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Twinj: Endless love… (OS)

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Twinj: Endless love…..
Hey guys Anushka here. I m just overwhelmed by reading ur comments. I just can’t believe I got 81comments. Thank u so much Abc,mitali, Sam, akku di, crazy,baby, aakriti, Aastha, mystery, zayb_zikra, srishti, sidmin, swasan=love, Aurora, Anu Mishra, crazy, anu, twinj, twinj forever, Sofia, Sakshi,bhavya, riyaana, plz, Olivia, pavani, joker, human being, dheemahee, ishaaan, preeti, lama, earl, anu, aarti, sanam, Fiona and silent readers for silent support.

U can read my earlier stories:-
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Twinj%3A+true+love+never+dies

So here it goes.
Characters- kunj, twinkle, rt and leela.

One day, a young guy named kunj and a young girl named twinkle fell in love.

But Kunj came from a poor family. So twinkle’s parents weren’t too happy.

So kunj decided not only to court the girl but to court her parents as well. In time, the parents saw that he was a good man and was worthy of their daughter’s hand.

But there was another problem:

Kunj was a soldier. Soon, war broke out and he was being sent overseas for a year.
The week before he left, Kunj knelt on his knee and asked his lady love twinkle, “Will you marry me?” She wiped a tear, said yes, and they were engaged. They agreed that when he got back in one year, they would get married.

But tragedy struck. A few days after he left, the girl had an accident. It was a head-on collision.

When twinkle woke up in the hospital, she saw her father and mother crying. Immediately, she got to know that there was something wrong.

She later found out that she suffered brain injury. The part of her brain that controlled her face muscles was damaged. Her once lovely face was now disfigured. She cried as she saw herself in the mirror. “Yesterday, I was beautiful. Today, I’m a monster.” Her body was also covered with so many ugly wounds.

Right there and then, she decided to release her fiancé from their promise. She knew he won’t love her anymore. She would have to forget about him and never see him again.

For one year, kunj wrote many letters—but she didn’t answer. He phoned her many times but she didn’t return her calls.

But after one year, leela walked into her room and announced, “He’s back from the war.”

Twinkle shouted, “No! Please don’t tell him about me. Don’t tell him I’m here!”

Leela the mother of twinkle said, “He’s getting married,” and handed her a wedding invitation.

Twinkle’s heart sank. She knew she still loved him but she had to forget him now becoz of her ugly monster face.

With great sadness, she opened the wedding invitation.

And then she saw her name “Twinkle” written on it!

Confused, she asked, “What is this?”

That was when Kunj entered her room with a bouquet of flowers. He knelt beside her and asked, “Will you marry me?”

Twinkle covered her face with her hands and said, “I’m ugly!”

Kunj said, “Without ur permission, mom sent me ur photos. When I saw them , I realized that nothing has changed. You’re still the person I fell in love. You’re still as beautiful as ever. Because I love you!”

Twinkle wid out saying anything hugged him.

They married each other and lived happily.
And twinkle’s face recovered after marriage through various surgeries.

Hope u like it.
God bless
Love u
Take care
Keep commenting.

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85 Comments

  1. Mahi on April 17, 2016 6:01 pm

    Lovely just too good

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 4:58 pm

      Thanq so much mahi

  2. ridhima on April 17, 2016 6:03 pm

    I loved itt
    it is sooooo goood

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 4:58 pm

      Thanq so much ridhima

  3. crazy on April 17, 2016 6:07 pm

    A perfect love story dear…

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 4:58 pm

      Awww Thanq so much Crazy

  4. loveleen on April 17, 2016 6:18 pm

    nyc piece of os….loved it

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 4:59 pm

      Aww Thanq dear

  5. baby on April 17, 2016 6:25 pm

    Lovely i luv it u rite lovely stories

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 4:59 pm

      Tysm baby

  6. Ruchi on April 17, 2016 7:02 pm

    Awsum… Loved it…

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 4:59 pm

      I m glad that u liked it

  7. Anu on April 17, 2016 7:28 pm

    Its one of the best one slot I have ever read

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:00 pm

      Omg Thanq so so so so much dear

  8. Anu Mishra on April 17, 2016 7:29 pm

    It’s amazing

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:00 pm

      Thanq Pritika

  9. Mitali on April 17, 2016 7:37 pm

    Damn good not good very good. Outstanding…. Fantastic……. Mind blowing……

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:01 pm

      U left me speechless mitali.

  10. Preeti on April 17, 2016 7:39 pm

    U r fabulous writer yaar.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:01 pm

      Ty ty ty ty somuch

  11. Olivia on April 17, 2016 7:42 pm

    That’s what which is called a one slot. It’s amazing piece of writing by an amazing writer.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:02 pm

      Oh my god Thanq so much Olivia means a lot dear ……

  12. Joker on April 17, 2016 7:43 pm

    I loved it
    Love it I
    It is loved by me
    I m in love wid it
    Just loved it………..

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:02 pm

      Thanq

  13. Lama on April 17, 2016 7:47 pm

    Really u r a Great Writer….Beautiful Love Story….God Bless

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 6:56 pm

      Thanq lama for commenting

  14. Sanam on April 17, 2016 8:19 pm

    Omg u made me cry
    Love u year anu♥♥♥♥♥

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:05 pm

      Love u tooo Mel. Thanks for commenting?

  15. panchi on April 17, 2016 9:05 pm

    awesome yaar ….. loved it …..

