing?….u can’t do this…this will never happen. …I can’t misguide Kunj…becoz we can never be one….”
She pushed him and ran to her room. Kunj was shocked with her actions. He didn’t go for the party but, Twinkle after sometime tip toed from the house as her operation was at stake and she can’t ignore her work becoz of her newly experienced feelings.

NEXT MORNING
Neither of them uttered a word…. The entire morning was like a silent movie….both wanted to say many things….it was visible from their eyes but mouth was not allowing them. Finally they spoke up together.
“I’m sorry.”
(Both smiled.)
K : I’m sorry Twinkle…I didn’t do that intentionally.
T : I know Kunj…n I’m sorry too for over reacting…. don’t know what happened to me at that time….I think no one came so close to me ever so this might be the reason.

K : Seriously twinkle??…u mean to say that u never had a bf…
T : (rolling her eyes) Like u had many.
K : Yes I probably had 17 gf’s…but right now I’m single. (He says with a wink)
Twinkle’s jaws were dropped on hearing this.
T : Ohh now I get it…u were flirting with me these days right??…bl**dy flirt.
She says throwing the cushion….n left to her room. Leaving a laughing Kunj behind.
He thinks, “I love u Agent Twinkle Taneja….I know ur identity…but u dont know mine….the day I saw u, u made me go crazy….u are the first n the last lady in my life….my lady love!”
He removed her photo from his wallet and kissed it.
With the passing days Twinkle’s affection for Kunj was growing…and here kunj was madly in love with her.
One day twinkle was behind Sameer when she noticed Kunj…. But, before she could call him he disappeared in the crowd. She came back home

T : Kunj (she yelled)
K : Yes Twinkle
He says sipping his coffee
Seeing him calm she thought, “I think I misunderstood him with someone else….God Twinkle u are seeing Kunj everywhere….control ur love dumb head”, she smiles
K : Twinkle, where are u lost?
T : ummm..no no nothing.

ITS EVENING
Twinkle was arranging her cupboard busy in Kunj’s thoughts when she received a message.

She saw the sender and found it out to be Kunj’s. She opened the messaged and read it.
“Come to Hotel Meridian at 7.”
“Why would he call me there?”, wondered Twinkle and looked at her watch.
“Gosh! It’s already 5. I need to get ready and start. Aj Kunj ke hosh udhaane honge (Today, Kunj has to lose his senses)”, said Twinkle to herself and patted her forehead for being stupid.
She got up and choosing her dress went to change. After an hour Twinkle was ready. She had dressed herself in a black knee-length dress with netted embroidery all over it along with matching accessories and black heels.

She applied a little make-up and looked drop-dead gorgeous. She looked at herself in the mirror and smiled looking at herself. She wore her black-silver combined watch and said, “I am coming Kunj.” She left her home and drove away to the hotel.

She parked her car and was about to walk inside when she thought, “Where should I go? Shall I call him? No, I’ll go ask the receptionist and then surprise him.” She walked away to the reception and asked the receptionist, “Kunj Sharma?”
“One second ma’am. I’ll just check”, replied the receptionist.
“Ma’am, we’ve a booking by Kunj Sarna’s name. But, Kunj Sharma isn’t there”, replied the receptionist.
Twinkle looked on confused but, later thought may be the receptionist booked it by the wrong name.
“Okay. Room number?”, asked Twinkle.
“Ma’am, room number 405. But, he told us to direct you to the pool side”, replied the receptionist.

“Okay thank you so much”, said Twinkle and walked away to the pool side.