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:05 pm

      Thanq so much panchi

  16. Pavani on April 17, 2016 9:07 pm

    Just don’t have words to describe how beautifully u have written.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:06 pm

      U left me speechless dear. Thanks for commenting .

  17. Riyaana on April 17, 2016 9:08 pm

    It was literally a heart touching story. It was just fantastic.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:06 pm

      Thanq riyaana

  18. Aastha on April 17, 2016 9:10 pm

    Superb update next one soon…..

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:08 pm

      Yup I will surely update next one but can’t say when becoz I have my xams starting next week. Thanks for commenting.

  19. Plz on April 17, 2016 9:11 pm

    Wow I m so so so pleased to read this one slot. It’s perfect.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 5:08 pm

      Aww Thanq so much plz

  20. Mystery on April 17, 2016 9:23 pm

    Lovely episode Anushka. Looking forward to see ur another one slot. Love uhhhh and ur one slot

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 6:12 pm

      Thanq u for commenting Aashima but I can’t say when I will upload my next is as I have exams

  21. Aakriti on April 17, 2016 9:43 pm

    Perfect love story…….

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 6:54 pm

      Thanq aakriti

  22. Human being on April 17, 2016 9:44 pm

    Amazing…. Loved it

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 6:55 pm

      Thanq human being.

  23. Swasan= love on April 17, 2016 9:45 pm

    Wow it’s so interesting.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 6:55 pm

      Thanq swasan=love

  24. Aurora on April 17, 2016 9:46 pm

    Ohh my ghosh….loved it so so so much

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 6:55 pm

      Thanq so much Aurora

  25. Aakanksha on April 17, 2016 9:50 pm

    Ohhhhh anu…..what to say u hav just left me speechless yaar….all I can say is I love u to the cube of infinity….keep writing dear

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 6:58 pm

      Akku di u left me speechless wid ur comment. I love u 2. Thanq for encouraging me and commenting. A comment of a great writer like u means alot

  26. sam on April 17, 2016 10:32 pm

    Awesome episode loved it hope u post like this often love u

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:13 pm

      Love u too dear. Thanks for commenting Sam.

  27. Mannat on April 17, 2016 10:39 pm

    I have read dis story earlier on facebook
    But i dont wan to humilate u
    M jst saying

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:23 pm

      Actually mannat i haven’t taken it from Facebook but I took ideas from Internet. And it can’t be same as more than half of the story is made up by me. In my previous os twinj: true love never dies many readers demanded not to make anyone dead and then I wasn’t getting ideas so I just checked in internet about stories and I got a story with same central idea but it was about a business man and was really too short.So I did some changes in language, concept,length, characters and off course the ending. So u can say this story is entirely diff from that story.

  28. nataksha on April 17, 2016 11:15 pm

    Lovely episode..u nailed it..
    I luv it..luv u

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 6:59 pm

      Thank u dear. Love u too

  29. Sakshi on April 18, 2016 5:46 am

    Awww it’s the best story about a soldier man.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 6:59 pm

      Awww thanq so much Sakshi. I m just reached cloud 9

  30. Sana on April 18, 2016 5:47 am

    It’s so beautifully written.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:00 pm

      Thank u so much sana

  31. tara on April 18, 2016 7:18 am

    very nice yaar anushka…great concept..bt i would love to read a bit detailed stories..as u r good writer so can i request this from u??
    once again loved it

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:03 pm

      Off course Tara I would write a detailed one next time. Thank u so much for commenting and appreciating me.

  32. Zayb_zikra on April 18, 2016 10:29 am

    Jus superb loved it so much

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:04 pm

      I m glad Zayb_zikra that u liked my (os) one slot

  33. Srishti on April 18, 2016 3:18 pm

    So Sorry annu today also I m late but can’t do anything as I have school
    But still u write so so well that I m addicted towards u. I m just proud to be ur frnd and a fan

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:07 pm

      It’s totally fine wid me dear but I m also sorry for replying u so late. I just love u sri and ur comment. How do u always manage to bring a smile on my face.

  34. Twinj on April 18, 2016 3:19 pm

    Fantastico?

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:12 pm

      Thanq twinj

  35. Earl on April 18, 2016 3:19 pm

    Amazing dear!!

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:11 pm

      Thanq so much earl

  36. Twinj forever on April 18, 2016 3:21 pm

    Great os by a great writer.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:11 pm

      Ohh my gosh….. Love u dear. Thanq Thanq Thanq so much twinj forever for commenting.

  37. Anu on April 18, 2016 3:22 pm

    It’s awsm as always.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:10 pm

      Aww Thanq u so much Anu.

  38. Sidmin on April 18, 2016 3:23 pm

    Aapne toh Hume speechless chod diya.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:09 pm

      ??? Tysm sidmin

  39. Sofia on April 18, 2016 3:24 pm

    Cutest episode ever read

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:09 pm

      Ohh Thanq so much Sofia for the comment.

  40. Riyaana on April 18, 2016 3:26 pm

    Awwww I loved it

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:08 pm

      Thank u riyaana

  41. Bhavya on April 18, 2016 3:28 pm

    Di such an amazing episode haan??? Loved it to the core.

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 7:08 pm

      Thank u so much bhavi.

  42. Ananya on April 18, 2016 5:03 pm

    Totta epi babes

    • Anushka on April 18, 2016 6:12 pm

      Thanq ananya

  43. sonal on April 19, 2016 12:58 am

    What is full form of OS????

    you are awesome writer my dear keep writing

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