POOL SIDE
She found the pool side completely decorated with red and white balloons all over.
Small bulbs made the place look more beautiful at night.
She went towards the pool and looked here and there to find Kunj.
She found him standing at a distance facing his back towards her. She thought to suprise him and tip-toed up to him.
She was about to hug him from back when he said, “Twinkle shouldn’t know what I actually do. She only knows I’m an employee in a corporate office.”
Twinkle was startled while Kunj disconnected the call. He turned around and saw Twinkle standing there.
“Twinkle?”, he uttered being afraid.
“Kunj Sarna, would you mind telling me what do you exactly do”, said Twinkle folding her arms.
“Twinkle, you’re getting me wrong”, said Kunj.
“I was getting you wrong. I don’t even know you. You just hid everything from me. I don’t even know what do you to earn a living. When you’ve to hide this that means it’s something illegal. This relationship, our so-called friendship….ur care and affection for me, everything was just a lie. Anyways, I need to arrest you Mr. Kunj Sarna”, said Twinkle as the tears rolled down her cheeks.

Twinkle took out the handcuffs and was about to arrest Kunj when he put his hand back and took out his revolver.
“Don’t try to act smart”, yelled Twinkle.
Kunj pulled Twinkle behind him and shot another person.
“Sameer Khurana!!”, exclaimed Twinkle.
“Why did you kill him? I had to hand him to the headquarters in California”, shouted Twinkle without realizing her words.
“And from where did u get this revolver??” she asked curiously.

“I’ve shot him on his leg. He’s injured”, said Kunj putting his revolver back.
“How did you know he wasn’t to be shot?”, asked Twinkle.
“Senior Under Cover Agent Kunj Sarna, New York City headquarters”, said Kunj and called someone. Twinkle’s jaws dropped as she looked on amused.
“Sameer Khurana is injured. Come and take him from Hotel Meridian”, said Kunj and disconnected the call.
Twinkle started hitting him and said, “You idiot! Why didn’t you tell me that you’re an under cover agent? Okay fine. I understand that. But, now when I was shouting at you then why were you quite?”
Kunj pulled her closer and kissed her. Twinkle remained shocked as Kunj continued kissing her passionately.
Kunj pulled back after a few minutes and asked,
“Now, what?” Twinkle pushed him back and said,
“Answer my questions first.” Kunj again pulled her closer and was about to kiss her when she bent down.
“First tell me”, said Twinkle.
“I was here to protect u as guided by Mr Raval…but see my silly heart slipped for u”, he says smiling.
Twinkle gave him death glares as her questions were still unanswered.
“ok …ok..” he raised his hand in a way to surrender.

“I was thinking how to react? Should I let you die or should I save you”, replied Kunj.
Twinkle pushed him back and said, “What?” She started hitting Kunj’s chest when Kunj pulled her towards himself and tightened his grip around her waist.
Twinkle was about to speak but, Kunj placed his forefinger on her lips and whispered,
“I love you!” Twinkle smiled as she turned crimson.
“You look so cute”, said Kunj kissing her cheeks.
Twinkle pulled away and was about to walk away when Kunj held her wrist and said, “It’s only me and you tonight.” Twinkle freed her hand from his grip and ran away.
“Twinkle, wait”, shouted Kunj and started chasing her. After some time, Twinkle and Kunj stood in front of each other at a bit distance completely exhausted. Kunj started moving towards Twinkle and said, “Don’t move.” Twinkle bent down and splashing some water on Kunj’s face ran inside the hotel.

Kunj followed her inside the hotel and later, both of them got inside the booked room.
Kunj locked the door and said, “Now, where will you run?”
He started moving towards her while Twinkle moved back. She was moving back until she got stuck by the wall. Kunj moved closer to her and placed his hands on the wall to prevent her from escaping.
Twinkle looked at him and said, “Yours forever.”

Kunj smiled and pulled her closer by her waist. Kunj tightened his grip and kissed her.
Twinkle responded back and they kissed each other passionately as Twinkle was caressing his hair. They pulled back after almost 10 minutes and smiled looking at each other. Twinkle turned around in shyness and was about to go when Kunj held her hand and moved towards her.
He swiftly slid his hands down her hands and later, engulfed her in a back hug. He moved his hair to the front and started kissing her neck. Twinkle closed her eyes and continued relishing his touch. “I love you!”, said Twinkle after sometime. Kunj smiled and rested his chin on her shoulder. He kissed her left cheek and said, “Love you too!” Twinkle smiled as Kunj turned her around and picked her up in his arms.He gently kissed her forehead and came on top of her. He kissed her as Twinkle responded and started unbuttoning his shirt. After sometime, Twinkle removed his shirt and came on top of him pushing him down.

Kunj smiled as Twinkle kissed his neck. Kunj unzipped her dress and removed it. Twinkle shied and looked away while Kunj pulled her close and said, “You’re only mine.” Twinkle smiled and kissed Kunj’s left cheek. After around an hour, Twinkle laid down on the bed wearing Kunj’s shirt and both of them fell asleep in each other’s embrace.

• • • • •

Did you all like it? Please drop down your
comments below. We would be eagerly waiting to read them. Criticism is always acceptable but, please no ill language.
Love you all! Take care. Bye!?

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    86 Comments

    1. rashiverma2199 on September 11, 2016 7:09 am

      Wow….my 2 lovely friends…..loved it to the core….awesome ……amazing…..

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:31 pm

        Thank you so much Rashi! We’re glad that you liked it.?

        ~ Ria

      • rashiverma2199 on September 11, 2016 4:34 pm

        I will always like it…..???

    2. paavu on September 11, 2016 8:01 am

      Wow my lovely darlos ria and shats wat an amazing and awesome os loved it ok to jaldi se spne ffs bhi post jardo pls I m dying to read them

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:32 pm

        Hey Paavu,
        Thank you so much dear. We’re glad that you liked it. We’ll upload our ff’s soon. Sorry to keep you waiting.

        ~ Ria

    3. ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 8:33 am

      Hey Guys
      The links aren’t posted
      So here are the links of our previous os:

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/twinj-strange-love-ria-shatakshi-one-shot/

    4. Roshini125 on September 11, 2016 9:04 am

      Great one dears….lovedo it

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:33 pm

        Hey Roshini,
        Thank you so much.?

        ~ Ria

    5. Anushka on September 11, 2016 9:13 am

      loveddd it to d core…… awsmness at its peak

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:34 pm

        Hey Anushka,
        Thank you so much. We’re glad that you liked it.?

        ~ Ria

    6. AYESHA KHANUM on September 11, 2016 9:29 am

      Amazing how will u write guys such an amazing

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:36 pm

        Hey Ayesha,
        Thank you so much. We’re glad that you liked our writing.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    7. tara on September 11, 2016 9:40 am

      what u ppl want haa??
      me to die??
      like seriously…. i read it at one go.. nd now m repeating few areas….
      ohhhhhhhhhhhhgooooooooddddd… it was exceptionally awsm…
      loved it so much..
      deep romance..
      i love these kinda stories..
      come up with more…
      loved the duo work..
      love u two tooooo

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:38 pm

        Hey Tara,
        Thank you so much dear. But, as I said before also we didn’t have any intentions of killing you.?
        Anyways, we’ll surely try coming up soon with another story completely different from this.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    8. TwinjSidMin on September 11, 2016 10:06 am

      Hey shatz n ria amazing OS…loved it to the square of infinity…

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:37 pm

        Hey di,
        Thank you so much. We’re really glad that you liked it.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    9. Purnima.agrawal30 on September 11, 2016 10:13 am

      awesome amazing fabulous cute os…..loved it…..awesome……

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:30 pm

        Hey Purnima
        Thanks a lot for always supporting us
        Love u loads dear..
        ❤❤❤
        ~Shatakshi

    10. dreamer...arundhati on September 11, 2016 10:29 am

      Sattu di and ria…every time u amaze us. ..u nailed it

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:32 pm

        Hey Aru
        Thank u dear
        Love u
        ❤
        ~Shatakshi?

    11. Sidhanshi on September 11, 2016 10:36 am

      Awesome.. Just amazing, superb, mindblowing… Wowww… I loved it.. This one is one of my favourite os… Love u both shatakshi and ria… Keep writing like this guys… Waiting for u’r next dhamakedar os…

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:34 pm

        ????
        Ittna cute comment
        Thank u so much Sidhanshi
        U really made us happy
        We will try to write more
        Thanks a lot for ur support
        Love u

        ~Shatakshi?

    12. Anshika on September 11, 2016 10:56 am

      Amazing

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:34 pm

        Thank u so much Anshika
        We are glad that u liked it

        ~Shatakshi?

    13. Meeta on September 11, 2016 11:05 am

      What?
      Kya?
      You’re making me jealous.
      You both r a bomb, together.
      Sabki phat jaati h.
      More.more.
      I want more.
      Love you both.
      Missing the group.
      Will join on 23th for sure.
      ?

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:37 pm

        Omg Meetu
        Thank u shooo much for ur Bomblastic comment???
        U really made our day
        N how is ur exams going on??
        All the very best??
        Rock it girl✌✌
        Love u loads

        ~ Shatakshi?

    14. kruti on September 11, 2016 11:48 am

      ??????U guys just nailed it……it was an exceptional piece of writing
      Amazing…awesome….fantastic…..I legit loved it

      Love u guys??

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:39 pm

        Awww thank u shooo much kruti
        For being a supportive friend
        It really means a lot
        Love u loads dear
        ❤❤❤

        ~Shatakshi?

    15. Cutie pie on September 11, 2016 12:03 pm

      Awsme fabulous suprb yaar

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:39 pm

        Thank u so much cutie pie
        ❤❤
        ~Shatskshi?

    16. sujina on September 11, 2016 12:04 pm

      shatria…u both r awesome…
      u knw u both individually r mindblowing n whn combined u r on top of d world…loved it 2 d core really…it was awesome…keep on writing n…love u both

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:41 pm

        Thank u shoooo much Sunija
        For the cutest comment
        N ofcourse for the name….
        We both loved it
        Love u dear
        ❤❤❤

        ~Shatakshi?

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:51 pm

        *N thanks for the cutest name✌

    17. Sunehri on September 11, 2016 12:14 pm

      Shatakshi di and ria di it was amazing

      Keep going

      Sunehri mehta ♡

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:42 pm

        Thanks a lot Sunehri
        N I really like ur dp….
        Love u ❤

        ~Shatakshi??

    18. Laddoo on September 11, 2016 12:40 pm

      My two sisters back again!
      Ria di…please I am ur sister, and u r mine, even if u don’t want me to be.
      Shats di, haven’t talked to u in a while, and I am seriously missing you.
      How r u? R u fine? Ur exams are over? Were they good?
      Anyways, coming to this OS, this was a lovely surprise.
      I never knew that you too would come up with this.
      A different story, I thought Kunj was someone of Sameer’s contacts.
      But, nevertheless, Agent Taneja and Ajent Sarna seem much better than Siyappa Queen and Sadu Sarna.
      Anyways, hope you both come up with more soon. Love you both forever?

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:41 pm

        Hey Laddoo,
        Aww.. you’ll always be my sister no matter what. I told you that I love pulling your leg but, today you made me sad. But, nevertheless you made up to it as well.
        Haha..looks like we think similar. I was also going to make Kunj a villain but, it would have been similar to Sara’s two shots. Anyways, thank you so much for your beautiful comment.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria di?

      • Laddoo on September 11, 2016 1:47 pm

        Shats di did not reply to me?

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 1:46 pm

        Hey meri Ishu
        U know I miss u so much
        So I requested Ria that I want to reply ur comment
        Tu to insta pe bhi nahi h so I can’t talk
        But seriously ur words always make my day
        I m great…how are u??
        N my semi is gonna start on sept end
        I hope u are rocking ur exams
        N when will u post ur Ff….yesterday I searched it but it was not posted

        Thanks a lot for being the best supportive twin.sister

        Love u shoooo much Ishu

        ~Shatakshi (Teri twin Siso)??✌

      • Laddoo on September 11, 2016 1:47 pm

        Ph kr diya!

      • Laddoo on September 11, 2016 2:23 pm

        I will post my ff directly on 2nd Oct di
        Rgt now pprs are more imp..

    19. Monica on September 11, 2016 1:44 pm

      OHMYGOD! I so loved this. You guys together write the best. Like i was awestruck reading the whole os and the plot, that was fab. Like it was unique. Hope you guys come up with more of such os’s. Btw, its been long sha since we have talked, any plans to talk or ignoring me huh ?? Love you both ? and also, update your ff’s now. It been high time since you have. Bye x

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 3:54 pm

        Ahaaha Monica
        Thanks a lot for reading and loving it
        N see who is ignoring my msgs??
        I really miss u dear….but u know na my phone…dekh one plus se directly intex aqua pe aa gaye…??

        Love u loads dear

        ~Shatakshi??

    20. ranabulbul on September 11, 2016 2:02 pm

      Sholly sholly sholly sholly
      For the late cmnt yr
      Busy with exams
      But yr this os oh god its so so awesome dude
      I am in love with this os
      U two r rocking as always
      Amazing the agent taneja and agent sarna

      I am from Indian army family background
      So this story I can relate with my uncles lovestory

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 3:57 pm

        Hey Bulbul
        Thank u so very much for reading n liking our piece of work…
        N we are glad that u can relate it with ur uncle…
        All the best for ur exams dear??
        Rock it up✌✌
        Love u
        ❤❤

        ~Shatakshi??

    21. baby on September 11, 2016 2:39 pm

      ohhhh my god shatakshiria u both r flawless beauties amazing fabulous
      sooooooo beautiful n cute os i was jst hawa hawaai reading it hhahaha
      you two make up a perfect team luvd it to the eternity………………..
      i dont have words to tell that howw cool you both are my lovely sisters………..
      luv u both…………………see you soon with ur ffs and another piece of ur both ritings………

      • Ria on September 11, 2016 11:06 pm

        Hey Baby,
        Thank you so much for the sweetest comment one could’ve complimented us with. We’re glad that you liked our piece of writing. Sure. We’ll be back with our ff’s soon.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    22. Sameera on September 11, 2016 2:54 pm

      Omg sattu ria again a killer os
      U both nailed it once again guys
      Aag laga daali amazing????

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 11:10 pm

        Hey Sameera,
        Thank you so much. We both are really glad that you liked this OS.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    23. thanmy on September 11, 2016 2:56 pm

      Once again wow it was soooooo good my two favourite writers cum frnds (hope so) ull did a fabulous job yrrrr its amazing as soon as I saw it I wanted to read but I couldn’t but any ways it was wonderful I enjoyed it a lottttt
      Pls keep writing like this l loved it and love u all too

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 11:14 pm

        Hey Thanmy,
        Thank you so much dear. We’re really glad that you liked our writing. It makes us feel really nice to know that our writing excited you. Keep loving and supporting us.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    24. S.Z.F.Z on September 11, 2016 3:22 pm

      Hmmmmm…What should I say❓❓❓❓❓ U guys have left me awestruck with ur mindblowing ideas! My both lovely writers are rocking it like hell…sorry…U guys are rocking it like heaven ??? Toooooooooooooooooo gooooooooood ? Keep it up! Shattu and Ria…This was something AMAZINGLY AMAZING 🙂 Actually Amazing is not the word to describe it❗I am out of words to describe this amazing word, meri dictionary mein jitne words hein woh isske saamne kam hai toh ab aap donon hi bata de app apni tareef mein kya suna chati hain? Love u guys??My darlos Shattu di and Ria ??

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

      -Zuha

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 3:48 pm

        Hey Zuha
        Ur praises are enough for us….really it means a lot
        Aab him kya bole tune kuch choda he nahi bolne ke liye???

        N thank u so much for reading and we are glad that u liked it
        I m waiting for ur ff Zuha….please post it soon
        Love u loads dear❤❤❤

        ~Shatakshi??

      • S.Z.F.Z on September 11, 2016 6:35 pm

        Hmmmm…FF will be posted soon! Actually it is Eid-ul-Adha, a religious festival in my religion, this Tuesday, in which we sacrifice goats or cows or camels or sheep, and animals are brought at homes and playing with them is the bestest part so busy with my cute little goats ??? I am crazy 4r animals ?? Well insha alaah I will try to post soon ?

    25. SidMin on September 11, 2016 3:39 pm

      Loved it It was too good and I have got a treat already before my birthday by the two best writers of TU Loved it
      While reading the story I felt it was Like the other stories where The hero is a don and the heroine has to still arrest him But the end was too romantic
      Loved it keep writing such stories 🙂

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 3:51 pm

        Look who is saying
        A great itself is regarding us to be the best
        Thank u so much Mili
        N dekh tere b day gift advance me he de diya✌✌
        We r glad that u liked it
        N please na jaldi aapna ff post kar…I want to see twinj in college
        Love u darling
        ❤❤

        ~Shatakshi??

    26. RiaA MendeZz on September 11, 2016 4:47 pm

      Again you guys did magic????? I just love the two of u combined together.
      Everything was perfect from beginning to ending.. Your ideas? Mind blowing!… I hope this is the 2nd of “many” from shatakshiRia ❤

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 11:17 pm

        Hey RiaA,
        Thank you so much. We’re really glad that you liked this piece of writing of ours. Will soon be back with another piece of writing. Don’t worry.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    27. tahu on September 11, 2016 6:11 pm

      omg u both r amazing….fab…fan….loved it in core

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 11:18 pm

        Thank you so much Tanu! We’re glad that you liked this.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    28. Sara28 on September 11, 2016 6:13 pm

      So sorry for the late comment I hope u will forgive me. Now what do I say? U Guys are mindblowing. Really no words………….just waiting for the words to come but I’m really speechless!

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 11:27 pm

        Hey Sara,
        Again sorry? Ria is seriously getting annoyed now. Okay, anyways, I know the reason for you being late and it’s completely alright.
        Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment. We both are glad that you liked this.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    29. twinjfan.tamanna on September 11, 2016 6:42 pm

      shatakshi n ria…it was outstanding….I loved it to the core of my heart…plz do write more os like this…u two just rocked…love u…

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 11:19 pm

        Hey Tamanna,
        Thank you so much! We’re glad that you liked our writing.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    30. Suni on September 11, 2016 6:50 pm

      Im speechless… ?
      Fantastic os as usual!!!! ??
      Loved it to d core??… U both nailed it as usual!.. I’ve become jabri fan of ShatakshiRia.. ?
      Do write more stories!!!?

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 11:20 pm

        Hey Suni,
        Thank you so much dear. We both are really glad that you liked our writing.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    31. Mitali on September 11, 2016 8:28 pm

      What an OS ?
      You both r making me jealous.
      This was the best writing piece I ever read.
      Individually u both write outstanding stories.
      And together u both write outstanding se bhi opaar wale stories.
      To write the next one pls.
      With love
      –Mitali

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 11:22 pm

        Hey Mitali,
        Thank you so much dear. We both are really glad that you liked our writing. Hope you all keep supporting the two of us similarly.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    32. manu on September 11, 2016 8:45 pm

      Superb and the award for best writter goes to shatakshi and ria yr seriously you guys just rocked it superb amazing awesome fantastic beautifully weittwn and described sattu di waiting for so a lion fell in love with lamb eagerly plz post if u get time and sry I disnt comment for so long actually I am very much stressed now a days. Have a veryyyy serious personal problem ur I am so confuesd I can’t tell u and wilk try to comment if possible and plz prey that my problem gets solved soon. Bye love u

      • ShatakshiRia on September 11, 2016 11:24 pm

        Hey Manu,
        Thank you so much dear. We’re really glad that you liked our writing. Please don’t worry. All your problems will surely get sorted out soon.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

      • manuw on September 12, 2016 10:25 pm

        Thankyou soooo much di love u

    33. Sana(sanu) on September 11, 2016 10:06 pm

      U both rocked……. Awesome :*:*:*:*:*:*:*

      • ShatakshiRia on September 12, 2016 8:11 am

        Hey Sana,
        Thank you so much dear!?

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    34. Ayu on September 11, 2016 11:46 pm

      Aww! That was soo cutie pie??

      • ShatakshiRia on September 12, 2016 8:11 am

        Hey Ayu,
        Thank you so much! We’re glad that you liked it.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

      • Ayu on September 12, 2016 12:01 pm

        ?????❤️

    35. kinjal on September 12, 2016 1:13 am

      Yr 2 combi is a specially combo gift fr us?lovely os

      • ShatakshiRia on September 12, 2016 8:25 am

        Thank you so much Kinjal!

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    36. foreverfanoftwinj on September 12, 2016 7:06 am

      Bapre bq vaise bolne ki koi zaroorat nhi hai
      Kyuki u all know that u write awesome
      But kya krun dil nhi manta na tum log k ff sorry sorry os pe bina comment kiye
      Tumhare os ne is lazy lump ko thoda sudhar diya beheno srry srry bhaiyon
      Ab pls ye mat bolna ki tum dono meri been ho
      Because u both r like my bros to me
      Logic mat puchna
      Because explain krne lagi toh tum log pagal ho jaoge
      And I don’t want that ..isme bhi meri shelfish reason hai ki agar pagal ho gye toh agla is kaise post kroge
      Hai na
      And ria and Shatakshi tumhara duet performance ekdum dhasu Tha
      Chalo ab school Jana hai
      Toh zyada bada comment nhi kr paungi
      OK
      Byeee
      And tapsvi Ji aap na……..to b cont’d….
      Till Next os posted by u

      • ShatakshiRia on September 12, 2016 8:27 am

        Hey DQ,
        Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Jo aap ne comment kiya. Matlab srsly ham aap ke shukra guzaar rahenge.
        Anyways, jokes apart, thank you so much for commenting. We’re really glad that you liked it. Also, Shatakshi ke hisaab usse Baad mein Barabar kar Lena.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    37. Romaisha on September 12, 2016 7:10 am

      Oh god yaar … Tum Dono…. Offffffff!!!! Seriously your ideas r out of this world!!! ?????????????????????????
      I’m hell speechless right now Diis! ??
      Like too good.. The story was definitely something!!! ?????❤???
      Please do post more of these os nah … It was just awesome!! ❤
      Love you both to the moon and further!! ❤❤?

      • ShatakshiRia on September 12, 2016 8:29 am

        Hey Romaisha,
        Thank you so much! We both are really glad that you liked it. We’ll soon be back with our writings. Hope you all keep supporting and commenting similarly.

        Loads of love.?
        ~ Ria

    38. bshama1239 on September 12, 2016 9:56 am

      Wow 80 comments has appreciable Dr… Awesum Dr its the first time I am reading ur ff…. Nice 1 romance in the air ?????

      • ShatakshiRia on September 12, 2016 10:26 am

        Hey Shama
        Thanks for reading dear…
        N 80 comments me humare replies bhi h??
        Glad that u liked it
        ❤❤

        ~Shatakshi

    39. SIDMIN-daamini on September 12, 2016 3:05 pm

      shatakshi n ria ………………omg guys …………it was so cute amazing …..n sorry for being late as im really not getting time to read n comment as my exams r going on but when i read this ….i was awestruck………guys u really rocked n the plot was amazing ………..loved this kunj to the core ………..keep writing like this my darlos …………. 🙂

      • ShatakshiRia on September 12, 2016 5:56 pm

        Awww Daamini
        It was shoo sweet
        Love u too❤❤
        N thanks a lot for reading it
        U always make me smile when I read ur comment
        N all the best dear for ur exam
        Ik u will rock it up??

        ~ Shatakshi

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